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The best night ever or is it?

by Hyena king

Chapter 1

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Hi! Hyena king here! This is my fifth story and, probably, last story in the first season of MLP FIM, featuring Thunder Boom and Lightning Flash. It is the episode "The best night ever." You know, the one at the grand galloping gala where the mares plans didn't go quite the way they wanted? Well, I didn't do the episode "Ticket master" so you'll have to settle for seeing the brothers screw up in this story. So, without further ado, here's chapter one!

"You want us to do what?" Thunder and Lightning asked at the same time. The mane six were at their door at this very moment. Normally, they would welcome them right into their house, but before they could even say hi, Rarity had gone straight to the point, naming the request they had.

"We wanted to know if you wouldn't mind if you drove us to the grand galloping gala tonight." Rarity repeated, batting her eyelashes at them. "We wouldn't ask this under different circumstances," Twilight continued," But we don't have any escort to drive our carriage tonight."

"I can't believe I,m saying this, but couldn't you find someone else?" Thunder asked almost apologetically. "Yeah, why should we care about this hooha anyways?" Lightning asked, shrugging as he did so. "We didn't even get invited."

"You're just jealous." Thunder said with a smirk. "No I,m not...OK, a little." Lightning conceded with a frown.

"Well, I'll just tell you what to expect if you don't drive us." Rarity said, putting her best pout face. "I won't get to find my prince." She looked to the others for help in this venture.

"I won't meet new animal friends." Fluttershy said, with a sad look at the ground.

"I won't make money for my family." Applejack added.

"I won't experience the best party ever!" Pinkie chimed in with a whine.

"I won't get a chance to meet the Wonderbolts." Rainbow said with a sad look pointed right at Lightning.

"And I won't get to spend time with Princess Celestia." Twilight finished with a sigh.

"I thought you were heroes who would want to help these damsels in distress fulfill their wishes," Rarity resumed, gesturing to all the mares in question. "But obviously you're not heroes after all." She turned around to leave, giving them a triumphant look. "We'll just go and find some real heroes to take us to the grand galloping gala."

Thunder and Lightning gave her vicious glares in response to her speech, not saying a word for a brief moment.

A few minutes later, the brothers were strapped to a carriage made by Twilight, getting used to the feel of it. "I knew you'd make the right choice." Rarity said with a confident smirk, earning herself two more glares from the pegasi.

There you have it. This is short, even by my standards, but it's a start anyway. One more thing, I might have misrepresented Rarity in this story, but she just seems like the manipulative type. This is just a fact, it doesn't effect how my stories are written, but I would like to say that, even though she's drop-dead gorgeous, Rarity is my least favorite pony. There, I said it. R&R please!

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