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Eon Chronicles: The Seven Days

by Gold the Fox

Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Day of Return Part One

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Hello everybody and everypony! I am Gold the Fox, but I'm POSTITIVE that you knew that, and welcome the the third book of the series of Eon Chronicles, The Seven Days. Like in Darkened Dawn, I named the title after a main event in the story. First, let's set down rules. One, no OCs are being added. The one slot that I was going to save has been filled by someone you all probably know by now. Second, this story is gonna be around the same 'atmosphere' as Darkened Dawn, a bit on the darker side. That's really all I have, so let's get to the reviews from Darkened Dawn's last chapter.

Captain: Glad I was able to blow your mind XD Yeah, I needed a form for Unknown and I remembered Empowerment from I think Aura's first story? I may be wrong, but I remember it. I still have yet to watch the first video XD I'll do that after posting this.

Michael burnette 773: Um, I don't really know. Shadow hasn't really been an interesting character for me to use, plus I got all these great OCs to use, the canon Sonic characters, and the canon MLP characters. Even if I did add Shadow, I don't think I would be able to do well with him with the amount of characters I'm already handling.

Tail: Yeah, King Sombra and Queen Chrysalis for the win! COOKIES! YAY!

BADA55: Yep, the awesome power of the Eon Shard. Yes, another Marvel ending lol. Damn it, you figured out the secret enemy of Nightmare XD

Meteor: Yeah, I liked Eon Angel. It would have been two 3000 word chapters but I wanted to get the ending to you guys quick because of how slow I have been that time around.

Glimpse: It'll be a combination of many leaders, primarily Glimpse, Sonic and Tails. Tails deserves it for being killed off XD

Sora: We already talked about you. Thanks!

Flutterlikeanangel: Thanks!

WinterBlaze: I personally don't really care for the Super Emeralds. I mean I can use them, I just didn't think they were necessary. I TOLD YOU I WOULD BRING HIM BACK! AND I DID!

Cheezel1993: HEY! Was wondering if you were going to start reviewing lol. Sometimes my inner Pinkie shows itself as well XD Thanks a lot, hope you stick around for this one!

Christian Wolf99: Wow. Well. Good riddance then.

Maverick: I personally think everyone on FF can write like me, they just have to try. Thanks a bunch for all the critique and praise you have given me, I appreciate it a lot. I will keep it up. Hope to see you reviewing this one as well.

Wow that was a long list. But thank you all so much for all the support and reviews on Darkened Dawn. We reached 263 reviews on that one, almost double the amount I got on my first story, Guess that shows people are really enjoying my writing. Thank you all. Now, LET'S START THE SEVEN DAYS!

Disclaimer: I own nothing except Gold, the Eon, the plot, etc. All OCs belong to their respectful owners.


Gold the Fox happily presents...

The third book in the Eon Chronicles series...

Eon Chronicles

The Seven Days

Chapter 1: Day of Returns Part One


"Dang Gold, you need to do a bit more running, you're flipping heavy." the blue hedgehog said, holding the feet of a three-tailed light blue fox, who seemed to be somewhat unconscious.

"I'm sure if we wasn't in a coma right now, he would say some wisecrack about you and your chili dog eating." a two-tailed fox said, who was walking besides the hedgehog and the unconscious fox.

We all know who these characters are. The blue hedgehog, hero of Mobius, Sonic the Hedgehog. The two-tailed fox genius, Miles 'Tails' Prower. And the unconscious light blue, three-tailed arctic fox, Gold, who had recently just went into the week-long coma after bringing back Tails from the dead, after defeating Mephiles.

"Also, I don't think it's very nice to say something of that sort when he just saved your friend's life." Rarity said, a mare with white fur and a blue curling mane.

"I think it's just that Sonic isn't strong enough, I'm carrying him just fine." Glimpse said, a green hedgehog with stripes like Shadow, only they were golden instead of red, who was holding Gold's head, both Sonic and him carrying Gold to the destination of Tails's house.

"Hey, I'm strong!" Sonic argued, lifting Gold's feet a bit higher to show he was carrying his part of the weight just fine.

"Remind me again why those two are carrying him?" Aura said, a dark red hedgehog who was strangely wearing clothes unlike the other Mobians, which included black pants black converse shoes, a black shirt with a white hoodie, and white fingerless gloves, who was in the back of the procession heading toward Tails's house.

"Because the author said so, silly!" Pinkie said, the most random and craziest mare around, having pink fur and her mane and tail being a slightly darker shade of pink.

"Yeah, I think the author has something funny planned with you two carrying him." Unknown said, a brown hedgehog with gloves with inhibitor rings on them, with a hair, or should we say, quill style similar to Silver's, only the two quills in the back are facing the sides rather than the back.

"Or it's just because we didn't want to do the work." Blade said with a chuckle, a leather brown hedgehog with the same sort of Shadow-streaks, but the streaks were a goldish-yellow, also with the same gold-yellow chest fur, and shoes to match the color scheme of the rest of his body. He also had a leather belt with two steel swords in their sheathes.

"So, you are sure Gold is perfectly fine?" Twilight asked with worry, a purple mare with the same sort of purple in her mane, with a streak of dark indigo and pink in it as well, as she walked a bit faster to stay alongside Gold.

"I guarantee you Twilight, Gold is fine. When he revives someone like he just did, he basically is giving them almost all his own personal Eon, which is different than the stuff he attacks with. His personal Eon is his own Eon that is inside him that holds together his body and soul, and when he revives someone like he just did to me, he gives that away to the person to come back. Sometimes the revival leaves a tiny amount of Eon in that binding, keeping him alive but in a coma, but...it hasn't happened, thank Chaos for that, but it could potentially take it all from him...and I think you know the rest." Tails explained.

"You seem to know about a lot of this Eon philosophy." Twilight commented.

"He's explained to me briefly, one day, I gotta get him to explain the entire thing down." Tails said.

"So...Gold's in a coma now." a feminine voice said off to the side.

"BLAZE! WHERE THE HELL HAVE YOU BEEN!" Glimpse yelled, throwing up his hands in emphasis, which resulted in Gold's head hitting the ground harshly.

"Damn it Glimpse, if you can't hold him with dropping him, then I'll do it." Tails said, going to where Glimpse accidentally dropped Gold on his head and picked Gold up.

"Great, now it's even harder to lift him up!" Sonic complained.

"Hey, is that a 'Tails is weak' joke?" Tails said to Sonic.

Suddenly a purple aura surrounded Gold and Gold was yanked from their arms into the air before floating down back to their height gently. Tails and Sonic looked to their left and saw Twilight with her horn glowing, meaning she was levitating Gold.

"I think I can handle this better than both of you." she said to them, rolling her eyes at them.

"Anyways, so Gold is down for now?" Blaze said, getting the attention back on her.

"You didn't answer me, where were you in that fight!" Glimpse said, a bit frustrated she wasn't there.

"There was a fight? Sorry, didn't know. I was looking to see if anyone else would be able to take me back home." Blaze said.

"Woah, woah, woah there, hold up. First off, I don't think you even held a shift once, and you didn't help in the fight. You got a little more waiting to do." Glimpse said.

"That isn't my fault. Now, I would like to go home now." she said, almost if she just didn't care.

"No, you aren't."

"Yes, I am."

"No you aren't because there's six other ponies here who need to get back home for a bit, and they have been here longer than you have." Tails piped up, giving a reason for Blaze not going home, to prevent an argument from happening.

Blaze groaned quietly and kept on walking with the group. They made it to Tails's house and Twilight instantly put Gold on a couch, swooning a bit from the amount of magic she had to use throughout that whole walk.

"Woah, you alright there, sugarcube?" Applejack asked, a orange...never mind, you know what they look like.

"Yeah, I'm fine, thanks. Just a bit tired from using all that magic." Twilight answered, looking a bit tired.

"It's fine, one of us can carry him into the guest room later. I think it's time for you ponies to head back to Equestria for a bit to unwind." Tails said.

"Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, but I don't wanna!" Pinkie whined, hopping up and down like a little kid would when they wanted something.

"Pinkie, I think it would all do us good to just relax for a bit. We all have had a long couple of weeks and days." Sonic said, yawning for once.

"Awwwwww, alright..." Pinkie said, slightly sad and defeated.

"Don't worry, you guys can come visit anytime, I'm leaving the portal open when it's activated." Tails explained, giving Pinkie a bit of hope, which showed when she gave a small smile.

Blaze meanwhile started walking away from the living room scene and toward the door, but was stopped when Glimpse tapped her shoulder.

"I said you aren't leaving yet." he said in a serious, monotone voice.

"Who said I was leaving? I'm doing as they said, I'm relaxing a bit. Now can you please just let me do my own thing?" she said, turning around almost hostilely toward Glimpse before turning back toward the door and walking out.

Glimpse watched the door slam shut, which caught everyone's attention.

"Um, everything alright?" Blade asked.

"Yeah, yeah. I'm going to keep an eye on Blaze, she seems to be too adamant on leaving for my taste." Glimpse said before opening the door and rushing outside in a blur.

"I think Glimpse is having his eye on her for more reasons than that, if you catch my drift." Aura said.

"You are the one to talk." Blade said with a smirk.

"Oh please! You all are just trying to pair me up!" Aura said, looking away for a bit.

"Oh no, speaking of Equestria, I just remembered something! The farm must be backed up from me not being there!" Applejack remembered, in a voice of worry.

"Are you sure your family couldn't handle it?" Tails asked.

"Maybe, but I don't know! Quick get that portal up and running!" Applejack said, who was now in the mass elevator, rapidly pushing the down button.

"Alright, alright, I'll start it up." Tails said, walking to the elevator along with the other ponies behind him, except for one.

Twilight was still standing in the living room, looking at the unconscious Gold, still with slight worry.

"Twilight, he will be fine. And if he isn't and I'm wrong, then I swear, I'll go back to the dead." Tails said, with a chuckle at his own joke.

"You are positively sure?" she said, looking at the elevator.

"I'm sure. And as I said, I'm leaving the portal open, so you can come visit him if you want." Tails said.

She silently told herself not to worry as much and went into the elevator.

"So...Applejack, you have a whole farm to get to work at?" Aura asked.

"Yes I do, and I need to hurry!" she answered in the elevator, pacing a bit in nervousness and worry.

"If you need help, I'll come along." Aura said, walking toward the elevator.

"Oh you can! Thank you, sugarcube." Applejack said, stopping with the pacing and settling down.

Before Aura left however, he heard the distinct sound of a palm hitting a face, and looked behind him to see it was Blade who face palmed.

"Hey, I'm helping a friend out!" Aura said.

"Sureeeeeeeeeee you are. Sure you are." Blade said with a big smirk.

'Oh, how obvious can you get.' Blade thought in his mind.


Alright, there it is! I know, nothing much happened, but this was more like an introduction. Or a re-introduction however. It was also the introduction of some new plot points, with Glimpse and Blaze, and Aura and Applejack. Some early chapters like this one will be two parters to fit a whole day, so be prepared.

Okay, I'm going to be doing something a bit new for my stories. Every chapter I will ask all my reviewers to answer a question. It'll give you reviewers something to talk about. Today's question is:

I recently saw the season four finale for MLP. Did you see it? If you did, give me your opinion on it. If you haven't, WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN!

That's the question for today. Thank you for reading and reviewing, leave a review if you would like (remember to answer the question), and as always, here's to the new book,

EONNNNNN OUTTTTTT!

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