HE GUYS IM BAK FROM FL AN SORY I WAST ABLE 2 UPDAE LAT NITE I WUZ TORED AN STUF.

ANYWYA A RED DA LAT FWE CHAPTAS AN WTF LORNE OMG THEY SUK SOSOSOSOSO MUCH!111 1 BUTERFLY WULD HAV NEVA BEN LEFT BY COLT AN THA OTHAS AN WULDNT HAV LEFT PONYVIL DATS JSUT STUPOD!11 SHES PERFET AN SHEE SHOLD HAV A GOD TIM BEACUZ SHES A PRINCES AN SHES OPPULAR SO THER!111 OMG IM SO PISED AT U UR A SUKY RITER AN F ALL U POPLE WHOO THINK SHE NOWS HIW 2 RITE A STORIE CUZ SHE SO EFFIN DOESNT!111 LOREN I HAT U SOOOOOOOOOOOO MUH RITE NOW!11111

SO YAH THATS Y I DELETD DA CHAPTAS THEY WERNT GOD AN THEY MAD BUTTERFYL SAD WICH ISNT DA POINT!111 SHE AN COLT R SUPOSED 2 BE TOGETHA AN BUTERFLY IS LOVD BY EVREYPONY SO FU LRONE 4 THINKIN NOT THANX 4 NOTHIN BICH!1111

so heres the beter chaptre 9 i hop u lik it i kno u will :)

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"OMG SPIK?1111" i gaped an colt noded

"yah" he sad sadly "an i swa da hole thing"

i couldnt beleve twilite wiuld betrsay me in suh a maner. iwuz haertbrokne cuz i thoght twilite wnated 2 be my friend butt i gues not. (AN IT KINDA REMINDS MR OFF SOMEPNOY I KNO ):((((((((()

so i wakled bak intoo da hose an confrnoted twilite an colt he walk in behind me. twilite loked suprissed.

"omg buterfly wut is it?" she askd lik da butch shee wuz

"U KNO BICH!111" I SCREMED ANGRYLY.

"WUT R U TAKIN ABOT?/"

"U OUGHTA KNO111" an i slaped her acros da face wit my realy hard hof an it hurt hre. i beet her up an evreypony knew y beacuz twilite she sucked ass a personn andshe mad mee saf an cuzed colt so muh troulbe.

i uesed my physic pwoers 2 fly hre across da ceilin an she scremed alot cuz she wuz bleedin blod an stuff. i trhew her across da grind an told her 2 get out an she did. loren ran after her cuz she wuz best frends with twilite (AN: ):((((((() an i shott them both with ma machin gunnloded with feir. they died in da bacyard ther wuz blood evreywher an it wuz col. evreypony cheered 4 me an Colt wuz turned on.

"omg buterfly ur sooooo sexy" he sed starin at twilite corpse "u wama mak out on da ciuch?"

"OK YAH!11" an soo we mad out da whole nite thru wit vigor an from dat nite on evreypony remember not 2 mess with buterfly rose!11 :D

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so yah wut did u think wasnt it beter than lorens peces of crap? itz ok she wont wirk on da storie eva again nope no wau ur a sucky riter loren nopony wants 2 read ur stuf u idoit. u should lern from me how 2 rite a story an develop a chracter cuz u couldnt do itt obviosusly. :(