ChappyTales

Man, I feel stupid now. This is why I shouldn't read at 3 Am. *walks out door* :

Aww, don't say that, we all make mistakes ^^. Even I shouldn't have scolded like that.

Skyline179

well,at least tails and twi is restored...but LOL EXCELLENT JOB on the shadow and pinkie part

My bony friend fell down on the floor when I made her read this on Skype ^^. Glad you enjoyed the chapter!

Princess Harmony1

OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH! THIS CHAPTER ID AWESSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMEEEEEE!
Loving it!

Thank you so much!

ChaosFire0987

Oh my god... I am not quite sure what to say. So much happening! Twi's alive, Sonic gone Dark and Neon betraying Eggman...okay I could have seen that last one coming. Either way I can take big criticism if you are still interested the story is called The Transfer Students. Anyway can't wait for the next chapter!

Thank you! If I got to be honest, writing this chapter, I had to look back at the previous chapters to get everything to fit together ^^'

sonic3461

Holy shit! This was a chapter filled with many twists. I'm sooooo glad Twilight is alive. Can't wait for the other shippings to come.

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! But, come on now, it IS Twilight we're talking about, of course we need her alive!

Tappancs2012

Wow! What a great chapter, and a nice cliffhanger!
Wait... -notices backpack isn't here- WHERE IS MY BACKPACK!
-gasps at the sight of Veronika holding it-
VERONIKA! DON'T TOUCH ANYTHING ON THE GEOMETRY BACKPACK! DO YOU KNOW WHAT THAT THING CAN DO!?

Um...It can store my books and lunch? ^^'

Christian Wolf27

I really really can't wait to see what will happen next time in this story.

Good!

Aj

PINKIE PIE IS HERE YAY :3

Pinkie is here! Yay! *whispers to fans beside me* Run!

Guest

Its poison jack KNUCKLES RUN FOR IT ! One more thing its okey if you dont make knuckles fall in love with her trust me you wont get hate mail i promise
Its just that i hope knuckles and applejack fall inlove with eachother

*sneaks out to mailbox, opens it, sees no mail, sighs in relief*

CAPRISUN2

First Dark Dash,then PoisonJack(You better run Knuckles) ,AND NOW A POWERFUL DARK SONIC AND DASH?! DOES THIS EVIL HAVE NO USE?! CAN THE GANG SAVE THEIR ASSES?!(mostly knuckles)CAN THEY SAVE THE DARK SONDASH LOVEEERRRRRSSSS(turns into dark CAPRISUN#2) Or they can just die hahahahahahaha! Tell me when he/she rights more dark stories hehehe ahahahahaha! Bye Big Boy

AAAARGH! So much is going on, even I can't remember it all! XD

KingAlpha27

Omg this whole story is soooooo goood pleaz keep going im to hooked to it to stop. and i soo geeked when shadow was put into the mix. great job

Don't worry! Shadow will appear as an actual roll, along with Pinkie Pie. Though, I don't know about if I should ship them or not...?

Guest

Chapter 19

Here.

HyperSonicX

I WANT MMMMOOOOOORRRREEEE

ME TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Guest

ohmygosh i laughed so hard when Tails was like "I killed Amy!" and you were like WHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT XD

XD

thedeath

tails has a diary ? girls have diaries , boys have logs ( not wood )

No, my friend has a diary, and he's a boy. I also told him it was a log at first, but he said "No, no. It's a diary"

willingfun

Plz update plz

Okeeeeeeeeeeeeeey!

SolarMoon123

You know its strong when you yell at your goddess and mentor about love nad freaking out. Btw I forgot to say I luv doors too :3

lovefanfiction: MY DOORS!

*Grabs doors* NO!

Victor Andersen chapter 1 . Aug 20

Not bad. Even very good. Perhaps this one of the top fanfic of crossover between Mobius and Equestria. Interesting storyline and presentation of the material, a departure from both universes. I believe that when you're writing fanfic about crossover (and sometimes regular), it would be enough to refer original source material, rather than follow them in verbatim.

I was very pleased to read the story. When I read, I really was immersed in it, and as if all saw it. But of details are missing. It would be nice to read a story if there were more detailed description. And a little more logic. Tails can be older. At least sixteen. Not if this is a problem, just it would be interesting to see how he'll behave at this age. If interested, you can look at my story ... Oh, sorry ... I'll go to wrong direction. Continuing. Relationships between Tails and Twilight can be more profound in this case. There is a dynamics, there is an intrigue.

And now, I'm going to complain. LOL. Shadow and Pinkie Pie? I'm sorry, but when I see my favorite character from Mobius paired with my least favorite character at all, I skipping those lines. But this is my personal problem. LOL.

Interesting and pleasant to read. I'm waiting for next chapter.

Thank you so much the review! I hope I can meet your expectations in the future!

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Dark Dash and Dark Sonic entered the control room. Neon Sonic turned slightly at them, his red glowing eyes glaring at them.

"You're late" His dark voice spoke through the speaker. Dark Sonic snorted.

"So what? It has only been 10 minutes. It's no big deal," He said. Neon Sonic was about to take a step forward, but was cut off when Dark Dash stepped in between them, bowing at Neon Sonic.

"We are terribly sorry for our delay Master; we are ashamed for our actions, and ask for your forgiveness, though a punishment is acceptable" Neon Sonic's cold metal hand petted Dark Dash's head.

"You're a good servant Dark Dash. I will let this mistake of yours pass...but not his" Dark Sonic slowly narrowed his brows and glared at Neon Sonic. Was his so called 'Master' totally hitting on his partner? If so…

Dark Sonic clenched his fist at the thought. If that pile of gears as much as laid a finger on Dark Dash, he would end up begging for sympathy.

"Now, why I have brought you here, is because of this" Neon clicked a button, and a purple aura ball formed in his hand. In that ball, a blurry vision of a certain group of enemies started to fade in.

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"What do you mean with 'A secret rescue mission'?!" Knuckles literally screamed into the fox' face as his eyes twitched with anger. Tails however, nobly stood his ground, giving a stern, but confident glare, back at the red echidna.

"Exactly that Knuckles. I don't know if you've noticed, but Eggman hasn't been seen anywhere lately. That's never a good sign"

"But a secret rescue mission?! Nobody can make through that! You can't even stay secret in that base"

"I can sure heck try!"

"Guys please, calm down" Twilight gestured with her hands that they should keep it down a notch with a soft voice. "Listen Knuckles, this is the best option we have right now. We are no match compared to an entire base of Eggman's, so we must at least try to be as sneaky as possible"

"And how exactly do you propose we do that?" Knuckles asked, turning to Twilight with a raised eyebrow and a doubtful look.

"Exactly what I said. Being as sneaky as possible" Knuckles groaned and shook his head.

"This is suicide"

"Maybe so, but they're our friends, no, best friends, and we need to save them, whether you like it or not!" Tails sternly said at the doubtful red echidna. Twilight continued for him.

"This is the plan: I, Tails, Knuckles, Rarity, Silver and Rouge will go. We will sneak our way past offensive security, then Tails and I will lock down the system, and hopefully, deactivate the robots. We will then sneak our way through the base down to the prison, and see if we can find any clues for Sonic, Rainbow Dash, and Applejack. Hopefully, we will find them there"

"And what if we don't find them there?" Knuckles asked.

"We will either return back here, or confront Eggman about their disappearance"

"Ok, what time do we roll?" Silver asked, all the way from the back.

"Well, right now it's 10:44, so…" Tails began slowly.

"…We should leave here around 17:00, so we have enough time to prepare for this"

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The purple aura ball slowly faded away from Neon's hand, along with the image and voices of the group of Mobians.

"Do you see why you're here now, Dark Sonic? Or are you still too gullible to see it?" Dark Sonic growled, though Dark Dash seemed surprisingly calm from the insult towards her 'partner'.

"So then, what is our plan, Master?" Dark Dash asked, taking a step forward.

"Our plan, is to foil their plans. As soon as they've locked the system and are hurrying inside, I will take back control over the system. And you two, go and face their team" Dark Sonic snorted through derision, earning a curious looked look from Dark Dash, and another glare form Neon.

"All we have to do is face them? Piece of cake! I thought you were gonna make us do something hard" At these words Neon walked over to Dark Sonic, grabbing him by the neck, pulling him close in a threatening way.

"This is hard for someone like you. Dark Dash can get the work done with ease, but since you're weak and pathetic as a soldier, you should consider this hard" Dark Sonic growled before Neon let go, and turned back to the controls.

"Go now. You're both dismissed" Dark Sonic and Dash walked out of the automatic doors, and into the hallways of the base. While Dark Sonic was acting carefree with closed eyes, and hands behind his head, Dark Dash was glaring daggers at him with crossed arms.

"You know, you should stop disobeying Master so much" Dark Sonic opened his eye a bit.

"Excuse me?"

"You heard me. He is in charge of everything, so we must do what he commands us to do…"

They entered their shared metal room, and closed the door. Dark Sonic walked a bit forward, but Dark Dash wasn't done talking yet.

"…But you're acting too carefree to even take responsibility!"

In a flash, Dark Dash found herself pinned up against the closed door while sitting on the floor. Her eyes widened a bit as she looked at Dark Sonic, giving an evil, but somewhat, alluring smirk.

"L-Let go of me…" She growled angrily at him, though he growled seductively at her plea. Instead of letting her go, he smashed his lips onto hers, making her narrow her eyes while trying to push him off. Dark Sonic opened his eyes, and chuckled amusingly when he saw Dark Dash glaring angrily at him, with a faint blush on her face. He slowly broke the kiss, and smirked at her as she spoke.

"Get off me now…You bastard" He chuckled at her threat and rubbed her cheek.

"Why should I? I know you're enjoying it"

"Why would I enjoy you and your pervy hands on me?"

"Heh, because you like me~"

"Even so, you don't have the right to harass me"

"I have the right to do whatever I wanna~" Dark Dash tried to get out of his grip, but instead it just tightened around her wrists. His smirk widened.

"Trying to get away now? I'm not gonna let you~" That's it. She snapped. Her foot kicked his face and pushed him far away from her.

"You sick bastard," She mumbled angrily to him. Dark Sonic just chuckled as he rubbed his face was kicked.

"Heh, you have a pretty strong leg. But that's gonna stop me" Before he knew it, he was kicked into a wall.

"Keep that pervy attitude away from me unless you want me to incinerate you right now. I'm not afraid to y'know!" And with that, she left their room, and into the metal hallways.

That's what you get for being a perv Sonic -_-

Lovefanfiction: I want my doors back! _

What? No! These are MY DOORS! MINE ONLY!

Lovefanfiction: NOOOO! Not the doors! T~T

If I can keep them I'll give you a treat ^_^

Lovefanfiction: Hmm…Can it be a cookie?

Yeeees

Lovefanfiction: Aaaaand, can it be shaped as a door?

Yeeees

Lovefanfiction: Aaaaand, can it be as big as a door?

Yeeees -_-

Lovefanfiction: Aaaaand, can it taste like door?

Umm….Yes? Which flavor?

Lovefanfiction: Oak Wood! ^_^

Okaaaaaaay, in the meantime, let's read the rest of the story!

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"'I never meant to harm you two. I didn't know what I was doing. I'm sorry…'" Knuckles stopped his tracks.

"No, that might sound too apologetic from me" He pointed a flat hand into the air as if he was pointing at someone with the other one clenched and resting on the side.

"'I APOLIGIZE, AND YOU SHOULD BE THANKFUL I DO!" Knuckles pinched his chin as he sweatdropped.

"That might be a little too harsh even for me. Geez, why do apologies have to be so complicated?!" Knuckles groaned and hit his forehead in frustration.

"Come on Knuckles, think, think, think! You have thought before! So why are you having a hard time thinking?! AARGH! Reality is so difficult!" He planted his face into a wall and started banging his head into it.

'Think, think, think, think!'

He had Tails to apologize to! He had Twilight to apologize to! He had to apologize to…Applejack.

But…She was not here…

Because, she was…

Gone…

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"Tch. What's wrong with that perv?" Dark Dash grumbled to herself as she kicked her feet against the metal floor of the hallways. Her fists were clenched as she made a face of disgust, recalling the events form earlier. She groaned in frustration, kicking the wall each time she a one-word sentence.

"Stupid! Stupid! Stupid! Stupid! Stupid! You! You! You!" She kicked once more, until she felt something grab her wrist.

"Your wrath is impressive" Her eyes widened a bit, as her head slightly turned, to look at whoever was holding her back.

"M-Master?" She asked, surprised to find her master here, telling her how impressive something was about her.

"Having anger that is big but can get under control without getting less angry…That is pretty impressive" Dark Dash didn't noticed how Neon Sonic snaked his metallic arms around her waist.

"I-I guess so. Thank you for your consideration, Master" Dark Dash saw Neon Sonic's body shift, and he turned into what the real Sonic looked like, the form that had seduced her enough to lose her guard and turn evil. Well, she's glad she did. He grabbed her chin and made her look him straight in the laser red eyes.

"Let me take a good guess; Dark Sonic is being a carefree little kid" Neon Sonic's voice had turned into the real Sonic's voice, leaving no trail whatsoever of any robotic traits. Dark Dash snarled at the mention of the pervy hedgehog.

"Only…A lot" Neon Sonic chuckled, letting his arms around her fall.

"Come, there's something I want to show you" She looked at the robotic counterpart of her partner, and followed him as he started to walk away. He lead her through the hallways, into the control room, where he pressed a button on the control panel. Dark Dash looked at the huge screen in front of her, and saw all the pictures recording Dr. Eggman's rule over Mobius for almost 4 years. Well, it wasn't exactly his rule anymore. It was Master's.

"What is it exactly you want to show me, Master?" Dark Dash asked the robot that looked like the lame version of her partner. He grinned evilly, and pointed at the last picture.

"See that?" Dark Dash looked at the picture and nodded. It was a picture of the rest of Mobius, the area outside this. It was almost like a wasteland. Neon Sonic turned his head slightly and looked at Dark Dash.

"That is the last picture taken of the world of Mobius. A destroyed and forgotten place. Do you like it?" Dark Dash smirked, and nodded in approval, her eyes not leaving the picture.

"I sure do Master. But what exactly does this has to do with me, except me being in your control?"

He chuckled lightly, and turned to face his soldier.

"I want you to rule it with me"

O_o Pervs! Pervs I say!

lovefanfiction: *Chewing loudly on wooden cookie*

Do you mind?

lovefanfiction: Hmm...Are you sure this is Oak Wood?

No, I just cut down the first tree I saw from your garden. Well guys, quick announcement! I probably won't publish a chapter next month, since I'm going to be focusing ending Sonic and Rainbow Dash: A Deep Romance. It only has a few chapters left, so I want to make it count for it. Oh, and if you didn't know, After I finish Sonic and Rainbow Dash: A Deep Romance, I will be posting another story, also in the Sonic and The Black Knight universe. I'm not telling you what it is called though, because I am evil! X3