"Congratulations. You've won a free trip to Manehattan! You'll be staying in a top-quality, 5 star hotel! With FREE Dinners, hoof spas and pool visits! Details on pack of envelope." Said Applejack, staring astonished at the sparkly golden letter.

"Hey! Mail pony! I think you got the wrong address!" Called Applejack to the leaving stallion with the navy blue mail bag.

"No, miss. That's for you." He called back, trotting away quickly. Applejack looked at the letter in confusion. She never asked to enter any competitions. What was this? AJ decided she'd show this to Rarity. That gal knew everything about Manehattan. Applejack trotted on other to Rarity's boutique. She knocked on the pink fancy door. A white unicorn with a curly purple mane answered the door.

"Applejack! Hello! What brings you here and what's that letter in your hoof?" Asked Rarity. AJ showed Rarity the letter. The unicorn jumped up with excitement.

"Oh, AJ! I'm sooo jealous! I can't believe it!" Said Rarity grinning. AJ shook her head in disappointment.

"I don't really want to go, Rarity. Big cities aren't really my thing. You can go instead." Said AJ handing Rarity the letter, who gave it right back.

"Oh no no no Applejack, you're the only pony that can claim this award! You must go! It'll be so much fun!" Said Rarity, jumping up and down. AJ rolled her emerald green eyes.

"Oh, come on AJ, let a little faboustlity into your life! Take a break from your farm!" Said Rarity proudly.

"Why do you want me to go so much?" Asked AJ. Rarity looked kind of nervous.

"It's.. it's a change. Just go. You can catch up with Coco Pommel!" Said Rarity brightly. AJ sighed.

"No." The orange earth pony said stubbornly. Rarity groaned. The unicorn shoved the letter in AJ's face. Then she rubbed it.

"PLEASE GO APPLEJACK!" Rarity begged helplessly. Applejack was getting letter ink in her mouth, so she pushed the letter away.

"Fine, I'll go on this trip, but it better be worth it." Said Applejack grumpily. Rarity jumped up with joy. Applejack grumbled.

"We better get packing!" Said Rarity. She rushed inside the boutique and remerged with a bunch of sparkly, frilly dresses. Applejack didn't even look at them.

"Absolutely not. These are hideous." Said Applejack, holding up a pink sparkly dress. Rarity used her magic and slipped Applejack into a puffy, pink, flowy dress. Rarity was in tears.

"You look stunning!" Sobbed Rarity. Applejack groaned.

"This is ridiculous. Can't I just go like this?" Moaned AJ, pointing at her old farm hat. Rarity sighed.

"Fine. But promise me you'll wear one dress." Said Rarity with puppy eyes. Applejack nodded hastily. Rarity squealed with delight. She choose a short green dress for AJ. The two ponies left and went over to Sweet Apple Acres to pack AJ's suitcase. When they arrived, the apple family surprised to see Applejack holding a dress, letter and a white unicorn. The two ponies went up into the bedroom. Rarity went over to AJ's closet.

"Let's see what you've got in here. What. Is. THIS?" Asked Rarity, pulling out a pair of old rusty boots.

"Those are my old boots. Used to jokingly call em' old rusty boobs." Said Applejack. Rarity snorted with disgust.

"That is disturbing!" She cried and returned to looking at AJ's old closet. Applejack was sitting on her wooden bed, with a checkered light green pattern. Rarity was cringing at everything in Applejacks closet. She was also chucking everything on the floor.

"Rarity, thanks to you my room is just as messy as yours." Said Applejack.

"My room isn't that bad." Mumbled Rarity while picking up an old hat.

"Hey! You found Bob!" Said Applejack, snatching the hat of Rarity, who was quite shocked. Rarity shook her petite face and went back to Applejack closet exploring. AJ had seemingly already packed. Bob, the dress, the letter, some food and a picnic blanket were all inside Applejack's small green bag. Rarity had got everything out of AJ's closet thingy. The unicorn looked and saw AJ's bag.

"Seriously? AJ, you must pack more than that!" Complained Rarity. AJ shook her head.

"I ain't packing anymore, Rarity. This is enough." Said Applejack. Rarity sighed, but decided to put up with this catastrophe of a packing bag. Applejack and Rarity left the messy room and headed down stairs. Granny Smith and Applebloom were baking pie. Big Mac was doing chores.

"See you Rarity." Said AJ to Rarity, who was trotting out the door. Rarity waved. AJ went called Big Mac inside.

"I have some news." Said AJ, looking at her 3 ponies stared at her.

"I am going on holiday. To Manehattan for a few days." Said Applejack quickly. Applebloom cried.

"Holy applesauce!" Said Granny Smith. Big Mac was shocked.

"So I'm leaving tomorrow." Said Applejack. Applebloom whined.

"WHY!" Cried the little yellow earth pony. Applejack sighed.

"I really don't know Applebloom. I really don't know." Said Applejack, looking at her family.

What AJ didn't know is that was she going to have to holiday of a lifetime. And a jealous Rarity.

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HEY YALL! Here is my 4th story on Fanfiction. This one is more of a comedy rather than a drama, for the sake of your enjoyment. Please enjoy. Don't be offended by slightly inappropriate joke I added.

~Ponystories.

*Disclaimer. I do not own Harry Potter, Google Plus or any of that crap. Yeah.

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Applejack arrived at the station, feeling quite annoyed. Her family and her friends had followed her all the way to the train station like creepy stalkers. Which usually isn't a good thing. Anyways, the train was arriving in a few minutes. All the ponies were staring at Applejack.

"Applejack.." They said hypnotically. AJ had enough of this cooing. She stood up and walked near the old timey snack stall.

"APPLE CIDER! ONLY 2 BITS A CAN. Conditions apply." Called the snack keeper. He was a light tan colour with a vibrant puffy orange mane. He had bright blue eyes and was wearing a green apron. His name was Google Plus, but ponies called him Orange.

"Young lady, may I get you anything?" Said Orange. AJ looked at the pony.

"No." She grumbled and walked away. Orange watched as the orange pony flipped her blonde mane.

"Such sexy sassiness." He said dreamily. Of course, Rarity saw this and tried to tell AJ. Unluckily for both the mares, the train had arrived. AJ sighed. Rarity gave AJ a big hug. Okay, I'm going to skip over the rest of the mushy 'Goodbye' scene. AJ got onto the train. As the train left, AJ heard a pony yelling.

"Tell the fashionistas that Rarity sent you!" Called Rarity. AJ was shocked.

"WAIT WHAT?!" AJ called back, but it was too late. They were all behind. "Dammit."

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"So, it was you." Said Rainbow Dash looking at Rarity.

"But of course. AJ needs some girly-ness in her en-slavery life." Said Rarity. Dash snorted.

"If she comes back a diva, I'm blaming you." Said Dash roughly. Rarity rolled her dark blue eyes.

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The train ride was long and boring, like most train rides. But what made it worse that nearly everypony on the train were doing mushy things. AJ needed to barf multiple times. Also, a recent stallion kept sitting next to her for some reason.

"Why are you stalking me?" Asked AJ to Orange. The stallion smirked.

"Because I can." He said, quite giggly. AJ didn't understand life sometimes. She left that stupid carriage and went to the really busy one. It was smelly and weird with ponies everywhere, but it was better than being stalked by a giggly stallion. Anyways, when the train arrived at the station, two young stallions were waiting for the farm pony's arrival.

"Oh you've got to be kidding me." Groaned AJ as she walked up to the shining stallions, glimmering in Celestia's pretty princess sunlight.

"Are you Applejack?" Asked the taller stallion, with a rich and posh voice. AJ nodded and showed them the envelope. The tall stallion who was grey with black hair lead AJ onto a taxi.

"Away!" He called. The carriage moved and AJ's crazy journey of Manehattan begun. It started with taking her through the city. The tall, grey buildings, the posh ponies with their heads bent back and of course, the marvelous clothes shops. Why would Rarity send me to such a complicated place? Thought AJ. The grey stallion next to her was reading a Daring Do book. It was the Griffin's Goblet, which was about how Daring goes to a magic school and competes in a tournament and at the end defeats a nose-less freak.

The taxi finally arrived the hotel. It was large and golden, with thick pink windows. A red carpet was at the front which was leading to the brass door. The hotel was shaped like a swirl. It was shining like the gods had just come for a sleepover party with Harry Potter. Applejack was totally speechless. The stallion led Applejack up the soft, sexy red carpet.

"Holy apple banana this place is insane!" Said AJ, glancing at the fancy ponies in bubbly hot spas. She entered through the large brass door and was led through the main lobby, which may as well be Rarity's brain. I can't describe it. Just imagine a nice lobby added with gold and silver and stuff. AJ was lead up to her room, which was bigger than her BARN. The bed could probably fit Big Mac's huge plushie collection. AJ put her tiny bag down and sat down on the bed.

"Whoa.. This is softer than Apple bloom when she was born." AJ mummered. She stared at the modern art on the wall, which was giving her nightmares. There was also many colourful bouquets of flowers and golden tiles. This hotel was definitely Rarity's personality in a nutshell. Outgoing and fabulous, generous and a bit too much with parts not AJ's thing. But something she could adapt to and like. Maybe. Anyways, there was a dark, scary, horrifyingly, deathly knock on the door. AJ went and answered it.

"Oh Apple Tarts." Moaned AJ. There, standing at the door, was a very familiar stallion.

"HEY APPLEJACK! I'M RIGHT NEXT DOOR TO YOU!" Called Orange. AJ wanted to smack herself in the face with a fat frypan with hot fry oil with pieces of cooked food still burning.

"How do you know my name?" Asked AJ. The stallion smiled and held up AJ's ID. The farm pony was shocked. She snatched it out his hoof and slammed the door on Orange's face. Normally she wouldn't be this rude, but she hated this stallion. Nearly as much as the Flim Flam twins.

"Mwa ha ha ha. I'll get that sassy farm woman to love me if it's the last thing I do." Said Google Plus darkly. "Ha ha ha….Ha ha ha ahahahahahahahah."

"I can hear you." Said AJ through the door. Orange blushed a bright tomato red, which was strange because Orange hated red. The stallion walked away from the door and continued his stupid laughing, which made everypony think that dude was insane.

"Hahhahahahahahasahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah!" He laughed, suddenly realizing this was getting old. He entered his own room and began planning to find a gang of assassins to help him kidnap AJ as he wasn't very good at kidnapping. He began to wonder if assassins were illegal, but he decided to not worry, because he was confident. Yeah.

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Hey readers! That's chapter two. Hope you like it so far. Don't be offended by the mild jokes, because after all, THEY'RE JOKES. Ha ha. This my first comedy story, so you know… Anyways, this is also my fourth story on Fanfiction! SUCH WOWS. I'll see you guys tomorrow for possibly another chapter.. Dun dun.

~Ponystories.

Applejack had an awfully strange sleep. She was having one of those dreams were the dream repeats and goes on forever. When she finally woke up there was a large pink letter on her bed. It was written in pretty silver ink. AJ picked up the letter and opened it. Inside the letter, a nightmare was unleashed.

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Dear Ms Applejack,

You will be provided breakfast when you press the silver button next to your bed. The menu should be right next to you. After that, you will be invited to our Top Notch Bubbly Spa for a full blitz makeover.

~ Staff ponies.

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Applejack would rather tackle a pack of timberwolves than have a makeover. But breakfast sounded nice. She picked up the menu next to her, which had a velvet cover. AJ opened the menu and looked at the food. She cringed.

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Spicy apple tarts with velvet sexy sauce.

Brown flour waffles served with Appleloosan cream. Freshly whipped. With cinnamon.

Rich dark fruit toast with raisin spread. Contains gelatin.

Scrummy hayffle browns with probably high fat butter.

*conditions apply

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She didn't bother to read anymore. AJ wondered if there was actually something simple on this menu. I'll eat some stuff out of my bag, thought AJ. She got her tiny bag, which had been moved to a shelf. AJ grabbed her bag and looked inside, shocked to see those staff ponies had removed the food. AJ was pretty grumpy, as you can tell. So she decided to skip breakfast. She was fat enough anyway. And she was not going to that salon thing. No way. Suddenly she got a knock at the door. She answered it, and a pink shiny pony with a curled sparkly blue mane was standing there.

"Mizz Applejack, your makeover iz ready." She said poshly. Applejack shook her head.

"I'll skip the makeover, thank you." Said AJ as politely as she could, turning away. But the pony stopped her.

"But you muzt not zkip the makeover." She said urgently. "If you do I will loze my job, and I will go back to being a ztreet pony. Where I waz lonely and over dramatic."

That was different. AJ sighed and tossed her blonde mane.

"Fine, but only a quick one." Said AJ. The pony smiled and held out her sparkly pink hoof. AJ shook it and the pony lead AJ away, into the salon place.

"My name iz Zecoria. You may call me Zecor." She said. AJ nodded. The salon room was sparkly clean. Towels in nice neat piles and cosmetics all pretty and nice. There was a bubbling hot spa and sparkly tiles. Most of the walls were gold and pink. The roof was a sparkly brass. Was there anything here that wasn't sparkly? Then AJ released. She wasn't sparkly. Zecor showed AJ into the spa. Okay, AJ had to admit, the spa was kind of nice. But the cucumber mask wasn't. Zecor rubbed this slimy green stuff into AJ's face.

"This is disgustingly satisfying." Said AJ to Zecor. The pink pony nodded.

"Where are you from?" Zecor asked.

"Ponyville." Replied AJ. "I'm a farm pony."

"Ah, the life of enzlavery. Wonderful." Said Zecor. AJ shifted uncomfortably as the pony put cucumber on AJ's eyes. Then Zecor added some sparkles and mushy pink stuff onto AJ's skin. The farm pony couldn't stand this anymore. The sparkles were digging in the she was getting a mental rash from the pink stuff. AJ leaped out of the spa in cool slow motion and ran out the spa. She had to get out of this place. To Ponyville. Home.

'CELESTIA, HERE I COME!" Called AJ, barging through the hotel, jumping over some ponies doing the nae nae. AJ entered a room being freshly cleaned slid across the slippery floor.

"Finally, a slip and slide!" Said the farm pony happily. It wasn't so good when AJ started sliding towards Orange, who was on purpose standing in front of her. He smooched up his lips, but AJ was having none of this. She jumped up from her sliding and karate kicked Orange in the face. Everypony in the room watched and stared. When AJ landed again, they clapped louder than a city pony would ever clap. The sparkly, posh ponies behaving like town ponies. Suddenly Zecor burst through the large brass door.

"Mizz Applejack!" Called Zecor. To her surprise she saw AJ laying in a very inappropriate position, which I'm not going to say because this story is a K+.

"Never had as much fun since wearing my rusty old boobs." Laughed AJ. Zecor didn't think this was very funny at all. But she wasn't angry. She was petrified. The silly ponies around AJ in the large now dirty room were snorting. Orange wasn't having such a good time. His face was bruised and he couldn't stop thinking about cats.

"Meow." Said the silly stallion. AJ got up and faced Zecor, feeling quite guilty. Zecor shook nervously.

"Sorry, Zecor." Said AJ sadly. Zecor sighed.

"Well, lookz like it'z the ztreetz for me." She sulked. The background ponies whined sadly instead of saying actual words.

"I'll make sure they don't fire you, if you don't give me any more makeovers." Said AJ kindly. Zecor hugged AJ and the Background ponies awwed.

"Thank you zo much!" She cried, tears forming at her dazzling blue eyes. AJ moved back awkwardly.

"Erm.. you're welcome." Said AJ. Zecor skipped out the brass door and AJ followed behind, expect going to her room. And indeed, readers a true friendship was born in the most sappy way. As for Orange, he broke his 4000 bit watch, but he didn't care much since he worked at the watch place. His bruise only affected his physical body, not his love and mental one. So he needed to work harder to get that sexy farm pony to love him.

And he had a plan.

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Chapter 3 ladies and gentlecolts! I hoped you liked the chapter. This is actually my personal favorite so far. I added some action, sappiness, humor and of course a cliffhanger, if that what it is to you. Something for everyone. I've still got annoying school and homework, so the next chapter will probably be coming out tomorrow, but I'm not 100% sure. See you guys later!

~Ponystories.

Applejack had barely sat down on her soft bed when a mysterious pink letter slid under the door.

"For heaven's sake." Said AJ as she went and got the letter, which was the lunch menu. As you guessed, it wasn't that great. In AJ's opinion.

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Slightly burnt hay fries with fresh home-grown vegetables.

Fresh wholemeal rye with 'fresh as damn' salad.

Corn gelatin with crispy salsa.

Tomato soup with lettuce 'dippy dip dos'

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AJ sighed and decided this time she'd order lunch. Of course, there was more on the menu, but I'm too lazy to put the rest down. Deal with it. Anyways, AJ ordered the 'fresh as damn' salad, which was more like pre-dried as damn salad. It tasted like it'd been inside Orange's divorced wife's cupboard for 40 months. AJ decided that she'd try and find a market to get food. So she left her room when she was approached by Orange.

"Speak of the devil." Said AJ to Orange's smiling face. He was holding a Valentine's letter.

"Oh no you don't." Said AJ, running to the stairs. She slid down on the large rail on two legs. Some pony filmed it with and posted it in the newspaper and AJ became a equestrian sensation. But that's the future. AJ slid down the rail and jumped into the reception. She ran out the brass doors and stopped. Orange hadn't followed, thank god. He was just a creepily annoying clingy stalker. AJ called over a taxi and asked if there was any markets.

"Why, that's absurd." Replied the taxi pony, who was wearing yellow, black and white.

"Curse this city and it's preserved foods." Said AJ, walking back into the hotel. The reception was nice as usual. AJ looked around and hoped Orange wouldn't jump scare her. This isn't a horror story, readers. AJ decided to snoop around the hotel and eventually get back to her posh room. She sneaked around, mission impossible playing in the background. She hid behind a large ceramic pot plant, near the exit of the lobby. Soon AJ spotted Zecor, who was being yelled at by Big Daddy. Then AJ remembered the promise.

"Hey, Big Daddy!" Called AJ really loudly. Big Daddy was a large grey pony with a black mane. He had small green eyes and puffy snout. He looked sort of looked like a cloud. He was the owner of this hell like hotel.

"Who the horse poop are you?" Asked Big Daddy. Then he realized.

"Uh, you're a guest. I see… Hmm.. ahhhh." Said Big Daddy. "Applejack, is it?" His face was not so puffy now since he was not angry.

"That's me. The enslaved farm pony. Anyway, stop yelling at Zecoria. I don't want anymore makeovers, and because of that you don't have to fire her. God dammit, Big Daddy." Said AJ. Of course, everypony else in the room was watching acting inspired. Big Daddy scoffed.

"It is imperative that you have a makeover. We want you to be sexy and a diva. That's what you won, after all." Said Big Daddy, shaking his big tosh in Zecoria's face.

"Is this the Rainbow Factory? Why isn't the makeover optional?" Said AJ angrily. Big Daddy smiled. He was about to say something when Zecoria pushed Big Daddy's tushy toot toot away.

"The enzlaved one is right! Thiz iz the Rainbow Factory! It'z dumb!" She cried, tears forming at her eyes. The background ponies cried to. Big Daddy sighed.

"Fine, whatever, everypony BACK TO WORK! And you, enslaved dirty farm pony that stinks of apple pie, go to your room." Boomed Big floozy buns daddy. AJ stomped her hoof on the ground and stormed up to her room. She had never been so rude and angry before, this was different. This experience was even worse than Rarity's 7 day slumber party. Even worse when Applebloom didn't get a cutie mark for farm enslavery. Suddenly AJ heard a noise. It was under her bed. She looked under her bed and yep, it was Orange.

"What in the whole world of Equestria are you doing?" Asked AJ. The light tan pony was chewing on AJ's mattress. He was holding a bunch of science equipment and had lots of sharp needles that really shouldn't belong in children's TV show. Orange laughed evilly.

"I'm getting your dead skin cells. They're a breeding ground for mites." Said Orange. AJ was quite disturbed.

"How long have you been under there for?" Said AJ. Orange counted his hooves.

"About 5 hours." He said. "Your breathing is quite sexy." He said, giggling. AJ growled.

"Get. Out. Now." She said sternly. "Before I do it for you."

Orange whimpered and got out. He laughed at the bacterial content he had collected. AJ gave him a dirty look. He left the room, smiling wickedly. AJ sighed and slammed door using the force. She plopped onto her bed and began to wonder what mites were. Then she realized that children really shouldn't be knowing this. Then AJ was bored. What should she do? Dance naked? There was a list of things you could do at the hotel, next to the door. She looked at the list, but it followed the same criteria as the menus.

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Deluxe velvet makeover- Get velvet cream rubbed into those rusty old joints!

Chill out in our spa with our relaxing burning acid mask. Lose weight quick and easy!

Swim around in our crystal pool, real crystals, real ponies!

Cucumber face masks. Get a deep tissue rub and get to know what CPR feels like! Big Daddy's choice of the year!

Join our fashion group for talks, chats and tea! And clothes!

*conditions apply. Fees will probably be included because we're selfish animals.

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AJ sighed and rolled over her bed like the pigs on her farm. There was nothing to do. But for Orange, it was a different story.

Orange was making a brew. No, not a coffee you idiots. A potion, sort of like Zecora, not Zecoria. He added many strange and stinky ingredients, including some of Big Daddy's mane. Don't ask me how he got that. Don't ask me how he can afford to stay in this hotel. He put all of AJ's dead skin cells and whatever else was in the test tube and mixed it up.

"Shake it up, shake i- oh wait, that song is kind of old now." Said Orange. He then wondered how he knew the song. The potion was brewing. He laughed wickedly. Soon the potion began to smell of what Rarity thought mud looked like.

"Now, just to give this to that enslaved but sexy as damm farm pony. But how? Wait, I can put it her breakfast. MWAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!" Laughed the strange tan pony.

"This is all going to end so well." Said Orange. "She will finally be mine. I hope."

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That's it for chapter 4! I hoped you guys enjoyed this one. Next chapter will be coming out in Probably in a few days, because I'm busy so yeah. Sorry guys! Oh well, you can read some of my other stories I've posted. Or other stories by other authors. There are so many good ones. Let me know if you want longer chapters!

~Ponystories.

AJ decided that since all the food here was crap, she would go on a hunger strike. It would only be for a few days. Ok, she'd have to eat something. But what? AJ decided not to think about all that preserved food and fell asleep. If there was one good thing about this hotel, it was that the beds were comfy and you could easily slid in the covers and wrap yourself up like a burrito. AJ hoped no pony was under the bed, especially Orange. AJ had a dream, but she couldn't remember it. You always dream, but you usually forget your dreams when you wake up. Anywho, AJ skipped breakfast and wondered what she'd do now. She knew she'd have to do something to stir up the action part, but she didn't what. For the convenience of the plot, there was a knock at the door. AJ answered it. It was Zecoria.

"Mizz Applejack! Thank you for zaving my job! I juzt came here to thank you." Zecoria sobbed, tears at her eyes. AJ smiled.

"Yeah. Just no more makeovers and encounters with Big Daddy." Said AJ.

"Alzo, there iz zomepony here to zee you-

"Is he a light tan stallion with a puffy orange mane?" Interrupted AJ. Zecoria shook her shiny pink head.

"No, it iz actually a mare who goez by Coco Pommel." Said Zecora. A cream coloured pony with a short light blue mane walked through the door. She had a poppy in her mane and a hat for a cutie mark. Applejack was relieved it wasn't Orange. Zecoria left awkwardly.

"So, Coco, how's it going?" Asked Applejack nicely.

"Not too bad. Things have been getting better around here ever since the play. This hotel however isn't really part of the new community project." Said Coco nervously. AJ put her hoof to her mouth and licked her hoof. It tasted like cleaners.

"I see. How'd you know where to find me?" Asked AJ.

"Rarity sent me a letter and told me the whole story." Said Coco, holding a small envelope.

"She would've sent you one to expect she said she was to la- I mean they don't accept letters here. That's true" Said Coco smiling broadly.

"Ok then.." Said AJ suspiciously. "Why are you visiting me?"

"To keep you entertained and bring in the action part of the plot, of course. Silly AJ." Said Coco, shaking her head. "Also, to find a way to demolish this Rainbow Factory-like hotel."

"Now that's something I wanted to hear." Said AJ swinging her arm.

"I know Rarity sent me here for the diva inside of me. But I just can't enjoy this place, apart from the beds. Especially since I'm being stalked. So, by all means we must destroy this wicked sparkly place." Said AJ. Suddenly Zecoria burst through the door.

"Wait! You can not deztroy thiz place! Where will I work? I'll be on the ztreetz!" Cried Zecoria. "Bezides, how are you going to deztroy it?" Said Zecoria, tears falling down her face.

"First of all, that was kind of creepy for you to listen to our conversation. Don't make me mistake you for a stalker. Anyways, we'll find something for you. Besides, this unrealistic hotel place is brainwashing you every second." Said Coco. Zecoria sighed and nodded sadly.

"We'll call in Miley Cyrus and her wrecking balls." Said Coco, smiling.

"How do you even know about her? Only humans and Pinkie must know. Anyways, I'll get Princess Twilight to blow this whole thing up with her alicorn magic." Said AJ. But then Zecor had an idea.

"We create bombz and throw them around the hotel!" Cried Zecoria, jumping around.

"But we can't kill anypony because this is a kid's show. So we have to do something not so violent and not with guns and stuff like that." Said AJ. Zecoria sat down sadly. The three ponies were sitting on the bed in a triangle formation.

"We politely ask the owner if we can knock it down? No? Uh.. Ok." Said Coco, looking and the unthougtful faces of her friends. Suddenly they heard screaming and cries outside.

"The heck? Iz zomepony being murdered? Did they juzt get a letter to Hogwartz?" Asked Zecoria. The trio went outside and saw.. Harry Potter! Just kidding. They saw Orange being chased by a orange pony with a yellow mane. She had bluey green eyes and looked similar to Applejack. The farm pony snorted and watched her stalker being chased.

"Good show, mate!" Called AJ loudly. The three ponies decided to discuss the plans of demolishment outside. Remember in the last chapter about AJ becoming Equestrian sensation? Well, now is the future and AJ was a celebrity, but of course the farm pony didn't know this. The ponies ran outside and as soon as everypony saw AJ, a huge crowd and some news reporters ran up to her.

"What in the hay?" Asked AJ to the screaming fans. One of them tried to kiss her, which was lesbian. Which is not a bad thing, readers. A news pony stood next to AJ.

"Ladies and Gentlecolts, we've found ourselves X-skater boss X350!" Said the news pony. The fans cheered.

"What's going on?" Asked AJ, staring at the news pony. Coco and Zecoria had been pushed to the back.

"What is the secret of your amazing skills?" Asked the news pony in her smooth, flexible red carpet voice.

"What skills?" Asked AJ, very confused. The ponies laughed. Suddenly Big Daddy pushed through the crowd.

"Ladies and gentlecolts! Miss X-skater boss performed right here at Sparkly Sugar daddy hotel! Come see her perform live tonight, right here! Only 50 bits per entry! Conditions apply." Announced Big Daddy. The ponies cheered and held up their money. AJ had enough of this and darted through the crowd like a bullet. She ran up the stairs, leaping like a boss. She, sadly and conveniently bumped into Orange.

"Applejack. I'm sorry about this, but I need to show you something." Orange said muffedly. AJ shook her head.

"Please! It's a cliffhanger." Said Orange.

"What then? That Justin Bieber followed you on Twitter?" Asked AJ. Orange shook his head.

"No. It's this." Said Orange. He suddenly glowed a bright green and began to transform. He was no longer a strange tan pony, but a changeling. AJ was shocked.

"Your.. Your.. But.. how?" Asked AJ.

As for Coco and Zecoria, they ended up finding a vintage clothes shop and stayed there for a bit, until they saw Sapphire Shores, talked to her for a bit. Then they were kidnapped by some dudes, then they escaped and they are now eating at your local Mcdonald's as we speak. Or read. But by the time you get there, they will be gone. I'm pretty sure.

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And that's chapter 5! I hope yall are enjoying this book! If you want to leave any suggestions for the next chapter, the doors are open! Anyways, I'm going to be quicker this time. So yeah, I'm outta here. By guys!

~Ponystories.

Applejack thought that was a pretty intense plot twist. She stepped away nervously from the changeling. It all made sense now. But then it didn't, because back in season 2 the mane 6 banished the changelings and the queen away from being made into toys and Equestria. So it made no sense.

"I betrayed the queen and the others. I chose otherwise, to learn, love and engage. So while the attack on Canterlot, I disguised myself as a filly and traveled to Manehattan. There I stayed and became wise, as well as creating my Twitter account. I made up a name and so for many years I dobbed on sexy mares, but that didn't work. I am still getting weaker and you are my last hope." Said Orange dramatically with his echoey, rusty changeling voice. AJ breathed in slowly.

"Well, what do I do then? Kiss you infront of the immature audience?" Asked AJ. Orange actually nodded. AJ stepped away nervously.

"I was kidding. It was a joke, this is a comedy story after all." Said AJ, shaking. "Besides, the town ponies are going to watch me perform tonight. Also, I hate romance."

"Well, I'll die if you don't." Said Orange

"We can't let that happen! This is a kid's show! Fine, I'll smooch you, but we better go somewhere private before somepony bursts in with exposition." Said AJ. Orange smiled and the farm pony and the changeling went into AJ's room.

"Uh.. Could you transform into somepony more appropriate?" Asked AJ as the two sat on the bed.

"Who?" Asked Curious Orange.

"Applebloom." Replied not so curious Applejack.

"I don't know what she looks like." Said Orange. The farm pony found her tiny bag and got her photo of her younger sister out. She showed Orange.

"Yuck! I hate turning into fillies and mares. Pick somepony else." Scoffed the changeling, crossing his arms full of holes.

"That's sort of sexist and ageist and the same time. Just turn into her, it'll be for a few seconds." Said AJ. Orange sighed and turned into the small yellow filly. AJ felt a warm, happy sensation, it was almost like seeing her sister again. And it wasn't that drink she had before. Orange..uh..I mean, AB imposter looked quite annoyed.

"Come on Orange, let's get this over with." Said AJ. The farm pony smooched her lips. AB imposter smooched up her lips to and the two ponies leaned in closer...Any second now they would kiss...Any second...Wait…. Okay, now! The ponies kissed quickly. Suddenly AB imposter, who was now in his Orange form again pulled AJ close to him. I'm not going tell to the rest of the details because this story is a K+. AJ shoved him away like girls do in those drama shows.

"WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM? I hope you're happy and you don't need to stalk me anymore, but seriously, WHAT THE HECK?" Bellowed AJ, storming out of the room. This was so dramatic. Anywho, when AJ left the room, she saw two very familiar ponies running up the stairs.

"AJ!" Coco and Zecor panted together.

"Where in the hay field were you?" Asked AJ.

"Read the last chapter. Anyways, we're here now and we can finally discuss our demolishment plans." Said Coco. Zecor nodded and pulled out some paper from the Cupboard of plot conveniences.

"Zo, Zince thiz iz zupposed to be for kidz we zent letterz away to lotz of poniez to tell them about thiz hotel. And by lotz of poniez we mean the mane 6, apart from you." Said Zecor. She had drawn a map of the hotel on the paper.

"We are going to find out the myztery of thiz hotel and deztroy the darknezz behind it." Said Zecor again. AJ thought that blowing it up would be way cooler, but like the ponies mentioned 1 thousand times, this is a kid's show.

"So when is the plan commencing?" Asked AJ thoughtfully.

"Tomorrow." Said the other two ponies together. AJ nodded. But then she heard lots of voices. Ponies were beginning to enter.

"Oh no! They're here to zee you perform!" Cried Zecoria. AJ shook her orange head.

"Now I realise I don't have to. Big Daddy has enough money and the manehattan ponies have Coco's concerts and Harry Potter books to survive on." Said AJ. But Zecor shook her head, her coat shining.

"No! Big Daddy will become a literal murderer if you dare take money from him. Yez, I know thiz iz a kid'z show." Said Zecor, looking at AJ's sarcastic face. The farm pony wasn't to annoyed, even though she had no planning at all.

"So, what do I do?" Asked the orange pony.

"I only know about fashion and setting up plays." Said Coco Pommel sadly.

"I know a lot about planning, after all I'm half cryztal pony." Said Zecor. AJ wasn't surprised, but she was kind of astonished.

"I'll tell you a little of my ztorie. I waz born to a normal father and a cryztal mother. I lived in the cryztal empire for a while, then one day I dizcovered trainz and left the Cryztal empire." Said Zecor. AJ really wasn't in the mood for anymore stories because more ponies were arriving. Big Daddy was welcoming with a big fat wave. The hotel owner stared darkly at AJ. The farm pony sighed.

"Just rebel it out, you'll be fine." Said Coco. Zecor nodded with tears in her eyes, again.

"We'll be so proud!" Cried the half-crystal pony. AJ realised it would be time to start soon. She did feel pressured, but excited at the same time. Then the farm pony remembered the dress. She raced into room, ignoring the sulking Orange in the corner. AJ got out her dress and slipped it on. It fitted her quite well. The farm pony ran to the 2 ponies standing outside the door of her room. The stairway was meters away.

"Well, go out there! Zhow the world!" Sobbed Zecor. Coco nodded. AJ went to the top of the staircase. A lot more ponies had showed up.

"X-skater boss X-350!" They called, which was probably the first actual thing said by a background character. Big Daddy counted his money in satisfied way. AJ jumped on the stair rail. She slid down on two legs. Everypony cheered. AJ jumped backwards on the rail and did a round robin jump up to the top. When she arrived, everypony cheered loudly. AJ slid down the stair rail on her front hooves. A cheer rose again. AJ noticed Orange in the audience, blushing. AJ couldn't help but smile at him. AJ also saw Coco and Zecor, sitting in the darkness behind the top of the stairs.

AJ ran up the stairs at top speed. What next? The farm pony suddenly fell on the rail and started sliding down. She was out of control! Of course, the silly background ponies thought this was entertainment. And so the laid back farm pony's fame grew. Suddenly Zecor ran down the stairs with tears in her eyes.

"THREE CHEERZ FOR MIZZ X-ZKATER BOZZ X350!" Called the pink pony. The audience cheered but then grumbled. Zecor pointed AJ at the rail. The farm pony sighed. She back flipped onto the actual stair part, then ran up and slid down on leg on the rail. More hoof stomping was around. AJ didn't know they were that crazy for her. The farm pony raised her hoofs in the air.

"Now, who wants my autograph for free?" Asked AJ. She normally wouldn't ask this, but this hotel was being destroyed tomorrow, so it didn't matter. Lots of ponies with paper ran up to her. We are going to skip over the signing part as it is boring as crap.

When it was finally night, AJ walked into her room, only to find another plot twist.

"So, you're thinking of destroying my hotel, are you?" Asked Big Daddy, who was sitting on AJ's bed.

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Hey readers! That's the closing of chapter 6! Can you believe we're already up to 6 chapters? WE'RE ALL DYING. Anyways, thank you guys for the reviews and feel free to leave me any suggestions! If you want to leave a story request for me, please PM me.

~Ponystories.

AJ gasped dramatically. Big Daddy laughed.

"Nice gasp. But it won't be enough to take this hotel out." Said Big Daddy.

"Oh yes it will. We've got help coming tomorrow!" Said AJ. Big Daddy snorted.

"We'll deal with that. We've got a whole army here at Sugar Daddy's hotel." Said Big Daddy proudly.

"Well, my friends are the founders of the friendship castle and one is an alicorn!" Cried AJ, being dramatic once more. Big Daddy didn't say anything, he just smiled creepily.

"The whole reason you won is so we could get you to love my hotel. Then you would tell everypony you loved it. You're the element of Loyalty..uh I mean, Honesty. Also, your unicorn friend was apart of the plan." Said Big Daddy darkly, shaking his big tushy mush. AJ was shocked. But then the farm pony realised that Rarity must of been cliche tricked into the plan.

"Also, time for another plot twist. Orange was my spy." Said Big Daddy. AJ was even more stunned then before.

"But he's also a changeling. So maybe not all the stalking was intentional?" Asked AJ, her green eyes glowing. Big Daddy shrugged.

"I don't really know about changelings. Never went to Princess pretty pink's wedding." Said Big Daddy. The large pony shifted over to the farm pony and towered above her.

"What the heck are you doing?" Asked Applejack. The grey pony jiggled like jelly. Sort of like they sing on the shows about wobbly jelly...You know.

"Imitating you. Also, trapping you where you friends can't find you." Said Big flappy Daddy, reaching out to grab the orange farm pony. AJ dodged out the way.

"You'll never catch me alive! Or dead, since death is banned from this show." Called AJ, leaving the room in a hurried sprint.

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As for Coco Pommel and Zecoria, the two mares were now torturing Orange by making him watch Equestria Girls. They were in Orange's room.

"Hey look! AJ's being chased! I love chase scenes." Said Coco, looking out the window. "Let's go watc- Uh.. I mean help her escape!" Said Coco. The two mares left the changeling tied up with the scene of Twilight meeting Rarity at full volume. They ran down the stairs and followed Big Daddy through the pretty reception. When the got out the door, Big Daddy saw them.

"You! Zecorlia! You work for me. Go and get that enslaved farm pony!" Bellowed the hotel owner, his booty jiggling like Kim Kardashian's. Zecor shook her pink pony head.

"Firzt, my name iz Zecoria. Zecond, I don't work for you anymore." Said the pink earth pony spitefully. Big Daddy growled. He called out his security and asked them to chase after the orange blonde maned earth pony. Zecoria and Coco caught a taxi to follow and watc- Uh.. I mean help AJ. They passed the many grand, grey buildings with occasional carriages of purple and gold passing by.

"Keep following thoze fat poniez! Keep thiz ztory interezting." Called Zecor. The taxi pony sighed, but Zecor gave him two gems, so he continued. They raced around a tight corner and finally managed to keep up with Big Daddy and his companions in their big black carriage with pink and gold sparkles. The hotel owner scowled when he saw the taxi carriage behind them.

"They're following us! This makes everything more cliche! SPEED UP!" Screamed Big Daddy in a harsh way. The carriage sped up. The taxi pony didn't need to be asked to sped up. He was getting in on the action and finally doing some exercise.

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As for the farm pony, she had hidden underground in a sewage with a gang of turtles. The lid of the sewage exit was on the side of the road. AJ had her head slightly out, watching. She knew they'd be passing any second now. She turned her sewage covered head to the right because she heard a sound.

Then she saw Big Daddy's carriage. She hid back under. The carriage, thankfully passed overhead. So did a second one. AJ waited a few seconds. No more. The farm pony broke free and sighed of dear relief. The question was, where to next? Then in the sky, a familiar blue pegasus flew by.

"RAINBOW DASH!" Called Applejack really loudly, which was a huge mistake, as you will see in a minute. Dash looked down and flew to the earth pony. She smiled grimly and flew up again. The pegasus performed a weird symbol. A music note. When she came down again, AJ opened her mouth to question, but then she heard a screeching sound and Big Daddy's carriage came back, followed by a taxi.

"Mwahahahahahaha. Well done, my new changeling slave." Said Big Daddy Kardashian. AJ looked and no longer was Rainbow Dash, but a changeling. AJ groaned. She had been trolled. Big Daddy came down from his carriage, smiling.

"You're surrounded, AJ. Come with me now." Said Big Daddy, his tush high in the air. AJ gulped nosily, making quite a sound effect. Coco and Zecor jumped down from the taxi, which was behind Big Daddy's carriage. The mares walked around the big body guards surrounding AJ in a circle. They were at a dead end street part of the city. There was graffiti on the walls. The changeling in the corner looked kind of guilty. Zecor put her hoof on her pink sparkly forehead.

"Wait! Do not take her away! She dozen't dezerve thiz!" Cried Zecor, crying again. Coco nodded in agreement, her light blue mane swishing in the dark alley wind.

"How are you two going to stop us? You may have a plan of destroying my wonderful hotel, but we found out and we are going to in a cliche way stop you!" Laughed Big Daddy hideously. The changeling lifted it's hoof for a second, but then put it down. AJ looked at it. It glanced back. It was all so very touching. The guards closed in on the three ponies and tied them up. They picked the ponies up and loaded them in the carriage. Big Daddy laughed.

"Now you're trapped in there, you can do nothing. About your friends, we'll sort them out. Besides, we're taking you to a place where they'll never find you. Now I just need to contact that sexy pony in reception about our date." Big Daddy cooed. The other slaves cooed back. AJ sighed and looked at her companions.

"Well. We're screwed now. Nice knowing you guys." Said AJ to the two other ponies. The back of the carriage was covered in red velvet. It was quite roomy for a boot.

"I'll never forget you either." Said Coco. "I tried to help the community while I could."

"Thiz iz zo zad! I love you guyz!" Said Zecor sadly.

"Now, now. Let's not go overboard with the mushy stuff." Said AJ. And so the carriage moved on, into the dark dungeon or wherever they're going.

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Orange, knew in his insect heart he would make things right. He now loved AJ more than the queen herself (Well, he loved anypony more than the queen) And he decided he would do a cliche rescue mission.

All he needed to know was, where and who where AJ's friends?

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And that wraps up chapter 7! This is going so quick! This is getting exciting now, right? Will AJ escape? Will the cliche crap come true? We'll never know until the next chapter. Also, this is longest story so far on Fan Fiction. Of course, in the future I am planning to write a really long story, that's really long. I hope. Always remember to leave any suggestions in the reviews or PM me for a story request!

~Ponystories.

Orange, now in Orange pegasus form flew back to the hotel. He was pretty sure the mane 5 would be arriving here, but you never know. Yes, and of course he felt guilty for tricking the pony who kissed him in a kid's show. As for our three protagonists, they were now in a secret location.

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It was a jail cell made out of brass. It was very shiny. Brass chairs, tables and brass food. Yes. Brass food. The three were left in the box like room, deep underground. At least they weren't tied up anymore. But sadly, they were were split apart.

"Now this is where you will stay. Forever. Cliche evil laugh time. Mwahahahaha!" Said Big Daddy, as he locked the brass door. AJ was stared at the roof. She lost all hope now. The farm pony went over and sat in the brass bed, which was harder than Boulder. AJ cried on the inside as usual. She put her old farm hat over to the bedside table. At least she had one reminder. The farm pony shoved her face into the pillow and thought about depressing things. Because she could.

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The 5 other ponies arrived at manehattan, feeling curiously excited.

"See, Rarity! Sending AJ here was a bad idea." Said the real Rainbow Dash to Rarity. The unicorn sighed.

"But it wasn't completely my idea, like I explained on the train." Said Rarity. The ponies did a boring walking scene to the city. When they got there, Rarity wanted to go to every clothes shop they passed. Sadly, they couldn't though because then this story would be really boring. They gazed at the towering buildings and all the other stuff.

"So, where is the hotel?" Asked Twilight. The ponies shrugged.

"Hey! An information center or whatever they're called! We could ask them!" Squealed Pinkie delightfully. A small station, covered in Manehattan tourist stuff was just up ahead. The ponies trotted over to it. A blue sparkly mare with a pink sparkly mane was standing in the booth.

"Hello. My name iz Zecorliette. Can I help you?" Asked the pony.

"Yes. We are looking for the Sparkly sugar daddy hotel." Said Rarity, pushing Twilight out of the way without noticing, because why not. The pony smiled.

"Ah! That iz where my little zizter workz! Her name is Zecoria. Here iz a map." Said Zecorliette. She gave the ponies a map.

"Thanks!" Said Twilight, glaring quickly at Rarity. The ponies followed the map. More boring travelling scenes. They finally arrived at the hotel. Everypony took a moment to admire this unrealistic location.

"Wow! It's just a pretty as I imagined." Said Rarity. The ponies entered inside and were stunned at the reception. They were suddenly greeted by a light tan stallion, with a puffy orange mane and a unicorn horn. He was holding diagrams.

"Hello! My name is Orange. Nice to meet you." Said Orange kindly.

"Nice to meet you too." Said Pinkie dreamily. She snorted in a giggly way.

"Well Orange, Could you lead us to Applejack?" Asked Twilight politely. Pinkie nodded.

"It's a long story, but to make it short, your enslaved farm pony friend is not here." Said Orange sadly. The mane 5 shivered. Dash pretended to look cool with it. Orange led the ponies up to his nice, pretty bedroom.

"Where is she then?" Asked Twilight. Orange used his magic, which was a familiar green colour as Twilight had seen before and he got out his diagrams.

"I am now going to tell you a story, so hold on tight. Luckily the readers have already read the story so this part is being cut out." Said Orange, as he told the story. Pinkie became overly fascinated. Dash fell asleep midway.

"So there. Now using these diagrams and magic powers we should be able to locate AJ." Said the tan pony. He had not told the ponies he was a changeling. "All I know is that she is somewhere underground."

Twilight observed his diagrams and she was quite surprised. Better than Dash's diagrams.

"We'll use a tracking spell to find AJ. Then we'll come back here. Sound good?" Said Twilight. The ponies nodded. But they were stopped by Big Daddy, who was at the door of the luxury bedroom.

"So, you plan to go after your enslaved friend? Mwahahaha. You'll never find her. Her prison is magic proof. Also, Orange is a changeling." Said Big Daddy wickedly. The ponies turned to Orange. Twilight jumped up.

"I knew it! His magic colour!" Said Twilight.

"You're a changeling?" Asked Fluttershy quietly. This shocked everypony since this was the first time Fluttershy had spoken in the whole story.

"But we banished the changelings!" Said Rainbow Dash.

"It's a long story. Besides, I'm not evil." Said Orange, turning into a changeling. Big Daddy laughed and shaked his butt.

"YOU'LL NEVER FIND YOUR FRIEND!" Laughed Big Daddy. Dash suddenly darted for the jelly-like pony and knocked him down.

"SHOW US WHERE AJ IS!" She yelled angrily. Big Daddy's assassin bodyguards pinned the blue pegasus to the ground. Rarity's horn lighted up and she shot a bolt at the bodyguards and knocked them down. She helped Dashie up. Fluttershy karate kicked a bodyguard to the ground. Twilight used her magic to freeze the rest of them. Pinkie flirted with Orange. The 4 ponies ganged up on Big Daddy.

"Where. Is. APPLEJACK!" Bellowed Dash, hovering in the sky. Big Daddy laughed.

"Do what you want. You ain't getting anything!" Said the hideous grey pony. Twilight's horn lighted up a fluro pink.

"If you don't tell us where AJ is, I'm afraid I'm going to have to use my magic on you." Said Twilight darkly. "And be honest, or else."

Big Daddy shivered back in fear. Orange and Pinkie in the corner were now doing some really inappropriate things. The large grey pony whimpered.

"Not going to say anything?" Said Twilight, her horn glowing brighter.

"NEVER!" Bellowed the Big Daddy, running out the door. Rarity lighted up her horn and she and Twilight chased after Big Daddy, followed by Dash. Fluttershy decided to stay in the room with the love birds.

"STOP!" Called Twilight, shooting a large pink bolt, leaving a burn mark on the staircase. Rarity kept shooting bolts and being over dramatic. Dash darted forward. Suddenly the ponies were abominated by a gang of assassins. Twilight had enough of this crap. Her horn glowed a bright pink.

"FREEZE!" Screamed the alicorn. Everything froze, except for Twilight. Even Dash and Rarity froze, which was kind of unfair. The alicorn stormed through the frozen rooms, consumed by her loyalty and anger. She found Big Daddy frozen.

"TELL. ME. NOW" Twilight snarled at him. Big Daddy sighed.

"Very well. She is underground in a secret chamber. The chamber is just under the reception desk. But when you come back to do something about here, things will be different. No, not my weight." Said Big Daddy, staring at a intern. Twilight smiled and everything unfroze. Yay.

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That's chapter 8! This is getting so intense now! What will happen next? Will AJ survive? I think there is one more chapter coming, so be prepared for a stunner. Then I'm taking a break from writing for a bit. Anyways guys, remember to leave any suggestions or PM for a story idea!

~Ponystories

The reception pony moved away slowly from the purple alicorn. Pinkie and Orange and finally stopped shipping and came down to help. Obviously, Orange had kind of cheated on AJ, but he knew she probably wouldn't mind. Twilight used her magic to blow up the reception desk. Pieces of desk and paper flew everywhere. Twilight nodded.

"Come on ladies. Oh and you, Orange. Let's go get our friends." Said Twilight sternly. The staff ponies had either fainted or ran away screaming for their ice cream sandwiches. They walked over to the destroyed reception desk. In the middle was a large, golden twisty slide.

"Awesome!" Said Dash happily, sliding down the slide waiting for nopony.

"The element of Loyalty, everypony." Said Rarity sarcastically. Twilight sighed. She slid down the slide herself, along with the rest of the ponies. Orange didn't like slides. They made him feel sick. I'm not going to include vomiting in this, don't worry. The earth pony just decided to suck it up and do it anyway. He slid down the long slide. It was quick and golden. He couldn't see anything. He screamed like when Rarity got mud on her bess dress. When it finally stopped, he landed on a soft green mat. First green thing in this this story apart from AJ's eyes, he thought. He took a moment to observe the strange location they had landed in.

It was a large, golden hall with paintings of Big Daddy's tush. There were bolted hard doors. Lots of them. Thousands. Not even Flutter-hulk could break through those doors. The floors were shiny (duh) and everything was all nice and pretty. As usual. Orange saw his companions and ran up to join them. He slid across the floor like a slip and slide.

"Bring on the summer!" He called, knocking over Fluttershy. She let out a high pitched squeal. Dash growled at him. Orange ignored her and got up. He felt like someone had put the jelly legs jinx on him. Pinkie jumped next to him and smiled.

"Now, which one is AJ in?" Asked Twilight.

"How about we ask Orange?" Said Dash darkly. "He seems to know a lot after all."

Orange shrugged. Everypony sighed.

"Come on girls, we better starting looking. Oh, sorry Orange! Forgot about you. Don't really have males in this show. We'll look all night if we have to. We'll split up, because of cliche reasons.." Said Twilight. Orange sighed and gave himself a unicorn horn. The ponies went to separate doors. He was followed by Pinkie. Fluttershy went to see Rarity and Dash went to Princess Twily.

"Burst open that door with unicorn powers! It'll bring action and be so cool, my honey bunny!" Said Pinkie in a silly romantic way. Orange sighed and tried using his magic. But remember, the doors were locked tight.

"Twi! I think it's going to take all three of us to open one door!" Called Rarity from another somewhere else. Orange rushed, with Pinkie on his tail to Rarity. Dash was looking kind of stormy when he arrived. Twilight was already there. Fluttershy was very shy and couped up like a snail.

"Altogether now in harmony!" Called Twilight. The unicorns' horns light up. They shot three large bolts, which combined and exploded the door, which left nothing but a small dent.

"Try teleporting in? That's logical." Said Dash. Twilight shook her purple head.

"Sadly, because it's relevant to the plot it doesn't work." Said the alicorn.

"What do we do now?" Asked Fluttershy nervously. Everypony shrugged.

"Wait! The key! The lock holes on the door!" Said Dash.

"Why didn't we think of that? It's super logical." Said Rarity. Twilight sighed.

"They'll never in 1000 Nightmare moon imprisonment years give us the key." Said Twilight.

"Then we take it from these insane ponies!" Laughed Dash. Pinkie was trying to kiss Orange. No more details.

"Yeah! And Twilight will do that freeze spell and harass Big Daddy or whatever his name is!" Said Rarity, jumping up in excitement. You could see it in her eyes…

"Well, okay, For AJ's sake. I'm surprised we didn't think of this before. To angry, I suppose." Said Twilight. Suddenly Pinkie burst into tears.

"I can't believe you would say that about me! You'd rather date a enslaved farm pony than a insane party pony with happiness issues!" Scoffed Pinkie.

"Wouldn't anypony." Whispered Dash to Rarity. The unicorn felt kind of guilty for sniggering at that comment.

"Come on everypony, let's get that key." Said Twilight roughly. The ponies teleported back into the reception.

"So, you're back. But you don't have your friend. Mwahahahahahahaha." Said Big Daddy, sitting on his Tushy big smoosh pillow.

"WHERE'S THE KEY!" Screamed Dash, raging towards the blobfish pony. Big Daddy shoved her away with his cane he stole from Willy Wonka.

Twilight lit up her horn and stopped Dash before she could go again.

"Where's the key?" Asked Twilight calmly, although she was not calm at all. You could see it in her eyes…

"I'LL NEVER TELL YOU! BWAHAHAHAHA AHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAH!" Said Big Daddy, accidentally throwing his $30,000 bit watch in the air.

"IT'S MINE!" Screamed Rarity, shoving everypony out of the way. She grabbed the watch and backed away creepily like in those fanfictions. Okay, maybe only mine.

"The element of Generosity, Everypony." Announced Rainbow Dash.

"Give me that back, you foolish handless being!" Bellowed Big Daddy, thrashing his cane on the ground.

"I'll give it back, if you give us the key." Said Rarity politely, stroking the watch like a pet. Big Daddy shook his head. Rarity giggled. She held out her orange tongue to the watch. She licked it.

"Yuck! Stop being Miley Cyrus! Fine, I'll give you the darn key." Said Big Daddy gruffly. He whispered to his body guard to get the key.

"He's Nicki Minaj everyday, though." Whispered Rarity to Dash. Big Daddy and the mane 5 including stood around awkwardly for a few minutes.

"So, you guys seen Rainbow Factory?" Asked Big Daddy. Nopony said anything.

"Alright then.." Said Big Daddy. Thankfully the body guard arrived and the two ponies traded items.

"But remember, you crazy ponies what I said at the end of last chapter. Mwahahahahahaha Hahahahah." Said Big Daddy. And so, the ponies went down the slide a second time because it was fun and arrived down at the bottom. The key light up a brilliant gold. All the doors disappeared except for three. Everypony gasped dramatically.

"All right, let's get AJ." Said Twilight, bravely.

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Okay! That's chapter 9! WOW! I know I said that this was going to be the finale, but things change! I think at the moment Chapter 10 or 11 is going to be the final chapter. Anyways, I hope you guys are enjoying this story! I know this chapter isn't so full of action, but don't worry, the next chapter is going to be ACTION PACKED.

~Ponystories

Twilight unlocked the first door. Inside there was Coco Pommel.

"Coco!" Said Rarity, running past her friends and hugging the cream coloured earth pony.

"Hello Rarity." Said Coco. The mane 6 waved politely, but everypony knew the mane 6 didn't have such an emotional bond with Coco. Rarity admired the prison.

"Dang, everything at this unrealistic hotel is sparkly." Said Dash, staring at the golden interior. The ponies moved onto the next door. In there was a pony the mane 6 didn't recognise.

"You have rezcued me!" Cried the pony. She looked similar to that pony at the information spot. Coco moved forward and helped the pony up.

"I'm Zecoria. But you may call me Zecor." Said the sparkly pony.

"Hey! Zecorlette's sister!" Cried Pinkie Pie.

"Yez, creepy pink pony, I am her zister!" Cried Zecoria back, with a tone of joy in her voice. Zecor smiled and followed Pinkie out of her golden prison.

"Well, nice to meet you Zecor. I suppose the last room of unrealisticness has AJ in it?" Asked Twilight.

"Obviously." Scoffed Pinkie, still glaring at Orange. She was joined by Zecor and the two pink ponies glared at the changeling. The ponies walked up to the last door. Oh, so shiny. Twilight breathed in and used the key. She opened the door.

"APPLEJACK!" Cried Twilight happily. The orange pony looked up. She looked tired and weak. Her rusty old bones were showing. Rarity gasped in horror.

"Your skeleton is showing!" Said Rarity, being over dramatic as usual.

"Nice to see you too." Said AJ gruffly.

"Wait, there's a skeleton?" Said Pinkie, looking around nervously. Dash rolled her eyes. Zecoria was crying again for 100th time in this story. Coco waved swiftly. Fluttershy muttered a 'hi' very quietly.

"Come on, AJ. Let's get out of here! This place is creeping me out." Said Dash, staring at the shininess. Ooh. AJ sighed and came out.

"We'll teleport out, it'll be easier and they'll be more time for action." Said Twilight, her horn lighting up.

"But remember what Big Daddy said? He's going to be ready for us!" Squeaked the small yellow pegasus.

"Oh, I'm sure I'll be able to take him on." Said Dash, showing off by flying backwards. AJ rolled her eyes. Twilight sighed and teleported the group of ponies into the reception. But a ambush was waiting for them. Groups of strong, muscled body guards jumped on the ponies. Twilight blasted them of. Suddenly a large group of unicorns shot lasers at them. Twilight reflected them of.

"Woah, woah. Who said Twilight could be the hero?" Said Dash jokingly, flying quickly towards some assassins. She hit them and knocked them out. The blue pegasus flew quickly around a circle to create a small tornado. The tornado picked up a lot of ponies, including poor Fluttershy, and flung them against the wall. The bodyguards grabbed Fluttershy. She squealed. Orange was at the scene and used his magic to blast them off.

"Thanks." Said Fluttershy gratefully. Orange nodded. Meanwhile, Rarity and Rarity were working together to fight baddies. Rarity shot a few bolts and the approaching enemies (and didn't kill anypony, don't worry) and AJ lassoed a group of ponies and threw them to the hard reception ground.

"Downfall!" Called AJ, poking her hoof into the ponies' faces. Rarity cringed.

"That's disgusting!" Cringed Rarity. AJ sighed and stepped away. As for Twilight, she was shooting HUGE bolts at body guards. She knocked out 10 at a time! As for Orange, he was a alicorn male and was shooting lots of ponies down. Pinkie, Coco and Zecoria were punching and kicking.

"Karate kick!" Yelled Pinkie, smashing her hoof into a body guards face. "Ah, Karate kid taught me well."

"Hoofy crunch!" Said Zecoria, smashing her tush into two disgusted bodyguards' clean manes.

"Butt. Now equipped with weapon defenze." Joked Zecor. Coco Pommel sadly was not a good fighter. The body guards easily caught and tied her up. They began punching her, until Rarity shot them down.

"Get off, you well styled fiends!" Scoffed the fashion horse. She untied Coco.

"I'm not very good at fighting." Said Coco softly.

"I know. I'm reading the story." Said Rarity, shooting bravely at two more bodyguards. Suddenly thousands of bodyguards were running at all the ponies. Twilight's horn light up a bright pink. The assassins jumped for the ponies when Twilight shot out a wave of pink power. Then everyone died. The end.

Just kidding! The mane 6 light up and transformed into their rainbow power forms, which replaced the elements of harmony and made a line of creepy Fluttershy toys. They blasted the remaining bodyguards away with somehow not hurting anypony else. Our other 3 non-mane 6 character jumped for joy. Suddenly a very angry Big Flooby tushy bu-

"Enough describing my tush! Yes, I know it's sexy, but anyways, we're getting off topic. You nine ponies won't be able to stop me with or without or the magic of friendship!" Bellowed Big Daddy, now larger than Flufflepuff.

"Oh, but we will!" Argued Dash, as the mane 6 light up brighter than before.

"No!" Screamed Big Daddy, pressing a large red button.

"The sacred button! No pony has pressed that for 2000 years!" Cried Zecoria, fainting into Orange's arms. The hotel walls suddenly had cracks in them. Everything glowed a bright white. Coco closed her eyes and the mane 6 looked away. When the light stopped, a sight worth consideration happened.

Everywhere. Changelings. Help. Orange screamed.

"My..My old clans!" Cried Orange. As for Big Daddy, he turned around, shocked.

"That wasn't meant to happen! I was meant to turn into a titan! Stupid button." Scoffed the fat pony, storming away. But suddenly, Queen Chrysalis appeared out of the sky. She laughed evilly. Orange scooted away nervously.

"Hide me." He whispered to Coco Pommel.

"Guess who's back!" Laughed the queen.

"Ooh! A guessing game. I love guessing games. Uh, let's see..hmmm…" Said Pinkie thoughtfully.

"Queen Chrysalis!" Twilight blurted out.

"That's it! Queen Chrysalis! I knew it!" Said Pinkie, jumping up excitedly. The queen laughed darkly.

"And now I'm going to take over once again!" Laughed the queen. Her changeling army was already terrorizing the city.

"Memories." Whispered Orange to Coco.

"Well, it won't be for much longer, since we've got the magic of friendship!" Spat Dash. The mane 6 light up a brilliant rainbow colour. Chrysalis hissed.

"You shall not defeat me again!" She cried, calling all her changelings. Orange was shivering behind Coco.

"I..I feel like going." He mummered in a creepy voice, which startled the cream earth pony.

"Don't go! Remember who you wanted to be! Remember AJ, remember me!" Screamed Coco. The changelings were now hovering in a circle in the crystal blue sky. They combined their magic and were shooting a powerbolt. Meanwhile, the mane 6 were shooting a rainbow.

"I.. I must go. That was a mistake. Must help queen.." Orange said, losing his grammar and proper talk.

"No! Orange! Please don't!" Cried Coco, tears forming at her blue eyes.

"Queen. Needs." Spluttered the changeling. The mane 6 were winning. But when Orange flew up to help his old coworkers, the mane 6 were getting weaker.

"I..I don't know how much longer I can stand for Twi!" Called Dash, sweating. Fluttershy was squealing and Twilight herself was beginning to panic. All was tense and dramatic.

"Twilight!" Called Rarity, her eyes closing. Coco decided it was her turn to be a hero. She ran up past the destroyed reception and screamed as loud as she could.

"ORANGE! I LOVE YOU! PLEASE STOP DESTROYING EQUESTRIA!" Called Coco, tears at her eyes, making a water splashing sound effect because pony eyes are so freaking huge. Orange looked at Coco.

"AND SO DO I!" Called AJ, which actually felt like she was saying the truth. The mane 6 were grateful of Orange's assistance and saving Fluttershy. Orange turned away from his changeling coworkers. He flew down and landed next to Coco, and they..um…

The mane 6 were feeling stronger again and blasted the Changeling queen and her army away once more.

"AND DON'T COME BACK!" Yelled Dash, into the distance. The mane 6 regrouped with Zecoria, Coco and Orange.

"Well Rarity, I have to admit. This was a holiday of a lifetime after all." Said AJ, smiling.

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LADIES AND GENTLECOLTS! That's the ending! For real this time. I really hoped you enjoyed this story. I really personally liked this story. Who was your favourite character out of our trio? I think I liked Zecor. Anyways, if you have any story suggestions, please PM me. Also, I'm taking a small break from writing, but I will be back for more pony stories and others!

~Ponystories.