Mlp The jealous sisters
Chapter 3
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Disclaimer i don't own the my little pony or some of the characters in this story
Hi sorry i have not updated in a while its because i wanted to improve vocab for this story also I need help with chapter names so can you please suggest some in the reviews and i will also be adding a new character this chapter I hope you like him and the person who it is based on is OK with how i have protrade him as a pony he is based off a friend of mine.
This chapter start after our hero wakes after he passed out last chapter so here is:
Chapter 3 the changes and old friendship different look part 2
When I woke I was in a crystal dome made of the crystal I had grown before I heard some voices out side of the dome a loud voice and two weaker voices. I walked over to the edge of the dome and side of the dome opened like a door then I walked out and saw the size of the crystal I had grown ,it just fit in the room then I heard two deep voices shout.
"halt" I turn to the direction of the voices from and there was two guards running at me with angry faces they seem to be mad at me for growing the crystal I then run to the huge crystal and like the dome it opens in front of me and when I ran in the door closes after me then I see why they were so mad I had surrounded the princesses in the crystal traping them in it they both saw me started to back against the wall the their horns glowing and then I stopped they both fired at me but a wall grow in front of me to protect me from the blast then fell back to the flour, all three of us looked shocked that this happened then they charged up another blast I quickly said
"NO NO NO NO ,don't shot I mean no harm, I don't know what I did or how I did it" I try to tell them Luna stoped charging and walkover to me and asked in an almost silent voice
"Do you really mean that" I answer in the same almost silent voice
"Honestly I don't know how or why this happened but it did so please don't be mad at me for it, I'm new to all this Luna, you should know that the most."
"I guess you are right about that and I...I trust you."
"What just like that you trust him, I know how you feel about him but really just like that?"
"yes I do because one he does not know how to control his magic so this could happen to him at any time and two he was extremely nice and good in his dimension"
"Wwwait what do you mean this could happen at any time, are you saying I'm unstable in this dimension or something."
"Well that seems to be true but we will work this out together." Luna placed her hoof over my hoof to encourage me to calm down.
"I..I..I can't stay here...I, don't want to take the chance of hurting anyone... especially not you Luna so I'm going to go back to my dimension, now how do I get back Luna?"
"I don't know how to get you back." Luna states with a few sweat beads on her head.
"I can tell when you are lying Luna so tell him how to get back to his world"
"But tia..."
"No buts he needs to go Luna!"
"But but..."
"Luna send him back!"
"FINE"as soon as she says this a portal opens " but I'm going with him" then she pulls me with her through the portal this time the transport though dimensions was instant. as before the world loaded around me when it was loaded Luna was holding my hand still pulling me then I realized I had hands again I ran to my mirror to check I was the same as when I left and I was except for my eyes one red and the other was gold. I stud there looking at my self for what felt like hours then Luna taped me on the shoulder to turn around and at frist she did do not see what was wrong until she saw my eyes. the only thing I could say is
"what, is wrong, with my eyes?!"
"again I don't know and there is no way I'm going back to my sister for help"
"OK fine but two question one why did you come with me and two how am i going to explain all this to my parents?"
"oh ya I kinda wanted to be with you...and you still live with your parent wow"
"ya well at lest i still have my parents"Suddenly i realized what I just said and instantly regretted it"oh...ya...I..I'm sorry luna I didn't mean it's just all this...I just got angry and lashed out at you the pony, human what ever i love and I'm very sorry"
"i get it your mad but what am i supposed to say to that...that was just over board and...and ...wait how do you know about my parents?"
"Nothing just a guessed honestly"I said as fast as humanly possible while a few sweat beads formed on my fore head.
"come on tell me how you know about me with out magic, I answered your questions" she said knowing I was hiding something and she was right if my mum had not called me just then i would be done for.
"that's my mum calling me got to go"before she can say another word I ran out of the room and down the stairs to my mum in the living room , she was still in her work cloths just laying on the coach,
"Thomas!"
"I'm here mum stop shouting"
"oh sorry I heard a loud thud up stairs from your room are you o.k?"
"I'm fine I just dropped my money box I need to start spending some of that so remind me to take some to town next time I go k"
"I guess but...wait I can hear something up stairs...it's coming from your room isn't it?"
"no it sounds like it is coming from your room maybe dads getting up I'll go check k"
I raced to say as I ran back to my room like grease lightning as I ran in and closed the door behind me I turned to see Luna was wearing a royal gown with her crescent moon on it also it looked as if it were hand sticked with great skill and feyness on her brow she war a crown made of some smooth dark crystal with a white crescent moon carved into it with no mistakes like it was made by the Gods them selves, as I looked at her my jaw dropped as if I was looking upon a Goddess of beauty her self.
At that moment I wanted to say something romantic but all that came out was"you...look..."
But then she interrupted me and said"I know it's not my best dress but it looks o.k right?"
"o.k...o.k,it looks gorgeous I have not seen a more beautiful dress in my life ,do you want to know something too, the only thing more gorgeous than that dress is the one wearing it, you"I replied in a romantic voice as I said the last part she started to blush
"OH STOP IT YOUR MAKING ME BLUSH!"she blurted as if she was talking into three megaphones in succession then she quickly covered her mouth and apologized for being so loud with two bright red blush marks on her checks.
We started laughing about it when it suddenly ochered to me that she had nocked over some of my stuff with her voice then I herd my mum walking up stair
Quickly I start talking to my self about a plan of action then it hit me"Luna can you teleport if so teleport to the place I'm thinking of o.k"
"I guess I can but are you shore you want me to?"
"yes quick!"
"o.k, your choose"
Then she held my hand and we were gone in a blink of an eye, we were suddenly going though space to our destination with what looked like shouting stars around us and in that instants we looked into each other eye and it felt like we were falling in love all over again and we sealed our love with a long, romantic kiss.
It must have been while we were kissing that we arrived at our destination a friend of mine's house and we were interrupted when we heard a voice say
"um who are...how are...THOMAS what in the world! one who are you kissing and two how did you get here!?"
I looked to wards the source of the questions and feel relief at the site of my best friend Brandon.
"dude if I told you, you would not believe me but then again knowing you you might"
"o.k that means it is highly unbelievable, come on tell me"
"o.k but remember i did just warp in kissing a beautiful girl"
"oh stop it you'll make me blush"Luna stated again
Then I told my story to my friend who at first was a bite skeptical then remembered i do not joke about this stuff well not especially this but love in general so he kept listening and by the end of the story his look was priceless, like a young child walking in on their parents doing it, yes that shocked but seemed most interested in Luna's sister she said that her sister name was princess Celestia and she and her controlled the kingdom of Equestria and the fact that they controlled the sun and moon.
Which i found very cool as i was dating a magnificent, powerful, beautiful princess with a heart of gold but i knew her darkest secret a secret that a would neve tell anyone who did not know already.
I hope you enjoyed this chapter and I how you review and tell me how i can improve my story please and may be some chapter names may help.