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Doctor Whooves and the Elements of Secrets: The Beginning

by Bananabronygamer

Chapter 1: 1. Chapter 1

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CHAPTER 1: A CRASH IN TIME

This is my new story my other one kinda failed so i bring to you a new story that i will continue i dont own mlp and flames are allowed


The doctor unlocked the tardis and walked inside he went up to the console, solemnly looking at the control console he sighs "ready for one more trip old girl" as if to respond it humms in a sad tune he look towards the tardis doors, pointed at the doors and snapped.

*before*

The doctor watched in horror as he watched his dear assistant Clara was burned alive in the fire before him screaming in agony as he could do nothing but watch. He shook it off after awhile as he remembered he has 10 kids who needed saving so he did what he did best and ran.

*now*

Sighing at the memory he pushes a few buttons and pulls a lever "I think there is one too many doctors" knowing what he was doing the tardis activated the emergency time warp accidently ripping through their universes abstract plane nearly ripping the tardis and the doctor apart. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHH" screamed the doctor as he was going through the painful process of regeneration losing consciousness mid way.

The doctor was in a world filled with white "what the where am I is this death" he questioned "well seems like the old girl failed to save me" ready to accept death he closed his eyes until he heard a very quiet ding as he opened his eyes he saw a blur standing there staring at him "hello doctor don't try to remember me as it will be impossible" the figure said as he frowned "the path your tardis has taken will lead you to a new adventure that will be your toughest one yet and you will have to make a very hard decision that will affect your whole future ahead of you when you meet this decision you will endure a pain like no other pain you have ever felt and im sorry but you know as much as I do that this cannot be reverted." He stared at the figure making out great white wing but that's all he was able to make out before the world around him started to fade "looks like my time is up so I will have to leave you to your doings sir doctor." And with that she faded away then he felt a falling sensation as he was about to hit the floor and then-

Snapping his eyes open while screaming he saw the tardis core as it was in a dangerous state having a meltdown the cloister bell was ringing. He went to the main console and tried to keep the tardis stable he put his hoof on the control and began typing in some coordinates as he held the lever stable with his other. That was when he noticed that his hands had no fingers actually It wasn't even a hand it was a hoof, what was he? The tardis just did a quick turn smashing him into the wall as he never noticed the box that was flying at him.


*ponyville*

Derpy hooves was going about her usual business delivering mail she chuckled as she remembered the surprised looks on everypony's faces when she was awarded for being the fastest mail mare in ponyville.

Flying through ponyville proudly wearing her top mail mare star she stopped at her final house who was her dear friend carrot top and since it was the final mail of the day she decided she could stay for a while. knocking on the door carrot came and opened it "Hey there Derpy how was flying around as top mail mare today" she teased. Derpy simply replied "It was pretty fun today did you know the cakes had their children today oh they were so adorable" she said as she walked in "oh and heres your mail" carrot top quickly took the package and ripped it open looking inside as her face was filled with excitement "ooo its here!" she squealed. "well somepony loves their mail" derpy joked, carrot to brushed it off giving her full attention to the parchment in her hooves.

After awhile she looks up with a blank stare "what is it did something happen" derpy asked a little worried, carrot just sat there nodding when she found her voice she spoke loudly "I WON!" derpy who was a bit phased by this outburst realigned herself and asked "won what" "I WON THE FREE TRIP TO CANTERLOT FOR TWO WEEKS" she said still yelling "it says here 'you and one friend has won a free trip to caterlot for a free tour around canterlot' she showed derpy the parchment "and right here it states that we get to meet the princess I finally have my chance to show my stuff to her and you could finally try out one of those famous bakery muffins you go on and on about"

derpy immediately smiled the biggest smile you have ever seen but when she read a part of the parchment it quickly turned into a frown "whats wrong" carrot top asked as she too dropped her smile she was now worried for her friend "I can't come" derpy said now looking at the floor "why not" carrot asked "I have a very important meeting that week"

carrot felt like she was gonna cry, she finally wins a trip to canterlot a chance to meet the princess for her to show off her great carrots as it would be good for business and she can't go with her best friend "well then I will just stay here with you" she decided, but derpy was not gonna let her friend who took care of her since her parents… she didn't want to remember but she was not gonna let her miss a moment like this "no you have to go its been your dream to meet the princess and show her your great top grade carrots this would be great for your business please go without me" carrot top quickly disagreed with this "no who is gonna be there for you if I can't" "I can take care of myself" she said knowing that it was true but hard as she can get many things mixed up easily "carrot I appreciate the concern but if you don't go just because of me I could never live with myself know this."

Carrot was gonna continue arguing but she just had to listen to derpy her, she had a weird way of making other ponies agreeing to her, anyhow she lost this fight and she knew it derpy would stick to what she says no matter what.


*1 week later*

"ok you remember the emergency numbers right?" carrot top asked "yes I remember them" derpy said a bit annoyed "and remember not to…" "not to spend money on useless things encase I need it for something important" derpy interrupted carrot top smiled at her "well this is good bye for now I will send you letters every day and I promise you I will bring a whole box of those muffins when I get back" derpy just stood there nodding and then turned to lyra who was the lucky guest "make sure you take care of her so she doesn't get too crazy and good luck in canterlot" "ok I promise" she replied after their goodbyes and the train left derpy decided to go to work

Today she had a small amount of mail but as she was flying over the everfree to deliver mail to zecora she heard a big explosion when she went to investigate she saw what looked like a small blue barn with that was smoking she quickly dove and tried to look if anypony was in or around the burnt barn "HELLO IS ANYPONY OK" and then a very handsome brown stallion climbed out of the box and fell on the floor he was coughing up yellow dust and had many cuts all over "strange how did he manage to escape with a few cuts" she wondered she quickly pushed that thought away " I've got to get this pony to a nurse and pronto she said as she picked him up and flew off towards the hospital

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