Chapter 6 part of my soul

Authors note:

Lets carry on and again if anyone who reads this thinks i can improve my writing in some way shape or form please post it in a review or something (i do enjoy getting things like 'great chapter' 'i loved it' and stuff of the like as well so please post them in reviews if you want but if you don't it's o.k as well i guess but please review i need them for inspiration well 'need' is a strong word but ya i really like them so please post review)but do not i repeat do not post hate reviews like 'this is terrible' or 'you are gay' i have not got any at the point i am writing this so i hope it stays like that any way i hope you enjoy this chapter and way too long intro aside is should be a good chapter on the bad points of this relationship between Thomas and Luna.

We rejoin the story where we left off

Story:

As luna awoke i imagine she saw her dear sister in a mess on the floor crying her eyes out while her love simply looked at her with a slight smirk as if in some way victorious over her. Then I spoke with out thinking it my self i almost screamed.

"WHAT DID YOU DO TO HER!"clear rage in my voice. Everyone in the room was shocked by my sudden outburst which stopped celestia from her crying and even made me jump back in my seat then i said with out thinking again.

"did i just make him say that?" i started thinking how this is happening then it struck me what if i try to talk so i tried.

"hello, am i back in control of my mouth"and was i more than a little surprised who said it.

It was Luna. As we all looked at Luna and i spoke again

"hello testing one, two, three this is er"that was a thought what would i call myself here so i came up with the best name i could come up with on the spot "em, crystal...ehm, star, ya crystal star speaking out of Luna's mouth". It felt weird saying it and not only as it was coming out of Luna's mouth, it was like that name was the name i always had like it was a part of my very soul as if with out it i would not be me, or well not the same me anyway.

"What is going on here, why am i speaking out his mouth and him out of mine, this does not make any sense how is this happening and what did you do to my sister ,Celestia, hardly ever cries and even then it is for good reason, like hundreds of her subjects being slattered in front of eyes in the great war she weeps only barely in public, not just from you saying something to her so what did you DO?!" this was all to true but how would i , no how could i explain to Luna what i did if i did not know my self but Luna jumped to conclusion "did you use magic on her did you...you"she took a brief pause. Then yelled, a sound of pure anger and rage so powerful it smashed ever window in a 16 blocks area around the hospital and i was at the epicenter, my ears were bleeding and all i could hear was one phrase "YOU HERT HER!"

I lost consciousness not soon after the nurses rushed in to see what had happen and as soon as they saw me they became pale as i fainted. I only have blurry images of ponies rushing around me after that.

When i woke up i found 5 things in my room Brandon, some get well soon cards and balloons, handcuffs on my hoof and Luna. She must have been waiting for me to wake up but at the time with what i could remember i was freaking out. I tried to undo my cuffs with my magic but it felt like it was being blocked and i was too weak to try again so i decided to try to wake Brandon up but he was handcuffed to the chair by his left hoof so when i got him up he started to raise his right hoof but it had another pair of handcuffs on but it was attacked to something and what i thought was just the floor was in fact Celestia. So i quickly tried to tell Brandon to put his hoof down but the damage was already done. Celestia was getting up looking as if she had been up for days on end. The first thing i did was freak out and try to look like i was still asleep but i knew that was not going to work but i had to try. But before i could close my eyes completely i felt her gaze him me it was like two beams of sun light hitting my flesh they traced up my body to my head were they rested over my now closed eyes.

"open your eyes crystal star i know your awake."Celestia stated flatly. I opened my eyes slowly looking towards where Celestia was but when i open my eyes i saw Celestia looking at me our muzzles five inches from each other. I gave a gulp and my mouth felt dry i was thinking of a good sentence to break the silence with and luckily one came to mind.

"h-how long have i been out for?"I questioned looking to sound a bit groggy to make out i did not remember much at all which was not exactly false.

"you have been out for seventeen days in a coma, anything else?" she stated as flatly as before but with a ting of annoyance in her voice as well. I gingerly ask fearing she may send me to the moon for a thousand years for just speaking to her after everything that happened.

"Are you and everyo,eh everypony, ok after what happen?I mean you don't look to good."oh, how i wish i had not asked that question maybe "can i have some water?"or "what happen?" would have been better but then she went completely screamed at me with a voice a lot less loud but just as anger as Luna did out of my mouth

"NO, YOU CAUSE FITHY MILLION BITS WORTH OF DAMAGE IN ALL I HAD TO MAKE A PUBLIC ANNOUNCEMENT SAYING SORRY FOR WHAT ,YOU, HAD DONE AND THE WORST THING YOU DID WAS THAT YOU BUCKING MADE LUNA REGRET WHAT SHE DID AS SOON AS YOU FAINTED SHE WAS BY YOUR SIDE SAY SORRY, BUCKING SORRY FOR WHAT YOU MADE HER DO!"she seemed to calm and stop screaming and said"and your punishment is...LIFE ON THE BUCKING MOON!"she screamed as her calm exterior shattered while her horn was glowing gold and eyes white she cast the spell on me.

And puff, i was on the moon. When i frist arrived i noticed two thing, one there was no pony or creatures around and two there was a gigantic castle off a head of me as two words slipped out my mouth.

"oh buck"