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Ascension of a Demon

by Arkraiththeepicbrony

Chapter 8

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Hello my faithful readers I am pleased to bring you chapter 8. I honestly had the most fun writing this chapter. I also found my 2 biggest flaws in writing (OOr so I think) Consistency and detail. I always switch my writing around and have trouble writing in unimportant details that are just there for imagery. If you have any tips on how I can fix this please tell. Have fun remember to RandR

My head felt woozy when I woke up to a light knocking on the do Who could be here at this time of night? I looked for a clock to see what time it was. I couldn't find one. I got out of bed, which was larger than I remember. Luckily there was moonlight shining through a window lighting the place up pretty well. There was a knock at the door my way to answer it i was freaked out when i saw someone else in the room, but was relieved when i saw was just a mirror. I hobbled over to it to examine myself. I had a black coat,purple mane with gold highlights and bright red eyes, which had dark bags under felt good to finally know what I looked like. There was another knock. I wobbled over to the door before stopping in front of it to ask "Who is it?" I immediately got the reply "Room service" Confused , I opened the door. "I don't think I orde-" I was stopped dead in my tracks by the beauty of the pony in front of had bright red hair that contrasted perfectly with her bright blue coat, that hid behind her traditional maid uniform "On the other hand maybe I did order you- I mean, 'room service'" She hid her face shyly behind her hooves.

I gestured for her to come in, which she did. "I didn't think this place had this kind of service" I said to her ,half confused, half sly. "We like to give honored guests 'special' treatment" She said to me with a seductive grin. "And here I thought I was under house arrest" I said walking closer, with my own seductive grin. She went and lied down on the couch "We have treatment for that too" She said in a low voice. "Maybe I'll try it sometime" I said, copying her low voice. I continued to walk slowly towards her.

"I'd welcome you with open legs" She said in the most sulty voice i could think possible. This got my blood boiling. When I got to the couch my second head was doing all the thinking so the only thing I could say was "I'd like that" I got on the couch and put my knees on either side of her. I looked at her blushing face before leaning close, lips ready. I felt blood rushing to everywhere in my body. As I got closer she started to lean into it. I don't know if I'd ever done this before but I'll be damned if I don't do it again. She as well as I closed our eyes .

"WHAT do you think you're doing!" said a voice from the bed. The voice belonged to none other than princess Celestia herself. The girl I was on whispered angrily "Why didn't you tell me she was here?" I answered the best I could "Honestly I didn't know". The girl turned to the princess "I'm sorry your majesty I guess i just got carried away, he's a very handsome stallion" The princess got even more angry at this "You and I both know that's not what i'm talking about" the princess looked at me "Do you know who this is!?" I just shrugged "Hit it and quit it?" I said innocently with a grin. The princess shook her head "That's not what I'm talking about" The girl scowled at this. She slowly started to back away… towards the window. I tried to warn her "Hey watch out you're about to-" before I could finish she burst into a green flame for a moment before a whole different pony took her place, this one a pegasus. She jumped off leaving me with a very confused face. Celestia sighed "You should be more careful with who you try to lay with" I was about to ask why but before I could the pony was brought into the room surrounded by a dark purplish blue aura. "I believe you dropped this" I heard from outside before the dark pony I saw on the train came into the room, following the transforming pony. "Hey, you're the pony I saw on the train!" She smiled "Indeed I am, my name is Princess Luna, sister of Princess Celestia" I looked at luna, then Celestia, then back again "I really see the uh… similarities" They both chuckled lightly

"He really does have that sense of humor you were talking about" Said luna.

"He does, but we have other things to attend to" said Celestia, turning to the still floating prisoner. "What's your name?" I decided to ask, breaking the silence. She hrmphed . "That's no way to treat a 'honored guest'" I said slowly walking towards her. She remained silent. "By the way do you do anything with bondage?" I said still slowly walking towards her. I noticed a blush starting to form on her face. "Can you tell me anything about you?" I asked quietly. My voice showing dominance. She started to struggle a bit , blush still evident. I was next to her now. "Well I guess you've been trained pretty well, such a 'handsome' man like myself might feel a little disappointed" I trailed my hoof down her side. She started to look longing at me. I trailed my hand lower until I started to get close to her- "ALRIGHT I'LL TELL YOU JUST STOP" I stopped and took my hoof off her. "Do tell" Said Celestia. The girl gave a defeated look "My name is agent CL1134, I was sent on a mission to rescue him" She said nodding in my direction. "Rescue?" I asked? She nodded "It was believed you had been captured"

"By who? Who believed I had been captured?" She looked away "… i can't say" I smiled "Well alrighty then, case closed" All three girls looked at me with shocked expressions. They had trouble finding words. "Obviously she just wanted some of me" I said like I had just solved the case of the century. "I mean come on, what kind of problems could she cause, she's so cute" I said gesturing to her entire body. "You wouldn't think that if you knew what I was" She looked away with a sad face. "Are you a dude?" I asked. She shook her head. "Worse" She was barely a whisper. I laughed then stopped abruptly "Oh my! Are you a-a-" She looked up at me with a sad face "Are you both?!" She gave me an infuriated look "No you idiot! I'm a changeling" The silence in the room made it so you could hear an ant drop a pin. "A what?" There were 3 facehooves in the room, none of which were mine. "Changelings are creatures that can change form to manipulate others" Said Celestia. "So?" I questioned. "They use this power to feed off of their victims" Continued Luna. "Like a vampire?" I was still confused. "No, we feed off of the love created in the false relationship" Said CL1134. "I still don't understand, they change form to create a relationship and use that love to feed themselves?" I was starting to understand. "There's more to it than that , but yes that's most of it"

"And how is that bad?" I asked. They all look confused. Celestia responded with "They invaded canterlot at one point and attacked innocent civilians as well as anyone with any love in them so they could feed themselves. They usually steal the identity of loved ones so they can build up love before feeding. They manipulate people by becoming loved ones" This sounded a little bad but brought up another question. "Then why not give it to them?" The princesses looked at me confused but CL1134 looked sad. "If they feed off love then give it to them" CL1134 shook her head. "When ponies realize what we are they feel betrayed and stop loving. There's no way they could love us for who we really are" she was quiet and sad. "Why can't they?" I asked her, wondering why no one could love this girl. She was mad now "BECAUSE WE LOOK LIKE THIS!" she blurted before being lit in a green flame a second time. After it disipated there was a black and green chitin-like creature left in it's place. She closed her eyes and started sobbing quietly "No pony could love anything about us! We look gross to them! They see us as lying, manipulating, evil bugs!"

She continued to sob quietly, it was the only sound in the quiet room. "OK then how about this" She looked up at me confused, tears in her eyes but no longer sobbing "First thing first you need a new name" Now everyone was confused. "I don't under-" I put my hoof in her mouth "That name is too long, pick another" She nodded and I took my hoof out of her mouth. "My codename was whisper" I thought about it "Nah, that won't work" She looked confused. "Oh I know. How about Onyx, that's fitting" I gave her the suggestion. She nodded slowly. "I guess that will work, but why?" I laughed. "what is your plan?" Asked Luna. I smiled devishly. I over dramatically pointed at the newly named onyx. "Onyx?!" She just looked confused "Y-yes?" I cleared my throat, still pointing at onyx. "Will you be my marefriend?"

"WHAT!?" Said the three simultaneously. Shock as well as every word for confused showed clearly on their faces. Their mouths all open like they wanted to say something but we're unable to. "But w-why?" Onyx managed to squeak out."Isn't it obvious?" I asked them. They all shook their heads slowly, faces still shocked. "Well you say everyone sees you as manipulating, lying, bugs right?" I asked. Onyx . She nodded sadly. "Well then prove them wrong!, prove to everypony Changelings are more than pests, prove that you can love and be loved! Prove you can do anything they can and more!" I walked over and placed my front hooves on her shoulders.

I leaned in close "Prove that you can do this" I went in for a kiss "wait! Don-" I interpret her with a kiss to the lips. I held my lips to hers for a few seconds, not taking it too far though. When I pulled away I said "That wasn't so bad now was it" She shook her head ."It wasn't but that's not the problem. I -" I put my hoof to her mouth to interpret her. "Let me guess you coated your lips in some kind of knockout poison so you could capture me easier?" She blushed with a shocked expression "Y-yes but how did you know" I felt my body start to feel light "Oh you know just a feeli-" I stopped abruptly when all of a sudden there were 2 onyx's in front of me. "Are-are you alright" I started to feel woozy "Oh I'm fiiine you need not wor-" My body locked up and I fell to the ground. Onyx said something in a panicked tone, I didn't understand what it was though. Then I realized something important. "I need a shower" I mumbled before losing consciousness.

How was it? Good bad? Meh? Without a beta reader I don't really have any of my mistakes fixed. Anyways hope you enjoyed please leave a review and C U LATER.

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