FanFiction Twilight Sparkle Endless Nightmare
Chapter 1: FanFiction Twilight Sparkle Endless Nightmare
This FanFiction is based on the episode called Lesson Zero from Friendship is Magic. Rather then the ideas Twilight Sparkle goes crazy in the episode. Her fears being a bad student in the eyes of Princess Celestia, being sent-back into Magic Kindergarten. Trap her inside a bad nightmare, and she becomes another version of Fluttershy. I came-up with the ideas: after observing that there are moments in the episode where Twilight Sparkle was scary and her fears were teasing, laughing at her. On side-note: I think turning Twilight Sparkle into a crazy character made no sense.
The tittle of this FanFiction is: Endless Nightmare
Twilight Sparkle noticing everything was turning into the Magic Kindergarten Classroom. Everyone was laughing at her and the worst part hearing Princess Celestia saiding: You are a bad student, again, again.
Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Applejack, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie found Twilight Sparkle. Notices her eyes were closed and her was continuing saiding: I'm not a bad student, again, again.
In Twilight Sparkle mind her friends laughing at her, said the words: Useless, worthless towards her.
Twilight Sparkle was sad, depression found-out her friends laughing, feeling unloved by her friends
Outside the nightmare:
Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Pinkie Pie, Rarity were trying everything to wake-up Twilight Sparkle but no hope.
Fluttershy: Twilight You are having a bad nightmare. Start laughing at your fears
Twilight Sparkle start laughing but the nightmare was too powerful.
Twilight Sparkle notices Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Rarity, Applejack were laughing with her.
After defeating the nightmare
Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Applejack, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy: Please wake-up Twilight
Twilight Sparkle open her eyes saw Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Fluttershy.
Twilight Sparkle: It was a nightmare but felt so real. Thank You Fluttershy for helping me, and also thank you my friends supporting me in my time of need.
The End
On side-note: I like about my version show off that Fluttershy, Applejack, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash as loyal friends, care about Twilight Sparkle, finally feels more friendship is magic then anything the content creators did in the episode related to Twilight Sparkle. My first impressed about that episode was about Twilight Sparkle fears would take over her mind. Twilight Sparkle would become easily scared. What I got was Content creators ideas that: turning Twilight Sparkle into anything other then her normal self because think entertaining.
My re-action was this: I don't found it entertaining at all and the reason because feels out of place, judging by the tittle of the show, Twilight Sparkle being one out of 6 elements of friendship, songs, etc. As well does not help the character in anyway. More scary, shocking then entertaining. Don't care about the fact: maybe not make any sense judging by many things in the episode