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The Amusement Park

by MyLittlePonyTales

Chapter 4: Chapter 4-The NightHawk

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Hi everypony! I've finally finished chapter 4 so please enjoy and have fun with all the ponies at PonyWinds! Or… in our world, we call it Carowinds :P

PLEASE ALSO REVIEW! :3


Chapter 4

Applejack held open a map which read all over Ponywinds. "So? Which ride is it gonna be?" She asked.

"Hmm… It's gotta be something cool for me of course… Since I'm always 20% cooler than any pony else!" Rainbow Dash declared. Applejack just rolled her eyes but said nothing. "Hmm… Let's see… I choose…" Suddenly, right before Rainbow could pick there was a HUGE amount of screaming coming from one of the rides right above their head.

Oh no… Thought Applejack silently, as they watched as ponies were actually lying down and going backwards at the same time ALL ON ONE RIDE! "WHOA…!" Rainbow Dash breathed in awe, flying up towards the ride. "LET'S RIGHT THAT ONE!"

Applejack gulped. "Uh… What's it called?"

"Hmm…" Rainbow instantly swiped the map right out of AJ's hooves, and read aloud. "The… NightHawk! Oh wow! This is gonna be so cool! We're actually gonna be lying down and going backwards! You know how fun that'd be!?"

"Yeah… Fun." Applejack agreed uneasily, glancing up as another batch of screaming ponies flipped over and over and over while lying down AND going backwards. "WHOA! THEY EVEN FLIP! Come on AJ! Move that old farming rump of yours and let's get in line!" Rainbow Dash screeched.

"O-Ok…" Trotting towards the line entrance, Rainbow Dash instantly moaned. "AWW! Just look at this line! It's gotta have more than a million ponies standing in line!" Applejack suddenly knew, Rainbow was right for once. The line went up, down, went to the right, lead, spiraled, then went all the way up huge stairs. It was unbelievable! "Maybe we should come back later…" Applejack advised, although she sought it as a way to get out of riding this horrified ride! "No way AJ! If I can't ride the Intimidator, then I'm at least riding this! The NightHawk!" Applejack and Rainbow Dash both watched as another batch of ponies were slowly making their way up to the first drop. But what kept on scaring Applejack was the fact that they were lying down… And going backwards! It'd seemed even scarier than the Intimidator… Yet she knew she couldn't judge since she had never been on the Intimidator OR the NightHawk yet.

Fist pumping the sky, Rainbow Dash kept going on and on about the NightHawk. "I can tell right now that this is gonna be one of the coolest rides EVER! Wouldn't you say so too AJ?"

Applejack only slightly nodded, as another batch of screaming ponies began to fall to what she thought… Their own death! As they both watched mesmerized as the cart flipped, and rolled and tumbled trough the air, it then came down right at them! "WOW!" Rainbow screeched, yet Applejack slightly jumped as it roared past. "Did you see that!? They were probably going faster than 900 miles per hour!" Rainbow gloated. "Yeah, some fun…" AJ agreed…

The wait was the WORST! Every time they moved up was in about 20 whole minutes, and it was only about an INCH!

Applejack slowly watched as the sun went from the bottom, shooting up towards the sky, until it was finally almost at its highest peak. "How long have we been standin here!?" "I don't know?" Rainbow shrugged. "But who cares! It'll be SOOOO worth the wait!" "Next!" Applejack could just make out the announcer's voice ringing throughout the speaker. Great… How am I ever gonna tell Rainbow… I seriously don't wanna do this….

It was JUST then when Rainbow started speaking. "Ya know AJ? I thought I had made the worst decision in picking you to be my partner… Yet now I realize you're probably one of the ONLY ponies who would have come this far with me! I mean, Fluttershy wouldn't have budged, and Twilight? Nah… Rarity's too worried about her stupid hair and Twilight would be just as scared as Fluttershy possibly. She'd probably wanna ride a baby ride! But… Thanks AJ." Applejack instantly turned red from Rainbow's saying. It made her feel much better on her decision with Rainbow AND the ride of course… Yet it also made her feel horrible that she honestly didn't wanna do this. In fact, if Rainbow wouldn't have been gloating so much on how she could always take on every single ride… She probably wouldn't have done ANYTHING!

"Uh… Thanks partner. That was some mighty fine words you said." "No problem! You're becoming a cool pony! And cool ponies always hang out with me!" Rainbow Dash continued.

Applejack slightly blushed but turned away so she wouldn't see. This is great… JUST GREAT! Applejack knew truthfully that this wasn't what she wanted at all!

"NEXT!" The announcers voice was growing louder, AND louder. And every time they moved up about an inch… Applejack thought she felt her heart beat much more faster than last time until… Until!... They got to the stairs. "We're NEARLY there! Just up these lame steps and then! We'll be lying down and relaxing!" Rainbow Dash declared. "Yeah… Can't wait!" Applejack joked. Literally.


As about 5 more carts left the station… They were finally next. "How many?" The co-working pony asked. "Two please!" Rainbow Dash blurted aloud, nearly pushing the man over as he pointed towards the 2nd row. "Oh my gosh this is GONNA BE GREAT!" "Yeah…." Applejack agreed for about the 20th time.

As the next cart came into the station, Rainbow Dash leapt into the seat. "Come on slow poke!" "O-o-o-o-ok!"

Sliding into the seat next to her friend, she watched as another black pony squeezed in beside her, and another pony on the other side of Rainbow. "Wait so… Do you want the inside or the outside seat. I don't really care." Rainbow Dash asked.

"Uh… I think I'm fine where I am…" Which is the inside….

"OK!" Rainbow agreed.

"Please keep your tail, mane, and hooves in the cart at all time, thank you, and have fun!" The announcer declared.

Suddenly, Applejack felt like her heart literally stopped as the seats were now slowly tipping backwards. "W-what's goin on!?" "Relax! This is the fun part! We're just lying down!" Rainbow assured her.

"Oh… R-right."

As the seats finally halted and were now officially layed back, Applejack and Rainbow were now awaiting the very own ride that stood before them. Once the cart started rolling down the tracks… GOIN G BACKWARDS!... Applejack felt her teeth begin to chatter. "Uh… Wow, we're really going high up!" She commented as the cart made its way up the enormous hill. "Yeah? So what!? It's gonna be epic!"

Applejack couldn't stand to listen as the other ponies screamed in horror.

"I can't do this!"

"Let me off of this thing!"

"We're gonna die!"

"Uh… Rainbow?" Applejack asked hesitantly. "Yeah AJ?" "I've gotta tell ya something… LIKE RIGHT NOW!"

Suddenly the cart stopped at the very top of the hill, slowly inching its way down as the rest of the carts got to the top. "What is it for crying out loud!? I'm about to have one of the best times in my life!" Rainbow cheered.

"Well uh… I… Don't think I can do this…" Applejack blurted aloud.

"Aww that's nothing I thought you were gonna say something like-… WAIT WHAT!?"

"Uh… Yeah. This ride is freakin me out… So if I could just get off I'll be on my way…" "No way AJ! You can't get off now! We're officially on the ride!" Rainbow exclaimed, now growing furious. "I thought you were cool!"

"I am cool! I just didn't know how to…"

It was JUST then when the cart shot off from the hill, and soared downwards.

"WWWWAAAAAAAAHHHHH!" Screams tore through the air, but Applejack's was the loudest.

The cart then flipped over, and soared over a HUGE pond, then shot straight back into the air, and flipped once more while falling straight back down.

"WHAAAAHAHAHHAHH!"

The wind rushed through Applejack's mane, tail and her entire body, as she squinted to look over at Rainbow's reaction. Surprisingly, the mare's eyes were huge as she let out a small shriek. "WHOA-OHOHOH!"

The cart turned, flipped and loopty-looped all around the park. Even Applejack's hat blew off from the wind. "NO-NOT MY HAAAT!"

She watched as the hat tumbled and blew through the sky before blowing out of sight. Tears stung her eyes, and even Rainbow's eyes as they just kept on twirling and swaying side to side. Applejack couldn't hardly breathe, in fact she thought she was gonna throw up right then and there!
Until finally… They came to a complete stop!

Everyone in the cart was gasping, even Rainbow again.

"Please exit throughout the main gates, and we hope you continue to enjoy your stay here… At Ponywinds." The announcer called.

As the seats tilted back up, Applejack leaped off the ride, as well as Rainbow. "Did you see me!?" She boasted, yet the Pegasus's eyes were wild in a slight hint of fear. "Let's go check our pictures out!"

And with that, the cyan pony took off down the ramp, following by a VERY frightened and dizzy Applejack.

As soon as she came to the monitors, Rainbow Dash was on the floor laughing. "Look at your face AJ!"

Peering at the monitor Applejack saw her eyes s round as the full moon while her whole mouth was opened screaming in terror.

"You look SO stupid!" Rainbow Dash continued. "Very funny!" Applejack retorted, when she suddenly saw the clock on the monitor which read 12:45.

"Oh no we're late! Come on RAINBOW!"

SMALL NOTE:

If you're wondering where I got the experience is bc I was exactly like Applejack :/

And my sister was exactly like Rainbow Dash when we rode the NightHawk… So.. Yeah :3

Please REVIEW If you like!

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