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A Brony Life

by 4428gamer

Chapter 41: Welcome to Your Future Kinda (S1Finale)

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Welcome back every pony to the season finale!

So here with me this chapter, I have some pony that I haven't had in any episodes for a while now. And since I'm afraid I can't put her into the finale, I want to bring her in here!

Luna: And I am so grateful that thou has allowed me to do so. *She said with a smile* But I must ask, why hast thou not mentioned thy Princess in this tale? Aren't I important as well?

Well the thing is, there's not really a good way to bring you into episodes regularly even though you play an important role in the story. So I haven't been able to bring you in at all. The only way I can really do something like that, is to have a chapter revolving around the main cast going to Canterlot, the story going into their dreams, or a different episode all together that brings you into play. I plan on having a few of those next season though.

Luna: I am still confused. Why is 'next season' so different from the first? Tis not the same tale?

I'm glad you brought that up actually. You see, next season is going to have a wider variety of stuff going on. Whether it's using episodes from last season and using story lines from those episodes to make new ones, or the fact that I'm getting help in thinking up new episodes from some of the reviewers that I've gotten to know through PM's. So as the seasons go on, I'll be able to create more and more episodes each season. Another reason as to why you and a lot of other characters will get some more mentions and your own chance in the spotlight.

But enough about any of that. I think it's time we finish up the intro so we can start the chapter.

Luna: Thou has a good point. Let us bring an end to the intro. With thy audiences top three comments first right?

Correct Princess Luna. So here they are!

3: N3ON- THUND3R. I know that the idea's a little overdone, but trust me, it'll get more original. Especially around the third chapter.

2: VintageThunder98. Princess Luna on a scale of one to ten, how well would that plan even work?

Luna: Well... If my sister was exhausted and had a long day... I'd say that thy Vintage Thunder would have an eight out of ten chance.

Wh-wait really?! Maybe having the Pinkie Virus wouldn't be that bad a thing to have if I was holding a grudge against some pony...

Luna: Wait, is thou actually considering doing such a heinous crime as to HARM ROYALTY?! *She asked with her Canterlot Voice and a harsh glare*

What-no! Not at all, I don't have a grudge against either of you princesses! I'm just thinking of using the Pinkie Virus against Discord as revenge...

Luna: *She immediately calms down and has a look of thought* Well if thy plan is to do that, I'd suggest targeting the chaotic nuisance while he is napping on one of his annoying candy clouds. *she said, starting to frown*

Okay... I'm not going to ask. Anyway, onto the top comment!

1: dazza the lucario. I would've never thought of that to be honest. The amount of fear, adrenaline, or a combination of both would probably keep me from keeping my thoughts from going everywhere. And also, I'd have to say that my favorite part of history would be tomorrow, because it's always a gift. :)

Luna: *face hooves* Honestly Zeke, I think that I am younger than that saying. Thou sayings are not good at all.

Oh shut u- *Seeing Luna's look that basically challenged me to finish that sentence made me shrink back* I mean... Please do not give your very thankful subject such harsh criticism my Princess.

Luna: *smirks a little in victory at my correction and turns towards the audience* And with all of thy top comments finished, we shall now begin the chapter!

Disclaimer: I do not own MLP or anything famous mentioned. All I own is Blitz and the idea.


"Are you really sure that this pegasus will be any help at all? I mean, just look at him! He doesn't have a tail! Looks to me that nothing changes where he's from."

"Well, we don't have much of a choice. I mean, it'll take a few days for me to use any magic to send a portal that far away again."

"I still wish that you put a little more thought into this idea of yours."

"Honestly Golden Jewel, you never have any faith in my plans do you?"

"Well the success rate doesn't exactly help make me feel any more confident in your 'plans'."

"Shh! I think he's starting to stir! Hurry, we need to get out of here and see how well he responds to all of this. Oh, I hope I sent the portal in the right direction. I'd hate to accidentally bring a cave stallion into the future."

As I started to come to, I heard two girls bickering about something. Their voices sounding really familiar, but still different.

"Quick! Follow me!" One of them said, running away from where I was. The other followed and before I could even open my eyes and start to wake up, I was by myself.

I stood up from the ground and rubbed my eyes, a little drowsy. But at the same time, a little on edge from what happened. I went through some kind of portal, and now I was somewhere else. But where?

I stopped rubbing my eyes and slowly moved my hoof away from my eyes. And what I saw was really freaky. In front of me was a small town that was in the middle of a desert. Nothing but desert all around me and the only green near here was a small swamp behind me. That swamp being one thing that I recognized right away.

The Everfree Forest. Or at least, it's was kind of Everfree Forest. It was smaller and was more like a swamp than a forest. "What in the name of..." I said to myself, wondering just where I was. But since I wasn't sure if I was in Equestria, I didn't know what to really say.

"I can't believe this!" I heard something from off to the side. Looking over, I saw something that was really surprising. Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy stuck to a railroad sign. They had those wild west vests on that didn't have holes for wings, western hats, rope tied around them so their wings were tied down, and to top it all of, they didn't have their tails. They were cut off!

"Woah!" I said. I then flew over to them. "What happened to you guys?!" I asked them, flying up so I was eye to eye with them.

"Hey ya blind stallion! In case ya haven't noticed, we ain't 'guys'! Were mares!" Rainbow Dash yelled out at me in a country accent. It sounded like Rainbow's voice, but mocking AJ's accent.

"Uh, yeah I know that! What happened to you two though?!" I asked.

"What does it to ya?" Fluttershy asked, confused by what I had asked. "We got punished. Duh." She said calmly.

I took a double take at what she said. They weren't acting normal at all. They were being hung upside down from a railroad sign and they were missing their tails, but they didn't even look like this was news at all to them. They were acting like it was a usual annoying thing.

Not only that, but Rainbow Dash was acting like she had no idea what I meant by saying 'guys'. It was like she had forgotten the second meaning behind it. Not only that, but Fluttershy didn't seem shy at all. She was acting more calm than anything.

And on top of all of that, they were talking as if they were suddenly related to Applejack.

"Punished?! What are you two talking about?!" I asked as I started to untie them.

"Wait! Slow yer hooves! If ya untie us, than Tha Whipper will just punish you too!" Rainbow Dash told me.

"Do you see any pony else around here? Cause were the only ones out here. Now come on, no pony deserves to be hung upside down on a railroad sign. What did you two even do anyway?" I asked them, lifting them off the sign one at a time.

"We did the worst possible thing we could'a done." Fluttershy said calmly. "We flew 'round these parts." She told me.

"Wait a second." I said as I got them both off the sign, the ropes still tied around them. "What you're telling me is that some pony named 'The Whipper' hunted you down and tied you up to a railroad sign, all because you two flew around here?" I asked them.

"Yeah..." Rainbow Dash said, looking a little ashamed.

While she was starting to feel bad for flying, I was starting to feel a pain in my gut from laughing so hard. "Hey! What do ya thinks so funny?!" She asked me.

"A few things now that you mention it." I said, barely able to keep myself laughing from explaining. "One; why are you mocking Applejack's accent? Two; why have I never heard of The Whipper? And three; since when are you ashamed of flying Rainbow Dash?" I asked her. "And finally; since when does any pony get in trouble FOR FLYING?" I asked again.

"Uh, maybe ya hit yer head or somethin when you cut yerself down from bein' hung up for flyin around. I ain't no Rainbow Dash. And every pegasus always gets in trouble whenever they fly to close to an Earth Pony or Unicorn town." Rainbow, or, who ever this was said to me.

"Okay... So if you're not Rainbow Dash, than who are you?" I asked, kind of confused.

"I'm Spectrum Light. And this here's my friend Flitter Calm." She told me.

"Wait... Spectrum Light?" I asked, getting thrown off by that name. That was the name of Rainbow Dash's ancestor. Either Rainbow Dash was trying to pretend she got the spot in the reenactment, or something seriously messed up is going on.

"YEEEEEEEHAAA!" I heard off in the distance. I looked over and saw a small cloud of smoke coming towards us.

"Oh no! Here he comes!" 'Spectrum Light' said, getting scared from the sight of it.

"This won't be good." Flitter Calm said.

"Wait, who's coming?" I asked, turning towards the cloud of kicked up dust and sand that was coming towards us.

"The Whipper, who do ya think?!" Spectrum asked as if I was an idiot.

I wasn't about to let this dude 'punish' them again. Especially when they did nothing wrong. "Then go. I'll hold him off." I said, turning towards 'The Whipper'.

"But-" Before she could object, I stopped her.

"I said GO. I'll be alright, but I'm not letting you two get 'punished' again." They looked at each other and shrugged.

"Alrighty then. Good luck partner." Spectrum said. She and Flitter Calm then ran off towards the town, leaving me to take care of who ever this Whipper dude was.

As soon as they were a good distance away, that's when the cloud finally stopped in front of me. I coughed and fanned the smoke away with my hoof, it getting to close. As soon as the dust settled, it revealed a Yellow Earth Pony with a black vest and a brown Stetson cowboy hat. But the hat was still different from AJ's. He also had an orange mane and tail, along with a whip on his side and a whip for a Cutie Mark.

"Well lookie what we got here! A pegasus pony who landed on his head from fallin off a cloud. You know, you got some nerve untyin them pegasuses from that railroad sign. Do you know just how hard it was ta get em up there?! 'Specially that blue one." He said to me with a glare half the time and a face that had some kind of mixture of entertained and mad at the same time.

"Oh really? Well you're pretty messed up yourself for tying them up in the first place." I told him, not backing down.

"Ha! This is somethin! You really think you can come onto my land, talk like a high refined little ol' unicorn, and cut down those two flyin mares without gettin some punishment?!" He said, ending it all with a tense glare.

"Yeah, I do. Do you have a problem with that, because I'd be happy to take care of that." I told him, getting ready for a fight. This guy didn't look about ready to just talk it out.

"Oh don't worry none about me havin a problem. Cause I think yer about to have a bigger one." He then started cackling like mad as he picked up the end of some rope that was laying down beside him.

I followed the trail of the rope and saw that it led right to... "Oh no." I said out loud, realizing that Applejack's rope was still around my neck. And now this guy had the other end.

"Now I hope you can keep up! He he heeeee!" He cackled some more and put the rope in his mouth, running off in a random direction.

I tried desperately to get the rope off of my neck, but it was stuck. And before I knew it, I was brought to the ground and pulled by a twenty-foot rope. With Whipper at the front of it. Luckily I wasn't being choked by it, but I still couldn't get free of it.

"You know," He said through his teeth. "I was gonna cut yer tail off instead! But seeing as how it's already missin, I thought this would be a better punishment!" He said to me. "How's about we go through the Cactus Gorge over there?!"

Cactus?! No, I needed to get out of here! With how crazy this guy seemed, something tells me he's gonna let me hit every cactus there!

I tried whatever I could to get free and away from The Whipper and his craziness, but he was running way too fast. I tried to stand up and hold my ground, but it was all flat, barren, and dusty so there was no friction at all on the ground around here. Not only that, but I was now covered in the dust, and was getting hit in the head by the ground and rocks every time I tried to fight my way out of it. I quickly unhooked my ear and put it in my pocket, not wanting to hear any music right now, or even lose it all together.

As I saw the cacti come into view, I tried to think of something that would help me get out of this. But, I couldn't think of anything that could help me. Like he said, my tail was missing so I couldn't just stick to the ground to anchor myself in one place.

And to top it all of, I was by myself. Where ever I was, none of my friends were around me. So I was trapped. "Here we are!" He said to me.

He then started weaving in and out of every cactus there was, making me hit every cactus he went near. I whiplashed from one cactus to the other, getting hit everywhere by needles. And the needles that stuck to me just hurt even more every second I was being dragged around by this crazy dude. And if I even tried to move or get free, the needles just hurt even more. I had no choice but to just let Whipper drag me through the rest of the cacti.

This went on for two minutes straight before he finally found his way out of Cactus Gorge. He then stopped and walked over to me. "Hope ya enjoyed yer visit into Cactus Gorge. So now do ya understand just what happens when you try ta play hero fly boy?" He asked me.

"..." I tried to say something, anything, but it hurt just to open my mouth. I had so many cactus needles stuck to me, I looked like I was part porcupine. So all I could do was spit at his hoof that was right in front of my mouth, really angry right now.

He just cackled even more at me. "Oh now look at what ya just done! Now I gotta get this spittle off my hoof. Lucky for me, I can just run it off. So what do ya say? Ready for another run through Cactus Gorge?" He asked me.

"No..." I barely managed to say. I was way to messed up to last another go through a field of cacti.

"Well that's a darn shame, cause I sure am!" He cackled one last time before picking up the end of the rope. But before he could go anywhere, he saw something coming from the side of us. "Dag nabbit! Them two nosey unicorns again! You got lucky this time ya darn pegasus! If I catch ya breakin the rules again yer gonna wish I ran ya through Cactus Gorge!" And after giving me that joyful warning, he bucked me in the head and ran off.

I was to injured to do much of anything except lay there. All I could understand was those two voices from earlier bickering as I was lifted into the air. The pain from being moved made me black out before I could understand or do anything else.


Twilight's POV

I can't believe it... I-I just can't believe it. This can't be happening! As we all stared off into where the portal and Blitz were, we didn't know what to say. We had no idea what had just happened. At first, there was a giant portal and Blitz was trying to get away from it. Now the only thing there was Blitz's tail, which had somehow fallen off before it could follow Blitz through.

We all simultaneously made our way over, not taking our eyes off the spot where it all happened. No pony else was here or even close by because of the Alamo Day celebration, so it was just me, the girls, Spike, Snips, and Snails.

"Twilight..." Applejack finally spoke up, breaking the silence. "Where'd Blitz go?" She asked.

"I...I don't know..." I reached down to pick up Blitz tail, but as soon as I touched it, I drew my hoof back. "OW!" I yelled out.

"What?! Is it hot?!" Spike asked.

"No... It's freezing!" I said as I shook my hoof. It was so cold that it was painful. "Spike? Could you warm it up?" I asked.

"S-sure." He then blew fire onto it, warming it up. As soon as he was done, I tried again to pick it up. It was still cold, but only as much as holding an ice-cube in your hoof. So I just levitated it near me from there on out.

"Okay every pony." I said, turning to them. "We all need to calm down." I told them. They all looked a little on edge about all of this.

"Calm down?! How do we calm down when we just saw our friend get sucked into a portal?!" Rainbow Dash asked, furious that I was trying to stay calm.

"Because freaking out won't help anything." I told her. "If were going to bring Blitz back, then we need to stay calm and think of something. First off, we need to figure out where that portal sent him." I instructed them.

"Well I think we saw a hoof come out of it." Snips told me. That was actually pretty useful to know.

"Maybe he got sent to a world of pony eaters!" Snails suggested, thinking he had a stroke of genius. Then he just realized what he just said.

"Pony Eaters!" They both yelled out at the same time. They then started running around in circles, screaming their tails off like idiots.

"Oh come on! Do you really think that portal sent Blitz to another dimension?" Sadly, what I said reminded the others of something. Blitz came from another dimension in the first place. So that made them think that the whole idea was actually possible.

"Oh no! Blitz is going to get eaten by a hungry pack of Pony Eaters!" Pinkie Pie yelled out, now scared. "What if Blitz is really tasty?! Then they'll want to come back and eat the rest of us! They'll probably eat me for desert since I look like cotton candy! And I probably taste like cotton candy too! So they're going to eat me! And then they'll eat Spike!" She yelled out in fear and shock .

"ME! Why would they eat me?!" Spike asked, now scared for his life.

"Because you look like a tiny olive! And since you breathe fire you'll probably taste really spicy! Then they'll just want to eat even more because of how you taste! Then after they've eaten me and you, they'll go after Applejack!" She said, pointing a hoof right in Applejack's face.

"N-now hold on a minute there Pinkie. Why would they even eat me?" Applejack asked. Great, now they're all starting to fall for this!

"Because silly, your name has Apple in it! They'll probably think you taste like apples because of that!" Pinkie deduced.

"Well that does kinda make sense..." Applejack started to think. Oh you have GOT TO BE KIDDING ME!

"Of course it makes sense! And after they've eaten us four, they'll think that the rest of Ponyville will taste just as good! Were all going to be doomed because were all really tasty ponies!" Pinkie said, starting to go into tears.

It didn't take long for all of them to start freaking out. They all panicked and started going around all over the small plaza we were in like crazed ponies.

"Will all of you calm down! No pony is getting eaten!" I yelled out.

"Yeah! Twilight's right!" Rainbow Dash said. At least she wasn't buying into all of this like the- "We need to be ready for when they come back! So I say we get ready to fight! No Pony Eaters eating any of us!" rest of them...

"No! I mean, there are no pony eaters! I bet Blitz is just fine!" I told all of them.

"Are you sure Twilight? Because I think that Pony Eaters sounds just about right." Pinkie Pie said to me.

"No it doesn't! Look, that portal could've done a bunch of things. Instead of lead to another dimension, it could've simply teleported him somewhere, sent him to a different time, shrunk him down to microscopic size, or maybe even just made him invisible. So I say we go back to the library and read up on what just happened." I suggested.

"I suppose Twilight is right. We won't know whether to prepare for the worst until we know what's going to happen. Alright Twilight, lead the way." Rarity said, now coming to her senses too.

"WAIT!" We all turned to Pinkie Pie, who yelled out. "If somehow Blitz really did get teeny tiny instead of get eaten by a hungry pack of Pony Eaters, than every pony should watch where they step! We don't want to step on him!"

We all rolled our eyes and headed off to the library. Only, the others were watching where they stepped. There was no way that Blitz got shrunken down to microscopic size.

"AH! I STEPPED ON HIM!" We all quickly turned to see Snails lifting up his hoof to reveal that he stepped on... A pebble.

"Snails, get serious! You didn't step on Blitz!" Snips argued. Please tell me he has the right mind-set.

"Unless..." Pinkie Pie started. Oh no... "Unless Blitz turned into a pebble!" That made all of us shake are heads at that and keep going towards the library. All except for the three of them.

"I'm really sorry Pebble Blitz! I didn't mean to step on you!" Snails said, lifting the pebble. "Just remember, I'm Snips!" He yelled to the pebble.

"Hey! You're lying! I'm Snips!" Snips yelled out.

I sighed and shook my head, walking with the others once again. But I was stopped when Pinkie Pie got in front of me and out 'Blitz the Pebble' right in my face. "Twilight! Do you, or do you not think that you can change Blitz back?!" She asked.

"Pinkie Pie we don't have time for this!" I said swatting Blitz-I mean the stupid rock-out of my face! "That's not Blitz! Now come on, we need to get to the library so we can figure out what how to get the real Blitz back!" I said, with the whole 'Pebble Blitz' thing getting old fast.

Pinkie shrugged and followed all of us. And behind us, Snips and Snails picked the pebble up before following after all of us. They might side-track us all from getting Blitz back, but we had to let them come either way. If they told some pony their side of the story then all of Ponyville might go into some kind of chaos. And that was the last thing we needed on our hooves.


Blitz's POV

"I can't believe this! You really do think that he's going to be helpful?! He came here with rope tied around him, his tail is missing, and you still think that there's equality where he comes from?!"

"Yes! Didn't you see how he reacted when he saw those two all tied up? He didn't have any idea why they were tied up or punished like they were! That's proof enough to me that this can all be changed! And he seems to be up to the job!"

"Really?! Okay fine! Saying that where he came from, everything is all perfect and equal like you say. But that still doesn't prove that this stallion can do anything about it!"

As they were talking, I was already awake enough to know I wasn't imagining this. I didn't open my eyes, but I still knew that the two from earlier were still bickering and that I was safe for now.

"It also doesn't prove or explain why I'm here, but here I still am." I told them, jumping into the conversation.

"Oh finally, he's awake! Now let's just ask him what it's like where he comes from!"

"I told you already, we can't do that! It might destroy all life as we know it!"

"Um, still here you two. Able to hear everything you say." I said as I started to open my eyes and wake up for the third time today. And as I did, like the last two times it was a surprise to see what exactly was in front of me.

"Twilight? Rarity?" I asked, looking at the two as I sat up. They did indeed look like Twilight and Rarity, but still kind of different. Twilight didn't have the pinkish purple streak on her mane or tail, and was wearing a business vest with a western bowler hat on.

Rarity was in an old western dress with a large sun hat on her which also covered her horn. But it was refitted in a way where she could run around and do work in it and still keep her 'important' appearance.

"Afraid not, actually." Twilight said to me in a normal but somewhat slightly Canterlot refined voice. "Our names are not 'Twilight' and 'Rarity'." She explained to me.

"But...You are...Kinda..." I said, slightly confused.

"Again, no. I think you have us mixed up with two other mares. You see, I am Sparkle Bright. And that there is Golden Jewel." She said, gesturing to who I thought was Rarity. "And right now, you're in our place of work." She told me.

"Huh?" I looked around and saw I was in some kind of workshop/business place. "What is this place?"

"Well, we don't officially have much of a name for it, but I like to call it she Shining Gemstone!" Rari- I mean, Golden Jewel said to me. What was wierd about it was that even though she looked like Rarity, her voice didn't sound at all like hers. Rarity had a really 'refined' voice. Golden Jewel had a way normaller voice, but still with a little bit of refiness in how she talked.

"Uh-huh... Looks to me like it's a workshop." I said out loud.

"Well in a way... Yes. You see, we recently just finished building this business from the ground up and I make jewelry here." Jewel explained further. That's when I noticed another difference between Rarity and Jewel. Rarity had three diamonds for a Cutie Mark, while Jewel had two earrings and a necklace with a diamond on the necklace, and emeralds on the earrings.

I also noticed that Bright's Cutie Mark was different from Twilight's. It was still a star and the same shape as Twilight's, but it was yellow and white instead.

"Well I think that's enough about us. But we do want to know a little about you." Bright said as she extended a hoof to help me up.

As I went to reach for her hoof, it looked really familiar. And not just because she looked like Twilight either. "Wait a second..." I started. I looked up at her with a curious yet slightly angry look. She saw this and immediately drew her hoof back, not wanting for me to figure it out.

But it was way too late for that. "You're the pony who pulled me through that portal!" I said, furious now. The startled and slightly scared look on her face gave it away too. "Why?!" I demanded her to tell me.

"No it wasn't like that! You see..." She held back her answer and quickly turned to Jewel.

"Oh no! This was all your idea Sparkle Bright, and none of mine! I even told you not to do this! Now you have to take care of this stallion's questions by yourself because I will not be roped into this!" Jewel said as she went over to some of the equipment in the room that was for making jewelry. She watched from there as me and Bright talked.

She sighed and looked at me, choosing her words carefully. She thought for a little bit more time before Jewel spoke up again. "Either you tell him where he is, or I will tell him that! But you don't want me to do that!" She said, going back on what she just said not ten seconds ago.

"Alright fine!" She then turned to me. "Look... That portal I made sent you... sent you..." She had a hard time saying it.

"I promise I won't freak out with whatever you're about to say, so please just spit it out." I told her, wanting to know really badly right now.

"It sent you into the past." She said quickly.

That made me go a little wide-eyed. I'm in the past? "Wait a second...So you're telling me that...that you sent me back in time?" I asked her.

"Yes..." She said kind of regrettably, not sure how I'd respond.

Sadly, I knew exactly how I was going to respond. And what I was about to do would probably make them think I was a wimp. So summing it all up in three words... I passed out.

"Uh..." I fell right back to the ground, blacking out for the third time today. Or I guess the second time on this day in the past. Either way, I was not ready for any of this. Even if it had technically already happened in my time. This was all WAY too much. Being sent to another dimension was hard enough! Now not only am I in a new dimension, but I'm in the past. A lot of people might think that it's the coolest thing ever, but when you're stripped away from a nearly perfect life... Yeah, it gets to you.

"Ha! And you honestly think that he can change anything?! This colt seems like a push-over more than anything!" Jewel said, laughing her head off at my reaction.

"Well how do you think he was going to react to that news?! What, did you expect him to just hear that news and go, 'Oh that's just fine and dandy!'" She said, mimicking my voice in a mocking way.

She then started to look at me, trying to think of what to do. That's when she spotted something that was about to fall out of my pocket. The picture.

As she picked it up, Jewel noticed this. "What's that? Some kind of photograph?" She asked.

"Yeah... And it looks like it was taken around this time. But that's not all..." Bright said.

"Here, let me see it." Jewel then levitated it over with her magic, looking at it. "Wait... This looks like me. And you, and some other mares... And a rather dashing looking young dragon." She said as she looked at the pictures.

"No it's not you... It's that 'Rarity' he was talking about! And the mare in that picture that looks like me must be Twilight!" Bright said, realizing.

"But how could that possibly be?! If this stallion is from the future like you say then that could only mean..." Jewel thought to herself.

"That means that these girls must be related to us somehow!" Bright said.

"That must mean that I find a stallion in the future! Oh, I hope it was that handsome stallion from Canterlot that I've had my eye on for a while now!" Jewel said thinking about it.

Bright took the picture and looked at it again as Jewel was deep in thought about her love life. But as Jewel kept thinking about it, Rarity's body from the picture started to fade a little.

Bright gasped and quickly smacked Golden Jewel upside the head. "OW! What was that for?! I was thinking of who my husband will be!" Jewel yelled back.

"That's the problem! Look!" She then showed Jewel the picture, and she saw how Rarity's body was fading a little before returning to normal.

"What happened to my granddaughter?!" Jewel asked, looking shocked.

"What happened was that you're thinking too much about your future! If you kept thinking like that then this Rarity mare might've faded from existence completely!" Bright explained to her.

"So I can't think about my love life at all?!" Jewel asked, astonished by that idea.

"No... No you have to think about love eventually, other wise you might never meet the wrong some pony and Rarity still might not exist. So just whenever you think about love, just forget that you've seen this picture okay? It should just come naturally." She asked.

"Alright, I understand... But at least my family line still retains its beauty after all these generations. Oh if Rarity looks that gorgeous, then her parents must be to die for!"

"We also have to be careful about the others in this picture. A few ponies around town I've noticed look similar to some of these mares. Like us, this pink one, the blue and like peach, and... all of them look like ponies familiar around here." Bright noted.

"Ugh.. Hey are you two still here, or was I dreaming all of this?" I asked as I started to wake up.

"Oh no! He's awake!" Bright said, not sure what to do with that photo. And before she could get rid of it, I spotted her levitating it.

"Is that... Oh yeah, the picture." I said, still a little out of it. "So I guess you see you're some amount of great-grandchildren." I said.

"Yeah... Were really sorry about that. It's just that it was sticking out of your pocket and..." That's when Bright noticed something. "Wait, in here you have your tail!" She noted.

"Huh? Oh yeah. When you pulled me through the portal, my tail fell out before it could come through. It was made of metal you see." I explained, knowing that they would be confused if I didn't.

"Mmhmm... And tell us, how did you lose your tail?" Jewel asked, turning to Bright as if she was trying to prove something.

"Well..." I sighed, knowing that it was coming up sooner or later. "The roof of a house of mine collapsed on top of me."

Jewel went wide-eyed at what I had said, immediately regretting that. Sparkle Bright looked at her with a mixture of anger and show-offyness for some reason.

"Why does it matter though if my tail's missing?" I asked. Yeah, it was kind of odd for ponies not to have tails, but what did it really matter?

"Because every time a pegasi flies to close to a city which doesn't allow flying, they lose their tails." Bright told me.

"They-they lose their tails?! That's messed up!" I said, filled with shock about that.

"So it's not like that where you're from?!" Bright asked, getting excited.

"No! That's just all kinds of wrong!" I said as I flew myself two feet above ground from the pure rage of that idea.

Bright looked around real quick before using her magic to bring me to the ground. "Stop that! If any pony else catches you doing that, then you're going to get in trouble!" She told me.

"Well maybe I should get in trouble! Because if flying is a bad thing here, then I hope I'm the most evil pony in Equestria!" I told her, really ticked off about all of this.

That's when Bright smirked at me. "Perfect." She told me, glad with what I said. She then turned to Jewel. "You hear that Golden Jewel? He want's to break that rule." She told him.

Jewel just shook her head and looked at the two of us. "Honestly, it's a mystery how you two aren't both from this future of yours. Because I have never met any other ponies as optimistic." She told us.

"Well optimism is just what Equestria needs right now. And if were going to prove that then this stallion right here is going to help us do just that. So what do you say sir? Ready to help me set Equestria straight?" She asked me as she extended her hoof to me.

That's when I realized just why she sent that portal into the future. She needed some pony to come back here to help make Equestria a better place. I guess since this is the past, she didn't know who to bring so she had to send a portal to the future and hope that the right pony would come and help.

And even though I knew in the back of my mind that this might not have been the best idea to stay in the past, I just couldn't get past the fact that this Equestria needed some pony to help make it think straight. "So that's why you needed me to come? To help make everything okay?" I asked.

"Yes." She answered simply with a slightly sad smile. She knew that it was wrong to bring me to into the past, but she knew that it wasn't right to just ignore this whole problem either.

I pretended to have a look of deep thought on my face, which Sparkle Bright saw. She looked even more scared that I would say no, and closed her eyes to wait for me to say so.

But she opened her eyes when I laughed a little and shook her hoof. "Ha! Got ya! Of course I'm gonna help! What, you think I would just say no to something important like this?!" I asked her.

She sighed in relief, glad that I had said yes. "Great! You won't regret this, I promise!" She said with a great smile on her face.

"I only have a few quick questions." I told her, still kinda curious.

"Sure. Ask away." She told me.

"Well, if no pony likes it when pegasi fly, how come you two want to change that?" I asked them. Why exactly would they care about pegasi if no pony else does? I'm not complaining or anything, but it just seemed off.

"Oh... Well, I guess you should know that much." She said. "You see, Princess Celestia heard how me and Golden Jewel were moving to Pony Valley to create this business, so she asked us what we thought of pegasi and them flying. We told her that it wasn't really that much of a big deal, and that we didn't see any problem with it. I mean, in the end were all still ponies. And Princess Celestia is an Alicorn. A species that has wings. If no pony judges her, than why judge pegasi? So after hearing our answer she asked us to do something very important. Bring quality to Equestria. We said yes, not wanting to let her down and since then we've been doing everything we can to try and stop The Whipper and his gang from terrorizing pegasi. And since we've made no progress..." She looked towards me.

"You tried to bring in some pony from the future to help you..." I finished, understanding it all now. "Well I'm not one who wants to let the Princess down so I guess I'm gonna help." I said to her. She smiled, happy that I agreed to help her.

I smiled too, glad I could help. It might be a little hard and time consuming, but I wasn't concerned with any of that. I mean, I had all the time I could ask for. What could possibly go wrong right?


And so begins the one line in cartoon history where EVERYTHING GOES WRONG! But what do I know about stereotypical over done writing, I'm sure that this doesn't mean anything... Right?

Oh well, guess we won't know until the rest of the story starts rolling in. I hope you're all enjoying it so far, and I can't wait to hear how much you all like it. (Or hate it. That's cool too.) So until then... Goodbye for now every pony!

OH YEAH! And before I forget, I just found out that we've hit way over 21,000 views! *Confetti falls from out of nowhere and marching band music starts playing* So I have something I'd like to have for a competition to replace the QotC. So here it is!

Whipper needs a gang in order to be a true wild west villain. right? So to help get his gang together, I'm asking all of you to help create him a proper gang! So I need two gang members for Whipper to lead! Here's the OC sheet for any of you that want to have a villain put into the season finale!

Name:

Appearance (needs some kind of wild west clothing and a hat):

Gender:

Species (Can't be a pegasus I'm afraid):

Skill:

Personality:

Strengths:

Weaknesses:

And that's all for the OC sheet! Can't wait to see the results! Like i said, I can only pick two out of them all, and I can only give three days before the entries are over! So good luck and good-bye! (for real this time)

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