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The Amusement Park

by MyLittlePonyTales

Chapter 8: Chapter 8-The Drop Zone

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Chapter 8 is finished! So please enjoy and review if you like! I tried my best to put some humor into it so please ENJOY! :3


Chapter 8

Fluttershy reluctantly followed Rainbow Dash, Applejack, and a pissed Rarity as they pulled her along. But no one was pulling Fluttershy along because they'd figured she'd just follow them… Which… They were right.

She was trembling so badly, but she just kept on following anyways.

Once they made it to the very short line, Fluttershy was already regretting her decision to come. "Now this here thing will pull you way up high in the sky, and drop you fast than you can say Yeeehaww!" Applejack explained enthusiastically, yet Fluttershy could see fear in her eyes.

Oh my… Even Applejack is nervous… So… I'M GONNA BE 30 TIMES AS NERVOUS!

"Um?... Can I go to the bathroom?" Fluttershy asked, thinking of some stupid excuse to get outta here.

"What!? No way Fluttershy! Don't you wanna it in with the cool ponies?" Rainbow Dash asked, knowing that Fluttershy had always looked up to her. "Um… Sure… But… I just really don't wanna do this…" She answered, slapping a hoof right over her mouth as soon as she said it. "Ha! So you don't need to go to the bathroom… You just don't wanna come on the really cool and awesome ride!" Rainbow Dash explained, while Applejack instantly stepped up. "Rainbow? Leave her alone. She can come if she wants to…"

"Fine!" Rainbow spat in defeat. "But I think it's be pretty cool if you came!..."

Fluttershy thought for a minute, wanting to show them how brave she was. "Um… I'll do it."

"WHAT!?" Everyone asked all at once, even Rarity turned around in shock. "Why deary! Are you sure you want to put your hair through the dangers that await it!?" Fluttershy shook her head. "I'm fine with my mane Rarity… It's just… I really wanna go just for my own sake."

Rarity only turned away in disgust!
"Great job Fluttershy! I knew you could do it!" Applejack encouraged, causing Fluttershy to give a weak smile. But at least she loved the fact that it wasn't an actual roller coaster, it was just a dropping tower… Yeah…

As soon as they got to the front of the line, the two co-working ponies stared at each other and chucled slightly before turning towards Rarity. "Ma'am! Purchased on the sole property of Ponywinds or anywhere else, cannot be taken on this ride." Rarity gasped in disbelief. "Well what do you expect me to do!? Put my own bags down to ride your dumb ride!?"

"Rarity calm down!" Rainbow Dash pleaded.

"I will not!" The mare screeched.

Applejack quickly took her hat off and began whistling like nothing happened….

But Fluttershy saw… She was seeing everything.

Wow! This is MUCH better than going around shop to shop buying everything! I love being with my friends!
It was so good, that it actually made Fluttershy shed a tear at the dramatic scenery. "Ma'am! Please! Just set you bags over new the Item Composer." "The ITEM COMPOSER!?" Rarity shrieked. "WHAT IND OF HIDIEOUS NAME IS THAT!?"

Everyone sighed at Rarity's stupid, foul behavior. Until finally the workers took Rarity's bags for themselves and calmly sat them down at the 'Item Composer' while smirking ever so slightly.

"Alright. You can go in."

Applejack was the first inside, while everyone else followed more slowly.

As they all took their seats, Fluttershy watched as Applejack proudly placed her beloved hat back on her head.

"Um… Weren't you suppose to place that in the Item Compose isle?" Fluttershy asked.

"Huh? W-what? Sorry, can't hear you over all of the excitement!" Applejack replied, although… It was totally silent.

Oh well…

As they all buckled their seat belts tightly, they all waited for the trigger to be pulled.

"Ready, Set…" The maintenance called, causing everyone to panic… Except Rainbow Dash, who was on the edge of her seat for the ride to begin.

"Lift Off!" The pony called, and pulled the yellow trigger, causing a jolt to shake the seats and… Every so slowly be raised up.

"Whoa!" Fluttershy breathed. "This is amazing! Look out high up we're going!" "Yeah? Well it's not as high as the Intimidator! And me and AJ are gonna ride on it… TONIGHT! Right AJ?" Rainbow Dash asked.

"Uh… Right." The orange earth pony nodded, as they finally came to an abrupt halt at the VERY TIP TOP.

Everyone stood silent for a minute, looking out over all of Ponyville from where they sat. "Whoa…" Applejack gasped.

"Oh my!" Rarity started. After another pause, the white unicorn continued. "Oh look! You can see my house from-"

Suddenly there was a jolt as everyone held their breath while the seats fell from the very tour. "HEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRREEEEEEE!" Rarity finished, balling like a little filly, while her purple mane flew everywhere!

The fall literally flipped over Fluttershy's stomach as they fell, down, down, down, and even downer at around 60 mph!

"WHHAAAAAAAAA!" They all screamed until it came to a stop at the very bottom. "Whoa! I think my heart just stopped!" Applejack exclaimed in excitement, yet she was obviously very terrified, while Rarity cut in. "Yeah!? Well I KNOW mine did!" The white unicorn started balling again, while Rainbow Dash only yawned. "That was lame! I've gone to higher speeds while falling out of the sky, when I'm doing my sonic Rainbooms!" Everyone rolled their eyes… Well Applejack at least did.

As the ride finally touched the earth, Fluttershy instantly began kissing the ground. "Oh! Sweet ground! Sweet sweet ground!..." Everyone just stared quite puzzled, and slowly climbed out of their seats. "Well! You can bet I ain't ever going on a roller coaster again!" Rarity argued. "Ha! That wasn't no roller coaster! A roller coaster as a track, with carts, and loopty-loops and-!" Applejack just shoved a hoof over her mouth. "What she means sugarcube is… That was no roller coaster. It was just another attraction."

"Oh… Well who cares!?"

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