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Hater in Equestria

by MrLongSurname

Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Discovery and Fighting

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Chapter 5

WARNING, HUGE PLOT TWIST AHEAD, READ AT YOUR OWN RISK

Mumbo Wood: Ethan Stone is a play of one of my close friends's name. He may or may not be in the story later.

THAT NIGHT

I floated around in a white void that was my dream realm. A voice rang out, "help us, human, we are weak, Celestia almost killed us all, she committed genocide. Please, we must have revenge, you can help us or the ponies, be safe and tell no one of this conversation, especially not your pony friends,"

"They're not my friends, how can I trust you if I don't know who you are?" I questioned.

"My name is Queen Chrysalis, I am queen of the changelings. Please help us, human, you are our only hope," said the voice.

"Okay, I'll help get revenge on Celestia with you," I said.

"Thank you, human, I must leave now, I'm too weak to hold this connection anymore," and with that, I woke up.

THE NEXT MORNING

I went downstairs to see Twilight giving me a desperate look. "What do you want?" I sighed.

"George, seeing as you're from another dimension and all, can I please run some tests on you?" She asked, giving me puppy dog eyes. I groaned, "fine, but only if you promise not to take any urine samples,"

"Yes!" She squealed and dragged me downstairs into the basement where she had set up some kind of secret lab with all kinds of nerdy equipment that I can't describe. "Okay, first I'm going to scan you to see if you have any magic in you at all," she said then fired off a bolt from her horn at me. "WHAT THE HELL, TWILIGHT, NOT COOL!" I yelled as the bolt hit my chest. She sighed, "I guess you don't have any magic in you at all, not even the magic of friendship," she sighed unhappily and I got pissed, "oh for God's sake, friendship isn't bloody magic, all you need to do is go out and talk to someone and, pow, you've made a friend, no magic involved!" I ranted and Twilight glared at me, "get out," she said, a tear rolling down her cheek, "just leave, you're not welcome here, find someplace else to stay" she demanded and I only said one thing which I never thought I'd ever say to a pony, ever. "I'm sorry, Twilight, I really am, I guess I'll just go to that forest and build a little shack there until your princess can get me out of here, at least I'll be able to hunt for meat there," I sighed, ashamed of what I said. I then ran out the door and into the forest.

10 MINUTES LATER

I was dragging my feet through the brambles, deep in thought when I heard a voice in the distance, "Zecora, have you seen a tall creature that walked on its two front legs in this forest anywhere?" Asked a voice that I thought was Twilights. Maybe after all she accepted my apology. "No creature has been seen by my eyes, but if it had, I'm sure it would have been a surprise," said Zecora.

"Okay, thanks for your help anyway," Twilight said. I ran towards her voice, "Twilight, wait!" I yelled, trying to catch up with her, "listen Twilight, I'm sorry, sorry for everything I've done in this world, please accept my apology," I said then whispered, "please…"

"Okay, fine. But I'm still not very happy with you," she said and I sighed in relief. At least now I didn't have to live an a makeshift hut in the Everfree. We walked to a cottage on the edge of the forest. Twilight knocked on the door. The door opened to reveal a pissed off tiny bunny, barely bigger then my ankle. I towered over it and it dashed towards a yellow Pegasus with a pink mane. It tapped the Pegasus until it saw me. The Pegasus screamed and dashed into her house. "Fluttershy, remember George, the one who was teleported here by Princess Celestia so she could make him belie… I mean teleported here by accident –" I cut her off, "wawawait, what were you going to say, make me believe in what?" I asked raising my voice. Twilight grimaced then said, "well I suppose I should tell you the truth, Celestia found a way to look into another dimension and saw yours, a war filled, hating world. She saw you in bed, laughing to another one of your kind about bronies and how they were spastics. She got upset over your hatred and pulled you through a portal into our world so she could try to get you to believe in the magic of friendship, which, obviously hasn't worked due to your previous remark about it. She was planning to pull your friend Ethan in too. She might already have, I don't know," blood boiled in my ears, that damn Celestia, pulling me away from my life to get me to believe in her stupid magic. I ran, heading for the train station. I had to stop Celestia from pulling in Ethan. I used up all my money to get a ticket. I got on the train and planned out what I should do and came up with a plan.

I stormed my way past all the stupid guards, they had worse accuracy then Tusken Raiders from Star Wars. I barged through the doors into Celestia's room to see her in front of a glowing oval, a portal! I yelled a battle cry and tackled her, rugby style. She cried out and threw me off her via magic. I cursed as I hit the floor, I heard a snap in my arm and got to my feet. I saw a body behind Celestia, it was Ethan's. I cried out in despair. Celestia tried to reason, "you don't understand-" I cut her off, "no, I do, Twilight told me everything," Then Ethan started to wake. I ran to him. "Whuh? Huh, am I dead?" Then he said, "George! But you're missing, you disappeared during our after our last Skype call, are we dead?" He repeated. I sighed, "no, we're in our worst nightmare, the my little pony universe," he fainted, synchronised with me.

Bloody Celestia, I was ready to find the changelings and attack her with Ethan, she had the nerve to kidnap Ethan and I and attack me. I was lying in a hospital bed, Ethan in one next to me. Celestia was in the room, she said, "George, I'm going to give you one last chance to live amongst the pony folk, Twilight has convinced me to, as for you, Ethan, you may go with George, you will both be living with Twilight, and please, try to make friends," Ethan snorted, "not likely," but I shushed him, "Ethan, let's just do what she wants, you don't want to fight her. But anyway, what would you do if I disobeyed you?" I asked her, "find you and magically turn you into a pony," she grinned and I grumbled.

2 DAYS LATER

George woke up, he saw Ethan still asleep next to him and sighed, Ethan had explained what happened after he 'disappeared'; his family despaired but got over it after a month, after all, no one in his family really cared about him. George only had one real pony friend, Twilight. She was the only one who was actually nice to him, she listened to him and took in his opinions, Ethan was warming to her too.

THAT NIGHT

"Hey George, you wanna go on a walk, I need to clear my head and the night air is tempting," asked Ethan and I replied, "yeah sure, I'll just go tell Twi, you know how she can be sometimes," Ethan smirked.

After telling Twilight, I jogged to Ethan, "okay, let's go," I said and we strolled down the path in the fresh night air. Suddenly a green light flashed and the last thing I remembered was a black, insect like pony standing over me.

A/N

So sorry for not updating, I'm not dead but yeah, I hoped you liked the plot twist, you may or may not, please don't hate in the reviews. But yeah, please review, give me advice, tell me if you like it.

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