I just read your "short story" 'an alicorns punishment'. If you give me permissin, I think I could make somthing really good out of it. I would make it longr, with a few minor adjustments. Thank you for your consideration,
winxmonGT.
6/22

Absolutely! If you want to expand the story, please do so! Be sure to tell me when you put it up!
6/22

Thanks!
6/23

alright, CHAP1 has been published!
6/23

there. I deleted it. Does that make you happy?
2 days ago

Hey don't get mad at me for your mistakes. I never told you to delete it, so don't throw a tantrum and try to blame it on me.
2 days ago

Alright, fix my errors. (what you wrote will be chap. 1)

Chapter 2 Rainbowdash POV

As I flew to canterlot , I heard a loud sound comeing the castle, then a crash like Scootalo falling from a tree, but

WAY louder. I started flying faster, to find a horrible scene. I looked through a few rooms first, until I was at about

the second highest room. the rug was wet and had burn mark all over it, with a small flame at the corner of the

small room. I put the fire out and felt a strong feeling I wasn't in the room alone. It didn't feel creepy, it was like

somepony I knew relly well was near. Then I looked at the walls. Likw most of th rooms, some of the windows told

a story. I looked at the windows and saw pictures of twilight being turned to ash by something, and celestia looking

out a window. The last window had been completely destroyed, and white feathers were scattered around the

edges. as I looked at the floor, I saw the remains of one of my best friends. That was the saddest moment of my

life.
2 days ago

As I flew to Canterlot , I heard a loud sound coming the castle, then a crash, like Scootaloo falling from a tree, but

WAY louder. I started flying faster, only to find a horrible scene. I looked through a few rooms first, until I was at about

the second highest room. The rug was wet and had burn marks all over it, with a flame burning at the corner of the

small room. I put the fire out and felt a strong feeling I wasn't alone in the room. It didn't feel creepy; it was like

somepony I knew really well was near. Then I looked at the walls. Like most of the rooms, some of the windows told

a story. I looked at the windows and saw pictures of Twilight being turned to ash by something, and Celestia looking

out a window. The last window had been completely destroyed, and white feathers were scattered around the

edges. As I looked at the floor, I saw the remains of one of my best friends. That was the saddest moment of my

life.