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A New Alicorn

by vhdc1234

Chapter 5: 5. Chapter 5

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Sorry for the long wait. I had the worst case of writers block ever. I would just like to point one thing out.

My OC or my story is not a Mary-Sue. If it was, I would have never have written it. Mary-Sue means too perfect, and my Character has flaws. Sure, in the first few chapters she acted like a Mary-Sue, but she's not anymore. And if you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything at all.

Well, time for the story.


Princess Celestia stared at Magic in great shock. She felt sorry for this poor filly having to live through all of this. Just then, she noticed all the old scars on the young girl.

"Why did they do this to you?" She manage to spit out,holding back tears. Magic refused to meet her eyes, but Celestia could tell tears were coming out.

"Because I'm different. They think of me as a mistake. A thing that was never supposed to exist."

"Is this why you freaked out when Twilight hooked you up to those machines?"

"Being restrained makes me feel like I'm back in the lab. Being experimented on…"

Celestia felt something tug on her heart.

"Just for being an Alicorn?" Magic nodded.

"But I'm an Alicorn, and nopony has ever said anything to me." Celestia decided to search through her memories again.


Sirens blared in the background. Scientist and Doctors pushed something into a hospital room. Ponies were panicking all about. The memory was fuzzy. Celestia could barley make out a pony over the bundle in the hospital bed. The voices were muffled, but one word caught Celestia's attention.

"CLEAR!"

A bright light stared a new picture. Magic, slightly older, had her hooves strapped to a hospital bed. She had a breathing mask on mussel. A beeping sound came from a heart monitor. Her breathing was faint and her eyes were closed, but awake nothing less.

A pony wearing a lab coat entered the room. He was a blue stallion with a darker mane. His cutie mark was covered by his coat. He looked older than the rest.

"Good morning Miss Flora. How are you feeling?" He asked. Magic wanted to say something, bit decided not to.

"I told those idiots not to give you all those tests at one. Your heart couldn't take the pressure. But no, the just had to ignore good old Bright Night and do the test anyway." He rambled.

The memory faded.

The final memory played. Magic was in a cell, a thin blanket and pillow as her only source of warmth. She glanced at her guard, only to find him snoring. She carefully got up and moved her pillow. She lit her horn up slightly and searched the brick wall. She pushed a brick out, causing a hole to appeared in the wall. She slipped out the hole out into the open and ran for her life.


Celestia had was frozen with mixed emotions. She had tears streaming down her face. She did the only thing she could think of. She hugged the little filly tightly.

"Woah, what did we miss?" A very familiar voice asked. The girls were standing at the door. That voice belonged to Rainbow Dash.

"Girls, were you eavesdropping on us."

"No, we just came up to see what was taking so long. Princess, why are you crying?" Twilight asked.


Magic was invited to stay in Canterlot for a while, which she accepted. She twist and turned in her bed, nightmares haunting her.

Magic was in a white room, her hooves clasped down to a bed. Her horn's magic was blocked by a ring. She tried to scream, but no sound came out. The scene room started to change. Ponies surrounded her, but not just any ponies, they were the ponies she hated the most. The ones who kidnapped her.

"Hello, Miss Flora, did you miss us?" Then, they made room. A new cage was shown. And Princess Celestia was in it.


I finally done it. Well, this is my embarrassment that I call a chapter. I still have writers block and I seems to not want to go anywhere. Until next time.

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