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The Amusement Park

by MyLittlePonyTales

Chapter 10: Chapter 10-The Intimidator

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OK so here's chapter 10! Hope you've all enjoyed the story so far! :D This is one of the greatest finales I have to offer!

So please REVIEW if you like it! :D :D :D!


Chapter 10

Applejack stood waiting in line with Rainbow Dash. "This is gonna be one awesome ride! Don't you think AJ?" Applejack nodded, but couldn't say anything from the knot in her throat. "So uh… I think it was really nice of you to come back with me. I mean, even if you had said no, I'd still probably come back." Rainbow Dash explained rather suddenly.

Applejack just turned away and thought about how scary the ride would be.

It's just a small ride… I mean! If I did the NightHawk I can surely do this!

As the line grew shorter and shorter each time, Applejack felt like she was gonna pass out like Rarity.

The Intimidator was such a scary ride, and she definitely didn't know how to face it.

Oh come on Rainbow! Everyone's gotta be scared of some kind of ride!

"Hey Rainbow!" Applejack asked.

"Yeah?"

"So… You're not even a little scared of this here ride?"

"Nope!" Rainbow Dash replied. "It's just a small ride! And besides! I've gone to higher speeds when doing a sonic Rainboom!"

Applejack knew she was being honest with herself, but at the same time she thought Rainbow Dash was just gloating again. "Well… It's not scary to me ONE bit!" "There ya go!" Rainbow encouraged. "If ya keep that up, you'll soon be like me! But! You've got a long way to go though…"

Applejack glared at her, but couldn't help turn red from the comment.

'You've got a long way to go'!... WHAT AN IDIOT!

"Next!" The co-working pony called. Rainbow Dash gasped. "Do you know what this means!?"

Applejack nodded.

"It means we're at the front of the line! And we're next!" Rainbow Dash shrieked. "AWW YEAH! This is gonna be just as cool as the NightHawk! Only better!"

"Uh… How can it be better?" Applejack asked, but before Rainbow could answer, the co-worker called. "NEXT!"

"WE'RE HERE!" Rainbow exclaimed.

Applejack stared in utter horror as the front row was totally opened… Until two ponies leaped into it and claimed it.

"WHAT!?" Rainbow Dash screeched. "That's TOTALLY not fair!"

"Well uh… How bout the 2nd row then?" Applejack asked, trying not to suggest that they could possibly wait for the next cart.

Rainbow simply shrugged. "Yeah… I guess you're right."

Climbing into the cart, they waited to put their seat belts on… Yet there were none!

Applejack started freaking out! "Huh!? Where's the seat belts!?

"Look! I think we just pull this thing on us!" Rainbow exclaimed, reaching forward and pulling a large stick-like seat belt on her… Yet it hardly reached her. "Aww yeah! This thing hardly has any seat belts either! This thing is SO UN-SAFE!"

Applejack nearly wanted to scream. "Wait a minute… NO SEAT BELTS! JUST A STICK THAT HARDLY PROTECTS YOU!?"

"Yup! That's right!"

Before Applejack had the time to do anything, the announcer came on.

"Please keep your tail, mane, and hooves inside the cart at all times, thank you, and have fun!"

The orange earth pony's eyes grew SO wide, you could hardly see the white that outlined them as the cart jolted forward.

Instantly the cart started moving up the hugest hill EVER! It was like a mountain or something!
"Oh nelly… This can't be happening!"

"Relax AJ! Nothing's gonna happen!... Well, nothing that's scary at least."

As they climbed, climbed and climbed they both watched as the other cart pulled in with screaming and crying filly's AND adult ponies.

"Wow… They must be one big flock of chickens!" Rainbow mocked, as the cart kept on climbing into the night sky.

"Uh… Y-yeah…."

Suddenly Applejack had no more courage as the front of the cart was only about 10 feet away from the top.

"OK that's it! I can't do this!"

"Ha! You ain't fooling me! You're just trying to get us in the mood again… Well… It's actually kind of working because you look ridiculous right now!" Rainbow Dash commented, while chuckling madly.

"This ain't no stupid jock DASH!... I… I seriously don't wanna do this."

"Pssh! I know you. It's just another lie of yours." Rainbow continued, as she started to get slightly annoyed.

As the cart was now just inches away, Applejack knew she had to get Rainbow to believe her for ONCE!

"Listen! It is a big deal! And you better listen to me, or I'll go right over to Soarin's house right after this and tell him you have a crush on him!"
Rainbow Dash instantly jerked her head around. "HUH!? You wouldn't AJ!"

"Oh yeas I would now listen here! I lied ok? I-…Well I can't do this! I've been scared from the very start about riding this thing with you AND HERE WE ARE NEARLY AT THE TOP AND I'M ABOUT TO HAVE A HEART ATTACK!" Applejack screeched. Every single pony just stared in fear at her saying… And yes, even Rainbow Dash.

"Huh? So… You really don't like roller coasters?"

"Of course not! I live on a farm! Where there's dirt, and apples and trees! Not some dumb loopty-loop or 100 mile an hour drop!... So ya see?" Applejack finished. "I really am scared…"

Rainbow Dash sat there for a second as the very front of the cart finally mounted the tip top.

"O-o-oh…. Well…"

"Well what!?" Applejack urged. "We're about to ride THE FREAKIN INTIMIDATOR!"

There was a long pause from Rainbow Dash until she hung her head. "Ok… I confess too…"

Applejack felt fear gripping her… And yet… Something replaced that fear. Total shock.

"You what?..."

"Yeah that's right!... I'm scared too alright!? I've been scared!... In fact I was maybe even a little freaked out on the NightHawk…." Rainbow Dash admitted, while her ears went flat against her head.

Applejack couldn't BELIEVE IT!

Rainbow Dash was scared of roller coasters? Even after she did sonic rainbooms!?

"So ya see?... You're not alone AJ… I'm scared too, and so…. And so…. I guess we're in this together…"

Rainbow Dash then looks up at Applejack and then straight at the horrifying road ahead of them, when suddenly it's all over. The cart tips and everything practically stops for both of them, as they plummet down… Down…. Down… AND DOWN.

"WWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"

Every pony in that whole dang cart begins screaming at the very tip top of their lungs… But!... Not AS loud as Rainbow Dash and Applejack…

The cart plummeted STRAIGHT down the hugest hill EVER!

Then another large hill, and then another and another, until it flipped over while turning and went down ANOTHER hill. The cart then rounds another VERY large hill and plummets straight down that one too, then swerves under some more tracks at its highest speed!

Wind soars and smacks Applejack in the face, along with Rainbow Dash as the ride continues to go on and on! Applejack also realized that her own very hat flew off once again! Great!...


~MEANWHILE~

Pinkie Pie bounced up and down, waiting for her two friends to get off the ride when suddenly out of nowhere a hat lands smack down right on top of her head!... "Ooo! Where did this bad boy come from?" Pinkie squeals, smirking as she gazed up at the hat. Everyone ignored her, and continued waiting… While Pinkie just kept on smiling…


From the wind, and the speed they were going, tears started forming in both the mare's eyes so that they couldn't even see anything! Until!… It stops…. And then plummets down another very unexpected hill until it FINALLY stops for good.

Both ponies gasped for breath as they look at each other for a VERY long moment….

"We… We did it!" Rainbow cheered.

"Yeah!" Applejack agreed. Waiting there for just a few more minutes, they then finally begin climbing out of the cart.

"Please exit throughout the main gates, and we hope you continue to enjoy your stay here… At Ponywinds." The announcer called one last time as they both took off down the ramps, partly laughing.

As they entered to the main center of the park and spotted Twilight, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, and a mouth-opened Rarity, they then suddenly went silent.

"Oh!... Hi everypony!" Rainbow started awkwardly. "Whatcha doin?"

"WE'RE WAITING ON YOUR OF COURSE!" Twilight explodes, fury yet shock forming in her eyes.

"Oh darling! How was that stupid ride huh?" Rarity suddenly cuts in.

Rainbow Dash scuffed a hoof along the cement under-hoof. "Oh it was… Uh…" "GREAT!" Applejack answered for her.

"There were SO many hills! And then when we started flipping!-It was the best thing ever! I'd TOTALLY wanna ride it again!"

"Wow! That's wonderful!" Fluttershy smiled from in the back, but Twilight just stood there aghast. "Seriously AJ!?" "Seriously." The orange mare replied. "I ain't scared of no roller coaster anymore!"

Rainbow smiled, and gave AJ a quick hug when suddenly…. Pinkie Pie bounces over.

"Hiey everypony! Looky what I found!" The pink pony holds up the hat smiling wildly. "Well… Actually I didn't find it, it found ME! Which is the funniest thing!-Because hats can't find anyone! I mean, it's not like I knew or something!? But it was SO totally awesome! And… Yeeeaaaaahhhh…."

Everyone only stared blankly at Pinkie for minute before heading towards the entrance, except for Applejack. "Give me that!"

Swiping the hat from Pinkie, she then heads off to catch up with the others, leaving Pinkie behind….

"Gosh!" Pinkie Pie exclaimed. "Was it something I said?"

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