Thunderlane in Mlp
Chapter 1: Thunderlane in mlp
Ok guys. I'm not a Brony but my cousin wants me to write a my little pony story. I was like "HECK TO THE NAW!" but she really wanted me to so I did. I looked at some my little pony characters so I liked two of them. Princess Cadence and Thunderlane. Thunderlane looked cooler so this Thunderlane in his My Little Pony world!
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The grass was green and the sky was blue. Rainbows filled the sky. Today, Thunderlane was going to go up to the rainbow factory. He's trying out to be a wonderbolt but... It might not happen so he might as well get a job there.
Thunderlane jumped up and flapped his Gray wings. He zoomed up into the sky and smiled.
"Hey Thunderlane!" Derpy flew up next to him.
"Oh, hey Derpy." He smiled "Are you going to go to the Rainbow factory too?"
"Yeah! I'm meeting Rainbow Dash!"
Thunderlane rolled his eyes "She annoys me sometimes..."
Derpy frowned "Why? She seems nice."
"She just gets so competitive. And she blames me for stuff usually."
Derpy smiled and patted his back "Give her a chance!"
The two Pegasus landed on the giant cloud. "Ok..." Thunderlane walked with Derpy into the Rainbow factory. "Wow..." He starred at the interior of the factory. It was so nice. Clouds everywhere. So many pony's.
"This place is awesome!" Derpy laughed, she then skipped over to one worker and started to ask him questions.
Thunderlane walked through the Rainbow Factory and saw his friend, Fluttershy. He trotted over to her while smiling "Hey, Fluttershy."
She jumped and then saw him. She smiled and bowed her head "Hi.."
"Where are your little animal friends?" He teased
Fluttershy smiled and looked away "At home... I-I got to go." Fluttershy zoomed away.
"Hmm..." Thunderlane smiled and trotted over to a construction pony "Um, Excuse me? Where can I apply for the job?"
The construction pony turned around and pointed at a cloud desk. "Oh..."
Thunderlane walked over to the desk. No one was there "Hello?- AH!" A girl pony popped up "Hi!"
She was white with pink and green hair. "My names Blossomforth!" She shook his hoof.
Thunderlane had a confused expression on "Hi?" He took his hoof away "I'd like to apply for the job to work at the rainbow factory."
"sure! you'll be my partner." Blossomforth smiled and jumped over the cloud desk. She stood in front of Thunderlane.
"Partner? You get partners?" He asked, very confused. Blossomforth nodded "My job is to help make the rainbow. I get the colors. I need a partner to help me. So I choose you."
"Oh." Thunderlane took a step back. I don't know about this...
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Ok everyone! I hope you kids enjoyed it. Parents, if you want you ca read this story to your kids. I don't like to make anything unsafe. This story is just for my little cousin and I hope children enjoy this. If they like my little pony, they can read! Bye-bye!
