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Saten Twist SEASON 3

by Howl of a Werewolf

Chapter 17

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Moon Dancer: What is this?

Saten: It's a party.

Lemon: For you.

Pinkie: (pops out cake) Surprise!

Twilight Sparkle: Come on in!

Moon Dancer: Thanks but no thanks. I don't do parties.

Twilight: I know. And I think it's my fault... Back when we were in school together, you invited me to a party. I was so focused on my studies that I didn't show up.

Moon Dancer: Big deal!

Twilight: It WAS a big deal... And now that I realize how important friendship is, I'd like to make up for my mistake with a new party... A party in honor of my friend Moon Dancer! Please, you've got to let me make this up to you. Moon Dancer: And you think this is gonna do it, huh?

Twilight: (nervously) Uh, yes?

Moon Dancer: Well, sure, why wouldn't it?... That was only the FIRST time I put myself out there, and then you didn't even bother to show up!... Then you left town without saying goodbye even though we were supposed to be friends! I was humiliated! I felt like I wasn't important! I never wanted to let myself be hurt like that again!... (point at Minuette, Lemon and Twinkleshine), Those three finally convinced me that I had value! That other ponies might like me and want to be my friend! And you! Didn't! Show! UP! [screams, sobs]. Pinkie: [whispers to Spike].

Saten: Don't cry sweetie.. Still got me.

Moon Dancer: (cries in harder).

Saten: (eyes narrow but Lemon pushes him aside, gently).

Twilight: You're right... This party can't make up for the way I hurt you. But please, don't let my mistake be the reason you can't be friends with anypony else.

Minuette: (cutely) We were your friends then and we'd be honored to be your friends now.

Moon Dancer: [sniffles]

Spike: (points out 3 ponies to Moon).

Moon Dancer: What? That's the librarian! The bookseller! My sister!

Minuette: You've got a lot of friends, Moon Dancer.

(short pause).

Twilight: I'm sorry, Moon Dancer. I've faced magical creatures, the end of Equestria, all sorts of things. But seeing how my actions affected you, that was one of the worst feelings I've ever had.

Moon Dancer: [warmly hugs her] Thank you, Twilight. I never realized how much I needed to hear that. Now come on, everypony! Let's party!... (to pinkie) Right?

Pinkie: Right! [party cannon squeak]

All: YAAAAAAY! [party sounds]


LATER:

Twilight: I think it's time for us to go, Moon Dancer.

Moon Dancer: Thank you for helping me make some new friends. Even if they are my old friends.

Twilight: Oh. We'll come back and visit soon.

Moon Dancer: That would be great! You've still gotta teach me that Hayscartes technique!

Twilight: (giggles cutely) Deal.

Spike: Um, Moon Dancer? It got kinda banged up, but here's a little something I wanted to give you back at your first party. (it reveals to be a picture of Twilight, Moon, Lemon, Lyra, Minutte and Twinkleshine, back as fillies).

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