Chapter 16

The show stoppers

Disclaimer : I do not own pokemon and mlp friendship is magic

Ash is now on his way to sweet apple acres to pick up apple Bloom as he continues walking just then he ran to Shadow as he too was walking "Hey Ash! " said Shadow as Ash looked at him " Hey Shadow what are you doing. " said Ash " just enjoying a nice walk then I ran into you. " said Shadow " I'm on my way to sweet apple acres. " said Ash as Shadow ask he want to join Ash nodded his head as they walked to sweet apple acres as they got there they see the cmc working on thier new clubhouse they heard about

"Hey, girls. " said Ash as the cmc see Ash and Shadow walking to them "Hi, Ash and Shadow. " Said Apple Bloom as the two are walking to them as they look at thier new clubhouse as shadow sees his little sister at the picnic table singing her song

" We love your new clubhouse " said Shadow

" Thanks big bro. " said Sweetie belle

"That's so cool. " said Scotaloo as Ash nodded

"I'll say, what's Sweetie belle up to girls?" said Ash

"There she is, Ash!" said AppleBloom then looks at scootaloo

"I told you we could find her by following her totally awesome voice " said Apple Bloom

"What's that sweet tune you're singing? "said Scotaloo

"Oh. I was just working on our new cutie mark crusaders theme song."said Sweetie belle

"Cool!"said both

" That's a nice theme I've ever heard Sweetie belle. " said Ash

"Thanks Ash! " said Sweetie belle

" Teach us?"said Scotaloo

"Well, ive only come up with one part, but, okay!"said Sweetie belle as Ash and Shadow were watching them at thier window when Applejack came and see them " Why hello there Ashand Shadow what are you doing?"said Applejack as Ash and Shadow see her "we're watching the cutie mark crusaders praticing singing. " said Ash as Applejack heard that she too listen to thier song

"Well I'll be, the cutie mark crusaders. You've done one fine job with this place. So what's next? " said Applejack as Apple Bloom was walking to her

"Well, now that we have a real life clubhouse. " said AppleBloom

"And a map of ponyville. " Said Scotaloo as she points at the map then Sweetie belle came walking to them

"And a cutie mark crusaders theme song. " said Sweetie belle

"Yeah Ash and Shadow told me but why? "said Applejack

"We're gonna go out in the world and discover our talents! " said AppleBloom

" a new adventure! "Said Scotaloo

" And earn our cutie marks! "Said Sweetie belle

"We'll leave no stone unturned! "Said AppleBloom

" No mountain unclimbed! "Said Scotaloo

" No meal uncooked! "Said Sweetie belle

"We'll okay then. Sounds like you have a plan. I've got to, uh, leave no apples unpicked. " said Applejack as she left the clubhouse but Ash and Shadow then walked to the cutie mark crusaders "are we ready to get our cutie marks, ponies? "Said Scotaloo as Apple Bloom and sweetie belle came

" Ready!" said both as they high five as they're in sweet apple acres Ash and Shadow helped the cutie mark crusaders with the slop for the pigs then they ring the bell as the pigs came charging to then the cutie mark crusaders were a mess "(laughs ) you girls need a bath for that work." said Ash as they nodded but first they need to see if they have cutie marks on thier flanks but nothing as they're done as sweet apple acres then head to Mr. And Mrs. Cake ' s bakery to make taffy as they give each other a high five but got stucked "hang on we're save you " said Shadow as Ash and him turned the lever then turned off the machine as the cutie mark crusaders looked at thier flanks still no cutie marks then they're at Rarity's house doing a hair dye "I don't know sis, Rarity's not going to be happy about this. " said Shadow

"Relax big bro, what could go wrong. " said Sweetie belle as they're done the pony was running crying because her mane is a afro style with Rainbow Color "not good. " Said Ash as the cutie mark crusaders look still now cutie marks then they try a psychic lessons but didn't turn out because apple Bloom picked the wrong cards at every turn but no cutie marks they tried climbing on top of the mountain as they fell because they're at the small mountain they did promise Ash no dangerous stuff as they look no cutie marks as Ash and Shadow were tired of the walking then rest at Twilight's house

"Man, this fillysitting is bad labor for this unicorn. " said Shadow was so exhausted from the things the cutie mark crusaders have been doing

"Well they're just curious about getting cutie marks! " said Ash as they see Twilight walking with the cmc's teacher as Twilight sees the

"Ash, Shadow what are you doing here? " said Twilight as both Ash, Shadow and spike are saying something

" We had nothing to do with this. " said Both as Twilight sees the cutie mark crusaders reading her books

"what is going on here?"said Twilight

"Well, we sure aren't getting our cutie marks for being librarians. " said Scotaloo as Ash heard that

"Scotaloo that's not nice. " said Ash as the cutie mark crusaders looked at him

"Sorry Ash! " Said Cutie mark crusaders

"Huh. I should think not." said Spike as Ash bonk him in the head

" Ow! What? " said Spike looking at Ash

"That's not nice you know Spike. " said Ash as Twilight's walking to the cutie mark crusaders

"Girls, I think you're going about this the wrong way. Instead of trying to do things in areas you're not familiar with, why not try going in areas that you already like? "Said twilight as thier teacher, Ash and Shadow are walking to them

"And I have the perfect place to start." As she brings out a poster and show it to the cutie mark crusaders as they're looking at it

"Showcase your talents for all to see. Perform in the ponyville school talent show. " said the cutie mark crusaders

"There will be all sorts of awards best dramatic performance, best comedy act, best magic act. Surely you can find your talent."

" This would be the perfect place to discover our talents! " said AppleBloom

"Juggling! "

"Acting! "

"Magic tricks!"

"Square dancing! "

" tight rope walking! "

"Tiger taming!"

"My little ponies, you're missing the point. Think about the things you already enjoy doing. " said Twilight

"Twilight's right girls think about what you're already good at. "Said Ash

"Sure we can do that." said Scotaloo

" Yeah, sure we can. "said Sweetie belle

" "Well, whatever we can do,we'll do it as. " said Apple Bloom

"The cutie mark crusaders! "said Both as they're high hoof each other as they're out of Twilight's house they're preparing for what talents they're good at as Ash and Shadow are watching them but as they went to Rarity's house to get some things but made Rarity mad "Sweetie belle! I told you not to touch my things! Come back with my supplies!" Said Rarity as Ash and Shadow are running with the cutie mark crusaders

" We're just borrowing them for the talent show. Don't worry sis! I promise we'll bring them back!"shouted Sweetie belle then they're using the fan from Mr. Breezy.

"Thanks, Mr breezy. We'll return the fan to you real soon." said Scotaloo as they're leaving Shadow wants to ask Sweetie belle something

"What do you need this fan for?"said Shadow

"Trust me on this one." said Sweetie belle then they went to get plywood

"Okay, so that's six wooden planks, 4x8 plywood, a box of nails, four cans of paint, and four brushes. Anything else. " Scotaloo

"Yeah! Instructions on how to use six wooden planks, 4x8 plywood, a box of nails, four cans of paint, and four brushes. " Said Sweetiebelle as she's thinking Scotaloo have went into speed

"Whoa! " said the cutie mark crusaders as Ash and Shadow start running then they're at Twilight's house for a book that has a ghost picture on it

"Ghosts, goblins, and ghoulish figures? " what do you need a book like this for? "said Twilight

" I was asking the same question. " said Ash

"You'll see. Thanks, Twilight. We'll give it back as soon as we're done with it. " said Scotaloo as they're on the road again

"I so exhausted. " said Shadow as Ash walked to him

" You rest I'll watch over them. " said Ash

"Thanks Ash! " said Shadow as Ash nodded

"That's so sweet of you Ash. " said Twilight as Ash smiled " Yeah and I'll be going now Twilight see ya. " said Ash as he's flying his way here

"I wonder what they're up to? " said Twilight

"I don't know? And I don't know if I should be excited or scared to find out." said Spike then there's the clubhouse

"I'm glad we're doing this as a team."said Apple Bloom "

"Me too! Um, so, what are we doing again?"said Sweetie belle

" A super, awesome, dramatic song for the talent show,of course. " said Scotaloo

" Right! With super cool scenery and amazing costumes!"said Sweetie belle

"And mind blowing music."said Apple Bloom

"Now that's something you three will do. " said Ash as they nodded back to him

"This is gonna be so amazing. "said Scotaloo

" Sweetiebelle, I think you should be the singer." said Apple Bloom

"What? No way I'm singing in front of a crowd. Twilight said to do something we like to do, and I like to be like my big sister,and she's a designer. "Said Sweetie belle

" Fine, then. You can do the costumes and the scenery. " said Scotaloo

" And, Scotaloo, you're great at maneuvers on your scooter,so you should do the choreography. You know all the dance moves." said Apple Bloom as Scotaloo nodded then she gasp change her decision "nah, I rather sing a wicked rock ballad. Why don't you come up with the dance routine, Apple Bloom? " said Scotaloo as she's thinking

"I'm not much of a dancer, but I do like kung fu!that's kind of like dancing!" said Apple Bloom as she dose kung fu good thing they back way from her moves "I don't know girls, I don't think that's what Twilight mean. " Said Ash as Sweetie belle answered "then it's settled! Let's get started. " said Sweetie belle as they're getting started of thier practicing for the talent show as Ash is seeing things aren't working out as Apple Bloom was trying to dance but fell while Scotaloo was Practicing her song " Apple Bloom, what are you doing? "Said Scotaloo as she's helping her up "(groans) I feel I have four left feet I can't even spin right. " said Apple Bloom as Scotaloo said "Don't be silly. You just got to keep your head forward until the very last minute like this." said Scotaloo as she spins then stops " see easy peezy. you just got to practice a bunch that's all." said Scotaloo

"Wow! That does look easy! Thanks! Okay let's try this again. " said AppleBloom as she spins then crashes

"I'm okay. " said Apple Bloom

"Keep practicing! " said Scotaloo as she went back to her music as Ash sees things ain't going well with her as well

"Uh, I'll never come up with anything! Never, never, never." said Scotaloo as she bangs her head at the piano as Ash walks to her "Whoa! calm down Scotaloo. You just need to think for your music. " said Ash as Scotaloo looks at him " you think you can help me out. " said Scotaloo as Ash nodded then he walks to the tree and picks up the leaf "now once I play my song from the leaf you think of the song. " said Ash as she nodded as Ash plays his song from the leaf then she listens and starts making her song as Sweetie belle went after the fabric "stupid fabric. hey guys, I heard that beautiful song Ash. Helping Scotaloo out. " said Sweetie belle as Ash nodded "That's right now Scotaloo got her lyrics for her song now. " said Ash as Scotaloo nodded

"That's right thanks Ash" said Scotaloo as Sweetie belle was singing from the lyrics and the song from Ash's Grasswhistle as the song is done Ash sees Sweetie belle has a problem as will the costumes she made have five sleeves then Apple Bloom was dizzy then collapsed "how's your spinning coming along? "Said Ash "I think I got to just stick to punches and kicks." said Apple Bloom as Ash sees things weren't going well at all. "I'll never be a designer like my sister, Rarity. " said Sweetie belle

" Hey, it's no big deal."said Apple Bloom

" She's right Sweetie belle, why not try the dress form?"said Ash points at the dress form

"That's right it'll help you with your patterns and help put all the pieces In right places. " said Apple Bloom

" Oh. Is that what that's for?"said Sweetie belle

" Yup! " said Ash and Apple Bloom as they're busy with Ash helping them out Applejack was walking by to see how they're doing "the talent show ' s just around the corner. I wonder how Ash and the fillies are doing? "Said Applejack as she's looking at the window and sees them practicing more thanks to Ash who was helping them " you three did great. I bet you do good at the talent show tomorrow. " said Ash as they nodded and hugged him " and is all thanks to you Ash. " said Apple Bloom " Yeah if it wasn't for you, we would have troubles. " said Scotaloo " And you're the best fillysitter we ever had. " said Sweetie belle as Applejack was smiling and left

"Oh my gosh, the way Ash helped them out was the nicest thing he's ever done." said Applejack as she sees them coming out as Ash sees the time "jumping politoads! You girls have to get ready right now. " said Ash as they nodded as they're at the school just in time for the talent show as Ash was looking around with pikachu " it's great to see the talent show Ash. " Said pikachu " That's right buddy, for what I'm seeing this is awesome! " said Ash as they see Snips and snaps performing magic tricks "and on the count of three, this rabbit will disappear and something tasty will reappear in its place! " said snips as snails place the hat then they start counting to three as they move the hat but they see snails ate the carrots as everypony laughed as snips chases snails

"Uh, how about a round of applause for the S&S magic act? And now for our next act,we have sunny days and peachy pie receiving thier favorite poems on roller skates!" As the cutie mark crusaders see them coming on thier roller skates "break a leg. " said Sweetie belle as AppleBloom looked at her " Sweetie belle what a thing to say!"said Apple Bloom " it's considered bad luck to say "good luck " so you can say break the leg instead." said Sweetie belle as Ash washere just in time to see them "you girls are ready. " said Ash as tthey nodded then Twilight appeared

" My little ponies what you're doing? " said Twilight

" Nervous. " said the cutie mark crusaders

" Don't worry. You're gonna be amazing. Remember just stick to know what you do best. I cant wait to hear you sing sweetie Belle. " said Twilight

" What does everypony always think I'm gonna sing?"said Sweetie belle

" Actually Twilight sparkle, I'm the main singer tonight. "said Scotaloo

" Oh?" Said Twilight

" And I'm the main dancer. " said Apple Bloom

" Oh?" Said Twilight

" And I'm in charge of costumes and sets of props. " said Sweetie belle

" Really, girls? Are you sure?" Said Twilight

" Cutie mark crusaders you're up next. " as they're heading on stage as Ash sees how the as they're singing the song that is from the Ash's song as everypony hear the song that they're loving the song they're singing and Sweetie belle was singing good because they hear Ash playing his his Grasswhistle to help them out as they continue singing as it end everypony cheered them as they're walking out the stage as Sweetie belle walked to Ash "Thanks Ash! for helping us. " Said Sweetie belle " Hey, I'm a fillysitter I always help. " Said Ash

" But we don't have our cutie marks! " said AppleBloom

" It's okay, but you girls have fun you know. " said Ash as they knew he's right on that then they thinked of how they're getting thier cutie marks

"you know Ash I have a idea of getting the cutie marks! " said Sweetie belle

" And what's that? "said Ash

" Comedy!" said the cutie mark crusaders as Ash dropped in anime style "I give up. oh well at least they have fun. " said Ash as Twilight's walking to him " Hey Ash, how did you made Sweetie belle to sing at the talent show. What did you told her. " said Twilight as Ash smiled " Well let's say I told her "Don't give up till it's over! " said Ash as they're walking

now that's it of the chapter 16 now I'm still going to continue with the story and do the Discord story as a saprate story and I'll add where Discord nicknamed Ash "Sonning jim" which he hates that name

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