Doctor Whooves and the Elements of Secrets: The Beginning
Chapter 4: 4. Side Chapter 1
Previous Chapter Next ChapterThis is going to be a short little insight to see all of our other elements so this is not a serious chapter and does not count towards my "every week" rule. I am also thinking of writing in a new style what do you guys think?
The Adventurers and The Curious
*somewhere above Equestria*
"Come on then (Insert name here), we don't want to be too slow." A light blue Pegasus yelled to his sister as she was flying at a much slower pace than he was. The stallion was around an average ponies height his coat was light blue with some black streaks, his mane and tail was black with one bright yellow streak right down the middle of his mane, though his tail was shorter than the average stallion, he also wore a pair of grey aerodynamic goggles on his head
"You know that is not fair, you are much faster than me." His sister called back to him putting on a frown. "how do you expect me to keep up with you zooming ahead like that?" The mare was (My sister is making this stallion since it is based off of what she thinks so im just gonna have to wait awhile)
The stallion put on a sly grin as he said "because if I'm gonna be the fastest flier in all of Equestria I need to have a pretty tough sister who can catch up with him." He said as he flew next to her and gave her a little noogie
"stoooop you're going to mess up my mane." She said somewhat playfully but mostly serious as she was brushing it to fix it
"he he sorry" he quickly apologized "now let's go we've got to go to the best young fliers competition." He said as he flew off again.
" 'sigh' what am I gonna do with him?" she muttered as she flew off to go catch him
*Fillydelphia train station*
"One ticket to ponyville please." A dark blue mare had asked the train official politely she was a little over average height, her coat was a dark blue with mysterious markings all around her, she had a wavy pure black mane and tail set, her jewelry consisted of a small pearl earring on her right and a beautiful necklace with what looked like a water crest on it.
"Will that be one way or round trip?" the train official asked mesmerized by the mare's markings
Used to the staring of her marks she simply replied "One way please." he handed her the ticket and she was on her way "I wonder how Fluttershy is after all these days?" she wondered
When she got on the train she looked outside the window and thought "Ok, this is where it all starts my new life as an animal researcher alongside Fluttershy… I mean what can go wrong right?"
As she said that a low whistle indicating the train's departure blew and the train was off
Welp that is all and I need your answers to see if I should add a 6th member to this or should I just keep it the way it is and don't worry by 2 weeks (maybe school is killing my time lately) you will learn of all their names and I will update this chapter to include the sister's name and description when my sister is through with it. Yes these are all my personal OC's and yes you can use them in your stories if I give you permission.
I just want to say that I am so happy to have so many reviews (yes I count 3 as a lot) since I am not really that great of a writer and one of the laziest people in the world probably.
I would also like to thank a certain someone for helping me with a lot of great writing tips. If he lets me I will show his true identity but until then he will be known as the helper.
That will be all now wow a long Authors note heh sorry for making you read about this but thank you if you took the time to read this.
And again as before I said how do you think of this new writing style should I keep it or should I bundle it together again?