What's up everypony! Welcome to my first ever story on this profile! I know that it's not on here, but my previous account got corrupted or something so I had to make a completely new one. Anyway, this is my first story about how a human gets transported to the MLP world. I know there are tons of these, but I like to call them 'My Little OC's Transformation' stories. Simple enough, it makes sense and I don't know what else it's called. Well with that introduction said/typed, let's begin the story!

Disclaimer: I don't own MLP. If I did, my OC would be in it as a supporting character.

Throughout my life, I've been treated like crap. To unoriginal huh? Well your about to change your minds in a few minutes. I had an abusive father and a mother who was actually caring. When they divorced, it was pretty obvious who I sided with. While all this chaos was going on, it was just as bad at school.

I was bullied, ignored and on top of it all, I was always sick. I had no friends, no talents, no nothing. I was the loner who sat in the back, got C's and B's, and just looked down as I kept walking from home, to school, to home again.

Some years later, I ended up in middle school with a slightly better life. My dad was still fighting to make sure I lived with him for no reason other to have the power. Yes, power. He always fought just to say he had it, or to say he controlled it. I was just one of the 'its' he wanted to own and control. At school, I wasn't bullied as much and I had one, count em, one friend.

I thought that it was going to get better from there on out, but fate hates me for some reason. After that school year, the cheap house me and my mother could barely afford with the small amount of money we made, collapsed. I never blamed my mother for owning a cheap house like that, father was really to blame there. He could've just let us go and let me be with my mom, but he sued my mother when she barely had any money to begin with.

So anyway, the roof fell right on top of us while we were sleeping. Luckily for me, I always slept on the couch because it was way more comfy then my bed and the back of the couch kept me safe from most of the roof. Key word 'most'. I somehow moved in my sleep and my left arm was sticking out of the couch, which then became a prime target for the rubble of the roof.

In the end, my whole left arm, my left ear, and a few other parts of my body, including part of a really important organ, was badly damaged by the rubble and I had to get surgery. And for some reason, I blame fate's hatred, wouldn't let it be all okay. The body parts that were injured had to be replaced by artificial parts.

So after that, two things happened. I was known at school as the robotic freak, and since my mother passed on from the incident, I was forced to live with my dad. He was overjoyed about it, as was his new wife, my step-mother, and my step-brother.

More years passed, and the only friend that didn't treat me as a freak but some awesome cyborg of a friend, moved. I was a total outcast. As that year of high school went on, a show started to become popular. One that made people of all ages turn their channels just to see it. My Little Pony.

I never liked that show. It was originally made to promote toys about magical ponies that were for kids around the age of five and up, and mainly for girls. It got way more popular then anyone thought it would and people of both genders and all ages started to watch it, including my step-brother and his friend.

No one in my school ever bragged about how they saw the next episode of the show, so I thought either they didn't like it either or I just wasn't paying much attention. My brother and his friend always spent the night over at our house since we had cooler games, and that was when it all happened.

They went on and on about My Little Pony as they were watching an episode of it. I tried to blocked them out, like I usually do. It worked until they went a step further. They went over to me and started talking to me about the show. I ignored them and turned up the volume on my iPhone, but they wouldn't leave me alone.

Next thing I know, they start hitting me with everything they could find. Pillows, Nerf guns, video game controllers, anything they could find. I had enough and ran for the garage, where I closed the door behind me and sat in the back of the garage. When I did, the lights turned off, and the door was locked. I could've just opened the garage door and walk to the front door to ring the doorbell until my father woke up, but I didn't care at this point. I just listened to my music as I thought, "I wish that everyone just treated me normally! Is that to much to ask?!"

That's when it happened. Scientists and people who don't believe in magic would say I'm nuts, and maybe I was from all the stress, but the impossible happened. A black portal opened up where the garage door was and started to suck me in. To make it stranger, I was the only thing that was being affected by it. The boxes, toolboxes, and everything else just stood unaffected. I grabbed for anything that would keep me from flying into the law defying portal.

The only thing that I was able to get my hands on was my iPhone and a wire. The wire was stuck to something and I thought I would be okay, but fate wasn't going to let me off the hook that easy. The wire snapped and I was pulled in along with what wire came with me, and my iPhone.

When I started to wake up, I looked around. I was in some kind of forest "Well... This is different." When I tried to get up, I fell right back on the ground. I tried again and the same thing happened. "Great, I'm in a random forest, and I have no idea how to stand up. Perfect." I sighed as I started crawling towards a tree to help get up, and as I did I passed a puddle. I looked at it and saw what resembled a horse in the reflection. I blinked and so did the reflection.

It didn't take a psychiatrist to figure out what I did next. I panicked. I got up and ran around in circles, trying to think of what to do, where I was, what I was. Then it hit me. I was running around. Well, at least I learned how to walk. One problem solved, one bigger one to go. Why am I a pony? A pony with a black coat, a yellow mane, and a lightning bolt tail to match. Great, a pony version of a Pikachu. You know, I look like I'm something out of that... show... CRAP!

Crap, crap, crap, crap, crap! I'm a pony in My Little Pony! Why?! How can this get any worse?!

"ROAR!" I turned around, terrified to see what just made that noise. It was a giant bear just coming out of his cave, glaring right at me. Well then, there's the cherry on top of this crazy sundae and it's not even noon.

To be continued

Well that's the end of this chapter! It's my first My Little OC's Transformation story so sorry if it wasn't that good. I plan on making a story out of this so please enjoy. Also, sorry that it was kind of depressing at the beginning, but it will all get more up beat soon enough. Finally, if anyone's wondering, the OC is made up. It is based on my life, but its way more extreme. Well, with all that said, hoped you enjoyed the chapter! Until next time, please review!

2. Kindness, Honesty, and Crashing

Hi everypony. Glad to see there are so many people to already read my story. I don't have much to say so I'll make it quick. Thank you to all who read my story. I hoped you like it and like I said, it will get less depressing for the most part. Instead it will be replaced by a few other things, but I won't say yet. So with all that said, lets move on with the story!

Disclaimer: I don't own MLP.

Great, my first few minutes in this nightmare and a bear is wondering how to use my pelt. Irony at its best. The bear was kind of big, and by big I mean fat and giant are to small of words to describe him. He started running towards me with no warning, and I knew that there was no point in running away since I didn't even know where I was to begin with.

As the bear ran towards me, I came up with an idea. I'm faster then it because of his size, so I can still avoid him. I got ready and got into a defensive stance, holding my ground. "3...2...1...NOW!" I said as I jumped out of the way, dodging the bear with a little bit of breathing room. He skidded to a halt and turned around to face me, about to charge like a crazed bull.

I needed a way out of here. To the sides of me was only a dense amount of trees and his cave. I looked behind me, but a tree was in the way, stopping me from lookin behind me. Wait, that's it!

"Okay you overgrown stuffed Teddy Bear! You want to catch me?! Well I'm right here!" I yelled at him, challenging him to try and get me. As I thought he expected it and started charging again. "Three." His claws were sharp enough to dig into the ground. "Two." He showed his sharp teeth. "One." He took one more running step and lowered down so he could lunge at me. "Now!" I took a step, then with my slight momentum, jumped up on his head as he tried to lunge for me. I jumped off of his head and landed behind him, tripping because I wasn't used to the whole 'four feet' thing. The bear tried to stop, but he had already lunged and before he could stop himself, he ran head first into an apple tree. He fell to the ground, unconsious. I got up and walked over to him. "Sorry Smokey, but you should've looked before you leaped." Chessy joke, I know, but I deserve it! I don't know where I am, how I got here, or even how to run around without fail, but I knocked a bear out cold and all I did was jump over him! That deserves some gloating.

"Well I'll be! You took out that bear all by yer self!" I turned to where I heard a country girl's accent and saw a bush. Now correct me if I'm wrong, but I've never heard of a talking bush, fantasy or not.

"Who's there?" I asked. After a few seconds of the bush rustling and some whispers, an orange pony with a cowboy hat came out, dragging a pale colored pony with wings. The winged one did not look happy. If anything, she looked like she wanted to get away from here as soon as possible. I'm guessin she was shy.

"Sorry for hidin in the bushes, but we didn't want to get in the way of you wrasslin' that bear." She said. The other pony went over to the bear, looking sad that it was hurt. I felt kind of bad.

"I'm sorry about the bear. He attacked me, and I didn't have any other choice but to outsmart him." I said.

The pony then looked at me. "Oh... Um, he's okay. He just needs to rest." The shy pony said.

That's when it hit me. These two are from the show! If they are here, then that means I really am in the show too! Great, I'm in a world based off a tv show and I know next to nothin about it! All I know is that there are six main characters, and these are two of them. Applejack and Fluttershy. The only thing I know about the main six characters is their names, and that each of them have steriotypical personalties. Applejack is the country girl one, and Fluttershy is the shy, nature loving one.

Well, two done four to go. And I really hope I don't meet two of them.

"Uh... Equestria ta pony!" Applejack waved a hoof in my face and I snapped back to reality, if this place counts as reality that is.

"Oh! Sorry, I was just trying to think of something!" Turns out I was staring into space.

"Maybe you hit yer head when you landed down here. You sure yer okay?" Applejack asked again. Wait, landed? Does that mean I have... and there they were. Wings. right on the sides of my body. Okay, for a show that is a little kid's cartoon... I had to admit, it's kinda cool that I have wings.

I needed to respond quick so they wouldn't think I space out about everything. So two seconds after her question I asked. "Yeah, yeah I'm fine. Just, my wings... cramped up as I was flying and I fell down here." Okay, that's believable. Good lie if I do say so myself. Plus it gives me an excuse to try out these things without them looking at me like I'm an idiot.

"Oh, that's good. For a second I thought you might've had a bad fall." Applejack said as she calmed down. You know, out of all of the main six, she might've been the only one that was similar to me as it seemed. I was born in the south and was obsessed with that kinda thing. So in a way, she and I could relate.

"No, a tree top cushined the fall. I just think I need to strech my wings a little and I'll be fine." I said. She nodded.

"Alrighty then. Until yer wings better, do you need some help gettin out of Sweet Apple Acres? It can be a maze for ponies that don't know their way around." Applejack said. Oh, so I'm in an apple orchard? Well that explains what they're doing out here, and why all the trees have apples growing on them... You know, now that I look around I feel like an idiot for not realizing this was an apple archard before.

I smiled. "That'd be great, thanks." I said. Then I remembered something else. "Do you think you could give me a tour around town too? I'm new here." It wasn't really a lie, in fact, that was the exact truth.

Her face lit up. "Why, I'd be happy to. Come on Fluttershy, we should show him around Ponyville! We can even introduce him to our friends." Applejack said as she started to walk away.

"O-okay." Fluttershy said as she pulled out a ice pack and put it on the bears head. She then got pp and started to follow Applejack.

"Hold on just gotta get..." I looked around for my iPhone, which was nowhere to be found. I could've sworn that I still had it and that wire in my hand when I went through the portal, so where are they?

"Gotta get what?" Applejack asked as she looked over.

"Uh... Nothing. Just thought... that something fell out of my pocket?" I said. I immediatly regretted it because, I'm a pony with wings now. How am I supposed to have pockets?

"Oh, well as long as it's still in yer pocket then good. Come on!" Applejack said as she started walking again. And she believed that how? Oh well, I won't doubt it. I ran over to catch up with them and we started walking together.

As we went through the acres, Applejack spoke up. "I guess while were all walking towards Ponyville we should go ahead and introduce ourselves. I'm Applejack and that there is Fluttershy." I already knew that, but at least now I was sure of it. "What's yer name?" She asked.

"Oh, well my names-" I tensed up a little as we walked. 'Crap! My real name won't blend in with this world will it?! I need to think of a name that blends in. Let's see, my real name's Zeke so it needs to be similar to that. What is there! Think, think, think you stupid brain!' "Blitz." Well it's good enough.

"Just Blitz? That's kinda odd, most ponies round here have longer names then that. Is it short for something?" Oh yeah, most of their names have more letters then actual normal names.

"Yeah." Okay, think of something that's relative to you. You look like a Pikachu hidding in the shadows s- "It's Electric Blitz, but most just call me Blitz." Well, it's decent. Note to self: Think the whole thing through before you say the first thing that pops into your head.

"Now were caught up." Applejack said. "Ya know, the name kinda reminds me of my friend Rainbow Dash." There's the third name out of six that I know. Rainbow Dash was, I'll admit it, cool. She probably sticks out from this show to me more then anything else because no one would expect a tomboy from a kid's show like this. Well, time to plead stupidity.

"Who's Rainbow Dash?" I asked.

Applejack chuckled. "You know if she heard you ask that, she'd probably be in shock from somepony not knowing who she was." Oh right, they say she always likes to brag to everyone. And by 'they' I mean the two and only people I know who are addicted to this show, my step-brother and his friend. "Well, Rainbow Dash is the fastest pony in Ponyville. She works with the weather patrol, and most important, she can do the Sonic Rainboom." Applejack summed up.

Ah Yes, the Sonic Rainboom. Probably the only thing I ever took interest in from this show for more then a few seconds. With it she can break the sound barrier and break the speed of sound. The only real reason I know so much about Rainbow Dash was a show on youtube that had Rainbow Dash against a Transformer. I hate both of those shows, but the battle did leave me thinking about the Sonic Rainboom for a few minutes.

"Hey, speakin' of Rainbow Dash, here she comes now!" I look at where she's pointing and sure enough, there was a blue figure leaving a rainbow trail... Coming Straight towards us!

"Hit the deck!" Applejack yelled as she and Fluttershy got out of the way. Bad thing for me was, in the group we were walking in, they were both on the sides of te group where as I was in the middle. With no time to get anywhere I sighed and said, "Just. My. Luck." CRASH!

Well there's chapter two! Will Blitz ever be able to end a part of his day without something like this happening? Who are the two ponies that Blitz hopes he doesn't meet? And when will he learn to use his wings? Find out, next chapter!

As always, leave a review and say what you thought about it! First person to put in the first review for this chapter gets a shout out!

3. Welcoming Party!

Welcome to the third chapter! Since the last chapter was yesterday, I don't really have much that has happened. I do have this to say though. I'm not sure if I'll be able to make anymore chapters over my spring break, but I will if I can. Anyway, wtih that said, lets give the shout out, then the story!

GingerTyPerior: Thanks! Glad you like it so far!

Disclaimer: I NO OWN MLP!

Ow, my... everything. What hit me again? When I opened my eyes I saw the cause of the crash, Rainbow Dash. I glared at her and when she opened her eyes, and she quickly flew off me.

"Sorry about that! I don't know why, but my wing just started going crazy!" Rainbow Dash said.

"Maybe you cramped it up yer wing like Blitz did his." Applejack suggested as she and Fluttershy walked over to us.

"What! Great, now I'm grounded for a while!" Rainbow Dash said. As she massaged her wing, I was still trying to get out of the ground. Sad thing was, my tail got stuck in the ground.

"Meanwhile, I'm stuck IN the ground." I said with an angry tone. They all looked at me.

"How are you stuck in the ground?" Rainbow Dash asked. She saw that I was above the ground. All of me except for,

"My tail's stuck in the ground and I can't get out." I sat up and tried to stand up, but fell right back on my butt.

"How is that even possible?" Rainbow Dash asked as she walked over to me, as did Fluttershy and Applejack.

"Let's just say my tail isn't made of hair. It's made out of metal." Blitz said. The three ponies in front of me rose an eyebrow, but they didn't question it as they helped pull me out.

When I was finally out of there I looked at my tail. It was dirty, but that was it. "Well at least it's out."

"No kidding. How come it's made of metal?" Rainbow Dash asked.

"Let's just say that it's because of a bad accident. I don't like talking about it." I said.

"Alright, well let's be headin onto Ponyville. You still need to meet our other three friends." Applejack said. Joy. A bookworm, a fashion freak, and a party crazy pony. Yeah, I am really looking forward to that! Sarcasm. I still can't just say that though. I put on my stupidity façade and nod.

"Alright. Lead the way then." She nodded and we were off towards Ponyville once again.

Once we got there, the first building we stopped at was a certain clothing store. I had no idea what was so important about this place until Applejack knocked on the door.

Applejack spoke up. "Hey Rarity, ya in there?" Oh dear god, not this. ANYTHING, but this... I never liked fashion, or anyone that thought fashion was what the world's most important subject.

A few seconds later, a pony with a dark purple mane and tail and a unicorn horn came outside. "Oh hello everypony. To what do I owe the pleasure of you all coming?"

"Hey Rarity. Well, me and Fluttershy were in Sweet Apple Acres earlier, when we met our new friend Blitz." Applejack pointed to Blitz, Rarity just seeing him for the first time. "He's new to Ponyville so were showin him around."

Rarity was simply focused on one thing. "Oh my, how is your tail staying in that form?!" Rarity went over and looked at my tail. Does personal space mean anything to these ponies? "I have seen great maintainance of one's tail, but never like this! Please, tell me! How did you get your tail to be like that?" Rarity asked, acting like the fate of the world depended on my answer.

"I didn't really try to do anything. My tail is just made of metal. See?" I used his hoof to knock on it, which sounded like I was knocking on metal.

"A fake tail?! I never thought anypony would do such a thing, but you've made it in a way in which it is a thing of beauty!" Sure... Oh well, modest mode engage.

I shrugged. "I just thought that if I had to get a fake tail, might as well be something cool." It sounded like a good enough answer.

"Well, I hope that if I ever have a fake tail, it can be custom-made as well." Okay, looks like she has officially lost it.

"Uh, Rarity? We still need to give Blitz a tour of the rest of Ponyville." Rainbow Dash said.

"Oh, alright. Mind if I come?" Rarity asked.

"Sure why not. Now come on, we still need to introduce him to tw-" Before she could finish that sentence, there was a gasp coming from behind the group. Before any of them could turn around, a flash of pink ran right past them, giggling. "Make that one more pony to meet."

"What happened to the other friend?" I was kinda confused by what they meant, but they all smiled at me with one of those 'we know something you don't smiles'.

"Oh, something tells me you'll see soon enough." Rainbow Dash said, smiling. I hate surprises.

"Okay then." I said cautiously.

"Well, either way, I do believe we were going to introduce Blitz to our friend Twilight." Rarity said. Well, at least some things are starting to make sense. Well, as much as sense as it's ever gotten.

"Oh yeah. Well, what're we waiting for, let's go." Rainbow Dash said. Why is she in a hurry all of a sudden? Oh well, maybe she just wants to hurry and get the tour over with.

As we went around Ponyville, they all showed me around. Everytime we stopped by a certain place they all recalled some kind of story there. Some of the stories were funny, others were just a little bland.

Finally, we approached a building that was built into some big tree. They all walked in without any permission. As we all went in the door closed behind us and it was pitch black darkness.

"Okay, why are the lights off?" I asked. It was simple enough, but there was no response. Also to add onto it, there was no one around me anymore. "Oh joy, it's like something out of a bad horror movie." I mumbled as I walked forward.

"SURPRISE!" I heard when the lights came on. There were at least thirty ponies all over the place, including the one extremely happy looking pink pony right in front of me, Pinkie Pie.

She was the one pony I never wanted to meet here. You see, my step-brother always said he and Pinkie Pie were VERY similar. My step-bro, Jack, was random, annoying, rude, and to top it all off, would use all of those things to get whatever he wanted. Fart in my face, throw me in the closet, and even throw toilet paper at me screaming "FOUR PLY FOUR PLY! YOU MOST USE FOUR PLY 'CAUSE IT SMELLS LIKE PUDDING!" I'm not making this up, I swear. (1)

So, back to pony reality, I just looked at her, confused. I wasn't surprised or anything, mainly since I didn't get surprised easy so I kept my cool. "What's all this for?" I honestly had no idea. I never had a surprise party before, not even for my own birthday as sad as it is.

"What's it for?! It's for welcoming you to Ponyville silly!" Pinkie Pie answered with a happy 'obviously' voice.

That made me smile out of happiness for the first time today, not counting me owning that bear. "Wow. Thanks."

She smiled even more, if that was even possible. "Don't thank me, thank everypony!" Oh right, instead of everyone or anyone they replace the 'ones' with 'pony'. She then turned so I could see them all.

"Thank you all for this. To be honest, I've never even had a surprise party before." They all smiled an nodded, saying things like 'don't mention it' or 'your welcome' and even 'You've never had a surprise party before?!' The last one from Pinkie Pie, and she was still right next to me. To make it worse, she screamed into my good ear. Everyone else went on with the party, talking, dancing, and just overall having a good time.

"Ow." I said as I rubbed my right ear. "Well yeah, come to think of it, I've never even been invited to a party before. Just had around two or three birthdays." Pinkie Pie's jaw dropped open wide, shocked.

I didn't see what the big deal was, but she apparently did. She smiled just a few seconds later though, back to her own 'normalness'. "Well then I hope you enjoy your very first surprise party!" And with that, she disappeared into the large group of ponies.

I had no idea what to do really so I just looked around and saw a snack table. I shrugged and went over, seeing some cupcakes, cookies, and fruit punch. At least I knew what all these foods were so I didn't have to try and guess.

As I picked up the cupcake, someone came up behind me. "HELLO AGAIN!" I turned around, wondering who it was and saw Pinkie Pie right in my face, again. I backed up a step, still keeping my cool.

Why was she here again? "Hi. What did you need?"

"Well, me and my friends never introduced you to our last friend Twilight, so I needed to find you as fast as possible so when I saw you by the cupcakes I wondered which one you got so I ran over to ask you! Oh, and if it's your favorite flavor!" Pinkie Pie said as fast as humanly, or poninly, possible. All I got from that was she wanted to introduce me to Twilight and what flavor cupcake I liked.

"Okay, well I like chocolate, and where's Twilight if you wanted to introduce me to her?" I asked. I then thought of something. She's supposed to be the strongest magic user on the show right? Well if she was, then maybe she could help me get home!

"Oh yeah! Follow me!" She ran off and I shrugged as I followed, balancing the cupcake on my head as I walked. I felt like someone from India by doing this, remembering a video about how a lady was balancing a pot on her head.

When we got to an opening of the large group, there was all of them. Applejack, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, and a pony I haven't met until just now, Twilight.

"So your Twilight?" I asked as I felt the cupcake start to fall off my head. I jerked my head up, making the cupcake go into the air, which I caught which it came back down. They all looked at me like I did one of those party tricks people do, but I just thought it would be cool to try and do that.

"Yes. And your Blitz?" She asked.

"Yeah." I said. Since I wasn't much of a talker, I just asked the next thing that came to mind. "So, all of you are friends?"

"Yeah. We've been friends since I moved into Ponyville." Twilight asked. "Speaking of, where did you move from?"

I froze up. Crap, how am I supposed to answer that?! "Well, um... I don't really live anywhere, I just kinda travel around." I lied again. Eventually, this was going to come back to haunt me, but I needed to buy myself time until I could trust them enough to tell them the truth.

"Oh, okay. Well, in that case, where were you recently?" She asked again. Great, now I have to come up with multiple cities. Unless...

"Well, I've actually been in Canterlot for a while. I had to have my tail coated with a new layer of paint since it's made of metal." I said. Most of them knew that my tail was made of metal, but Twilight and Pinkie Pie didn't.

"Your tail's made of metal?!" She exclaimed.

"Shhh! Most p-onies don't really treat me like normal because of it. I don't want everypony knowing that some of me is made of metal." I said. I almost said 'people' and gave myself away, but luckily I caught myself before then.

"Oh... I'm really sorry. Don't worry though, nopony around here would judge you because of that." Twilight said. The others looked kind of upset about it.

"It's okay. Besides, I guess it's only natural for them to want to avoid a pony who isn't normal. But yeah, I have to get it repainted since it the paint get scratched up and I look like a science experiment." I explained. Again, it was a complete lie. When I was human I had to get my artificial limb fixed when it got scratched.

"Wait." Pinkie Pie said with a straight face, which didn't look right somehow. "If your part metal, then you are some kind of robot right? So if you're a robot, that means you can do the robot!" She yelled with a huge smile.

I had to chuckle at that. "If I got money for everytime I was asked that..." All of them laughed a little at that.

Twilight spoke up again. "So, when you got your robotic tail, is that when you got your Cutie Mark?" She asked.

"Huh?" I remembered that all the ponies, except for kids, got a tatoo thing on their butt. I looked over and saw something that seemed kind of cool. I saw a lone gear with electricity omitting from it. Wow, that fits me almost perfectly. The gear for about half of my body being metal, and the electricity because I love electronics so much I guess. "Oh. Yeah, I got that after they told me I had gotten a new tail."

"That is awesome! Not as cool as my Cutie Mark, but still! Wish I was part robot!" Rainbow Dash said, amazed.

"No you don't." I quickly said. She would immediately want it off as soon as she had some metal for a body part.

"Why?" She asked. Boy was she in for it.

"Well, it weighs like twenty pounds, if it touches enough water it rusts, you'd have to get it repainted almost every two months, and to top it off, you'd be a living lightening rod." I explained. All of their jaws dropped at that.

"Woah... You have to go through all of that?" Rainbow Dash asked.

"You have no idea." I said simply. It made them all feel sorry for me. I didn't want pity, but I didn't want them to think I was so cool just because I was made of metal.

"But... Ain't there a good side to it?" Applejack asked.

"Well... I guess. Someponies might think your really cool, you get used to lifting something really heavy so you get stronger, and to be more clear, lightning doesn't hurt you, but it just makes you look like some kind of freak when you get struck by lightning and your standing there like nothing happened." I said. I thought the good would way out the bad at first, but I guess it's still cool.

They all thought to themselves silently, until Pinkie Pie spoke up to the group. "Speaking of lightning, lighten up everypony! It's a party!" She screamed out happily.

They all lit up again and smiled. "Pinkie Pie's right, we shouldn't be mopin around. This is Blitz welcomin party!" Applejack said. We all agreed and went on with the party, all of us having a blast!

When it was all over, Applejack asked if I could sleep in the barn on her apple orchard. Since I had no where else to sleep I agreed an I spent the night sleeping in a barn.

All in all, I had to admit. For a world that is a tv show I hate... I had a good first day. Either way, I needed to get back to my world. Back to being on two legs, thumbs, diet coke, school, my abusive father, my annoying step-brother, having. No.. Freinds... Well... What's the rush right? Besides, maybe I came here to learn some kind of lesson or something. I guess I could stay here. Besides, I haven't even used these wings of mine yet. Or found my iPhone that came with me. Where did that end up anyway?

Oh well, guess I'll look tomorrow. For now, I need to get some sleep.

Well that's the third chapter of the series! Now that Blitz has discovered how fun Ponyville is, will he ever want to leave? Will everyday be just as fun and relaxing like this? Probably not. Either way, be on the lookout for the next chapter! Also, ten internet cookies to anypony that reviews!

*Brofists Bro Army audience* Also, shout out to all the viewers that watch PEWDIEPIE!

4. This is WAR! PRANK WAR!

Sup. I Came up with idea literally minutes after the last chapter finally went up. I have no idea why it's taking so long for the chapters to actually show up, I mean, they aren't that long so what's up? Oh well, here is the next chapter! Hope you all enjoy it!

Disclaimer: Blitz, you want to do the disclaimer?

Blitz: Why not. Gamer doesn't own MLP.

Let the chapter play!

Wow, that was actually way more comfy then I thought! I thought sleeping on a bale of hay with a blanket over it would be prickly, but no! It felt like I was sleeping on a cloud!

Speaking of clouds, I'd say its high time I learn to fly! Okay, lets see here... My wings are around the middle of my body towards the front shoulders so... maybe if I move my shoulder blades around.

As I did, my wings stretched out. I mentally high-fived my own awesome brain. Okay so if I move my shoulders up... My wings go up. So when they go down... Woah!

As Blitz pushed his wings down, he was lifted off the ground with the pressure. While he was in the air, he moved his shoulders up and down at a decent pace and stayed in mid-air.

"Awesome! Wow, first time, and I'm already a natural at this! Okay, let's try to make it out that barn window without hitting it." I leaned towards the window that was in front of me and flapped my wings, flying towards it.

"Yes!" I swung my fist/hoof in the air to celebrate, but that made me lose focus and I went towards the left, crashing into the wall. "Note to self: Now gloating until you actually did it right." I fell to the ground and landed back on my hay bed.

That's when Applejack came in. "Rise and shine Blitz!" She saw me sitting on the bed, spaced out and shook her head. "Honestly, I thought ya would be up by now. Anyway, come on out! The other ponies want to see ya!" Applejack said as she went back outside.

I shook my head to come to my senses again and got up. When I went outside I saw all six of them looking at me. Rainbow Dash was snickering for some reason, and the others looked at me "So how'd ya sleep?" Applejack asked.

"Well, actually it was pretty comfy. Why?" A few of them looked confused.

"You sure? You didn't feel wet or anything?" Rainbow Dash asked as normal as that question could be asked.

"Nope. Why, was there a leak in the barn?" I turned around to look back inside the barn, and I heard Rainbow Dash groan.

"Fluttershy, I thought you said you had blue dye! This is BLACK dye!" She said. I looked back at them, then at my back. There was something on my back. I only noticed because I turned and my back shifted a little.

"Oh, I'm really sorry Rainbow Dash, I didn't know." Fluttershy said. I chuckled for a few seconds then fell to the ground laughing.

"Yeah yeah, laugh while you can! I'm gonna prank you eventually!" The others laughed at how we reacted to one another.

"Sure! What next, you gonna try to use a joy buzzer?!" The others joined in laughing at my joke. Guess they remembered I was resistant to electricity.

As we all laughed, eventually Rainbow Dash joined in too. After a few more seconds I got back up and looked at them. "So what did you all need?"

"Well, you met someponies at the party, but there are some friends of ours you haven't met yet." Twilight said.

I thought about it an shrugged. "Sure. I don't really have anything else to do, so let's go meet them."

"Good. Then follow us!" Pinkie Pie said as she skipped ahead in front of the group and lead the way.

"Since I already know where were all going, I'll go ahead and just fly ahead." Rainbow Dash said as she took off towards Ponyville.

"Why exactly is she going to meet us there? Why not just come with us?" I asked, confused about why Rainbow Dash would go ahead. We all just kept a steady pace towards Ponyville.

"I think she plans on taking her prank war against you a little to far." Rarity said.

I chuckled once. "Prank war? I'm not even trying to prank her back... Yet." I said, already thinking of a plan if she actually manages to prank me. You know it's funny. Every prank anyone's ever tried to do to me has backfired. Throwing trash at me? I duck down or move out-of-the-way without noticing and it hits someone else. Shoelaces tied durin gym? They never tied them tight and they just came apart. Chocolate sauce to my hair? I take a shower in the morning so I don't notice until I see it came off. No one can prank me.

As we walked I felt as if someone was watching me. I looked around and saw a bush shake, a flash of rainbow, and some other small things. I eventually turned to Applejack an asked. "Do you get the feeling that Rainbow Dash is following us too?"

She simply chuckled at that. "No. Don't be paranoid Blitz, she isn't going to go out of her way just to prank you."

I stopped in place and thought for a second, then chuckled myself. "Your right Applejack... Applejack?" I looked around and saw that everyone else went missing. And right at the edge of the acres where we could see Ponyville.

"Huh. Guess they went ahead." I ran towards Ponyville, and as I did, saw a shimmer on the ground. I stopped and looked at it and saw a very thin string. I laughed. "Rainbow Dash, your going to have to try harder than a little trip wire." I turned to my side and used my metal tail to cut it.

When I did, I saw something to my side. "Hey, some money!" I bent down to pick it up and as I did, a trash bag flew right over my head. I got the coin and looked up, seeing the trash on the ground. "HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Sorry Rainbow Dash, but I'm unprankable!"

There was a slightly more annoyed groan and Rainbow Dash came out on one side, while the others came out on the other. "Uh, Blitz? That's... mine." Fluttershy said as she pointed to the coin.

"Oh, here ya go." I flicked it to her and she caught it and put it in her... pocket? Wait, she had pockets on her sides? Do I?

When I checked where my 'pockets' would supposedly be, I found out I did have pockets! Strange thing was, that the wire and iPhone still weren't there, but some money was. I pulled it out and looked at it. 3 gold coins and 2 silver ones.

Oh yeah, I had some money in my pockets before all of this. forty dollars. To be exact, three ten-dollar bills and two fives.

Rainbow Dash saw thee money and smirked. "Okay, Mr. Unprankable, how about a bet? If I can prank you by the end of the day, then you have to give me two gold bits. If I can't prank you by then, I owe you. Deal?" She held out her hoof.

It thought for a second and smiled. Twenty bucks for doing nothing? "Deal. This'll be the easiest two gold bits I've ever made!" I shook her hoof.

"Ha! Yeah it'll be easy. Easy for me!" Rainbow Dash said, confidently.

I frowned. "In your dreams!" I came back with.

Then she frowned at me. "More like your dreams!" She argued.

"Then sweet dreams for me, cause I see a pony called Blitz getting two gold bits out of this." I rhymed. She frowned at that even more and growled at me, which I did to her, not backing down.

"Come on, we need to get to Sugarcube Corner!" Pinkie Pie said, snapping us back to reality.

"Right. Come on Blitz, let's go." Rainbow Dash said with a smirk on her face that said 'idea' all over it. She went over to the group

"Okay then." I said, following right after Rainbow Dash.

When we got to the Sugarcube, I saw that it was a bakery. It looked a little to decorative since it looked like an oversized gingerbread house.

When we got inside it looked just as decorative, with pies, cakes, and other sweets like that. I have to admit, I drooled a little at all of it. "Woah, this food looks delicious!"

"Why thank you." A male voice said. Then, a yellow pony came out from the back room, with a baker's hat and a baker apron. "So this is your new friend?"

"Yeah! He just got here yesterday!" Pinkie Pie said.

"Oh really? Well in that case." He went into the back and came out with a cupcake on a tray, which he balanced on his tail. "Here ya go. Compliments of Sugarcube Corner. Now be careful, it's..." Before he could finish, I already got it from the tray with my left hoove. "hot."

Luckily I wasn't affected by the heat since my left hoof was metal. "Thank you." I told him, happy to get it. I looked and saw that the tray was still on his tail. "How do you balance the tray like that?"

"What this? It's pretty easy once you get the hang of it." I decided to try that out by putting it on my tail carefully. I turned my tail so it was sideways and the cupcake was balanced on it very easily. "Their ya go. It's really easy if you know how to move your tail around at will." I nodded, agreeing with him.

Meanwhile, Rainbow Dash was getting a pie and loaded it on a rubber banner inside the bakery that was promoting cookies. I saw it out of the corner of my eye an smirked. When she launched it I got my wings out and flapped them once, flying over the pie with ease as it went right under me.

I landed and saw that the cupcake was still falling. Quickly I got in position and had it land on my head, the breeze from going up in the sir cooling it off. "Hehehe. Sorry Rainbow Dash, but pie is not going to work. Nice use of the banner as a makeshift slingshot though." Rainbow Dash gritted her teeth at another failed attempt to prank me again.

I looked at where the pie landed and saw Pinkie Pie's face covered in pie. "Oops. Sorry Pinkie Pie." Rainbow Dash said, feeling kinda sorry for getting crossed in the pie cross fire. Pinkie Pie didn't look like she minded though as she just licked the pie off her face and ate it in one swoop of the tongue.

"Mmm! I love apple pie!" Pinkie Pie said as we all laughed.

"Well, time to be headin on to the next place. We have a few other ponies we wanna introduce to ya." Applejack reminded us. We all nodded and left.

I ate my cupcake while flying, both so I could use my hoof to hold it and to get some flying training in without them noticing. As I did, I saw Rainbow Dash, who was flying next to me, in deep thought. Probably wondering how she could prank me next. Well, this is going to be a long day huh?

Well that's the first chapter of the second day in Equestria! I know I already made a chapter for today, but I had this idea all set up and I could not just wait to write it! Anyway, who will win the prank war? The Master of Prank? Or Mr. Unprankable? Who else will they meet today? And will I ever get one of those great cupcakes? Probably not, but I can dream can't I? Oh well, see you all next chapter!

5. Jokes on them!

And welcome to the second chapter of the second story! In this chapter I need to do something different. That's all the warning I'm giving for this episode, so, hope you enjoy it!

Disclaimer: I do not own MLP

After meeting the Cake family, we moved on to look around Ponyville some more. Soon, we came back up the library again. But this time, we met Spike.

"Blitz, I'd like you to meet Spike." Twilight introduced us.

"Woah, so you're the metal pony?" Spike asked in wonder. I glanced over at Twilight.

"Sorry, but Spike's with us a lot of the time and I thought he was bound to find out eventually." She explained. I sighed, but nodded... 'eventually'.

"By the way, I know that there is a book on metal materials. If you want, you can borrow it to try to find a material that would be water-proof. I just need to find it first." Twilight said. That would actually be really helpful. Especially since if I'm a living lightning rod then finding something water proof would keep me from getting electrocuted.

"Oh. I think I know where that book is. Check the closet over there." Rainbow Dash said as she pointed to a closet that was at the other side of the room.

I shrugged and walked over. I'm not going to be paranoid about whether or not she's pranking me. I got to the door and turned the knob. "Wait! Don't open tha-" Spike yelled until Rainbow Dash covered his mouth. Oh, this is TO easy. I opened the door and stood next to the door frame as a large stack of books started falling out.

When it was all over, there were books all over the floor in front of the closet. I smirked at Rainbow Dash, who groaned quietly at another failed attempt to prank me. She's not very good at this is she?

"Great, now I gotta clean all of this up." Spike said as he sighed. I can't just let him clean it all up when it was me and Rainbow Dash's Prank War that caused this.

"Wait, I don't see why we can't help." I said as I picked up a few books around me. Spike smiled greatly, happy he didn't have to clean it all himself. The others joined in and we were done in a few minutes.

The last book I picked up was a pretty funny coincidence. "Hey Rainbow Dash." She looked over. "Guess you were right, the book was in the closet." I showed her the book and she blew out a deep breath to keep herself calm.

So as the day went on, every introduction was the same.

Next we came across the mayor. We met her in town square. While I was there, there was a random gold bit just lying on the ground. Spike, who choose to come with us, got to it first. When he picked it up, the bit just flew out of his hand and landed back on the ground. Spike then chased after it and soon enough, he found himself meeting the wall with his face and then fell to the ground. Rainbow Dash laughed and came out from behind a chimney that was on the roof of the building Spike ran into. When she saw that it was Spike who chased after it and not me she apologized and gave Spike the gold bit as proof she wasn't lying.

Next we went back to the farm. Why was it that we didn't go here first? Either way, I met Applejack's family. Or at least her immediate family. Big Macintosh/Big Mac, and Granny Smith. I thanked them for letting me spend the night in the barn and they said that it was nothing. They seemed like normal friendly farm folk, except that Smith was a little crazy sounding and Big Mac only said two words as far as I heard.

"Now where'd Applebloom go?" Applejack asked. Guess, there was one more family member.

"Applebloom? Oh, I think she went out with her friends to the treehouse they like to be in so much." Granny Smith said.

"Eyup." Big Mac agreed. Well, at least the two words, answered yes and no questions. Simple enough.

"Good. Then we can have Blitz meet all the Cutie Mark Crusaders at once." Applejack asked.

"Cutie Mark Crusaders?" I asked as they all started walking off towards the apple orchard.

"Oh yeah. They call themselves that because their always trying to find a way to earn their Cutie Marks." Spike explained. I nodded, understanding.

That's when I started following them. After a few steps I heard two thuds from just behind me. I looked up and saw Rainbow Dash stomp the top of the barn in slight annoyance.

Granny Smith looked around, confused. "Is it raining hay?" Big Mac shook his head and showed her where Rainbow Dash was.

"Haha! Almost, but you might want to be a little faster than that if you want to prank me!" I laughed at the irony and started to catch up to the others.

Rainbow Dash went up to me when we were right behind the group, looking ticked to say the least. "What do you mean, 'faster then that'?!" She said, mimicking my voice while quoting me. That kind of ticked me off.

"I mean, if you weren't as slow as a turtle when it came to pranks, maybe you'd actually be able to get me before I got out-of-the-way." I said to her. I could feel the others staring at us as we all walked, but I didn't care.

And apparently, neither did Rainbow Dash as she glared at me even more. "You know, I actually have a pet turtle, and he's probably faster than you, you ROBOT!" That? Well, that did it for me.

"Oh! Well then I can see why you can relate to him so much! Your both SO SLOW!" I doubled her glare. We both growled at each other, just as mad as the other.

"Listen you two, we'll settle yer argument later, but right now, let's just say hi to my sis, and her friends alright?" Applejack said, trying to calm us down.

We looked over and saw we were already at the treehouse. We both nodded and looked at each other for a brief second, before looking away in anger.

Meanwhile, the CMC were inside their clubhouse, thinking of ideas on what to do.

"We've tried everything we can think of. What else is there we can do?" Scootaloo asked. She was bored of just sitting around the clubhouse, trying to just think of an idea.

"Well... Maybe we can try and find something around the clubhouse that will give us an idea?" Sweetie Belle asked, unsure if it was a good idea.

"Sure. What else do we have to do?" Scootaloo agreed out of boredom and they all started looking around.

"Paper n' Quill? Maybe we can write a story?" Apple Bloom suggested.

"Nah, to boring." Scootaloo said. Apple Bloom looked around some more.

"OW!" Sweetie Belle bumped her hoof into a toolbox. "A toolbox? Maybe we can build something? Or apply First Aid?" Sweetie Belle suggested as she shook her thumb.

Apple Bloom looked in the toolbox and found that all that was in it was one hammer. "Can't. Not enough tools." Apple Bloom said as she threw the hammer behind her, which accidentally fell out the window.

As me and Rainbow Dash ignored each other by looking in the other direction, the hammer fell right in between us. We both looked and saw the hammer on the ground. I then glared at Rainbow Dash. "What's this? Another bad prank?!"

"Pfft, yeah right! It's probably a bad excuse of a prank from you! Well guess what! You missed!" She yelled at me.

"Oh, yeah I did this! How long did it take for you to come up with that lame excuse?!" I yelled back at her.

We both glared at one another again, this time, standing our ground. We were inches from each other's faces, but we were to angry at each other to care that we were in the other's personal space.

Applejack sighed and shook her head, looking down on us from the clubhouse entrance.

"What else is there in here?" Apple Bloom asked.

"Uh... Oh, I found the left over poison." Scootaloo said as she held up a bottle of it.

"I thought Ms. Cheerliee and my brother drank it all." Apple Bloom said as she looked at the bottle in question. Scootaloo just shrugged

"Well either way, we should get rid of that. All it does is cause trouble." Sweetie Belle said as she frowned at it.

"Yeah, your right." Scootaloo said as she tossed it out the window carelessly.

"DASHIE! BLITZ! LOOK OUT!" Pinkie Pie yelled out as loud as she could as she pointed to a bottle that was falling towards us.

"Huh?" We said simultaneously as we both looked up. That's when it all happened.

The bottle uncorked in mid-air and the liquids fell out of the bottle landing on us. The bottle then hit me and fell to the ground, not shattered.

As we tried to wipe it off, we both accidentally swallowed a few drops each. As I kept wiping it off my face so I could see, I yelled at her. "Oh! And I guess this is another prank I tried to pull on you huh?!"

I could tell she was just as mad when she yelled at me. "Well I didn't do it!"

"Sure you didn't!" I said sarcastically. "TURTLE!" I yelled as I finally got the pink liquid out of my eyes.

"Yeah I am right!" She said, clearing the liquid from her eyes. "ROBOT!"

We glared at each other ten fold! Then everything started to flash purplish as we looked into each other's eyes. Then I could only think one thing while the purple flashes went on. And I could tell she was thinking the same thing.

...

I think I'm in love.

Well, talk about mood swings!... Yeah, I'm really sorry about that joke... Anyway, now that the prank war has turned into a love war, what's going to happen next? Are the mane six and the CMC going to be able to save the Element of Loyalty, Rainbow Dash, and the Metal Pony, Blitz? Will I ever stop asking these questions like I'm Chris Maclean from TDI? All this and more, next chapter!

Also, I know I probably put in a love interest WAY to early, but I thought it would be a good idea for later on! You'll see what I mean eventually. :)

Finally, I think I'm going to start asking questions that relate to the chapter to try and get more reviews, so first question.

What's you favorite MLP pairing? REVIEW!

6. The plan

Hey everypony! This chapter continues on with the second day! I know this is already the third chapter for this one day, and I hope you all are okay with that! Anyway, with this chapter, I promise that there will be some laughs, horrible pet names, and fails throughout all of it!

Also, even this week is my Spring Break so this and maybe one other chapter will be the only ones coming this whole week. Sorry, but my grandparents are coming over and it'll be rude to just ignore them and write a story while they're here. Sorry, but I hope you all understand.

Also, also, this chapter won't be following Blitz like usual. Instead, it will be a 3rd person POV unless I say so.

With that all said, on with the story!

Disclaimer: Since Blitz and Rainbow Dash are preoccupied with the love poison thing, who wants to do the disclaimer?

Pinkie Pie: Oh! Oh! I will! I will! *She waves her hoof in the air like a crazy desperate school pony*

*I look around and see nopony else raising their hooves* Wow, so many ponies to choose... How about Pinkie Pie?

Pinkie Pie: YES! 4428Gamer doesn't own Equestria, or My Little Pony!

Well said Pinkie! On with the story!

Pinkie Pie: YAY!

As Rainbow Dash and Blitz were to busy staring into each other's eyes, Applejack knocked on the door of the CMC clubhouse, ready to get to the bottom of this. When the CMC finally answered te door, they were unaware of what was going on. "Apple Bloom? What was that fancy lookin potion you and yer friends just threw out the window?" Applejack asked with concern.

"Oh that? It was just the love poison from Hearts an Hooves day? Why?" Apple Bloom asked getting concerned a little herself.

"Well... Y'all might wanna look for yerselves." Applejack said as she pointed towards Dash and Blitz.

All three of them gasped at the same time as they saw what throwing the love poison out the window did. "Oh no! We hit Rainbow Dash and somepony else with the poison!" Scootaloo exclaimed. That's when everpony else, not counting Rainbow Dash and Blitz, went over to them.

"Oh, that's Blitz! And guess what?! He's a- mmmhmhmhmhmhmh!" Pinkie Pie almost told them about how Blitz was part metal, but Twilight covered Pinkie's mouth before she could. She already felt bad for telling Spike, and she wasn't going to let any of her friends tell anypony else about Blitz secret.

"Um, we gotta problem. Rainbow Dash and Blitz are gettin away!" Apple Bloom yelled as she pointed to the two, who were starting to fly away towards Ponyville. "If they get away, how will we catch them?"

"No, they aren't gettin away!" Applejack said as she got out her rope and threw it at the two, catching Rainow Dash with it. "I got her!"

As they tried to pull Rainbow Dash back towards them, Rainbow Dash fought back. "BZ!" She called out to Blitz.

He saw and flew over to her, cutting the rope with his metal tail. "Are you okay RD?"

"Yeah, I'm fine now. Thanks to you." She said as their eyes flashed purple again. They flew off towards Ponyville together, holding hooves.

"Gross." Scootaloo said, already not liking that her idle ws acting all goggly eyed. "We need to snap them out of it!"

"Yeah, but look at it this way. It's not as bad as Ms. Cheeliee and Big Mac were." Sweetie Belle said.

"That may be, but it won't be easy getting to them since they can fly." Twilight said. Apple Bloom and Big Mac told Applejack what happened, who in turn told the other mane six.

"Plus, we gotta keep em away from each other for a whole hour." Apple Bloom said.

"Actually, I might know a different way we can cure them! While I'm gone, can I trust all of you to try and keep them apart?" Twilight asked. "The more they look into each other's eyes, the stronger the poison gets." She explained.

"We know. You can count on us Twilight!" Scootaloo said as she and the rest of the CMC saluted.

"Thanks girls. Come on Spike, we need to hurry." Twilight said as Spike got on her back. She then ran towards Everfree forest, looking for a certain shamin to help the group with the issue.

"Well, you all heard Twilight. We must stop the new couple before this gets to out of hand." Rarity said.

"Right. Me, Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom, Rarity and Pinkie will try and catch them from the ground." Applejack said.

"And me and Fluttershy will catch them in the air if they go to the clouds." Scootaloo said, determined to catch them. That, and maybe get a Cutie Mark for being pony hunter. She thought it would look something like handcuffs, or something.

"R-really? Oh, I don't know. I don't think I can catch Rainbow Dash or Blitz..." Fluttershy didn't want to try and stop them. She didn't even know how she would be able to help.

"It'll be a piece of cake Fluttershy, come on!" Scootaloo asked. Fluttershy knew they were the only ones in the group who could stand on the clouds, so she had no choice but to agree.

"Alright everypony, come on! We have two love birds to rangle up!" They all nodded and the three groups went their own directions.

Scootaloo got on her scooter and used her wings to go, Fluttershy flying just as fast next to her. They were headed to the hot air balloon so they could get to the clouds. The Apple sisters, Sweetie Belle, Rarity, and Pinkie all went after Blitz and Dash. As they were all headed off to stop the poison from getting worse, Twilight and Spike were in the Everfree Forest.

"Are you sure that she'll even have a cure for this?" Spike asked, not really sure there was a cure for the love poison.

"I have faith that she will Spike. Besides, she had the cure for the Cutie Pox didn't she?" She had a point, the pony they were trying to find did have a cure for the Cutie Pox. Something nopony even thought there was a cure for.

As Twilight trotted through the forest, they ended up in front of the hut that was made out of a swamp tree. They knocked on the door and a black and grey zebra came out.

"Ah, Twilight and Spike. To what do I owe for this plesent delight?" Zecora asked smiling.

"Hi Zecora. We need your help. You see, Rainbow Dash an a new friend of ours accidently drank a few drops of love potion. We were hoping you had a cure." Twilight explained.

"Oh my! This task that you request, will put even me to the test." Zecora stated with a frown.

"Do you still think you can make it?" Twilight asked.

"Perhaps. But it will be hard, and I will need them in my yard." Zecora explained.

"Your yard? What do you mean by that?" twilight didn't mean what she meant by that.

"I need a mark in the dirt, which should work." Zecora explained further. She needed a magical symbol in the ground to help dispell the potion.

"Alright. Spike, you stay here and help Zecora. I'll get the others to try and get them over here." Twilight told Spike as he got off. Twilight then ran off to Ponyville to tell everypony else about the plan.

When the two groups of ponies on land spotted Dash and Blitz, they were sharing a milkshake, while their eyes flashed purple as they looked at each other.

Applejack looked back at the others, who were hiding behind a hedge with her. "Okay everypony, here's the plan. Pinkie Pie, you distract em." Pinkie Pie nodded determinly, looking as if this plan was the only hope to save the world. "Next, Rarity will use her combined magic to get Blitz away from Rainbow Dash while me, Sweetie Belle, n Apple Bloom will try and get er away by ropin her in." Applejack explained her plan. "Everypony got it?"

"Got it." They all said.

Pinkie Pie got ready. She looked out from the hedge, seeing the ponies still drinking the milkshake. She ducked back down and a few seconds later, appeared in a potted plant with the plant and soil perfectly balanced on her head. She then ducked down from there and reappeared from a bag in a cart somepony was pulling. She then ducked a final time and came out of the Sugarcube Corner doors, which was the building Blitz and Dash were sitting outside at. Pinkie Pie then brought out her pet Gummy and looked for a pony for Gummy to play with. She found a pony who was talking to somepony else and threw Gummy at her, which bit onto the ponies tail. That made the pony scream and run around crazily, scared out of her mind. That did the trick as Rainbow Dash and Blitz looked over to see what all the screaming was.

And that's when they all sprung into action. Rarity used her magic and picked up Blitz, who then thrashed around in the magic to try and get back to Rainbow Dash. When she looked back and saw Blitz trapped in the magic, she tried to ram into Rarity to try and get her to stop her magic. Sadly for her, she was caught by Applejack, who caught a rope around Rainbow Dash's leg.

Applejack, Sweetie Belle, and Apple Bloom kept pulling on the rope, barely keeping Rainbow Dash from getting away. While they were doing that, Rarity had an easier time trapping Blitz in the magic then she thought and started pulling him towards her.

As they kept pulling on the rope, Rainbow Dash got an idea of her own. She then stoppped and turned around in mid-air, facing Applejack and the two CMCs. They were confused as to why, until Rainbow Dash started flying towards them and flew around them as fast as she could, tying up the three. She then got the rope off her hind leg and yanked on it, making the three tied in the rope spin around like crazy. When it was all over they fell to the ground, to dizzy to stand. Rainbow Dash then flew over to see Blitz.

Pinkie Pie, who left Gummy with his new friend for a little bit, went to check and see how everything was going. She appeared out of nowhere right next to Rarity. "Did you get him yet?!" She asked as loud as she could. Which threw off Rarity's focus and got Blitz free.

"Pinkie Pie!" Rarity yelled at her.

"Hehe... My bad!" Pinkie Pie said.

As the two groups tried to get it together, Rainbow Dash and Blitz reunited in a hug in mid-air. They then looked into each other's eyes once again, their eyes flashing purple like last time. "Is my sweety weety Android Cuddle Bear okay?" Rainbow Dash asked, being extremly out of character.

"Only if cutey patoty Rainbow Speed Demon is." Blitz said, also completely out of character. He put a hoof on Rainbow Dash's cheek, and she nuzzled her face deeper into his hoof. "Hey, you want to go for a fly in the clouds?" He asked.

"I'd love to." Rainbow Dash said. With that, they flew up to the clouds, away from Applejack and the rest of the group.

"Dag nabit!" Applejack pounded her hoof to the ground. "They got away!"

"Bleeeh!" Apple Bloom said, disgusted with the pet names. "Those pet names are getting worse!"

"That must mean that the love poison's getting worse too." Sweetie Belle added on.

"Well we simply must hurry. I don't think I could be comfortable making Rainbow Dash a wedding dress when all of this is built on a lie." Rarity said. They all gave her bored looks, but not counting Pinkie Pie, who was thinking the same thing but with parties.

Then, Twilight ran over to them. Upon seeing them all slightly annoyed she figured that Blitz and Dash had just gotten away. "What's going on?"

"Well, I'm trying to decide what color would be best for the wedding, and Rarity's-"

"Not about the weddin! She means what JUST happened here." Applejack interupted.

"Those two got away and went towards the clouds. Fluttershy and Scootaloo took the hot air balloon to get up so we don't have a way to follow them." Sweetie Belle summerized for everypony else.

"Hmm... Maybe there is a way! Rarity, think you wouldn't mind having wings again?" Twilight asked as she was coming up with a plan.

"I don't know. The last time thoses fragile wings broke, I was tramutized!" Rarity said, acting overdramatic.

Twilight sighed. She thought that Rarity would have a better chance at navigating around since she had wings before. "Fine, guess I'm going up myself." She said as she started to use her magic. After her horn glowing, she had butterfly wings appear on her. "Okay, I have an idea. You guys head over to Zecora's. She might need your help to gather ingrediants." She looked at her wings and took a deep breath before using them. Turns out it was easier to use the wings then she thought and she was in the air in no time. She started to fly towards where Dash and Blitz had gone.

Well, one plan down, two to go! How do Scootaloo and her travelling cloud, and Fluttershy think they're going to stop Blitz and Rainbow Dash? Will Zecora's plan work? How long are Twilight's wings goin to last? Was that last question actually important? Half of these questiions answered nxt chapter!

I just wanted to say, before anyone corrects me on this. This story is before Twilight got her wings and became an alicorn. So before anyone corrects me, keep that in mind pleased.

Question of the chapter: What is the overall WORST pet name you ever heard? And if you've never heard a horrible pet name in real life, what's the worst one you can think of for any characters in MLP?

7. The cure and the truth

Hey! I'm BAAAAAAAAAAACCCCCCCKKKKKKKK! Yeah, I know I said I wouldn't be putting that many chapters up during my week off from school, but I at least wanted to finish up the day in this story. I might also put in one more chapter, but I don't think I can. Turns out my mom needs surgery so she's going to be out of commission a few days. Which means me and my step-dad will need to cook, look after the dogs, and other stuff. So yeah, see you all maybe towards the end of the week.

Scootaloo and Fluttershy were going around the sky, on the look out for Blitz and Dash. Scootaloo was on a small, lone cloud, using her wings to get around as if she was on a flying scooter. Fluttershy was right next to her, flying next to the cloud.

"Do you see either of them yet?" Scootaloo asked.

"No. Maybe Applejack and the others already stopped them and- oh wait. No, there they are." Fluttershy said calmly as she pointed over to the two, who were sitting on a cloud. They were looking out towards the sun, which was about to be a sunset.

"Great! Now, all we have to do is separate them." Scootaloo said.

"I don't know. What if they get mad at us for trying to separate them?" Fluttershy asked, thinking that if they made Blitz and Dash mad by separating them, they would attack her and Scootaloo.

"Then I guess you can be the Mare of Honor." Scootaloo said to Fluttershy, which made her understand how important it was. Fluttershy shook her head no. "Good, then come on. I got a plan." They went over to the two.

Scootaloo tried her idea. "Hey Rainbow Dash, look! It's the Wonderbolt's!" Scootaloo exclaimed as she pointed in a random direction.

Rainbow Dash simply shrugged it off and Scootaloo's jaw dropped. She looked where she was pointing and ironically there was an actual wonderbolt. Spitfire to be exact. "Rainbow Dash, it's Spitfire! You know, your idol!" Scootaloo yelled as she looked at Rainbow Dash.

"I don't need an idol. I have my Android Cuddle Bear." Rainbow Dash said as she leaned on Blitz.

"But, but, but... What?" Scootaloo thought that would get through to Rainbow Dash at least a little.

Fluttershy then thought of something. "Um... Blitz? Your sitting on a rain cloud. You might rust up." Scootaloo was confused about what sense that made, but Blitz just shrugged.

"I'm perfectly fine as long as I'm with my Rainbow Speed Demon." Blitz said. They each stared into each others eyes and flashed purple for the umpteenth time again.

Scootaloo backed up, as did Fluttershy. "How are we supposed to get them separated?

"I think I have an idea." Twilight said as she flew up with the butterfly wings.

"Awesome! What is it? Giant barrier? Some blinding spell? Teleporting?" Scootaloo asked with a determination to help her idol.

"No. The others gave me an idea. We just need to trick them into going to Zecora's." Twilight explained.

"Okay. So how do we do that?" Scootaloo asked again.

"It's going to be like how you three tricked Big Mac and Cheerliee into separating to get married." Twilight said. "What were going to do is..." She huddled up with Scootaloo and Fluttershy so they could hear it, but not Rainbow Dash or Blitz.

When they were done they all nodded and Scootaloo and Fluttershy left towards Zecora, leaving Twilight to deal with the problem. She flew over with a smile. "Hey you two. How are you doing?" She asked friendly.

"Were perfect, right here." Rainbow Dash said as she looked at Blitz.

"Great! You know, I'm surprised you two haven't taken the next step. Marriage." Twilight said smiling, already putting her plan to action.

They both smiled, then frowned. "We wish. Were to young for that." Rainbow Dash said. Twilight was a little ticked that the poison wasn't strong enough to make them ignore that little detail, but her smile didn't falter.

"Well, Zecora can help. She can perform a ritual that can get you two married." As soon as Twilight finished that sentence, Rainbow Dash and Bllitz were already flying towards Zecora's hut as fast as they could. Twilight smiled a little more, knowing her plan was working. She flew after them towards Zecora's hut, where everpony else was waiting.

As the two love poison victims got to the hut in question, they didn't see anypony there. Only some wierd giant symbol in the ground. "Hello? Zecora?" Rainbow Dash called out, hoping that she was here.

"NOW!" Applejack called out. She and Big Mac, which Applejack brought on the way over to Zecora's, both through rope at Rainbow Dash, both catching her from different legs. There was no way Rainbow Dash could use the rope against them and she was caught.

"Rainbow Speed Demon!" Blitz cried out in shock. He charged for the rope Big Mac had, but was stopped once again by Rarity's magic. They were both captured and had no way to escape.

Twilight landed then, seeing them both captured. "Were sorry, but this is the only way to cure you both." They weren't really listening, as they tried to get to one another.

"With them both in place, put them in the symbol's base." Zecora instructed as she came out with a small bottle in hand and Spike next to her.

"You got it Zecora! Big Mac, move em to the middle!" Applejack instructed. "Eyup" Big Mac agreed as he and Applejack moved Rainbow Dash over to the center of the symbol.

"Alright." Rarity said. As she moved Blitz to the symbol, Blitz tried to get out as hard as he could. After Blitz twitched, Rarity's magic around him broke and he was free. Sadly for him, Twilight was ready for this and caught Blitz herself with her magic, which was way stronger. She moved him to the center and he was put in place with Rainbow Dash.

As soon as they were in place, Zecora nodded to Spike. He then walked over to the side of the symbol and breathed fire on it, making the rest of the symbol light up on fire. Everyone was far enough away so they wouldn't be burned. As for Rainbow Dash and Blitz, they were surrounded by flames that acted as a cell. There was no room for them to spread their wings to fly, so they were stuck.

The flames then turned purple and went towards Blitz and Dash, covering them in the purple flames. After a few seconds, the flames went away and Dah and Blitz were sitting there, rubbing their heads since they had a bad headache.

Blitz POV

Uh... What happened? I feel as if my head just got hit by a train. When I looked up I saw that everyone around me was looking at me and Rainbow Dash, who looked like she had just as bad a headache as me. "Okay... Why do I have a really bad headache? And why are we in some swamp looking place?" Everyone then either sighed in relief or cheered. "Hello? Anyo-pony want to fill me in here?" I almost said anyone, but they were all to happy to notice.

"Me too. Why do I feel like I just crashed into a wall?" Rainbow Dash asked as she rubbed her head just like me.

"Well, you both fell in love." Twilight said. "What?" Me and Rainbow Dash asked simultaneously.

"You called each other Rainbow Speed Demon and Android Cuddle Bear." Apple Bloom said with a snicker. "What?" We both asked again. I had no idea what they meant by that.

"We decided that neither of you like pink, and Gummy made a new friend!" Pinkie Pie said as she held up an alligator that didn't have teeth. "Huh?" Okay, what did that even mean?

"Rainbow Dash turned down meeting Spitfire from the Wonderbolts just to be with Blitz." Scootaloo said. "WHAT?!" Rainbow Dash asked, screaming into my good ear since she was right next to me. It made my headache even worse, but somehow I was still able to hear.

"And we had to trick you two to get into this magical ritual to get rid of the love poison by telling you Zecora could marry you two." Fluttershy of all people/ponies summed up. "What?!" We both said at the same time, shocked.

"Okay, hold on a second, can one of you just tell the whole story?" I asked. I don't know if I wanted to listen to this story or not, but I was too curious to ignore whatever happened.

Well, I really am speechless. They all took turns telling the story from their point of view, from when we blacked out because of the potion, to when we got here. During the story, the CMC and Big Mac all went home because it was already dark when all of us got here, so it was just the mane six, Zecora, and me. "All of that happened?" I asked.

They all nodded simultaneously. With all of them circled around us, it was like they were witches. To add onto the wierd ambiance, we were in the middle of a swamp, in front of a shaman's house, and we were standing on a wierd looking symbol. "At least it's over." Rainbow Dash said, which I nodded to in agreement.

"Ya know, it was probably a good thing that potion fell on y'all." Applejack said. We both frowned because we were mad and confused as to why she said that.

"What are you talking about?" I asked.

"She does have a point. If that potion never spilt on you two, then you would have just kept arguing." Twilight said.

I opened my mouth to say she was exaggerating, but when I couldn't think of anything to say against that, I just closed it right back.

"Okay, maybe we went to far on the prank war." Rainbow Dash admitted.

"Yeah, your right. Sorry I called you a turtle, Rainbow Dash. And sorry I mocked your pranks." I said, sincerely... Wait, why does this sound like were at the end of the cheesy cartoon?

"It's alright. Sorry I called you a robot, Blitz." Rainbow Dash said. "Truce?" She held out her hoof to shake.

"Truce." I agreed and we shook hooves. As soon as she touched my left hoof though, she immediately took her hoof back.

"OW! Why does your hoof feel like it's on fire?!" She asked while waving her burnt hoof in the air.

"Huh?" I looked at my left hoof and thought of something. The flames must've made the metal as hot as a gas oven.

To test it, I picked up a leaf that was next to me and put it on my left arm. It started smoking and sizzling. After a few seconds, it caught fire. "Woah!" I yelled out as I put it on the ground and put it out.

Without even looking, I could tell that all eyes were on me. Good thing I didn't have stage fright. "I can explain." I said calmly with a sigh. I looked up and sure enough they were all looking at me, wondering what happened.

"My tail isn't the only thing made of metal." I said. They all walked over so they weren't all spread out.

"So, your front left hoof is made of metal too?" Twilight asked.

I couldn't hide the truth. With all that's gone on either way they would walk away and ignore me from here on out. Way to go Blitz, you lost all your friends in just two days. "Yes, but that's not all. My whole front left leg is metal, along with my tail, left ear, some of my heart, and some other parts." I said, looking down because I didn't want to see their shocked/disgusted faces.

"Oh my. You poor thing." Fluttershy said. Pity, the first reaction I usually get.

"How could anypony live like that?" Rarity asked with amazement and what sounded like disgust. Ah, disgust. The second reaction.

"How did all of this happen?" Twilight asked next. Curiousness. The third reaction. I simply sighed at that, remembering it all to well.

Now for the fourth reaction I get. Seperation and fear. The one where everyone treats me like the freak that has no emotions since I'm 'part robot'.

"Do you have, like, super mega robot powers?!" Pinkie asked as she acted and talked like a stereotypical robot. And there was the reaction of... Wait, what did she ask?

"What?" I said with confusion, as I looked at Pinkie.

"Do. You. Have. Robot. Powers?" Pinkie said, still talking and acting like a robot.

"I... I don't get it... How come you guys aren't treating me like a freak?" I asked, very confused. Were these ponies stupid or something, everyone always thinks I'm a freak.

"Why would we treat you like a freak? It's not like your any different by being a robot or anything. " Rainbow Dash said, confused herself.

"It's because I'm part robot. Everybo-pony always treats me like a freak because I'm not... All me." I said, pointing to my metal leg.

"Just because you are not organic, does not mean we should all panic." Zecora told me as she went over to us, bringing over a wet rag for me to cool down my leg.

I took the wet rag and started cooling off my leg. I really didn't know what to say. "I... I... Thank you. Thank you all." I said, stunned that they're treating me no different. I was so happy that I actually had a few friends that liked me, even with the robot part of me. I didn't do anything like tear up or anything, mainly because I learned the hard way that crying doesn't help anything but make you look like a loser, but that's a story for another day.

To stop the moment from getting anymore touching, Applejack yawned, then spoke up. "Whooowe! It's gettin late everypony, we should hit the hay." She said.

"Applejack's right. It's pretty late." Twilight agreed. I just shrugged, not caring how late it was.

"Wait, robots don't even need to sleep?! That means you could have a party at any moment you wanted!" Pinkie Pie deduced. Did everything she think of lead to parties?

I shook my head at her, talking in third person for laughs. "No, us robots need to sleep too. I'm just a night owl." I explained.

"Well just because you're a Night Owl, doesn't mean we are. Someponies need their buety sleep." Rarity said.

After that we all headed to our homes, me going back to the barn. Really, I need to stop being a mooch and get my own place. Maybe I can keep this bale of hay as a bed though, because this thing is way more comfy then it should be.

And there is the second day! I won't make EVERY day like this, some days there will be nothing and will move on without some action, but the first few will have something. Anyway, I hope you all enjoyed this chapter! Please leave a review saying how cool, or lame, my story was. It lets me know just how to improve it.

Question of the chapter: If you can have one superpower, BUT JUST ONE, what would it be?

And I don't mean some thing vague like spider powers. I mean something like climbing on walls, OR shooting webs, OR spider senses.

All review answers will be put on top of the next chapter!

8. Dreaming

Before this chapter starts, I just want to say, THANK YOU! All of you! As of last chapter we have reached 1000 views! I thank each and every one of you for seeing the chapters and helping me to reach this milestone! I thank the people who have favorited and followed this story, my friends that read this, my family for giving me a laptop to type on, my dog because I said so, and the lamp that is in my room!... Anyway, this chapter is going to be different. You'll see what I mean as you start to read it.

Disclaimer: I don't own MLP in any way.

Huh... What's going on?... As I got up to look around, I saw I was surrounded by pure black nothingness. Am I... Dreaming? I wondered. To try and see if I was, I stomped on the ground as I imagined me in a forest. When I looked around, I was. Woah, a Lucid Dream! I almost never have these! I was so excited as I looked around some more. It was an average forest. Grass with patches of dirt here and there, a lake towards my right, and I was in an opening that was surrounded by trees.

I looked in the sky and saw a star lit night with a full moon, which had a shape in it that looked like a pony's head.

"Huh... That's odd." I said out loud. I turned around to face the lake and bumped into some pony. When I looked up to see who it was, since they were bigger than me, I saw a dark blue pony with a mane and tail that looked like the night sky. "Woah! Who are you?!" said as I got up, surprised to see a pony twice my size come out of literally NO WHERE!

"I am Princess Luna, but you may simply call me Luna. I have come to visit thy dreams, Zeke." The mystery pony, that was apparently royalty, somehow knew my name. THAT, shocked me.

"How, how, how do you..." I tried to say, not sure what to say. Luckily, she knew what I was trying to say.

"Know your real name?" I nodded. "Well, I have been watching your dreams for the last three days now. Even though you didn't know what you were dreaming about, I was able to tell." She explained. Okay, so she could watch people's dreams. Creepy, yet cool.

"So you know everything about me?" I asked, believing that was the truth.

"No, not everything. Only what thou has dreamed about. You dreamed about how you came to this world by portal, what it was like in, what I assume was a school, in your world, and the tragic incident." She explained further. Well it made sense because I remember having nightmares about that day so many times, it felt like it was my regular morning routine. "Anyway, that is why I have visited you when you had a lucid dream. I'm curious as to how and what happened, as is my sister, Princess Celestia."

Well, all of it made sense now at least. It's probably a good thing I explain it to her now. Because if she finds out that this world is a kid's cartoon in my world, then I will have tons of explaining to do about something I know so little about. "Alright, then what do you want to know?" I finally asked.

"Well, what is the name of thou kind? How is thou culture? Why did your kind act that way towards thee?" Princess Luna shot out the questions one after another. I hushed her, not scared of what she would do because if this was a lucid dream, then I could do whatever I wanted just like her. And I could think up so much more weapons and stuff in here

Speaking of doing whatever I wanted, if this is a lucid dream in a world with magic... I closed my eyes and imagined me turning back into a human. When I opened my eyes, I was about the same height as Princess Luna, who was amazed at me. I looked at myself and sure enough, I was human. Luckily with the same clothes that I had on before the portal incident. "Man, I wish I had more lucid dreams."

From there on out, I started explaining everything she asked. I told her we were called humans and that we were the dominant species. I laughed while I was explaining it because it felt like I was in a Sci-Fi movie or something. Next, I told her it's a lot like this culture, except that there were multiple ones all around our world, and that our world didn't have magic. And anyone that did believe in magic was ignored or did it for entertainment. Finally, I started explaining why the people in my world treated me the way they did.

"You see, everyone in our world likes to be around people who act very similar. Since I only had one friend before the accident, I was then treated differently by everyone except that friend who still saw me as me instead of a freak. When that friend moved away to another city, it was me against social life. So, I was an outcast and I had no friends. I learned to coupé with it and eventually, even when someone came to beat me up, I just stood my ground and let them beat me. I learned that there was no point in being scared anymore because there was no way my life could get worse. I lost my mom, my dad and his new family hated me, I was alone, and to top it all off, I was a cyborg." I summed up.

Princess Luna had some kind of a mixed expression when I finished. She felt sorry for me, that was obvious, but she also was... Happy. "Well, I know you can tell from your time here that this world is different. We don't ignore others like your world does. We don't ignore each other for no good reason."

"I've noticed. But... I don't know what to do. I don't think it's a good idea for me to stay in this world." I said with a frown of my own.

"I doubt you'd prefer being treated like that any longer. Here, you have friends who accept you for you." She said.

"I know, which is why it's so hard to decide. I don't belong here, and the more I hide my past with lies, the harder it'll get to explain myself. And the more I stay here, the more I don't want to leave. It just seems selfish to stay here though." I said as I stood up. While talking about my world, I imagined a recliner and sat in it. She said I was using my lucid dream powers like Discord, whoever that was.

"Then tell Twilight and her friends the truth. They'll understand." Luna assured me. I shook my head.

"What would I say? 'Oh hey everypony! You know when I said I'm from here? Well turns out I'm actually from another dimension where I'm a human, something non of you have ever heard of, and I just lied to you all because I thought you'd call me crazy!'." I shook my head again. "I can see the ponies stuffing me in a straight jacket, and throwing me into a mental patient room now." I told her.

She sighed. "thou needs to learn to trust in others more." She told me. I wasn't convinced and she picked up on that. "If you want, I can meet with my sister and arrange you and your friends to come. They will believe you no matter what, but it will be easier if we assist you." She said.

I smiled. Honestly, that was probably the best thing to do. She was right, I needed to explain myself to them. If not later, then sooner. "Thank you. I owe you one." I said sincerely.

"Nay. Thou owes me nothing. You just try and think things through Zeke. You have much stress between this issue." I nodded. "If there is anything else you are in need of, you best ask quickly. There is only an hour until sunrise."

Actually... "There is one thing. I don't know much about your culture, other than your all herbivores. You are way more friendly than my world, and that there's Pegasus, normal ponies, unicorns, and I'm sorry for saying so, whatever you are." I said. "Could you help me understand stuff like that?" I asked.

"Of course. I guess I should begin explaining who I am. Me and my sister are co-rulers of Equestria..." As she went on, I took mental notes on everything she had to say.

She talked about who the rulers were, some cities around Ponyville, evil creatures like Discord and Chrysalis, and how they said 'somepony' instead of 'somebody'. Honestly, it was nice to learn about all this stuff so I wouldn't be clueless if someone asked.

Finally, she stood up herself. "I'm afraid I must go. I will tell Princess Celestia about what you have told me, and thou can then expect a letter instructing all of you to come to Canterlot in some time. I'm not sure when you can all come, but just be prepared." She told me. I nodded at her, making another mental note to be ready for that.

Then I remembered something else and snickered. "Hey Luna? Could you say something real quick?" I asked.

She was confused at what I meant. "What does thou mean?" She asked.

"I'm just asking if you can say something real quick. Can you say, 'You shall not pass' as loud as you can?" I asked, trying to keep from laughing.

"Alright..." She cleared her thought and spoke in her Traditional Canterlot Voice, "YOU SHALL NOT PASS!" It was so loud I flew back a few feet, but I didn't care because I was laughing so hard. "What was so funny?" She asked, obviously confused.

"It's just... It was so funny... Because that quotes... From a really famous play!" I had to pause in between what I was saying, I was laughing so hard. She sounded just like a female version of Gandalf, all she was missing was a staff and a beard. She apparently got why it was so funny and laughed a little herself.

"Goodbye Zeke. I will see you in time." Princess Luna said. And with that, she disappeared. I gotta say, that was probably the funniest dream I've ever had.

And there you have it! Honestly, this is my favorite chapter of them all in my opinion! It doesn't have that much sadness, it has humor, and it has an overused movie quote that I just couldn't pass up the opportunity of making Luna say it. Stay tuned for the next chapter, which will have two different things happening. See you all whenever I put up a new chapter!

Question of the chapter: What is the first famous quote you can think of off the top of your head! (Can be from tv, internet, speeches, etc.)

9. Old Mare Crankle

Well, with this chapter beginning, we move onto the third day! What's going to happen today? War on changelings? Cotton candy clouds? Something so insignificant you probably wouldn't expect it? Probably the last one, but what do I know? Anyway, with all of that mini monologue finished, let us begin.

Disclaimer: I do not own the following things: MLP, Earth, a brain, stylish looking carpets, stuff like that! I have no idea why I put carpets in that list... I'm probably getting a bad case of Pinkie Personality or something... Oh well, CHAPTER TIME!

Another day, another comfortable night on the hay bale. Oh well, time I do something without me falling in love, or any other unsuspected problem. Okay so the first thing on my imaginary to do list is get a job. Second, get my own house. Third, ask if I can have this hay bale as a be- you know what, screw the hay bale, I'm getting to addicted to sleeping on this thing.

Without warning, I took off flying out the window. I saw Big Mac headed towards the barn, and stopped when he saw me flying out. Guess he was coming over to wake me up or something. Oh well, guess I just made his job easier. Especially since it would take a bull horn to the face just to wake me up.

As I flew over Ponyville I saw them all walking around. You know, why was it exactly that I got wings again? I was never fast or anything like that when I was a human, but here I am with wings. I'm not complaining or anything, but I still didn't get the connection. Maybe it was the personality or some kind of mental connection.

After a while of flying around, I landed on a cloud and just watched the whole city. There was some kind of market place, a clock tower, a construction site, the town square, tons of places. Out of all of that, I focused on the construction stuff the most. I always like building stuff, but I never really focused on it that much with everything else that went on in my life.

"What's up Blitz?" I turned around and saw Rainbow Dash land on a cloud that was nearby mine.

I just shrugged. "Eh, nothing. Just bored. Besides hanging out with all of you guys, I got nothing to do. I think I should find something, like a job. That, and my own place." I explained.

After a few seconds, Rainbow Dash spoke up. "Ya know, they say there's an abandoned old house just outside of Ponyville that way." She said, pointing towards one direction.

"Really? That's convenient. Just how abandoned is it?" I asked.

"It's pretty run down, so it needs to be fixed up. The Ponyville Construction Crew always says there going to fix it, but they don't for some reason." She said as she shrugged. She said 'some reason' sarcastically. So it was obvious that she knew what it was.

"And that reason is?" I asked, curious to know.

"You mean you don't know?" She asked. I shook my head and she smirked at me. "Well, the reason is that they say it's haunted by a pony called Old Mare Crankle. Legend says, any pony that goes inside, never comes out!" She said, trying to scare me.

I simply smiled at that. "Cool. Maybe while I'm there she'll make me cookies or something." I said, making Rainbow Dash smirk at me,

"Oh, she makes cookies alright. For her VICTIMS!" She stomped on the cloud she was on, making thunder sound off to make it sound more 'terrifying'.

I shook my head. "Tsk tsk tsk. You can't fool me Rainbow Dash. I just can't be tricked." I told her. She shrugged.

"Fine. Don't believe me. Just don't come crying to me when you hear the rattling of old pony bones coming from the house." She said, trying to act all spooky.

"Fine, I'll believe you. If you admit your scared of the haunted house." I pointed to her and put air quotes around 'haunted house' with my hooves. It was obvious she still wanted to prank me.

"Pfft, I'm not scared of the Crankle House." She said, looking off to the side.

I flew over an looked her right in the eyes. "Oh yeah? Prove it. I dare you to go in the Crankle House and wander the house for one whole hour. Do that, and make it back alive," I said with a spooky demeanor. "And I'll believe that you're not afraid of the house." The whole thing wasn't meant to scare her, it was just to catch her before she even had a chance to play some joke on me.

She bit her lower lip in thought. There was no way she would be able to wrap me in this. "Fine. You want me to go in the Crankle House? Your on! But, to prove your not a wimp, your coming too." Rainbow Dash said.

"Sure. And while were at it, lets invite the others to go through the house with us." I said sarcastically. Why would I agree to go in the same time as her? She would probably end up 'disappearing' and I'd be a sitting duck.

"Actually, that's a great idea!" Rainbow Dash yelled out. What did I just do?

"Your kidding right? I was joking! With sarcasm!" I said, trying to get her to come back to her senses. There was no way on Earth or Equestria some of them would come without needing an ambulance to wheel them out of some Rainbow Dash planned haunted house.

"Duh, I knew that. But it's still a great idea! I'll get Fluttershy, Rarity, and Applejack. You get Twilight, Spike, and Pinkie Pie, along with seeing the mayor about getting the house! This is going to be so cool!" Before I could stop her from thinking of whatever dumb idea was going through her head, she flew off.

I stomped the dark cloud I was on in frustration with my left hoof, but something odd happened then. The electricity in the cloud went into my metal arm, making it turn into a normal cloud. "What the..." The strange thing was, I didn't feel anything. I mean, I felt my arm buzzing with the electricity, but it didn't hurt. Either way, this was getting WAY to wierd. I didn't know what to say and just sat there, staring at my arm which had electricity zapping around it.

"What's going on?!" finally blurted out, to shocked to say anything. I had to get this lightening off of me! But HOW?! Wait! Lightning goes into the ground if it makes contact with it right?! Maybe if I just land on the ground it'll go away!

So I started flying as fast as I could towards the ground, but I felt like I was flying down like a bullet! I barely kept myself from face planting into the ground from the speed! When I did land I put my left front hoof in the ground, and the electricity went away. I took a deep breath and calmed down, knowing it was over, but I couldn't help but fall to the ground in relief.

"What was that?!" I shot up and saw Spike right there in front of me.

"Uh... Uh... I don't know what you're talking about!" I finally said. Yeah, that was convincing. You just flew out from the sky going faster than a rocket, and you don't know what happened? Smart Blitz. Real smart.

"I mean, how did you just fly towards the ground about three-quarters as fast as Rainbow Dash's Sonic Rainboom!" Spike exclaimed with excitement.

"Wait! I knew I was going FAST, but I didn't know it was THAT fast!" I yelled out, standing up immediately. I went that fast

"Yeah! You left some yellow light behind you and everything!" We both sounded like we were both little kids watching a giant firework on the fourth of July.

"Spike? Spike where did you go?" Twilight saw us and came over. "Oh, hey Blitz. Did you happen to see what that flash of yellow was?" She asked curiously.

"Yeah! It was me!" I yelled out.

"What? But... How? How were you going that fast?" She asked, still curious.

"Well... I don't really know actually. I was looking around Ponyville on a cloud over head and then Rainbow Dash was talking about Old Mare Crankle's house, and took off. I was mad that she wouldn't stop and come to her senses, so I stomped on the thunder-cloud with my metal leg in frustration, and then I absorbed the electricity! Next thing I know, I rocketed down here so I could get rid of the electricity that was in my arm." I explained to them

"Wow. Your like a living lightning rod!" Spike yelled out. Twilight nudged him, trying to get him to stop talking, but he didn't. "It's like you have robot powers!" He exclaimed.

As Twilight covered up his mouth with her hoof, I closed my eyes in thought, then opened them. "Wow, your right." I agreed.

That's when they realized the other thing I said. "W-wh-wait! Rainbow Dash talked about Old Mare Crankle's house? W-why would she talk about that?!" Spike asked, scared about the name.

"Yeah, I was asking if she knew somewhere I could stay, so I wouldn't be taking up space in Applejack's barn, and she said that the house outside of Ponyville was abandoned. She tried to scare me, but I didn't fall for it. Long story short, I made a sarcastic joke about all of us going in, she took it seriously, and now she wants all of us to check out the house." I summed up.

"Why would you give her that idea? That house is haunted!" Spike said, trying to shake me to add onto effect.

"Oh come on. Whether ghosts are real or not, the house won't be haunted." I explained.

"Oh thank you, somepony who listens to the facts! See, there is no such thing as ghosts Spike!" She said, gesturing to me.

"I never said that. Until there is proof that there is, or isn't ghosts, I'm on the fence about it." I clarified. My mother always told me a story about a 'friendly ghost' that visited her, but I was a kid at the time so I didn't know what to think of it. I still don't actually.

She shrugged, not really minding. "Oh well, at least you have a reason to be with or against the idea." Twilight said. She then got an idea. "Spike, we need to go to that house!"

Spike looked like he was paler than a ghost itself. "Your kidding, right Twilight?!" He asked while shivering his tail off.

"No Spike. If we go in that house, we can prove once and for all to everypony in Ponyville that there is no 'Old Mare Crankle' spirit." Twilight said.

"Well, whether there is or not, I'm going to try to live there. I think it's about time I get my own place to live." I informed them, happy that I was actually going to get something accomplished the day I went out to do it.

"Wait a second! Your going to live in that house?! Are you insane?!" Spike asked, shocked and scared half to death.

"Yeah. I figured if there really is a ghost in that house then maybe it can help keep everything from getting to quiet and boring." I said, laughing a little. Twilight giggled and Spike just looked at us like we were crazed mental patients.

"Well, if you can fix that house from falling apart, then that wouldn't be a bad idea. You just need to get the deed from the mayor." Twilight pointed out.

"Yeah, Rainbow Dash told me about that. She said that I needed to get that, and convince you two along with Pinkie to come." I told her, catching her up to speed.

"Sure, we'll come." Twilight spoke to both of them.

"Sorry Twilight, but I can't come. I have to... watch the library!" Spike yelled out, trying to excuse himself.

"It's okay Spike. We won't be gone that long." Twilight assured Spike.

"Okay... Well I still need to help Rarity! She needs to find more gems for her latest outfit." Spike made another excuse.

"Nope. Rainbow Dash is getting Rarity to come with all of us. You don't need to help her." I informed Spike, smirking since I knew he was trying to get out of it.

He glared at me slightly, knowing I pointed that out for the fun of it. "You know, it kinda sounds like your asking us come just because Rainbow Dash asked you to." Spike pointed out, smirking.

"What did you just say?" I asked, mad. That dragon better not be saying what I think he's saying, or else I'll try and see what else I can do with my lightning powers.

"Come on you two, we need to get Pinkie Pie and the deed so we can prove that this legend is just a rumor." Twilight interrupted, already heading out towards the mayor's office.

We looked back at the other and nodded, calling a silent truce. We caught up to her and continued on our way.

Pretty interesting indeed. Well, with all of the group coming to the house, what will they find in that house? Oh the possibilities of a T rated story... Who knows what I'm going to put for something that's horror related? I think I'm still suffering from Pinkie Personality, so even I don't know what I'm going to write yet. Or do I? Anyway, review!

Question of the chapter: Do you believe in ghosts?

10. Group up and seperate

Welcome all bros, bronies, random viewers that were bored, and any combination of the three! This is the tenth chapter of many to come! As of now I have a few chapter ideas already lined up, so some chapters might start coming fast. To limit you guys getting overloaded with chapters, I'm limiting it to one a day at the most. Sorry, but it helps me as well.

With that all said and typed, let us begin!

Disclaimer: I don't own MLP

After we got the deed from the mayor's office, me, Spike, and Twilight were now heading over to Sugarcube Corner. "You know, I think Rarity might need my help with something today. Guess I can't come to the haunted spooky house, oh well." Spike said. "See you guys later!" He tried to run to the library, but I stopped him.

"Rarity's coming with us." I told him. He sighed in defeat and we all kept walking.

When we finally got there, we went in and saw Pinkie Pie playing with Gummy. "Hey Pinkie Pie." Twilight said.

"Oh hi Twilight! Hi Spike! Hi Blitz!" She said, looking extremely happy like usual.

"Hi Pinkie Pie. Hey, everypony else is going to the Old Mare Crankle House. Want to come?" I asked. I knew that explaining everything would be a waste of time, so I just asked.

"Sure!" She said, not even bothering to question it. Wow, how was I right? I bet if I told her we were all jumping off a bridge she would come too.

"Great. Well let's go. Everypony else is going to meet us there." I turned around and started walking. The three of them following me. I really only went in the direction the mayor pointed out earlier, and I was apparently going the right way because Spike was getting more and more scared as we went on. Twilight was to focused on being determined to prove that there was no ghost and I was never good at calming people down, so Pinkie Pie just kept talking to Spike. It was either going to make him calm down or freak out more so I just hoped it was the first one.

When we finally got there, I saw the house for the first time. It looked like a giant tree stomp the size of a mansion. In a way, it looked like Luigi's Mansion, no joke. The top two middle windows looked like eyes, glaring at us. The whole house was covered in vines, so it looked like a sickly green color. And to top off the scariness, it was on a high, lone hill, with a lightening rod on the top, so thunder clouds were floating over head.

"So you guys finally made it?" Rainbow Dash asked. She, along with a scared to death Fluttershy, cautious Applejack, and shivering Rarity went up to us.

"Yeah. Well you were right, the house is abandoned." I gave her that, it has obviously been abandoned for a long time.

"Yep. You can just admit your scared now. I mean, you're already shivering!" Rainbow Dash said, laughing at me.

"Not me." I said. I picked up Spike, who was hiding behind me. He was shaking so much he was shaking me. "Same goes for you. I'm the one that's living here, none of you don't have to come." I pointed out.

"Wait a second there Blitz. Yer saying that you're gonna stay here? Why?" Applejack asked.

"Because I just don't think that staying in your family's barn is a good idea. It's almost like I'm taking advantage of your kindness. Besides, this house looks really cool." I said, looking at it.

"Are you insane?! What appeal does this home have to anypony?! It is even terrifying just to look at!" Rarity pointed out. True, it didn't look that good now. But after it got fixed up it would look like any other house, if not better.

"Well, as soon as I get rid of the vines, maybe clear up some of the thunder clouds, then it should be way more welcoming." I said, already picturing what it would look like.

"Yeah right! I bet you can't even stay there a full minute let alone live here!" Rainbow Dash challenged.

"Please, I'm not scared of anything!" I came back with. I know everyone always said that, but I meant it. I've been through everything life had to throw at me and I'm still here aren't I?

"Oh yeah! Fine! Go on ahead then tough guy!" Rainbow Dash challenged me again.

"Alright. Have fun staring at the 'menacing' house." I told them as I started heading in.

"Wait up!" Twilight ran after me, still wanting to prove to everyone in Ponyville that there were no spirits.

"Twilight, don't just leave me here!" Spike said, running after Twilight. As much as he hated being in the house, he didn't want to be left alone outside of it.

"Hey, wait for me!" Rainbow Dash said as she flew after us.

"Y'all can't just leave us out here!" Applejack said as she chased after us, not wanting to be left behind.

"Oh, none of them cannot simply just leave me out here can they?!" Rarity asked herself as she went after us, careful not to step in any mud puddles on the way.

Pinkie Pie was worried as she looked at Fluttershy with a smile. "Come on Fluttershy, let's go!" Pinkie Pie said as she skipped after the rest of us.

"But... I... It's just to... I think I'll just wait ou- EEEEEEEEP!" She screamed after another boom of thunder and a flash of lightning and ran as fast as she could after us.

Sadly, when she ran after us, we were at the doorway. She ran in and bumped into all of us, pushing us all inside all the way. That's when the door closed behind us.

"What in tarnation?!" Applejack yelled out.

Spike ran to the door and tried to open it, but it was stuck. "It won't open!"

"Okay, guess will have to find another way out." I pointed out.

Rainbow Dash chuckled as she got up and flew just a little overhead. "So you are scared!"

"No. But I doubt anypony else wants to stay in here more than they have to." I said, gesturing to the others, who looked like they were about to freak out.

"Blitz is right. We need to find a way out of here. So let's get it together, and look another door." Twilight instructed. She took a few steps forward and a floor board under her opened up, making her fall through the floor. The floor board quickly closed behind her and she was gone.

I was the first one to get there and I tested the same floor board, but it didn't move. "Well that's just great." I said with sarcasm. Everyone in that room started going crazy. "Everypony calm down!" I yelled out.

"Calm down?! Twilight just got eaten by the floor!" Spike said.

"She didn't get eaten by the floor. The floor board just gave out when she stepped on it. She's probably just one floor below us." I flapped my wings and stayed in the air. "It's probably a good idea that we try to avoid any more loose floor boards."

"But what do we do about Twilight?" Spike asked.

"Well, we just have to split into two groups. One goes to find Twilight. The other tries to find the exit." I ordered.

"Wait a second, who made you the boss?" Rainbow Dash asked, frowning. She flew over to me.

"My house, my rules." I came back at her with.

"Well, your house just ate our friend!" Rainbow Dash said, getting in my face. I was not about to back down.

"That's why I'm trying to fix this. Besides, you're the one who wanted all of them to come here!"

"Will you two knock it off! Our friend's in trouble and y'all can only bicker about it." Applejack told us.

"Yeah, but he still shouldn't lead the group!" Rainbow Dash exclaimed. She then looked back at me. "Do you know what happens when ponies split up? They're always caught by the ghost!" She yelled out and swung her arms in the air, hitting the floor board above her. The floor board then spun around in space and sent her flying through the ceiling, going up a level and leaving the group.

"Rainbow Dash!" We all yelled out. I tried to push the floor board and try to get it to move again, but to no avail. I then elbowed the roof, but it was stuck in there good.

"Okay, nopony move! Every time somepony does, we end up being separated even more." I figured out.

Right, like any of them would take that advice. One more crack of thunder sent them over the edge. Fluttershy screamed and ran off in blind fear, somehow bringing Spike with her when she ran right through him. She ran through a doorway and the breeze had the door close right behind her, along with a big empty bookshelf tipping over and blocking off the doorway.

"And then there were four. Okay, can we go two minutes without somepony else getting separated from the group?" I asked out loud, not really caring if any of them answered.

"This was all a dreadful idea. How Rainbow Dash convinced me to come I will have no idea." Rarity said, putting her hoof to her forehead dramatically.

"Doesn't matter how we got here, we just have to focus on getting the others and getting out of here. This house isn't structurally sound enough for eight." I pointed out, sounding like a contractor or something along those lies.

Then I thought of something. "Well, there's gotta be three floors. Rainbow Dash went up a floor, Fluttershy and Spike should be just beyond that door," I pointed to the door they went through, and Twilight is in the basement." I reviewed.

"We already knew that! How do we get them?!" Pinkie Pie said as she shook me as if thinking that would make me think of an idea.

"How we get them is actually pretty easy." I said kind of slowly as I stopped Pinkie from shaking me. "I'll go and find Rainbow Dash, while you three try to move that giant bookshelf." I said, pointing to the bookshelf that was big enough to hold nearly a fourth of Twilight's books.

"You got it pardner." Applejack said as she and the other two went over to the bookshelf.

I looked back at the board Rainbow Dash went to. Okay, let's see here. If I can't move the plank, then I'll have to find another way around. I can't just slice through the wood, the house is to weak for me to just cut up a board. As I listed all the reasons, I eventually just choose to look for the staircase that lead up to the next floor. This house was a maze, and with nearly no light except for the thunder outside, I just had to fly really slowly and hope I didn't bump into something that would trap me in some other room. The last thing we need is for another one of us to be trapped.

With the group separated its only a matter of time until the scares begin. Who will step up to the plate and save the others? What horrors will they find? And how will thy escape? All of these 'horror'able questions and bad jokes answered next chapter!

Question of the Chapter: What is the scariest thing that you've ever experienced?

11. Ghosts, Monsters, and Loose Doorknobs!

Welcome viewers, to a chapter of horror! Coming at ya from beyond the grave, and before October! It will be filled with screams, scares, and near death experiences! At least, for the ponies that is. Now, I'm not good at suspenseful chapters or have ever really made any, so I'm sorry if it's a little boring to read the scares in this chapter! Also, this chapter we will be going to look at multiple groups instead of just following Blitz.

Well, enough of that boring intro that most of you probably don't even read. Let's move on with the story!

Disclaimer: I do not own any MLP, obviously.

Twilight POV

Ow... Where am I? As I got up to look around, I noticed that none of the others were around me. And if they were I wouldn't be able to tell anyway since there was no source of light anywhere. I quickly used my magic to make a small light emit from my horn, allowing me to see again.

"Okay Twilight, everything's fine. Your just in an old basement." I assured myself. I looked around for a staircase or some way to get back up to the first floor. I was in a slightly small room with just one door. Since it was underground it made since why there was no window, or why there was no sound of thunder.

When I found the only door in the room however, I was met with a scary sight. A moving white figure that wasn't hovering over the ground.

"Who's there?!" I asked, panicking slightly more than I should. This definantly wasn't one of my friends. The only one of them with a similar coat was Rarity, and she couldn't fly or stay suspended in air.

... Silence. The figure didn't make one sound. "I said who's there!" I yelled out, getting more and more impatient and scared with the silence.

Fluttershy's POV

"This isn't good, this isn't good, this is not good! That terrifying thunder made my heart jump out of my chest! I'm alone in the dark and none of my friends are around me!" I looked around and only had some light coming from the cracked window, and that was it!

I took one step forward, knowing I had to find one of my friends. "It's okay Fluttershy... Just stay quiet and calm, quiet and calm, quiet and-""CREEEEEEEK!" "EEEEEEEEEEEEEE!" I screamed out, scared of whatever that horrible noise was!

Twilight's POV

What was that?! After I heard that terrifying scream, the white figure went towards me at an alarming rate! "S-Stay back!" I yelled out, using my magic to grab the closest thing that was near me, in this case a broken lantern, and threw it at the white figure.

As soon as it hit the white floating figure, it fell limp to the ground. I sighed in relief as I slid to the ground, slowing down my heart rate.

Fluttershy's POV

"Fluttershy, don't scream so loudly! I'm right here!" That was Spike's voice.

"Spike?! Oh I'm so glad your here!" I said hugging him, overjoyed that I wasn't alone in the dark.

"Well you did kinda run into me when you came in here." Spike said as he looked at me.

"Oh, I did? I'm really sorry Spike." I apologized. I didn't mean to hurt him, I was just scared from the loud thunder.

"It's okay Fluttershy. But we should probably get out of here soon." Spike said, looking scared too.

"Yeah, but how do we get out of here?" I asked, looking around. I couldn't see much since the window didn't let me see much.

"We'll let's just go back the way you came." Spike suggested.

"Okay." I agreed. That's when another bolt of thunder came down. "EEEEEE!" I screamed, jumping behind a potted plant to hide. That noise is terrifying!

Rainbow Dash's POV

"Uh... What is that?" I asked out loud, waking up to a loud scream. When I went through the roof I was sent flying into the roof of the second floor. Man did that hurt!

"Where am I?" I asked out loud again. I didn't care if anypony heard me. Actually, it would probably be a good thing if they did since only my friends were around.

"Hello? Twilight? Blitz? Applejack? Anypony?" Just then, a bolt of thunder struck the lightning rod on top of the house. Let me tell you, that was loud! At least I was able to see what was around me from it. There was a bed, a night stand. A few other things you'd find in a bedroom. Okay, at least I knew where I was.

Also from the lightning I saw where the door was. I went to it and opened the door when another bolt of lightning lit up the room and what was right outside the door, which was not fun to look at. The lightning showed a shadow of a freaky looking monster with fur pointing everywhere, vicious fangs, and angry eyes that glared right at me!

"AHH!" I yelled as I flew back in the room, trying to get away from the thing in front of me.

I ran into the window behind me. I could either go out the window, where I would be struck by lightning the moment I got outside, or face the monster in front of me! Talk about being stuck between a rock and a hard place!

As the monster inched closer towards me, I was forced to do the one thing I did not like doing at all. Beg. "Please don't come any closer! Please! Oh, I'm sorry about everything I ever said about Old Mare Crankle, just please go away!"

It was the only thing I could think of. The room was too small to fly away from it. It was in the way of the only exit, and to top it all off, the ceiling was just barely to low for me to fly out of its reach. I was doomed!

Another flash of lightning showed the monster again, except it showed what the monster itself looked like instead of its shadow. And what I saw, I had to facehoof at. It was just a mouse! I was scared of a stupid mouse?! Even Fluttershy wouldn't be scared of that!

"I can't believe this!" I yelled out, angry. I simply flew over it and flew out of the room, wanting to forget the whole dumb thing!

Applejack's POV

Alrighty then, this should be easy. All we gotta do is move an empty bookshelf. With my strength, Rarity's magic, and Pinkie Pie's help, it shouldn't be a problem right? "Okay. Rarity? Can you use yer magic to move some of the shelves? They look loose enough." I asked.

Rarity nodded and used her magic to levitate the shelves. At least now it's a little easier to move. "Alrighty. Now Pinkie, help me move this gosh darn bookshelf." I said.

"Okey-dokey-lokey!" Pinkie said. She got over and we pushed the bookshelf out-of-the-way. Well, it was easy enough, and now to get Fluttershy.

"Uh, Applejack? Aren't doors supposed to have doorknobs too?" Pinkie Pie asked

"Uh, yes. Why are you askin Sugarcube?" Now what kind of question was that?

"Because that door doesn't have one." She said matter a factly as she pointed to the door.

"Oh great, now how are we supposed to get through now?" Rarity asked.

"Well, I can't just kick it down, who else knows what'll come down with it." I noted. "Lets just look fer the doorknob. It's gotta be 'round here." I said.

After a little bit of looking, Pinkie Pie spoke up. "OH! Found it, found it!" She said, pointing to the doorknob which was a few steps away from the door. Guess it fell off when the bookshelf came down on top of it. "I'll get it!" Pinkie said as she skipped over to it, humming to herself.

When I looked at the doorknob some more, I saw it was right next to a hole in the floorboards. "Pinkie hang on! There's a hole!" I yelled at her.

"What? There's a mole?" Pinkie asked, not hearing me. When she landed next to the hole and doorknob, it fell through the hole. "Oh, hole! You said hole!" She said, realizing what I was trying to say.

I sighed, knowing we weren't getting that back without going to the basement. "Oh, I just hope wherever that door handle landed, Twilight'll find it." I said. If she won't find it, will have to just hope we can break down the door without breaking down the rest of the house with us.

Twilight's POV

As I knocked out the figure, I sat in place and just looked at it. What did I just do? I knocked it unconscious, or worse, that's what I did! Just then, something snapped me out of being in shock. I looked over and saw a door handle landing from what seemed like no where. I looked around, then looked up, seeing a bit of pink coming from a hole in the floor above. Pinkie Pie!

"Pinkie Pie! Pinkie, is that you?!" I asked, hoping it was instead of some trick my mind was playing on me to keep me sane.

"WOW! Rarity, Applejack, this floor knows who I am!" I heard Pinkie Pie say.

"No! No Pinkie, it's Twilight!" I said, hoping she would realize it.

I heard a loud gasp and saw her mouth come through the hole. "You ate Twilight?! Just wait until I find a giant hammer you evil floor!" She yelled at me. I sighed. Oh I hope somepony else is up there.

"Pinkie, I think that is Twilight." I heard Rarity say. Pinkie's mouth moved from the hole and I saw a blue colored eye looking down at me. "It is! Twilight? Are you alright down there?" I heard her ask.

"Yeah, I'm fine. For now." I didn't want them worrying about the figure I just protected myself against, so I didn't talk about it. "What's with the door handle? What's been happening since I fell through the hole? Where are the others?" I asked. I needed to know what was going on.

"Well," I heard Applejack say as I saw Rarity move from the hole and Applejack look through it. "Rainbow Dash went through the roof, kinda like you did with the floor. Fluttershy up and ran off after some thunder boomed, and that doorknob leads to where she ended up. Finally, Blitz told me, Pinkie Pie, and Rarity to get ta Fluttershy while he went upstairs to get Rainbow Dash. That's about it." Applejack summed up.

Well, good. Even though we all got a little separated, at least we all have plans to get to the others. "Okay. Well, I'll bring the door handle with me. It might fit into any other door I find along the way." I told them.

"Alrighty then. Good luck Twilight." Applejack told me. I might just need it too. I turned to start walking and when I turned around I was shocked.

The white figure was gone.

Blitz's POV

Okay stairs. Stairs, stairs, stairs. If I were some stairs where would I be? I thought as I went through the house. I had to fly slowly since I couldn't see five feet in front of me, with only the flashes of thunder giving me light. So basically, I was blind.

Eventually, I ran into something. I felt what it was and finally found the stairs! Thank God and Celestia! I slowly started to fly my way up them, not wanting to fall through them.

When I got to the top I felt a door handle. Wasting no time, I opened it up and another flash of lightning showed me the room. It was just a dusty old storage room with boxes, barrels, some pieces of furniture, and a lantern.

Wait, a lantern! Perfect! I went over to it and picked it up, looking at it. It had a candle in it, along with a handle on the top. Now all I have to do is find some way to light it. But how am I supposed to do that without a lighter or a match?

The idea struck me just as some more lightning flashed. That's it! I'll light it with lightning! As dumb as the idea sounded, it was clear in my head. I put down the lantern next to the door and positioned the tip of my tail so it was touching the candle tip. "I hope there's a potted plant or something in here." I said out loud,

I then opened the window, letting a powerful gust of wind come in. It was freezing, but I would be fine. Oddly enough the clouds weren't raining, they were just thundering and lightening.

I wasted no time caring and just stuck my mechanical arm outside the window. A few seconds later I was met with a lightning bolt to the arm. It was probably the dumbest thing I had ever done too. As I expected though, the lightning went throughout my whole body and the tip of my tail was coursing with electricity too. I was burning hot to the touch with the live plasma going through me and I predicted, the tip of my tail was so hot that it lit the candle up!

"Yes! Score one for me!" I yelled out, enjoying my smart moment. Wow, I never thought Science class could be so useful!

To keep myself from freezing anymore, I closed the window and picked up the lantern in one quick motion. With the lightning going through me, I couldn't help but move what seemed like ten ties faster. I looked around and saw a small some vase with dying plants coming out of it. I bolted over there, no pun intended, and touched my hoof with the dirt, making all the electricity go away. That's the way lightning rods go. As long as there connected with any kind of ground, the lightning will just go right through it.

It made me calm down from the lightning rush. It really just felt like I was on a sugar rush even stronger than Pinkie's. That is, if her craziness was a sugar rush. I positioned the lantern handle on the top of my tail, and it stayed there. "Wait until the others here about this." I continued to boast. I then headed outside the storage room, ready to find Rainbow Dash, get back to the others, and get everyone out of here.

Well there's the individual groups discovered. With Blitz and a lantern, will things get easier or harder? Will Fluttershy be able to walk ten feet without running in fear from the lightning? What was that mystery white figure Twilight pwnd? These questions wrapped up next chapter!

Question of the Chapter: How long do you think you would last in this haunted house without being scared in some way?

12. Three Strikes, Your OUT Cold

Welcome back! I'm glad to see that everyone's enjoying the story! I didn't think that many of you would enjoy it as much as you did. Also, I want to say thank you all again! As of this chapter we have reached over 2000 views! I din't think we'd reach 2000 views until chapter 20 or so! Not only that, but we went from 1000 to 2000 in only four chapters! THANKS TO ALL OF YOU!

To show my appreciation, this chapter is going to be over 2000 words as well!

Well anyway, guess it's time to start-up the chapter! And without anything else to say, let's begin now!

Disclaimer: I only own Blitz, and the idea of Old Mare Crankle's house. Anything else belongs to the creators of MLP.

Spike's POV

Uh, were never going to get back to Twilight and the others! Fluttershy just keeps jumping behind the potted plant whenever there's some thunder. I need some way to get her to get out of there, but how?! As I thought of some way to calm down Fluttershy I looked around where we were.

While Fluttershy just hid behind the plant from the thunder, I used the lightning to look around. I saw we were in a hallway with several doors. Sadly, the one we went through had no doorknob, so we couldn't just open the door and go back. Also, I saw that there were several picture frames with nothing in them, a padded bench which actually didn't look that bad except for the ware and tear of its age, and a window which let in the lightning.

"Fluttershy, calm down. The lightning can't hurt us inside." I told her calmly, hoping she would relax.

She came out from behind the plant just enough so I could see her face. "I-I-I know. It's just I don't like the sound of thunder..." She explained. Another bolt of lightning then came down and she covered her ears as she hid back behind the plant.

I sighed. I needed to think of a way to help stop her. It was really the sound that was scaring her. I needed to find some way to block the sun out, but how?...

...

"That's it!" I blurted out, which made Fluttershy look back at me cautiously. I wasted no time in putting my plan to action as I went over to the padded bench. I then took one of my claws and cut a hole in the fabric, making some cotton stick out. Just what I needed.

I gathered up a hand full and went back to Fluttershy's hiding place. "Fluttershy here. Put this in your ears. It'll block out the sound like ear muffs." I explained.

Fluttershy looked at the cotton, then at me. She nodded and took the cotton, disappearing behind the plan one again. After a few seconds she came out, with the cotton in her ears.

And it worked. Another flash of lightning came and Fluttershy only saw the flash of light. She looked like she was about to cover her ears, but she saw that the cotton helped block out most of the noise. "Thank you Spike." She said.

I nodded and pointed towards the door we went through, gesturing for her to follow. I knew she wouldn't hear me easily, and if I did talk she would take out the cotton to hear what I said. Either way, she understood what I was trying to point her to and we both went to the door.

Rainbow Dash's POV

How many rooms are on this floor?! Not only have I been in around 6 rooms, but I've wound up going in the same rooms again and again! I can't see far enough to know where I'm going! And to top it all off, the hallway isn't big enough to just fly right through! How am I getting out of here?!

As I came out of on room, I saw a floating light wander around the hallway! (1) I ducked back into the room, trying to get outta sight from the wierd light.

"Is that Old Mare Crankle's ghost?" I thought out loud, but quiet enough so it wouldn't hear me. I shook my head and got hyped up. "Doesn't matter. As soon whatever that thing is get's near me, I'm gonna teach it just why you shouldn't mess with Rainbow Dash!" I said, still quiet but determined.

I peaked my head out the door and saw the light coming towards this room. "This is it." I waited and listened for the right moment. I heard the clanging and squeaking of the lantern moving and waited for it to get closer... "AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!" I yelled out a battle cry as I jumped out from the room and kicked Old Mare Crankle's ghost as hard as I could with my hind legs, sending it and the lantern flying back.

"THUD!" I heard as the ghost hit the wall.

"Yes, Rainbow Dash: 1, Old Mare Crankle's Ghost ZIP!" I cried out in joy. Wait... ghosts aren't supposed to hit the wall, they're supposed to fly through it. I went up to it quietly and looked at it. I was immediately sorry for what I did. "Blitz!" Oh no, I didn't know that was him! How was I even supposed to see him?! He blends into the dark for crying out loud!

"Oh... Rainbow Dash... That you?..." Blitz asked, half conscious. Yeah, I overdid it with the kicking.

"Oops... Sorry about that Blitz, I thought you were Old Mare Crankle." I explained, helping him up.

"Well I'm not. I'm not old, not a mare, and I'm not dead... yet..." Blitz said as he rubbed his head where I kicked him. "What are your legs made of, steel?"

"Hehe. Like I said sorry." I knew my kicks were strong, and it wasn't fun being on the opposite end of them.

"It's alright. At least I'm not dead." He said as he shook off the kick, literally.

"So where are the others?" I asked, wanting to know where they were.

"Well, Fluttershy ran off after she heard some thunder, and accidentally brought Spike along with her. The door they went through was blocked off by a bookshelf, so I told Applejack, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie to take care of it while I came to find you." Blitz explained to me.

"Well what are we waitin for? We gotta go and help get Fluttershy and Spi-" "CRACK!" We both looked down under us and we saw the floor start to give out from both of us being in one spot.

"Just. My. Luck." I heard Blitz say through his teeth before the floor gave out under us and we were sent down the floors the express way.

Twilight's POV

Where... Where did that thing go?! I couldn't think or say anything other than that. In the small conversation I had with Applejack, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie, the figure had disappeared. I looked around for any trace of it, but there was none.

"I... I need to clear my head. It's probably just all of this stale basement air getting to me." I assured myself. I picked up the lantern from earlier with my magic and lit the candle inside with my magic as well. At least now I could see farther. I went over to where I dropped the doorknob, since I dropped it from all the mind games going on, and put it in my pocket. I then continued on my way.

After what seemed like a few minutes of walking, I reached stairs that lead to a door to the first floor. At least I would finally be out of this basement and luckily out of this house until it was repaired by Blitz and a proper construction crew.

The stairs looked a little weak, but they seemed just strong enough to support my weight. I took one careful step onto the first stair an I heard a, "LEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAVVVVVVVE!"I went wide-eyed and looked around frantically, desperate to find out what that sound came from. I then looked at the step and sighed to myself. "Calm down Twilight, it's just the stairs creaking. Don't let this silly supernatural superstition get to you." I told myself.

I took a second step onto the second step and heard an ear-piercing, "NNNNOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWW!"I shook my head believing it was just my mind playing more tricks on me. To test this theory and calm my nerves, I took my hoof off the step and placed it back down the same way, expecting the same sound. Although, I was met with just a simple, "CREAK!"

I looked back at the step in confusion and slight fear. I had stepped on it the same way, at the same speed. So logically, it should have made the same sound. At this point, I didn't care what was going on. I just knew that one thing was clear. "I need to get out of here!"

I started running up the steps, hearing multiple different noises that all suggested that I should leave now. When I got to the top however, the very last step broke as I was about to get off of it and bash through the door in front of me. I looked all around me, so scared that I lost focus with my magic and the lantern stopped levitating in mid-air and fell down. The wind of falling then blew out the candle, leaving me trapped in darkness.

I looked around for something, anything that would help me. What I found was the exact opposite. Back where I was when I fell through the floor was the white figure, lying on the ground. From it, I could see two small red eyes glaring right at me.

Blitz's POV

Ow... Where am I? Last thing I remember was talking to Rainbow Dash about getting hit in the head and then, the floor collapsi- oh yeah, that's what happened. So we must've been back on the first floor.

"Blitz? Rainbow Dash? Are you two okay?" I looked up and saw Spike looking down at us, along with Fluttershy who looked equally, if not more, worried.

"Yeah, were fine." I heard Rainbow Dash say. She stood up next to me an looked over to me. "Blitz, you okay?"

"Yeah... Fine... Just a little... Woozy..." I said slowly as I tried to stand up, but fell back to the ground. "Give me a second or... four..." I said, having a hard time seeing what was in front of me.

"Blitz, you don't look so good. What happened before you fell down?" I heard Fluttershy say.

I looked up at her and tried to focus my attention on her. "I... Got hit in the head... kick..." I managed to say "Hold on..." I said as I tried to stand up again.

When I did, I smiled weakly at them. "See?... I'm fine." I said, starting to come back to my senses. Of course, with my luck it wasn't the end of my pain.

The lantern I had earlier fell from the second floor and guess whose head it landed on? Yep, mine. When it hit my head, what consciousness I had left was thrown out the window. "Found the lantern!" I said dumbly before I fell to the ground, passed out.

Applejack's POV

As me, Pinkie, and Rarity all waited on Twilight to get back, we heard some noise coming from the door. I got up and went over to the door an knocked on it. "Spike? Fluttershy? That you?"

Applejack?! Yes, were in here! Along with Rainbow Dash and Blitz! They fell from the floor above us!" Spike yelled back to me.

"What?! They okay?!" I asked, concerned now.

"I'm fine, but Blitz took a few hits to the head an he's out cold!" I heard Rainbow Dash say.

"Is he going to be alright?" Rarity asked, concerned as well.

"I, I don't know! I kicked him really hard in the head by accident, then he landed on his head from the fall, and then a lantern fell on his head!" Rainbow Dash exclaimed, worried. Guess she blaims herself for hitting him by accident.

"Now calm down everypony! As soon as Twilight gets back with the doorknob, everything will be okay." I assured them all.

"Don't worry everypony, I'm right here." Me, Rarity, and Pinkie all turned to see Twilight standing there with the doorknob levitating over her from her magic. She was a little out of breath, but was perfectly fine.

"Then what're ya waitin for? Bring it over!" I said, happy that we were finally getting out of this nightmare.

Blitz's POV

Wow, my head hurts. As I opened my eyes for a few moments, I saw my friends all around me. Rainbow Dash was saying something, then Twilight said something. I was to out of it to tell what they were saying and only managed to let out a groan of pain before falling back into unconsciousness again.

After a little bit, I woke up and felt myself being lifted up into the air. I opened my eyes just a little and saw I was surrounded by a purple glow. I guessed that Twilight was lifting me into the air.

After a little more time I heard a loud crash. When I looked, I saw the front door had been kicked down by Applejack. I was thankful that they had gotten out of the structurally unsound house, but was a little concerned when I realized that when we were outside, I was in the air.

"W-wait... The clouds..." I tried to warn them, but it was too late. The biggest lightning strike struck me, and electrocuted me. I woke up immediately and absorbed the shock. The scariest part about it, was that the lightning bolt didn't stop. It kept on shocking me until there was no more electricity in the clouds surrounding the house.

Because the electricity was a plasma, Twilight couldn't keep me in place because I was surrounded in the plasma. Because of that, there was good news and bad. Good news, I fell to the ground and the electricity went right through me and into the ground. The bad news, I was frozen. Ever see the Tin Man in Wizard of Oz? Yeah, that was me. I fell unconscious right as the electricity escaped me. I couldn't do anything but sleep, at the mercy of whatever happened.

This isn't good. With Blitz unconscious, what will happen now? It seems that even though they've escaped the haunted house, the scares are following them through the door. See what happens next chapter.

Note: I won't give away what next chapter will have, but I will say this: It isn't going to be a happy chapter, as it will talk about Blitz/Zeke's past

Question of the Chapter: Would you trust your friends with your life?

13. Another Day in School

Welcome back everyone. I know the last chapter was a little of a sad ending, but it will all start to lead up to something. Anyway, this chapter is mainly in third person, and will go into more depth of Zeke/Blitz's life. Again, Blitz isn't an exact me, but a similar version. I still own the creation of Blitz, and his whole history.

Disclaimer: I don't however own MLP.

"Where... Where am I?" I thought as I sat up from... a school desk? "Mister Boyle! Do I need to have you sent to the principal's office?!" I looked up and saw my Theatre Teacher, Mr. Samuel, glaring down at me. Now this was starting to freak me out. "Mister Boyle! I asked you a question!"

"I-I... What was the question?" I asked dumbly. Every student in the class started laughing at me. Samuel sighed and shook his head as he turned to go back to the projector. As he did, a few crumbled pieces of paper were thrown at me, by three other students. Morgue, Mike, and Joe. The three students who made it a mission to make my life horrible.

They all stole my money, broke into my locker just to rip up homework, and even beat me up on the way to class.

After that class was over I went to my locker, thinking of how wierd this all was. Was all the My Little Pony stuff a dream? No, it couldn't be. I was getting hurt, I found out stuff about the show that I never knew to begin with, and it all was too real.

I got in my locker and traded out the books I needed to get for my next class and went off to math.

As I went on, I had a run in with Mike, Morgue, and Joe. Most everyone else was already in class, except for some which surrounded us to make sure the teachers didn't notice. As strange as it sounds, it didn't attract the teachers, it kept them away just like they all planned.

"Sup, ATM. You here to give us our money now?" Morgue asked.

Morgue was the leader of the three. He was also the cleverest out of the three, which wasn't saying much, and was the most dangerous out of them all. His real name was Martin, but the reason they called him Morgue was because he had a glare which made people think that the phrase 'If looks could kill' was literal. Along with all of that, he was also the school's pickpocket. Only giving back the stuff he stole for a price.

Then there was Joe, the brains of the group. He was always the one that finished his homework first and sold it to others for money. He made it so they all had the right answers, but they were worded differently then his. He was also really weak, but had a way of fighting in his own way. With his smarts, he knew where pressure points were so he dodged attacks and hit the points with carefully placed jabs. It was almost like he was a ninja, which wasn't good.

Finally, there was Mike. The brawn. He was an average school bully, using his strength to get what he wanted. He was also the halfback for the school's football team. He was so intimidating, he even scared some of the teachers. Which was why he rarely got ISS, or got suspended, or anything like that. If anything, he only got off with a warning. The only real weakness about him was that he wasn't that smart.

"Get lost. How about you get a job so you can get your own money, grease monkey?" All the students around me 'oooo'ed. It wasn't hard for me to come up with a name like that, he wore enough grease in his hair that could make a restaurant go out of business from health issues.

"Oh, cause of that you better be ready to give me all of your money. I was prepared to let you off the hook, being the understanding guy I am, but you just dug your own grave." Morgue said, acting all high and mighty.

"Whatever 'understanding guy'. You're 'standing' in my way, so move it." I said dryly. I wasn't about to stand down or hide in fear. Mainly since I knew that was pointless.

After some of the group of students laughing at him, he gave them all his signature death glare. That made them all shut up. "That's it. Mike, take care of the robot."

"Got it." Mike simply said as he went up to me. He then 'took care' of me by slugging me in the face, knocking me to the ground.

When I woke up, I heard a voice. "Oh my, are you okay? You took a big hit." I opened my eyes and saw a girl with pale skin and very light blond brushed hair looking at me. She had a light pink shirt and a skirt with pink butterflies on it. She was the only one still here.

As I looked at her, for a split second I saw Fluttershy instead of whoever was in front of me. After that split second, it went back to normal. "Y-yeah. I'm fine." I said as I started to get up, really confused. "Who are you?"

"Oh, yes. I'm Felicia Shylene." She said. Okay, this was getting weirder by the second.

"Hi Felicia. I'm Zeke." I said cautiously.

She smiled at me. "We might want to hurry to class. It's the one over there right?" Felicia asked, pointing towards my classroom. "Ms. Tilden's room, I mean."

"Yeah. That's actually my class too." I noted.

We then both headed out to the next class. Luckily for us, we weren't stopped by any teachers as we got into class unnoticed.

After we got in, I got to my seat which was near the back, while Felicia sat at the seat that was farthest away from most everyone. In this case, the front.

That's when the teacher came. Only it wasn't Ms. Tilden like usual. Instead, it was a skinny woman with black skin with a pure black suit that made her look like a lawyer. The buttons and everything on the suit were shinning as if they were stars or something.

"Hello class. Ms. Tilden won't be here for the rest of the week, so I'll be taking her place. You may call me Ms. Luna." She said to the class. I froze in place and looked at her, very confused and freaked out. She noticed and smiled at me for a quick second, as if she knew why I was looking at her. Then there was another split second where Ms. Luna, was Princess Luna. It went away just like last time with Felicia.

As the class went on, we had a test scheduled for today. Ms. Luna passed it out and we all started working on it. Some time into the test, Joe was sitting behind me. he was the only one out of the three that were in this class. Sadly, Joe made up for it by just as annoying, or getting me in trouble.

"*cough* Ms. Loser *cough*" I heard Joe say, mimicking my voice really well. Ms. Luna looked up furious and looked right at me.

"Mister... Zeke, is it?" She asked, looking at the seating chart to get my name. "Do you mind explaining just what you called me?" She asked.

I shook my head, looking straight at me. "It wasn't me." I said.

"Oh? And I suppose it's the boy that's sleeping behind you that said it?" Ms. Luna asked rhetorically. To prove her point, I heard a soft, real sounding snore right behind me. God, I hate Joe.

"Excuse me, Ms. Luna? It really was the sleepin boy behind em. Zeke did nothin wrong." I turned my head, as did everyone else in class, to a girl who had her hand in the air. She had blond hair tied into a ponytail, a slight farmer's tan, and she had a cowboy hat tied down to the back of her orange backpack. She wore worn down jeans, a plain orange t-shirt with apples on it, and a sleeveless brown jacket. It made her look like an urban cowgirl in a way.

"Is that so?" Ms. Luna asked. "Well then, guess I'll have a write-up ready for... Joe instead of Zeke. Thank you for speaking up miss... Jackie." She finished.

I looked at 'Jackie' and she simply tipped an imaginary hat off to me in a way of saying, "Don't mention it" Another split second change happened as I looked at Jackie and she was Applejack for a moment.

I looked back at my test and finished the last question on it. Oddly enough, the question was a word problem. The answer was '7 friends'. That just made everything more confusing and freaky.

Before the bell was about to ring to dismiss us to third lunch, Ms. Luna spoke up. "I hope you all feel comfortable with your answers. Especially if you wasted some of your time sleeping. Am I right mister Joe?" She looked at Joe with a bored expression.

"Yes Ms. Luna." Joe said, a little ticked that he was getting written up.

"Don't you mean, Ms. Loser?" Ms. Luna asked rhetorically, which made all of us laugh at Joe. "Oh, and before I forget. Zeke, I want to talk to you after class." She said to me.

After the bell rang, everyone left except for me. I walked over to her desk. "What did you need? Princess Luna?" I asked with a raised eyebrow.

"So you figured it out didn't you? Blitz?" She asked, smiling at me. "I'm sure thou has plenty of questions, so go ahead." She inquired.

"And what do I ask exactly? Why I'm in a dream about my school life before all of this happened? Why all my friends are here for some reason? How about, is Celestia the principal of the school? I asked sarcastically, thinking this was all some big joke.

"Nay. We couldn't get rid of Ms. Jefferies. My sister is the superintendent instead." She said with a smile.

I facepalmed at that. "Of course. Makes perfect since. Okay, real question. Why are you making me go through this nightmare?"

"Nay yet again. I am simply accompanying thy dream. I cannot change a dream that has come from a coma." She clarified.

I froze in place after that. "Wait wait wait, let me get this straight. I'm in a coma?!" I asked, shocked.

"Correct." Luna said with a nod. "You took quiet a few hits to thy noggin, and then the lightning strike. Thoust is in the hospital in Ponyville right now, with all of your friends watching over you."

"So... I'm imagining what it would be like if my friends were in my world?" I asked.

"I assume so. However, you will not be able to come out of your comma until your mind is at ease." Ms. Luna told me. "You have a big decision that will affect your life. Thou must make a choice, by thy own." She finished.

I stood there, for a good minute, taking in all the news she had just told me. "I have to have... an apifiny?" I asked.

"Correct." Luna said with a smile and a nod.

I sighed deeply. I just wanted to get out of all of this. Then my stomach rumbled. "I need to get some food." I finally said.

"Here." Luna said as she got out a small brown bag and a can of my favorite soda. Diet Coke. Seeing my shocked expression she clarified. "I saw how they made off with thy currency, so I took the liberty of preparing a lunch." She said with a smile.

"Okay, as of right now you are my favorite teacher, favorite princess, and favorite adult." I said as I took the sack lunch and soda and started to head off to lunch.

"Oh, and Zeke?" I turned around to see her turn an apple laptop around so I could see the screen. It was a YouTube video of Gandalf saying "YOU SHALL NOT PASS!" "So that's why you wanted me to say it." She said with a playful smirk.

I chuckled a little. "I'm sorry, but I had to hear you say it. I couldn't pass over the opportunity." We both laughed and I headed out to the lunch room.

When I got there, I saw my table. The empty small one in the corner of the cafeteria. I sat there and opened my soda, happy to finally have a soda after so long. I was addicted to it, I admit it, and I was so overjoyed that I chugged down half the can in just a few seconds.

"HI!" I almost choked on my soda when someone came up behind me, but I swallowed my soda before looking at who was behind me. "Mind if I sit here?!"

Behind me was someone who looked so crazy that it would put Lady Gaga to shame. She had frizzy pink hair, pink jeans, a shirt that had a bright, colorful balloon pattern all over it. She also had a huge, happy smile on her face that would creep out the Joker.

"Um... Sure..." I said, very confused. She quickly sat across from me, still smiling. She got out a Tootsie Roll Pop and put it in her mouth. Then another split second flash happened and she was Pinkie Pie. I rubbed my eyes, not from the flash, but from the incredibly bright colors she was wearing. It was really hard to look at her. "Who are you?" I said, looking back at her.

"I'm Diane." She said, still smiling. Okay, if this is supposed to be Pinkie, then why did that name make no sense? "Diane Pinkamena. But all of my friends call me Pinkie." So that's how it connected.

"I'm... Zeke." I said looking at her still confused.

"Nice ta meet ya!" She said with the same smile. Then out of no where, she shivered a little. "Hey, could you lean-to the left?" She asked out all of a sudden.

"Ooooookay..." I said as I leaned to the left. Right when I did, a scoop of mashed potatoes went flying past where I was and hit Diane right in the face.

"Are you okay?" I asked, concerned. She said nothing as she scooped the mashed potatoes off of her and licked it.

She then stood up and yelled out at the people behind us who through the potatoes as loud as she could. "You forgot the gravy!" Everyone around us, including me, laughed as she kept licking the mashed potatoes off her hand.

After lunch, me and Diane went to our classes. After that class, I went to my locker to change out school supplies again. As I opened my locker and started fishing stuff out, I heard someone right next to me say, "Open up already!"

I moved my locker door and saw something that wasn't as wierd as meeting Diane. There was a girl with brown hair, that had multiple colored streaks that made it look like it was a rainbow. She wore a blue skittles t-shirt, dark blue jeans, and blue running shoes. She also had a painted thunder bolt in rainbow colors on the knee of her jeans. "Why can't I get this locker to open?!" She yelled out in frustration. She had all her books and some other stuff in her hands and backpack, so it was clear that she was new.

"Want some help?" I offered.

"Uh... Nah, I think I... Got it!" She swung the door of the locker open... And dropped all the stuff that was in her hands. "Oh, great." She mumbled.

I bent down and helped her pick everything up. After it was all picked up, she started to put it all away. "Thanks." She said as she kept putting books away.

"Welcome. New here?" I asked. Although, I already knew the answer.

"Yeah, just transferred here. I'm Dashellene, but most of my friends just call me Rainbow." She told me. That's when the flash happened again, and I saw Rainbow Dash.

"Nice to meet you Rainbow. I'm Zeke." I said, acting normal. At this point, I had gotten used to the visions and reacted normally.

"Well, I gotta run. Thanks for the help Zeke, I owe ya one." Rainbow said as she started to run to class, as did I.

There was one thing that kept eating at me as I started going to the next class. One thing that I was worrying about. What's gonna happen if I never wake up from this? Will I just live my life in a coma, with my brain imagining my friends here?

Woah, a coma. I wonder what's going to happen next. Will Zeke run into any of the others in human form? Will the dream help for him to come to a realization? Or will he be trapped in it forever? All these and more, next chapter.

Question of the Chapter: Did you ever have a time at school where something just seemed... off? If so, explain in review if you want.

14. The Dreaded Gym Class

Welcome back! I'm shocked as to how fast so many viewers read the new chapters. And with the reviews you guys are putting. Thank you all! I mean, I never knew that this story would get so many views. Anyway, enough boasting, you all came for the chapter! Since I have nothing more then the disclaimer to say the story can begin!

Disclaimer: I don't own MLP. The only thing I own is the OCs, and the idea for this story.

As school went on, everything stayed the same as before. The only difference was that I kept coming across my friends, but in human form. First Fluttershy, then Princess Luna and Applejack, Pinkie Pie, and then Rainbow Dash. All of them were the same in every way except that they were humans. They all either helped me, or actually acted friendly. The only thing was, they didn't really know who I was, but they kept on acted friendly even though they didn't have to. They even went out of their way just to do so.

I only ever had one friend that was like that, and he had to move somewhere else because his dad passed on and they couldn't afford to stay here. I really did enjoy this day more than I ever would if they weren't around, but the thing that still kept me from staying with my friends was the thought that it was wrong in a way. I mean, yeah it was a great thing that I had friends, but it seemed selfish to just accept staying in a dimension I didn't come from just to fit in. It didn't feel right.

As I thought about all of this, I was walking through the hallway, heading to gym. Before I got there though, I was interrupted by someone.

"Excuse me. Can you tell me where I can find the library? I can't find it anywhere." I looked behind me and saw a girl with tan skin, black hair that went to her mid back with a light purple streak going down it. She wore a purple shirt that had stars all over it and one big main star in the middle that was colored a light purple, she also had purple jeans, and simple tennis shoes.

"We don't have a library here. The school has everyone go to the local library." I explained. I tried to continue to my next class since the gym was on the other side of the school, but she stopped me.

"Wait. This school doesn't have a library? Why?" The girl asked, obviously confused.

"Are you new to the city?" I asked. She nodded. "That's why you never heard what happened. You see, no one here really uses the school library except for a spot for graffiti. They gave up and closed the library down since then." I summed up. She was shocked to say the least. "Look, I have to go to gym class." I said as I started walking.

Though, she followed me, walking next to me. "Funny. Me and my brother have gym this period too." She said as she walked with me. The other students noticed and were giving the girl odd looks. Mainly because no one ever walked with me to a class before today, let alone talk to me.

"What's everyp-one looking at?" The girl asked. I looked over at her, skeptical. Did she almost say 'everypony'?

"I'm sorry, what did you say?" I asked. There was no way I heard that wrong.

"I said, 'what's everyone looking at'?" She said. She than nervously swallowed quietly, but I still noticed. I choose to ignore it since she was expecting an answer.

"Well, most everyone tends to avoid me." I clarified.

"Why's that? You seem normal." The girl said.

"You can think that... but they won't." I said. After I looked at her, I saw Twilight for a quick second. That made me think of her as a friend so I spoke up. "You see, I was in a terrible accident when I was a kid and since then some of me's made of artificial parts." I explained.

She looked at me with an expression that seemed as though she was thinking. "What's your name?" She asked as we got to the gym.

"I'm Zeke." I told her. She simply nodded at that.

"I'm Twila. By the way, if it's not too much to ask, can you keep my little brother, Spike, out of trouble? He's a Freshmen and I'm worried that someone might hurt him." Twila asked me.

I guess I could. I mean, what were the chances Spike could get in trouble anyway? "Sure, I can try. But I don't know what I could do."

She smiled at me and went off to the girl's locker room as I went in the boy's locker room. As soon as I got there, I saw Mike holding up a strange-looking kid by the collar of his shirt.

"You wanna say what you said to my face!" Mike said, getting in Spike's face.

"A-all I said was that you were really big looking!" Spike said. Spike had spiky hair, with the tips of his hair dyed green. He had a green t-shirt with a purple un-zipped jacket, and he had purple shorts on to match.

"That's it! Get ready to lose your face!" Mike said as he pulled back his right arm, ready to punch Spike in the face.

"Hey, lay off the freshman!" I yelled out, mad. I had never seen the kid around before, and with the purple jacket and the green shirt he looked just like Spike.

"Why should I?! You dumb, wimpy robot gonna make me?!" Mike yelled out, dropping Spike to the ground without care.

"Yeah, I will! Besides, are you really going to go so low as to beat up some freshmen? Pick on someone your own size, ya fat hairy ape!" I yelled, glaring right at Mike.

"What did you just call me, robot?!" Mike said as he punched the palm of his hand, cracking his knuckles loud enough for everyone in the locker room to hear.

Fat. Hairy. Ape." I repeated slowly. Mike slowly started walking over to me and I started backing up as he got close. That's when I backed up into some lockers. "Crap..." I said quietly.

He cocked his right arm back, ready to punch me. "Any last words before your head becomes part of that locker?" He asked, smirking since he thought he had me. I had no way to get away, and thought I was trapped.

That's when I saw it. Another second long flash and Mike was the bear I met the first day in Equestria. At that moment, I knew exactly what I was going to do. I cracked my neck and looked right at Mike. "Yeah. Hope your hand gets better soon." I said with a confident smirk.

That's when I put my plan to action. As Mike brought his fist forward, I jerked my head to the right. Mike missed me just barely and punched the locker right behind me, the part with the latch to be exact. "OW!" He took a few steps back, waving his hand, trying to get rid of the pain. It was bloody and already getting purple, but he didn't look like he cared.

I backed away from the lockers and got in front of one of the benches they had in the middle of the locker rooms. I watched as Mike got even angrier, like a bull seeing those red cape things. "Your gonna pay for that robot!" He charged at me, ready to slug me. But I was ready again. I side-stepped out-of-the-way just in time and Mike tripped over the bench, falling to the floor.

As soon as I looked around, I saw Morgue and Joe start to come over towards me. There was no way I could out match Morgue, or out smart Joe. I backed up a little, and bumped into someone who had a big gut and was at least three feet taller than me.

"WHAT HAPPENED IN HERE?!" I looked behind me to see that Coach Cooper was glaring at all of us. He was the football Coach, along with one of the three gym teachers. "Well?! Someone give me an answer!"

As Joe stepped up to explain his version of the story, Spike beat him to it. He stepped up and pointed right at me. "This guy stood up for me, from being hurt by the big guy on the ground. He didn't hurt the big guy, the big guy just hit his hand on the lockers trying to punch this guy." Spike explained quickly.

The Coach inspected Spike. "That so?"

Spike saluted, like he was in the military just for fun. "Yes sir!" The Coach didn't take offence to it or think it was a joke since he was in the military before, and most of the student body knew it.

"At ease." Spike put his hand down, not expecting the Coach to take him seriously. The Coach then went over to Mike. "Mike, you're not allowed to start fights. Report to the nurses office to have your hand bandaged." Mike nodded as he stood up. "And you do know what you did was wrong. If I hear you doing anything like this..." The Coach sighed, not liking what he was about to say Then I'll have no choice but to expel you from the football team. Dismissed."

Mike nodded then headed to the nurses office. "Now the rest of you, shows over! Get dressed out! Be in the gym in two minutes or less, or else there will be fewer students in the gym tomorrow!" The Coach announced to everyone.

As we all headed to our respective lockers, the Coach stopped me. "And you..." He pointed his finger at me, unsure of what to say. "You..." He sighed, not having anything to say to me. "Make sure that green haired solider over there stays out of trouble." He finally said as he left the locker room.

I sighed in relief as I headed to my locker, which was right next to Spike's. "Are you okay Spike?" I asked.

"Y-yeah... How do you know my name?" Spike asked, cautious towards me.

"Your sister, Twila, told me to watch after you." Spike sighed in relief as he knew why I knew his name. "Come on, we better dress out and go to the gym."

"What does dress out mean?" Spike asked. It didn't make sense about why he didn't know what that meant, but I simply thought that his middle school didn't call it dressing out or something.

"Well, gym class has its own dress code. So they want us to be in a t-shirt and shorts. Since it's the last period of the day, just take off your jacket. You should be fine then." I explained. Spike nodded, understanding, and took off his jacket.

After everyone else got dressed out, we headed to the gym. Everyone was told to gather up in front of the gym, where the Coaches would tell us what we were doing today.

Spike went over to Twila, who was standing with everyone else I had met today. Felicia, Jackie, Rainbow, and Pinkie. Along with one other girl who had black hair with a dark purple streak going down it. She looked like she was pampered and had make-up on. She did not look happy with being in gym. They were all talking and laughing with each other. As soon as Spike explained something to them, he pointed to me and the rest of them looked at me and smiled.

After I saw them all, that's when I saw Morgue and Joe talking to each other. Joe talked and pointed to me, then Jackie. Morgue then talked, pointed at me, then pointed to Felicia. I could tell that all of my new friends saw them too and frowned at them. Joe and Morgue didn't care as they kept talking about something that had to do with us. They were to quiet for us to understand what they were saying.

That's when Mike came in and everyone in the gym fell silent. It was a rare sight, seeing Mike injured. He was mad to say the least and had his hand wrapped up. All the students saw him and his injury, then they saw how Mike was glaring at me the whole trip over to Joe and Morgue. I could feel all of them stare at me, but I just kept my arms crossed and looked ahead to the coaches that were at the front of the group, talking.

After a few more minutes, the coaches spoke up. "Okay class. Due to the fight that just happened in the boy's locker room, were going to have the whole class punished." Coach K said.

I then felt all the stares that were on me turn into either extreme shock, or extreme glares. They were all either surprised that I was in a fight with Mike and Mike was the only one who was hurt. Or. They were angry at me that I just cost the whole class a day of free time.

"So as punishment, we are all going to take a lap around the whole school block. That means around the Elementary School and back, for the new students coming in from East Quest High." Now that was funny. All of my friends coming from a place called East Quest. That sounded just like Equestria to me.

Most of the students all groaned in annoyance. That is, except for three certain school thugs I saw out of the corner of my eye. They were chuckling and smiling right at me. I knew they had something special planned for me for all the trouble I had put them through today.

"Well, you all better get going. If you can't run the whole lap before class ends, then you might not only miss your bus, but you will also get no points for today. Does everyone get it?" She asked.

"Yes Coach K." Most everyone said, as the rest just nodded.

"Good, then go on, clocks ticking!" Coach K said. Everyone then ran out, Morgue and his group being the first ones. It looked as though they were in a hurry to get outside.

I ran out too. Most people in the gym prefered to go in groups, but I just stayed to myself. I was never fast, but I had good stamina so I was able to run as fast as I could for a while.

My seven friends got outside after me and kept at a slow pace, grouped together. The only reason they went at such a slow pace was so the slowest one in the group could keep up, who was in this case the last girl I have yet to meet who looked like she wasn't even trying.

As I kept running, I couldn't help but feel something was happening. And the feeling got stronger with each step I took. Even though this was a dream, I knew this wasn't good.

Uh oh, something's going down! What's going to happen? Is Zeke the only one that knows that something's wrong, or does someone else know about it too? Will it involve his new friends? All these and more, next chapter!

Question of the Chapter: Do you think it's fair for the whole class to be punished when it's only one group of kids in the class who were the problem?

15. Bullies versus New Kids

What's up! I'm glad to see that everyone's still enjoying the story! Even with it reaching 15 chapters as of right now! You know... I think I should do something. I'm gonna hold a contest! The winner get's their own OC to be featured some times in the story! Now, it won't be a main character, but the OC will be mentioned throughout the story as a background character, or even at times that I have them as a main character! The winner will get the info on how to make the OC. The question will be the QotC (Question of the Chapter).

Okay, with that said, on with the story!

Disclaimer: I don't own MLP.

As the lap around the school block went on, I still had that feeling. Something wasn't right. What was Morgue and his friends talking about? Whatever it was, it had to do with me and my friends. They ran off and sprinted ahead of the whole class. Morgue and Mike didn't have a problem running the lap faster then anyone else, and, as lame as it sounded, Mike carried Joe with them so they all could get ahead of the class.

When I was in deep thought about this, I tripped about halfway through the lap, where I was behind the elementary school. I thought nothing of it and tried to get up, but my leg was caught on something. Rope to be exact. I tripped from a snare that was wrapped around my foot.

I tried to get out of it, but it was tied tight to my ankle. When I finally stood up with the snare still wrapped around my foot, I was pulled to the ground by it, then pulled towards the woods behind the elementary school. I clawed for anything that could stop me from being pulled away, but I only caught grass that waspulled along with me. Within a few seconds, I was pulled into the woods just deep enough where no one could see me.

Pinkie's POV

As we all ran around the schools in a giant circle, I started twitching! A LOT! "AH! Twitchy twitch!" I yelled out. I was twitching all over the place! Something really bad is about to happen!

"What is it Pinkie?" Twi asked me.

"Well, it's something going on in the forest over there!" I said, pointing to the forest behind the small school that had little kids in a yard playing games. That's where my Pinkie Senses were pointing me to anyway.

"Let's go everypony! It might be something going on with Blitz!" Twila said, taking the lead. All of us ran after her, running faster this time.

Zeke/Blitz POV

"Woah, what's going on!" I yelled out as I grabbed onto a tree to keep myself from getting pulled further into the forest. I was already too deep into the forest for anyone to see me though.

"What's going on is that were going to, ahem, thank you for everything that's happened today." I turned and saw Joe with a confident smirk, followed by Morgue and Mike, who were happy the snare plan worked.

"Thank me?! Your kidding right?" I asked as I stood up, the snare still around my ankle.

"Yeah. Thanking you for what you said earlier today, for Joe getting written up and an F on his test, and for breaking Mike's hand." Morgue said as he cracked his knuckles. "And don't worry. Will make sure the green haired loser, the ugly cowgirl, that wimpy butterfly lover, and the rest of your 'friends' get a proper thank you too."

"Pfft. Like I'm letting you do that." I said dryly as I finally got the snare off of me. I got ready for a fight as I stared Morgue down.

Morgue laughed at me as he looked to his friends. Mike was chuckling a little, as Joe sat there with his evil looking smirk. "Ya hear that boys. The robot thinks he take us on all by himself."

"Who said it was just him?" We all looked behind me, and what I saw I smiled at. It was all of my friends I had met today, all coming up to us. Pinkie, Twila, Spike, Jackie, Rainbow, Felicia, and that girl with them I still never met. As I looked at her, another split second flash happened and it was Rarity. It all clicked in. They were all here to help me.

"Ha. Really? Oh no, the WonderGirls and their spiky haired sidekick are here to 'defeat' us." Joe said as he stepped up. "Please, you all look like a bunch of hyperactive mental patients. Especially cotton candy girl right there." He said as he pointed to Pinkie.

"You have no right to insult us you ruffian." The pampered girl said as she stepped up.

"Yeah, shut up four-eyes!" Rainbow said as she stepped up next.

"Oh very clever, coming from what seems like a tomboy, with a fettish for rainbows." Joe noted. Rainbow gritted her teeth.

"That's it! Your gonna pay for that!" Rainbow said as she charged towards Joe, angrier then she's ever been.

I looked from the side lines as Rainbow was still running forward, but Mike had switched places with Joe and had his arm pulled back, ready to slug Rainbow right in the face. I wasn't about to let that happen.

When Rainbow saw they had switched places, she was running to fast to turn around, and was already within punching range. I acted quickly and charged in. Right as Mike brought his fist forward, I did the dumbest thing I could think of. I pushed Rainbow out of the way and stood in place of where she was.

I took the punch right to the right cheek. It was so hard a punch that I not only did it strike blood, but it sent me a foot or two into face first into a tree. From there, I was barely consious.

"Blitz!" Rainbow got up from where she was pushed to the ground and went over to me, concerned.

I simply chuckled weakly and spat up a little blood. "Wow, I'm an idiot." I said, very quiet. I then went out cold, not able to stay awake from the two hard hits I took one right after another.

3rd Person POV

"What right did you have to do any of this?!" Twila asked as she looked back at the group.

"Wow. Being the leader of the rag tag team of girls, I thought you would be at least a little smart. Turns out, your just as ignorent as the rest of them." Joe said with a bored expression and voice.

"Now you better be shuttin up. You and yer friends don't have any idea who your messing with. Now y'all can either give yerselves up, or stay and fight like the slippery varmits you are!" Jackie challenged.

"Slippery varmits?" Morgue laughed at jackie's southern tone. "Wow, Joe was right. Your just an ugly cowgirl." He insulted her.

"What did ya just say?!" Jackie reached under her hat and pulled out her rope. She then tried to catch Morgue.

Sadly, Morgue saw the rope and already had a plan. He quickly moved out of the way and grabbed the rope out of the air. He then yanked the rope and Jackie with it. She caught herself and kept her balance, but she was right in front of Morgue.

"Aw, ain't that a cute. The lil tough cow girl thought she could take on Morgue and his possy. Darn shame her ropin plan didn't go so well and backferd on er huh?" Morgue said, mocking Jackie's accent.

Morgue then took the rope and wrapped it around Jackie, tying her up. He turned her around and kicked her to the ground. Morgue then tipped a cowboy hat off to Jackie. "And thank ye kindly fer the hat and cash. Didn't know a cow girl like you would have twenty seven dollars on her person." He said as he held out the money that Jackie had in her back pocket.

When Felicia saw that Morgue had stolen Jackie's hat, and her money, she got a sudden burst of courage and stepped up, looking Morgue dead in the eye with 'The Stare'. "Why! Why would you do this?! What have any of us ever done to you?! Nothing mister! You should know it's not right to just steal things, or hurt people, or bully people! Just becasue you can, does not mean you should! Now are you going to give back everything you've stolen?! Or will I have to keep giving you 'The Stare' until you do?!" Felicia yelled, being right in Morgue's face.

Morgue simply tried to keep himself from laughing. He then looked at his friends, who were a little taken back by Felicia's stare, but Morgue wasn't affected. "Really? Guys, this. Is. Nothing. Watch the real master at work." He cleared his throat then started to turn around.

He then looked to Felicia and gave his signiture 'Death Glare', which made everyone but Felicia take a step back in fear. "Who are you to tell me what to do?! All you are, is a wimpy little girl, that thinks she can stand up for some losers! You couldn't stand up to a fly if you wanted to! All you are, is a big talker with a lame a** stare! If you want to make an impression, then do something about it! Like this!" He pushed her to the ground an kept up his Death Glare, as her Stare faltered into tears and shivering. "You! Aren't! ANYTHING!" Morgue yelled out.

Felicia then got up and backed away slowly, scared to tears from Morgue. The others were in shock that not only did the stare not work, but Morgue's death glare overpowered it.

Joe cleared his throat, getting everyone's attention. "I think were done here." Joe announced as he took a few steps towards the girls and Spike. Morgue nodded, as did Mike, letting Joe have a turn to step up.

"No were not. We won't let you get away with any of this!" Twila said as she went forward, not letting them get away. Not after what they did to her friends.

"Yes we are. A few of you aren't even in any condition to fight. The robot's unconsious, the Tomboy doesn't want to leave his side, the cowgirl is tied up with something else at the moment, and butterfly girl is falling apart. There is no way that four of you can defeat us, while eight of you weren't enough to begin with." Joe noted.

Twila glared at Joe, but he wasn't done. "If you truely want to get revenge, your money, or your dignity back, then we will wait for you in front of the high school after school ends. Maybe then you will all get it together and maybe even stand a chance." Him and the other two chuckled. "Oh who am I kidding. Not even something unexpected will help you." Joe walked over to his friends. "Come on gentlemen. I do believe we have a lap to finish up."

Joe and Mike went ahead, as Morgue simply smirked at all of them. "Ya know, all of this could've been avoided if you just ignored Zeke like everyone else. He's a waste of time. You know what he is? He's a loser with bad luck." He said as he poined to Zeke. "His mom died because she stayed in that run down house just to be with him. Becasue of the accident, he had to be turned part robot. His drug addict dad is the only real family he has left. And to top it all off, anyone that's friends with him just gets messed up or worse. They get the same bad luck as him." He explained to them. They all glared at him after his monologue.

Morgue then looked at Zeke and saw something. He went over and looked at Zeke's neck, seeing a necklace with something made of silver on it. "Hello, what do we have here?"

He grabbed the necklace and yanked it off of Zeke. He looked at it an saw it was a sharktooth necklace with very small gears that resembled the Cutie Mark from Blitz on both sides of the sharktooth made with silver. The necklace part was just some string, but that didn't bother Morgue. "This might be worth some money." He said as he stuffed it in his pocket. "Well, see you losers later." He said, tipping off his new hat to them as he ran off to join his friends.

The whole group was glaring at Morgue as he left, but looked back at Zeke with sadness in their eyes. "He's been through all of that, and no pony ever gave him a chance." Twila said.

All of them were sad. During the story, Pinkie's hair started to deflate from sadness. Felicia started to weep even more. Rainbow had clenched her fists, mad that those three had made Zeke's life worse. Spike was speechless and trembling a little at what he had heard. The rest had similar reactions, but it all showed one thing. Remorse.

After a few moments, Zeke started to wake up. He saw that all his friends were sad and hurt, and he got angry "We need to get them back." He said dryly, making all of them jump to attention and look at him. "Thing is, what do we do?" Zeke asked as he started to get up.

"What do we do?" Twila asked rhetorically. "We stand up to them! We can't just let them bully anyone anymore!" Twila noted with entuisiasm.

Zeke took in what Twila said and smiled, agreeing. "Yeah. Your right Twilight! We can't just let them win! We need to stand up to them!" Zeke said, purposly saying 'Twilight' instead of 'Twila'.

"Blitz's right! We can't let them no good bullies get the best of us! Besides, I ain't standin down and lettin that weasel keep my hat! That hat means so much to me." Applejack said as she stood up, getting her rope off of her. She remembered just how she got that hat, and started to get angry that Morgue stole it.

"As does my necklace. That's the last thing I have left from my mom, and Morgue isn't keeping that from me!" Zeke said, getting angry too. He realized his necklace was missing and the only explaination was that Morgue stole it.

"Blitz... Is what Morgue said... True? He said that everypony avoided you because... You were bad luck." Fluttershy said as she stood up from the ground, wiping the tears off of her face.

"Yeah. Ever since that incident, I was treated like crap because those three kept saying I was bad luck. Anyone that tried to stand up and say I wasn't was either beaten up, or got hurt some other way in an accident. I guess I am bad luck." Blitz said, sighing.

"No. No, your not bad luck." Blitz looked up and saw everyone smiling at him. Twilight continued. "While we've all been friends with you, sure we've had some things happen to us, but it was never anything we couldn't handle. None of us regret having you for a friend. In fact, everyone loves having you as a friend. We wouldn't have it any other way."

Blitz was surprised. He never had this many friends before in his life. They all were friends with him, becasue of how he was. Not from being part robot, or lies he hid himself behind, but for how he was on the inside. "I've never had friends like you guys before. I was always alone. No one ever stuck by me and liked me for a friend. Not even my own father. But you guys are real friends. You stuck by me, even when you didn't have to. Thank you." He finished with a smile.

All of his new friends smiled a little more and came in for a group hug. Blitz never liked hugs, because it was just uncomfortable for him. It didn't stop Blitz from smiling though as he was still happy to be around his friends.

Blitz felt a tear come from him. He had never cried a day in his life after the incident, and chose to just face anything life threw at him alone since no one stuck by his side. But here he was, facing his past with a bunch of friends at his side.

"Come on everypony, we have three bullies to stop." I said to them all.

They all nodded, saying different things like "Yeah!" or "Those three are going down!".

As Blitz looked at all seven of his friends in front of him, he had one more split second flash and saw them all in their pony (and dragon, in Spike's case) forms. He smiled, and knew just what his new life was going to be like as soon as he woke up.

Well, looks like Morgue and his pals are in for a rude awakening. With all eight of them at once, will Morgue's group stand a chance? How will the group of eight prevail? Will Blitz ever wake up? Find out next chapter!

QotC: What object do you hold dear to you? (Ex: Applejack's hat; Blitz's Sharktooth necklace) Explain why.

Best answer gets to enter their OC as a background/supporting character!

16. Element of Courage

Hello once again everyone! Well, I've picked the winner of the OC contest and have been PMing the reviewer that won. Don't worry, your character will come in soon. Now, I won't say who won, but rest assured winner that your OC will be in the story several times! If you want to announce in the reviews that you won, I can't stop you there. Anyway, with all of that clarified, let us move on to the story!

Disclaimer: I only own this idea and my OC Blitz. MLP belongs to the creators of the show.

Blitz POV

Okay, well I know just what we have to do! What we need to do, is get back at those three jerks, and get not only my shark tooth necklace, but Applejack's hat, and our pride! Only thing is, how do we do that if we won't hurt them? We can't just waltz right over and ask nicely.

Finally, as we all met up in the gym after the lap, with a few minutes until the bell dismissed school, I asked out loud. "So, are you guys all ready for this?"

"Yep." Rainbow Dash said. "This is going to be a piece of cake!"

"Oh! Oh! Can it be pie instead?!" Pinkie Pie asked, hoping it could be a piece of pie instead.

"Wait. I know it's probably obvious for you guys, but what's your plan? They're almost impossible to beat. Especially without any of your magic or wings." I said. I knew it was them for sure, so it made sense that they knew what I was talking about. They all just smiled more at me though when I mentioned that.

"Who said we didn't have any of our magic?" Twilight asked me, still with a smile on her face. From that on question, I knew what the plan was. More or less.

After the bell rang, Morgue and his group were outside the entrance of the school, all with confident smiles on their faces.

"Looking for us?" I asked out loud. Most of us were standing behind them all, coming outside a different way. They all turned around, slightly mad, but they were still keeping calm.

"Took you all long enough. We were startin to think that you would never show up." Morgue said, stepping up ahead of his two friends.

"We showed up alright. And were not letting any of you push around anyone else again." I said, confident.

"And what are you going to do? Teach us a lesson?" Joe asked sarcastically. The others snickered at his sarcasm.

Since it was after school, everyone else had gone home. It was just me an my friends, and Morgue and his friends in front of the school.

"Yes." I said simply. It was time for this to end once and for all.

"And how are you and your lame 'friends' gonna do that? Like everyone else that stood up with you, it's just going to end the same way. They're going to see it's a waste of time to be friends with you and leave you alone. How it's always been, and how it's always gonna be." Morgue said.

"No. Your wrong. I know these are my friends. They went out of my way to be my friends. They showed me kindness when no one else would." When I said that, A bright pink butterfly symbol appeared above Fluttershy.

"W-what's that?" Morgue asked, taking a step back, joining his friends. Him and his two friends saw it floating right in the air with nothing holding it up.

"They were loyal and stayed as my friends when they didn't have to be." I said as a bright red lightning bolt symbol appeared over Rainbow Dash's head.

"T-theres no way this is real! This defies all of science itself!" Joe exclaimed, freaked out and confused about what was going on.

"They were honest and told the truth just to help me when I was in trouble." A bright orange apple symbol appeared over Applejack.

At that point, a wind started blowing in, the power of three elements pushing the wind towards Morgue, Joe and Mike. With the wind, Applejack's hat flew off of Morgue's head and came back to Applejack, landing perfectly on her head.

"Woah there Zeke! Hehe, calm down! You knew we were just kidding all these years with what we did right? Right?" Morgue asked as he saw the third symbol appear.

"They cheered me up and made me with laugh when I was down and all alone." A bright blue balloon symbol appeared over Pinkie Pie. Blitz then backed up a few feet and joined his friends. He and Spike were inside the circle the mane six made formed around them.

"Uh, guys? What's going on with the balloons?" Mike asked, very confused.

"I-I-I don't think those are balloons Mike! They aren't swaying around like normal balloons would!" Joe noted, getting scared.

"They were generous enough to offer their help me when I needed it." A purple diamond symbol then appeared over Rarity.

"Pfft! T-this is just all smoke and mirrors-o-or somethin! Tell em Joe!" Morgue said, turning towards Joe.

Joe just stayed silent, not sure what to think. Mike held Joe up in front of him, using him as a shield. "J-j-joe! What's goin on?! I'm scared!"

"I don't know what's going on! And what would using me as shield do?! Put me down!" Joe yelled as he tried to get free from Mike's grasp, but to no avail.

"Finally, they all helped me understand something that I had never believed in until now. The Magic of Friendship." Twilight took a step in front of all of them as a very bright magenta star symbol appeared above her.

"RUN! Back in the school!" Morgue ordered. They turned around and stopped in their tracks when they something they wouldn't believe. Two alicorns watching from inside the school. One with a white coat an a rainbow mane, and another with a black coat and a night sky mane. They were all smiling at Blitz's group.

"And don't forget one final element." Twilight said to the three. Morgue and his group turned around to face Twilight as she finished. "Blitz not only stood up to anything that scared his friends, but he stood up to something that so many couldn't find the courage to stand up to. He represents the Element of Courage" Twilight announced.

When she said that, a black gear appeared above me symbolizing that he was an Element of Harmony as well. I was really surprised with this, as was the rest of them, except for Twilight and the two princesses.

Then, Twilight's eyes glew pure white as she and the elements lifted us into the air. One by one, we all turned back into our pony forms as Morgue, Joe, Mike, Spike, Princess Celestia, and Princess Luna all watched in awe or happiness.

Then, from out of no where, a flash of light blinded all of us. It covered that whole area, and stayed there.

When I woke up, everything was still white. It was pure nothing. I stood up, still in my pony form, and looked around. I thought I saw nothing until I turned around and saw Princess Celestia right behind me.

"I think I understand it now." I told her.

"Oh? And what id it that you understand?" She asked, smiling at me.

"I was sent to Equestria for a reason wasn't I? I was sent because I really do belong here." I said, realizing it.

"Yes. I had you sent here, because I felt the Element of Courage within you." Celestia said with a nod.

"Then why didn't you just tell me from the beginning?" I asked, confused.

"Because you needed to learn it yourself. It wasn't something I could simply tell to you and you would understand. Your world doesn't believe in the Magic of Friendship, let alone magic itself. You needed to learn who you were through experience." Celestia explained.

I chuckled a little at that. "Your right. If you just told me up front, I probably would've never believed it. Still, how will I fit in with the rest of the group? I mean, I'm different then them." I said.

"You may be different on the outside, but on the inside, you're the same. You believe in the same thing, you all know what the difference between right and wrong, and you all are pure." Celestia explained further as she made something appear out of thin air with her magic. My shark tooth necklace. "Your mother would have been proud." She said with a sincere smile.

I was at a loss for words. I understood every word that she told me. As she placed the necklace on me with her magic, I smiled at her. "Thank you. Thank you so much. Thank you for helping me to figure out who I am, thank you for bringing me to the only friends I've had in a long time, just... Thank you Princess Celestia." I bowed my head to her, feeling like an idiot because I had no idea how to bow to her in pony form.

She noticed and giggled a little at me. "You still have some things to learn, but I have no doubt you'll be able to figure them out in time." Princess Celestia said as she forgave my poor manners. "Now you might want to wake up now. It's morning." She informed me.

I rubbed the back of my head in embarrassment. "Hehehe... About that... I'm sorry if this is offensive of me to say, but I've never been a morning person. Or morning pony in this case. I've always been a bit of a night owl." I told her, not sure what she'd think. I thought that she'd be kinda offended by what I said, but I felt I had to.

To my surprise though, Celestia simply giggled a little more. "Ah, so that's why you get along with my sister so well. She'll be pleased to learn that there's a pony who actually prefers staying up during the night. None the less, your friends are waiting for you. As is me and my sister. Now, hurry and wake up." She reminded me.

From that point on, everything got blurry. And before I knew it, I was awake.

When I woke up, I was still groggy like most times when I wake up. I did not want to get up now. Sadly, it didn't matter what I thought. A doctor came in, said I was to leave since I was healthy and all, then left just as fast as he entered.

Since everything was in slow-mo for me, I had to snap myself awake. I took the covers off and slowly and gently... literally rolled out of bed and purposely face-planted on the hard concrete floor. That snapped me awake as I got up an headed out, the slight pain giving me the adrenaline to wake up.

I started to head outside and when I did, I saw them. All of them. Celestia, Luna, Twilight, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Spike, and Applejack. "Hey everypony."

"Hey Blitz." Pinkie Pie said with a smile that said, 'I know something you don't'. Nearly everybody else had the same smile.

"Okay, what's with the 'We know something you don't' smiles?" I asked. They all looked at each other, acting like they had no idea what I was talking about. But after a few seconds of me raising an eyebrow, they gave up the façade.

"Okay, you got us. We're all here because there's something we wanted to give you. Something Princess Celestia actually wanted to give you personally." Twilight said as she moved out-of-the-way so Princess Celestia could come forward.

"Yes. Well, with you being an Element of Harmony, I had something that you need for it to be official." Princess Celestia said. As I looked around, I noticed something that I didn't notice before since I was still just getting up. All of my friends had their Element of Harmony necklace or crown on.

"With you being the Element of Courage, you will need this." Princess Celestia brought forward a small box and opened it with her magic. Inside was a small, circular, golden object that had a gear, the same one on my Cutie Mark, in the middle of it. It was made from an Onyx, so it was black like my coat.

"Woah." I exclaimed, amazed that this thin was made especially for me. Then I noticed something. "Wait, shouldn't it be a necklace like theirs?" I pointed out.

As Princess Celestia took it out of the box, everybody else saw it and noticed the same thing as well. They were all confused, except for Princess Celestia, even Princess Luna. "Well, this Element is different. Instead of being required, it instead makes the original Elements stronger. Also, if need be, it may replace an Element if one is missing." Princess Celestia explained.

That was already cool within itself, but it still didn't explain the one thing we all had a question about. "But, I have never seen any kind of Jewelry such as this. May I ask, what is it?" Rarity asked, asking the thing that the rest of us were trying to figure out.

"Well, in Blitz's world, it's known as a shoulder pad. But this is far from something that is just meant from protection." She added as she used her magic to send it towards my front left shoulder. As soon as it got close, it stuck together with my shoulder with a click.

"So that's how it fits. It has a magnet." I answered. I saw how it stuck to my metal leg like a magnet to a refrigerator. It was just like a shoulder pad to. And to add-on to the amazement, it didn't even get in the way of moving my leg around.

"Yes. Now remember, it is not to be handled lightly. And until it's needed, it will remain in Twilight's library with the rest of the Elements." Princess Celestia told me as she took the Element back and put it in the box, handing it to Spike, who carried the box for Twilight.

"I understand." I said with a nod.

"Good. Now, I'm afraid we must go back to Canterlot. I can't wait for your next letter Twilight." Celestia said as she and Princess Luna started to get back on their royal chariot back to Canterlot.

"Don't worry Princess Celestia, I won't forget to send one!" Twilight said happily as she and the rest of us watched as the two Princesses started going back to Canterlot.

As soon as Celestia's chariot was out of sight, they all turned to me at once. "So what's your world like?" "Does your word's culture seem similar to ours?" "Is there any flying humans?" "What kind of parties do you throw?" "What is the fashion there like?" "Does your world have farms too?" "Is the magic the same there?" "What animals live in your world?" "What does-"

"STOP!" I yelled out. After every one of them kept asking questions one after another, I could NOT take it anymore! I hated being the center of attention, and I hated when I was asked so many questions. I swear, if they start interrupting me, that would complete the set of things I hate about conversations.

They all did so and I sighed in relief. "Okay, in order of questions you've all asked so far." I took a deep breath, knowing it take some air to answer all of their questions.

"Our world is like this one, except we rely on science instead of magic. There are HUNDREDS of cultures in my world so some of them, including mine, are like your's. There are only a normal type of humans, but we have giant flying machines that can fly us pretty far. Are parties are pretty much the same as your's as far as I can tell. Again, there are many types of fashion that match the cultures." Deep breath again. "Yes we have farms, and probably about more types of food then you do. My world doesn't believe in magic. And finally, we have the exact same types of animals that you do, not counting ones that revolve around magic." I took one last breath.

I looked around and saw they were all stunned. "Come on, doesn't that at least deserve some applause or something?" They all laughed a little at that, and clapped their hooves, slightly impressed with how I answered their questions perfectly.

"Thank you. And to answer one of the next questions one of you will probably ask. Humans do not have any magic powers, so we adapted by using science instead. But, we still have creativity like yours, even though ours is probably not as good as any of yours." I noted before Twilight could say whatever she was going to ask. I was apparently right, and she closed her mouth right after I finished. "Well, if you have any other questions, I guess I should answer them now. But, I'm probably no good at going into extreme detail about some things. So, who has a question?"

As I said that, all of their hooves went up simultaneously. Just from that, I knew this would be a hard thing to teach them about. But at least I was in a world where I had friends that accepted me.

And that's that! Now, even though Blitz has made up his mind, and all seems summed up, this is not the end! I really wish that I had this chapter up by April Fools day though... It would've made a good joke! I would've worded the ending a little differently and made it sound like that was the end. Anyway, with a new Element of Harmony in play, will any evil stand a chance? What crazy adventures will they have? What will come of the World of My Little Pony now that someone, or pony now, will have different views to share with it? Guess I'll these answers will be answered in time! See you all when I get a new chapter ready! Might be a while since I have to come up with a story plot or just make some chapters for laughs, so sorry if it takes more than just one day for the next chapters to come out!

Well, that's all I have to say! See you all next time!

QotC: What would your element be? (It doesn't have to be a Harmony one. It can be something like the Element of Puppies if you wanted!)

17. Surprise!

SURPRISE! You all probably thought this was a chapter huh? NOPE! Chuck Testa! Oh, how I've been waiting for a chapter to put that joke in! Anyway, turns out it's harder for me to put in original chapters then I thought. You see, as far as I can tell, there are two ways I can go to start off the chapters. I want to make my own kind of MLP seasons that have my character in it and because of that, I'm making up original episode ideas. So far, I have three seasons lined up, each with season finales bigger then the last! But I NEED YOU, to help me start-up everything!

As I said, I have two ways to start off my first MLP season!

1: Help tie up the loose ends about Blitz's robotics. There are some things about Blitz being a cypony I either haven't fully explained, or haven't even introduced. So this would help explore what exactly Blitz can do with these abilities.

2: Have Blitz get his own occupation. I know, at first this doesn't sound like a good chapter idea, but it needs to be an 'episode' none the less. It's a key episode that will help to develop the other episodes. This is more to help the storyline, but I'll have to make this one of the first episodes anyway.

So yeah, those are the two choices, and since I can't make up my freaking mind, I need the viewers, which is all of you, to help me out. So I'll be putting it to a vote. Which will be the QotC. Thought I wouldn't have on of those in an Author's Note chapter huh?

Finally, there are a few notes I'd like to put in to help keep any questions or theories away.

1: Twilight is still a unicorn in this and will remain one. As much as I loved seeing Twilight become an alicorn, it'd be tough to figure out how to put that in the story at this point. It would also make her a little to invincible against some challenges I have coming up in the story. Haters, call me a lazy writer all you want but I just can't do it. Sorry.

2: There will be couples in this story, and I will draw some out from you all if I hear enough hype for the same couple. Just don't mention Rainbow Dash in them ;). Or Spike in any case. I have couples already planned for those two so sorry.

3: Winner of the OC contest, this is for you. I'm sorry to say I can't fit her into the story juuuussssst yet, but by my grave I will get her into this story! That. I. Promise.

4: Any episode ideas you guys have, your are more then welcome to speak up about them. If I do end up using your ideas, then I will mention in the disclaimer who brought up the idea for the episode. I'm trying to be real careful about all of the disclaimer stuff because I don't want anyone reporting me about that. I'm pretty sure that none of you would do that to me, and please don't, but there might be some viewer going around to random stories and reporting them for no reason. I don't want to accidently mess up on one chapter if that happens and a fanfiction person shuts down the story or something. Call me overly cautious, but it's happend to Authors I know.

5: Finally, if you have any tips that can help me make this any better, please put it in the coments or sen it by PM. I know this story is not perfect and will never be since it has my own personal touch, but I want to make it as close to perfect as I can. So anything that would help would make this better.

Well, that's all I have to say so I guess I'ma out! PEACE!

QotC: Which choice is better to start off my MLP season? 1 or 2?

18. Close Calls (episode 1)

Welcome viewers! I want to thank everyone that choose either this choice, or the other. I really needed help with deciding, as stupid as it sounds, and I'm glad that some of you helped me out. Anyway, I finally got this chapter up and it turned out way better than I thought. And like I said in the note, I had to make this chapter in order for other plots to make sense.

Also, if MLP makes episodes that have the same plot as my stories but made differently so it doesn't have Blitz and is worded for the younger generation, I'm just gonna laugh my head off at the fact that it's a HUGE coincidence, or that they might somehow in some upside down world actually read this story! LOL.

Disclaimer: I only own the ideas of the chapters and my OC Blitz. The creators of MLP own the idea of My Little Pony itself and all that other stuff.

The whole day after I had woken up from the coma had been... Informative. For them at least. I told them about tons of stuff about my world. Movies, soda, some fashion stuff, only since Rarity wouldn't shut up until I said something about that. They were all really fascinated by what I had to say, and I had barely hit the tip of the iceberg. At least they understood what most of it was so I didn't have to explain every little detail.

When it was starting to get dark, I had to go back to sleeping in the barn of Applejack's apple orchard again. It wasn't anything to complain about, but I guess as soon as I had the chance, I would fix up that other house I still want to live in. Despite the whole Old Mare Crankle thing. Besides that, I still have a few other things I needed to take care of sooner or later, but I'll save that for later.

The next morning, I woke up like usual. Groggy and half awake. Even if I woke up myself, I would still barely be awake. So to help wake up, I rolled off of the hay bale, falling on the ground behind it.

That's when I heard a voice coming from the barn doors. "Ya in here Blitz?" I heard Applejack ask. Guess she couldn't see me behind tha hay bale. "Guess he ain't here. Maybe he left already." I heard her leave and the barn doors close behind her.

I got up from behind the hay bale. "Huh... Wonder if she wanted some help or something..." *Yawn* "Oh well, I'll try to find her later, but for now I need to wake up. Maybe if I just fly around a little..."

So after I got up and flew out the barn window, I looked around. As I flew around though, I didn't look at where I was going and flew straight into a cloud that was just small enough to hide me inside.

I started to get out, but I felt something... sit on me? "Hey Rainbow Dash, do you see Blitz yet?! We need to find him!" I heard Pinkie Pie call out from below. I couldn't tell them where I was because there was a bunch of cloud in my mouth. So, I was a seat cushion until Rainbow Dash got off of me.

"Nope! Can't see him anywhere!" They were yelling since the cloud was a little ways off the ground. "He's probably around here somewhere though, come on!" I felt Rainbow Dash fly off me and afterwords, I was able to pop my head out of the clouds to tell them where I was. Before I could stop them though, they were both gone.

"What do they even need?" I asked as I got out of the cloud and just sat on it. "Probably to help find something that's under a blanket." I joked. How did Rainbow Dash not see me when I was right under her nose. Literally.

As I looked at the cloud, I saw it was a thunder-cloud. Maybe that could help wake me up. The last time I absorbed lightning, I got so much adrenaline that I went into a coma. But that was a huge amount of it. So maybe if I just take some electricity from this cloud, then it just might work.

I looked at the cloud and tried to remember just how I absorbed the thunder last time. The only time I did, all I did was hit the cloud so maybe...

As I hit the cloud with my metal leg, I saw the thunder course through me just like before. As soon as all the thunder was absorbed through the cloud, I could feel the electricity flowing through me. It was wierd though, and it felt like I was Pikachu. Great, the cliché keeps getting worse and worse. First I have a thunder bolt-shaped tail, that's made of iron, I can absorb electricity, and to top it all off I'm an animal that usually walks on all fours. I swear, if I grow red cheeks and my coat turns bright yellow, I'm just going to act like a Pikachu for the rest of my life, no questions asked.

Well, at least I'm wide awake now. That, and I feel like I have a bad sugar rush. Almost as bad as Pinkie Pie's. Either way, at least now I can catch up to Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie and ask why they were looking for me.

"Look out, the building's unstable!" I looked down and saw a frame of an unfinished house swaying around, about to topple over. It still had a lot of construction workers on it and they were trapped on the frame. So much for catching Rainbow Dash an Pinkie.

Without thinking, I flew towards the weak frame, going really fast since I still had all the electricity flowing through me. As soon as I got there, I spotted the weak point of the frame and held it up, making the frame shake less violently. It was still a little wobbly, but all of them were able to get off unharmed.

"That was way to close! Thanks kid, what's your name?" A brown pony with a deep voice, a construction hat, and tool belt on. He, along with the rest of them, had calmed down. Which was stupid because the frame was still about to break apart!

"Blitz! And, if it isn't any trouble, can you get the support beam on the frame already?!" I yelled out. I might be a cypony, but that doesn't mean that I can't hold a whole houses frame forever!

"Oh right! You heard the young one, get some support beams on the frame!" He called out. All of them hurried up and got the support beams up. When they finally had enough for it to be structurally sound, I let go carefully and landed back on the ground. "Again, thanks for the help their kid. We don't know why we didn't notice we were missing some support beams." He explained.

Ignoring the thanks I got, I went over to a table that had a blue paper on it. It was obvious that it was the blueprints and I inspected them. Sometimes, my construction class pays off way more than I ever thought it would. When I looked in between the blueprints and the frame I noticed something. "How long have you all worked on the frame?" I asked.

"Well, we worked on most of it yesterday, and we were supposed to finish it today, but it's getting messed up somehow." He explained. I nodded an kept inspecting the prints and the frame.

That's when I saw it. "These blueprints don't even match the framework!" How did they mess that up?!

"What?!" The worker asked very mad. He looked at the prints, and the framework, trying to figure out how. I showed him the difference that was on the first floor, so that part had to be built yesterday. "Jumpy J messed up the delivery again!" He looked to the group. "Take down the part of the frame we built today! Keep the support beams up! Jumpy J gave us the wrong blueprints again!" They all groaned and got to work on takin apart the frame-work. Since he was giving the orders, I guessed he was the foreman.

"Wait, who's Jumpy J?" I asked, confused. I might've been in Equestria for just a few days, but even I knew that name wasn't normal.

"Well, we give every pony on the construction crew a nickname. It's easier that way. He's kinda clumsy, but we trust him with bringing the prints from the construction hall, to the cites. But, sometimes he gets em wrong." The foreman said, scratching his head under his hat.

"Want any help? I'm sure I can find 'Jumpy J'." said with air quotes around Jumpy J. Which isn't that hard with hooves at all actually.

"That would be great! He should be at one of the other cites. There's only two others so it should be easy to find em." He said, handing the wrong blueprint to me. "And while you're at it, could you give him back this one? Maybe it would make him focus a little more."

"Got it. Thanks dude, I'll bring back the right blueprints." I said, taking off flying. I had to find Jumpy J and get the right blueprints.

3rd Person POV

As Blitz flew off, he didn't see Rarity coming up to the foreman. "Excuse me. Have you seen a young stallion with a well-kept lightning bolt-shaped tail, and a black coat to match? Me and my friends have been frantically looking everywhere for him." Rarity asked the foreman.

"Oh, that guy? Yeah, he helped us out greatly. He saved nail-head, hardwood, and some of the others over there. Then he offered to chase down Jumpy J and went over to one of the other cites." The foreman explained. By the end of that sentence, Rarity was so confused by the nicknames that she had no idea what he was talking about.

Luckily, he was smart enough to notice and simpled it down a little. "The frame over there was about to break with some ponies still on it. Blitz saved em and offered to chase down a pony that mixed up some blueprints."

Rarity was still a little confused, but understood that Blitz was here and went off somewhere else. "Alright. And can you tell me where exactly he headed?" She asked.

"Oh. Well he went flying off towards one of the other construction cites to find Jumpy J." The foreman answered.

"Thank you sir. Well, i best be off my way." Rarity said as she walked off. She had seen the cites around somewhere in Ponyville, and went off to find Blitz.

"Wow! Why can't I have a mare like that come looking for me?" One of the workers said. They were all watching Rarity leave, ignoring their work.

The foreman just shook his head at them. He was older than Rarity so he didn't care about her looks, but most of the other workers that were with him were young enough. "Get back to work!" He yelled out. They all snapped back to reality and started taking apart the frame again.

And so starts the beginning of the first 'episode'. What do all of Blitz friends need? Will the construction in Ponyville ever be able to build something without needing saving? Is this plot even going to get any better? All of these answered, next chapter!

Wow, I need a new outro! The whole, rhetorical questions thing, isn't that good is it? Oh well, guess I'll just stick by it until I figure something else out.

QotC: What is the most dangerous place to be on Earth, including natural and unnatural? I don't mean supernatural, I mean regular places. (Ex: Construction Cites, Caves, Nuclear Plants, etc.)

19. The job(s) (episode 1)

Welcome all! This is the second chapter of episode one! Yeah, it's gonna be confusing for me to do that, but it's the best way for me to get out more chapters. That, and I just like writing an episode in small groups like these. Well, that's all I have to say so... ON WITH THE STORY!

Disclaimer: I don't own MLP or the new pony showing up in this chapter. The new pony belongs to the winner of the competish a few chapters back, and MLP itself belongs to the owners of the show.

As I flew ahead, I spotted one of the other cites and came in for a landing. Thankfully, I caught a lucky break when he saw a sky blue pony with a construction hat on and carrying bags over his back. He tripped over literally nothing and the bags of stuff he was carrying spilled over in front of him.

I shook my head and landed behind him. "Want some help?"

"Woah!" The pony jumped what seemed like five feet in the air and landed back on the ground, tripping again. He got up and turned around, seeing me. "Dude, watch it! You scared me crazy!" He yelled out.

"Sorry. Sorry. Look, the foreman at one of the cites sent me to get you. He said you mixed up the blueprints." I said, showing him the blueprint I brought with me.

He facehoofed and groaned. "I messed up again?! Oh, I told them that I was the wrong pony for the job." He went to the bags and pulled out a blueprint and looked at it carefully. He then sighed and gave it to me. "This is the right one. Which one did I give them?" He asked as he we traded blueprints. "Oh come on! This is group B's blueprint!" He turned to the cite behind us. "Wait... If this is the blueprint for this cite, then that means-"

Before he could finish, there was a loud crash from the cite by us. We looked at the sound and we saw that part of the frame collapsed. Luckily, none of them were hurt. "That their blueprint's wrong too." He finished. "Why did they give me this job?"

"Uh dude? If you want, I could help out with the blueprint problem. I don't have anything else I gotta do." I said, forgetting that my friends were looking for me.

"Really? Oh thank you!" He said, shaking my hoof like a madman.

"Your welcome!" I said, him shaking me from how much he shook my hoof. "Let go!" I finally got out, moving so much I was vibrating.

"Oops! Sorry!" He said, finally letting go. He went over and traded out blueprints, giving them the right one and coming back with the other one.

As soon as I got my footing back, I got the two blueprints and flew up. "Thanks. Bye dude." I said as I took off, flying towards the other cite. It was confusing figuring what blueprints went where, but at least I knew the answer.

3rd Person POV

Sad part was that as Blitz left, Fluttershy walked over slowly, trying not to get in the way of any of the workers. "Excuse me." She tried to get Jupy J's attention.

"AHH!" Jumpy J said, jumping away from Fluttershy instinctivly, making Fluttershy shriek as she jumped away from him. Jumpy J got up and looked back, seeing Fluttershy shivering. "Sorry! I didn't mean to scare you! It's just, you scared me." He said sheepishly.

"Oh. Sorry. It's just, I was hoping you could help me find my friend. He has a lightning bolt tail, and is friendly." She explained.

"Oh, him. Yeah, you just missed him. He flew off that way." Jumpy J said, pointing towards the other construction cite.

"Thank you so much. And sorry I scared you, I didn't mean it." Fluttershy said.

"It's okay. I just get scared easily." He dismissed her apology, blaiming himself for acting jumpy. "Good luck catching up to your friend." he said to her.

"Thank you." Fluttershy said before slowly flying off in the direction Jumpy J pointed out.

"Well, at least I'm done for the day." Jumpy J said happily.

"Jumpy J, get over here!" A forman yelled out.

"Ah!" Jumpy J yelled out, falling on his back from jumping backwards the third time today.

Blitz POV

As I got to the last cite, I saw that none of them were doing anything. Guess they didn't even have a blueprint yet. I landed on the ground and looked around for the closest worker around me.

"Hey, who are you?" I turned around and saw another pegasus behind me. She had a orange coat, red mane and tail, with some cutie mark that had something that reminded me of that tv show that was about a race of warrior cats. She also had a concstruction hat on so it was obvious that she was a construction worker.

"I'm Blitz. Some pony called Jumpy J told me to bring over these blueprints." I told her, taking out the blueprints for this construction cite and handing them to her.

"Finally, I thought these would never get here." She turned around an tossed them to the foreman of this cite, then turned back to me. "By the way, I'm Ginger Star. Wait, how come you brought them over? What happened to Jumpy?" She asked.

"Well, I was at one of the other cites he was at, and he mixed up the blueprints. After I caught up to him, he asked if I could go ahead and bring you guys your blueprints." I explained.

"Well, it's probably a good thin you did. He might've brought us the wrong one. Thanks dude, we owe you one." She said.

"Nah, you don't have to. I just had nothing better to do and offered to help. Anyway, I got to bring these last blueprints to the last cite. See ya." I said, flying off back to the first construction cite to finish bringing the blueprints to the right cites.

3rd Person POV

Sadly, Blitz took off before Spike could stop him. Spike was going towards Ginger, looking at Blitz as he flew away.

"Blitz, wait up!" Spike kept running forward to try and catch him, but it was obvious he was about to fall over in exhaustion.

Luckily for him, Ginger stopped him. "Woah there little dragon. If your gonna even catch Blitz, you might want to catch your breath first." Ginger told Spike.

"Yeah... Your right." He said in between breathes. "Where was Blitz going anyway?"

"He went to the construction cite on the other side of Ponyville. The one closest to Sweet Apple Acres." She informed him.

"Got it... Thanks." As soon as Spike caught up enough breath, he started to run off again, but was picked up by a purplish magic.

"Spike, you can't just go running off to who knows where." Twilight scolded him as she placed Spike on her back.

"Sorry Twilight, but I saw Blitz. That pony over there told me that he flew off towards a construction cite that way." He said, pointing Twilight in the right direction.

"Okay, thanks Spike but next time, please wait up for me." Twilight told him. She turned to Ginger. "Thank you for the help." She said before running off after Blitz.

"No problem!" She yelled out after Twilight before going back to work.

Blitz POV

After a few minutes, I got back to the first cite and found the foreman. "Hey." I called out. He turned around and saw me. "Sorry it took so long, but I finally got the blueprints."

"Great. Thanks kid, we owe ya one." He said, taking the blueprints from me.

"If I had a gold bit for every time some pony told me that." I said, following him over.

"Yep, these are the right ones alright." He then started yelling out orders on what to do to the workers, who wasted no time in doing them. "You know, you did a good job kid. How'd you like to work for the construction crew?"

Wait a second, what? All I did was deliver blueprints and already this guy wanted me to work for him? Is he an idiot or something? He doesn't even know who I am, let alone know if I'm qualified or not. Heck, I don't even know if I want to work for a guy who would just hire random ponies off the street... But... I do kinda need someway to make money. That, and it's probably not a good idea to mooch off of my friends any more. And to add to it I do like building stuff, so it's right up my alley. "Alright, I'll do it. But just one question, why do you want me to work here anyway?" I asked. If he had a good enough reason, maybe he could prove he wasn't some idiot.

"Because. You obviously know a thing or two about it. Your reliable. And to top it all off, your a living multi tool with that tail of yours." He said, pointing to my tail.

I looked at my tail, and then back at him. I was really confused now about how he knew that. "Wait, how did you know my tail is made of metal?" I never told him about it, and unless my friends just told every single pony in Ponyville, no one else should've told him that either.

"I could tell that things made a metal from a mile away kid. It's actually crafted very well, made with some very sturdy metal as far as I can tell. Plus, if you look at it hard enough, it shines from the sunlight up there." He said, pointing out the obvious. I never really noticed that before... maybe I should get some dust or dirt or something to cover that up.

"So if you can move that tail of yours around, then you can use it as a hammer, or crowbar, or some tool like that." He pointed out again. Huh, never thought of that.

"Wow, thanks for the tip. So when do I start?" I ask. Maybe this forman wasn't as stupid as I thought. That, an he gave me some really good pointers about how to use my artificial tail.

"You can start tomorrow. Just come to the construction hall that's near the mayor's office, and we'll give you your tools and everything you'll need." He explaind to me.

"Wait. Isn't there some kind of paper work or something I need to fill out? Or an interview or something?" I asked. There had to be something I had to do along those lines.

"Oh yeah, there is one question. Have you ever been convicted of a felony?" He asked me with a serious look. Was that really it?

"Uh, no." I said simply. It was wierd that that was the only question he had to ask.

"You sure?" He took a step towards me, looking even more serious.

"Yeah, I'm sure." I didn't like that he was in my personal space, but tried to keep my cool.

"Are you absoutly sure? You've never been convicted of a felony?" He asked, jabbing me in the chest with his hoof once every word he said.

It made me mad and I looked him straight in the eye. "Yeah, but if you keep asking me then my answer might have to change." I said with the same serious face as he had.

He took in a deep breath and almost looked like he was furious, but after I just sat there and waited for my answer, he chuckled loudly. "That's the attitude were lookin for!"

Wait, this was just to see how I would react? Okay, this guy is smarter then I thought. Still, it made me crack a sarcastic joke as he was laughing. "What? Sarcastic and rude?" I asked sarcastically.

"No kid, hard working and tough! You made the cut! See you tomorrow kid!" He said as he turned back towards the construction cite.

"Huh, that was easy enough." I said as I turned around. Well, at least now I wasn't some hobo living in a friends barn. Now I was a hard working construction worker... That is living in a friends barn. Oh well, at least now all I gotta do now is focus on getting a better place.

"Blitz, there you are!" I looked over to my right and saw a few of my friends comin towards me. Pinkie Pie, Twilight, Spike, and Rainbow Dash.

"Oh yeah, you guys were looking for me. What did you need?" I said walking towards them.

"Well, we wanted to help you find a job. I mean, since you live in Ponyville now it makes since you should have one. So me and the others have been looking everwhere for you to help you find a job." She explained.

"Oh, well that's great and all but-" Before I could tell her what I've been doing all day, I was interupted by the rest of my friends.

"There ya are Blitz! We've been lookin everywhere for ya!" I turned around and saw Applejack, Fluttershy, and Rarity coming over to all of us.

"Applejack, Rarity, Fluttershy, just in time! We were about to help Blitz find his own job." Twilight informed them.

"Listen, thanks for the offer but-" Anoyingly enough, I was interupted Again.

"Oh come now Blitz, you can't simply say no. Were all taking the time to help you." Rarity pleaded.

"I don't think you understand, I-" God I hate being interupted.

"Oh come on Blitz! It's not gonna kill you!" Rainbow Dash said, thinking I was trying to say no simply because I didn't want to.

"Now come on Blitz, we have a lot of places to show you! Oh, you could work at Sugarcube Corner with me, or the delivery Service, or help Rainbow Dash with Weather Patrol..." Pinkie Pie started listing off jobs I could get as fast as she could, going off towards some direction. All the others followed suit, leaving me to do nothing but follow myself.

And that's the second part all written up! It was actually pretty easy to write, compared to the first part. I just hope you all liked it! Also, I'm glad I was able to put in the winner's OC. For the reviewer who won, feel free to tell me if I was off on the personality or anything. I want to make sure I can make Ginger Star as dead on as I can! Well, that's all I gotta say so see you all next chapter! Might take a while since I have Benchmarks at my school all this week, so sorry if the next chapter doesn't even get posted this week.

QotC: If you could have any job you wanted, regardless of what experiance or diploma you had, what would it be?

20. Fluttershy's Help (episode 1)

Hey everyone. Sorry I haven't put up a chapter all week, but like I said last chapter, I had Benchmarks, and my parents would take my laptop if I fail any of them. So, I had to divert my time to studying, and then video games to keep me from going into some stressed out state. I had rented Bioshock Infinate. I won't spoil anything, but I will say this. The ending explains why exactly the games called Infinate. I was literally pacing around my gaming room, trying to unravel the whole ending. It took me two hours before I gave up talkin in circles. So, yeah if your into games like Bioshock, I beg you to try it. It's amazing!

Anyway, with me havin some free time now, I've written up this chapter and have already written up a few others, so the chapters should be coming in one day after another. Now with that all said, let's begin.

Disclaimer: I do not own MLP.

As we all walked over in some random direction, I hung around the back. I didn't want to have to walk all around Ponyville looking for a job when I already had one. Not only that, but they wouldn't even let me tell them what was going on. Honestly, can't one of them actually calm down a little so I can tell them what's what?

"Are you okay Blitz?" I looked to my right and saw Fluttershy, looking concerned. I had been looking straight at the ground in deep thought, and the others were just boasting about how everything I could do in Ponyville was fun. They kept talking to me, but since they kept interupting each other about which job would be best, I never got a chance to talk about my own opinion.

"Yeah. It's just that I keep trying to tell all of them that before all of you found me, I had already gotten a job." I explained. The others were to much into deep debate to hear us. They each had a job in mind for me to take up.

"O-oh really? We had no idea. All of us came up with a job that we'd thought you'd like. Sorry we didn't let you tell us." Fluttershy apologized for all of them. Actually, she never interupted me, and if it came to her choice, she would probably let me tell them all what had happened.

"It's fine. I just wish I could go one sentence without being interupted. I hate that." I told her. She smiled at that a little. I guess she knows what it's like.

"Well, if you want I could try to help... What job did you find?" She asked.

"A job with the construction crew. They said I start tomorrow. But, how do we even get to tell them without them interupting us? I mean, they're so focused on trying to find me choosin one of the jobs they want, they won't let me explain" I asked. They were all trying to help, but they were going a little over the top about it all.

"Well, each of us are going to show you one place you can work. If you want, when I get a turn, I could say construction... What do you think?" She asked me with a polite smile. Wow, that was actually a good plan. I guess shyness has nothing to do with planning.

"Hey Blitz, here we are." I looked ahead and saw the market place. "Since we didn't know exactly what kind of job you liked, I thought that be should start with the basics." Twilight said as she gestured towards a bunch of booths that were selling random things. Mostly food, but some other stuff.

"Well, it's great and all," Before he told them the truth, he got a better idea. He decided to play it out for now, and tell them the truth when it was Fluttershy's turn to give her idea. "but I don't really like a job where you just stand behind a desk. It seems boring. Sorry." I said sincerly.

It wasn't really a lie, I mean, standing behind a booth desk all day did not appeal to me at all. I liked hands on stuff more then anything.

"Oh, there's much more then that here! You can also deliver stuff from one booth to another! That way, your able to move around instead of being stuck in one spot." Twilight noted.

"I don't know... I mean, delivering stuff isn't always that plesent. Ever heard of the fraze, 'Don't Shoot the Messenger'?" I asked.

"Well... I guess you have a point there. Besides, it wouldn't be a gurantee that you would even get a job delivering things." Twilight said in defeat. One down, a few more to go.

"Well then I guess it's my turn! Blitz, what do you think about working in weather control?!" Rainbow Dash asked, looking at me. "I mean, eventually I'll have to quit that job when I join the Wonderbolts, so there has to be some pony else who can at least be almost as good as me." She boasted.

"Almost as good as you? Well, some pony is modest today." I said sarcastically. All of them, except Rainbow Dash laughed at my humor, but Rainbow Dash didn't find it that funny.

"What? You think your better then me?" Rainbow Dash challenged. As much as I wanted to stand my ground, now wasn't the time or place to do so.

So anyway, I had to find a way to say no. Luckily, it wasn't that hard. "No Rainbow Dash, I was kidding. Either way, it sounds cool, but I can't do it. Watch." I said, flying up to a normal rain cloud. I simply put my metal hoof inside the cloud and I immediatly felt the pain of it. I pulled my hoof out and it was sparking with electricity. Since I was able to store electricity and use it to be stronger, faster, and stuff like that, I was a living battery. Which did not go well with rain or any large amount of water. I then flew back down before it got worse. The twitching already started though.

"See? I can't be-" I twitched an I stopped talking from it. Enough water getting to me and I would be sparking like a plugged in hairdryer in a bathtub. "-cause water doesn't mix with-" *twitch* "-metal." I finished. Each twitch felt like pain that could've been as weak as an Indian Arm Burn, or as strong as a mini heart attack.

"You gonna be okay there partner? Yer all twitchy lookin." Applejack noted with concern.

"Yeah, I'm f-" *twitch* "-ine. Just need to get this water off me. One of the bad parts about being a cypony is that water can short circuit you, or just plain out make you twitch." I explained.

"Wow, that's not good. You can't even go out in the rain?" Rainbow Dash asked. Applejack got out a rag and tossed it to me, and I started clean off my hoof. The twitching immediatly slowed down once I was dryer.

"Well, I supose it's my turn." Rarity said. What job could she possibly have for me? "Please, right this way." She said as we all followed her to wherever she lead us.

When we finally got where she brought us, we were at her boutique.

"You see, I need help from time to time with my designing, and while Spike is a great help, he's not able to help all the time since Twilight needs his help." Okay, well this isn't a problem. I can already think of a few reasons not to take this job. Since she over reacts, I'll just go with a calm approach.

"Well... It's a good idea... But I think I should listen to the others and see what there ideas are first." I concluded.

"Oh come now, you don't have to be good at fashion to help me. I would just need help with getting supplies, which would be gems, or meterials like cloth or silk." She informed me. Okay, I really didn't want this job. I pictured me having to do something like this, and I could already feel my manlieness degrading from helping a fashion obsesser like Rarity. "Besides, I'm sure Spike would want some help assisting me." She concluded.

"Yeah, I guess so." Spike said a little heart broken. Well, what do we have here? I see a way to weasel out of this already.

"I don't know... I'm not a gem person either. Besides, I'm sure that since Spike has helped you so much, that even if he wouldn't be here as much as me, he would still be ten times more helpful." I said, weaseling my way out. It wasn't a lie, and I wasn't backing out since I just wanted to get my original job.

"Well, I suppose you do have a point... Alright, if you say so." Rarity finally gave up. The others were all racking there brains, since all the things they've learned about me apearently are affecting the jobs they thought of too. As they all were in deep thought or were lookin to the others to see who would come up with something else, Spike turned to me and mouthed, Thank you. I nodded slightly at him, welcoming him silently. I think I had a pretty good idea as to why he wanted to stay. Hehe, I finally had something to use against him now.

"Well," We all turned to Applejack, who spoke up next. "I don't think I'd be able to offer much. Sweet Apple Acres is always lookin for more hooves to help, but it doesn't seem like yer thing. You'd have to wake up pretty early for it." She said. Well, that was easier then I thought. She even made the excuse for me. Well, that was four out of six, but I think were about done here anyway.

At this point, I was quickly getting tired of making excuses. I could do it all day, don't get me wrong, but since I could stop this pointlessness anytime I wanted, I choose now. "What about you Fluttershy? Do you have an idea?" I asked. Everyone in the room turned to her.

"Well, j-just one really..." She said quietly since all the focus was on her. "P-please follow me every pony." She said even quieter, starting to lead us out of the boutique and towards the construction cite we all met up at.

When we finally got there, all of them saw that we were back at the construction cite.

"Construction?" They all asked. They didn't expect Fluttershy to suggest something like that.

"Actually, that's not a bad idea." I said, trying to take the attention off of her. "Especially since I love building stuff."

"Yeah, you were around here earlier huh?" Twilight asked. "So, why don't you ask?"

"Ya sure? You guys don't have any other jobs you'd like me to turn down so I can show you all I already have a job and end all this?" I told them, also saying that they did all of that for nothing.

"Yeah, go right on ahead and... Wait, did you just say that you've been turning down all of our offers?" Twilight asked.

"Yep." I said simply. I looked at them all while they were taking all of this in, that is except for Fluttershy who walked up next to me.

3, 2, 1... "WHAT?!" Most of them yelled out. We had spent a long time walking from one side of Ponyville to the other and back again. Then, they explained their offers for no reason. Yeah, I'd say they all wanted to slap me for making them go through all of that for nothing. "Why would you make us parade all around Ponyville for no reason?" Twilight asked, ticked off.

"Well, at first I tried to tell all of you, but you insisted on it so much that I had no choice but to stay quiet. Fluttershy was the only one who listened to what I had to say, so she knew all along." I told them.

"Wait, let me get this straight." Rainbow Dash said. "You lied to us and made us all take you all around Ponyville when you could've just told us after we stopped to show you one of the jobs?" She asked, as mad as Twilight.

"Up, up, up. I never lied." I said with a sly smirk. As a few of them opend their mouths to object, I stopped them.

"I never said anything that was a lie. If anything, I just gave a lack of information. All the things I said that weaseled my way out of all of your choices, weren't lies either. I really do twitch up when I touch rain, I don't like being couped up in one place, and Spike is probably way better at any job Rarity would have. I simply never said that I had a job, so, no lies." I said, keeping my sly smirk.

"But, why didn't you tell us when you had the chance?" Twilight asked.

"Well... I thought it would make a few good laughs." I said with a chuckle. The others saw that it was ironic in a way and laughed with me.

"I didn't even see it coming!" Pinkie said, jumping out from behind me. "You got us good! You too Fluttershy!" She said, looking at Fluttershy.

"Oh, I just wanted to help Blitz, I didn't mean for it to be a joke...Sorry..." She said.

"It was just a harmless joke. Besides, I was technically being nice about it since you guys went through so much trouble just to help me. So, it would've been rude either way." I told all of them.

"Well, I guess we do owe you an apology. We should've listened to you in the first place instead of just pushing you into something." Twilight apologized for all of them.

"It's okay. Just please don't interupt me like again. Honestly, I can't stand it when that happens." I told her.

"Deal." She said. "By the way, since your part of the Ponyville Construction Crew now... that means that you can help build me a new podium for all of our elements in the library!" She put two and two together.

"Yeah, I guess I can do that." I said with a shrug. It wouldn't kill me to do something nice like that.

"Oh, and could you help build me a safe or something for my gems? They keep getting stolen or something..." Spike said. As he talked I saw a piece of gem in his teeth and shook my head slightly.

"Sure, but I think I know why your gems are missing." I turned to the others. "Any other requests?"

They all jumped at the chance and kept talking over each other, telling me different ideas. Wow, this is going to be a regular thing now isn't it? I wonder if it's to late to take up Twilight's offer on the delivery job...

Well, that wraps up the first episode! I plan on doing all of them like this. Intro chapter, main story chapter, and ending chapter. Tell me what you think because I plan on doing this for all of them. Also, I plan on making 5-12 episodes a 'season', all seasons with a season finale that will be longer then three chapters, and have big storylines in them. Each season finale bigger then the last! Tell me what you think! Or don't... Not really my choice whether you do or not... So yeah. Also, it might take the start of the next episode is Monday.

Well, I guess there's only one thing left to do before we end this chapter... PET PUPPIES! No JK, I mean QotC!

QotC: Do you weasel your way out of things? By weasel, I mean do you talk your way out of situations, but by not lying at all?

21. The Ponyville Retirement Home (episode2)

Welcome back! Last episode, Blitz got a job, the others got wasted time, and a new pony was introduced! In this episode, I want to try to do something new. Anyone of you want to try what it is? Well, go on ahead! I gotta say though, I'm not sure if it'll be expected or not... Oh well, guess that'll just make the surprise better! Well, with that all said, let's begin!

But before I do, there is one thing I'd like to say: David, I accept your apology and would be glad to help you post a story. But it still stands, I don't know what your account name is and I can't reach you without that. Could you please send me a PM message so I can talk to you from there? Thank you, and I will now gladly take down that chapter from earlier.

Disclaimer: I don't own anything from MLP except my own personal ideas, and Blitz as a character. Everything else in the story belongs to someone else!

The day began as it usually did. I woke up, fell out of bed, used lightning to wake up, and just relaxed a little. My new job started around noon, and even I was wide awake by then. Once I got there I was introduced to most of the crew. I got my own equipment like a hard hat, a tool belt with, you guessed it, tools, and a... nickname.

Young Bolt. I facehooved at that, but they all liked it anyway. The Young part, since I was still one of the youngest ones on the whole crew, most of them being full-grown adults/stallions. The bolt part, because I was able to absorb lightning and my tail was in that shape. It wasn't really that bad a name, at least after you heard some of their horrible nicknames, but it was really just bad because it was so stupidly simple. Still, I guessed they could've given me a worse name like Young Spark or something.

As the day went on, I helped work on building a house. Another thing about how great this job was, it was never the same. Every building usually has a different design so it was different everyday.

As time went on, we got a break. At least, I thought I would have a simple break.

"Hello Blitz." I looked down and saw Fluttershy with a pack over her back. It looked full, and it had what looked like a checker board sticking out of it.

"Oh hey Fluttershy." I said, looking down at her from the top of the frame. I flew down and took off my hard hat. "What's up?"

"Oh, well, I was wondering if you wanted to go to the Ponyville Retirement Home. You see, every month me and some of the girls always go to visit the elderly ponies there." She explained.

"That sounds pretty nice." I said and she smiled hopefully. "I'm not sure if I'd be allowed to go though."

Almost on que, the forepony came over to see me. "Hey Young Bolt. Good first day. Ya fit right in with the crew too!" The forepony complimented my work. I didn't even do that much, but since he's so easy to impress, and he makes it sound like I built a whole house single-handedly.

"Thanks Fore Hammer." That was his nickname. His nickname was stupid too. the way he came up with it was he had two hammers for his Cutie Mark, and he was the forepony. He made all of us address us by nicknames. Thought it would lighten the spirits or something.

"Hey, I was wondering. My friend here was asking if I could go with her to the Ponyville Retirement Home, and I was wondering if I could go early. If it's not too much trouble." I said.

"Sure ya can! Go ahead and take the day off! We already have a lot of hooves workin on the project, so if you have a good enough reason, your more than welcome to go!" He said with a friendly smile. Honestly, he is way to okay on stuff like this. Not that I'm complaining, but still.

"Great, thanks." I thanked him. He went off and I turned back to Fluttershy. "Guess I can. He's pretty liberal." I explained to her.

"Oh, that's good... Why did he call you Young Bolt? If you don't mind me asking that is" She asked with confusion.

"Every pony on the crew is forced to get a nickname." I said, hoping it would end there. I gestured to the forepony. "Forepony's orders." I explained.

When I looked back at Fluttershy, I could tell that she was holding back soft snickers. Great, if she of all ponies were snickering a the name, then I would never hear the end of it from the others.

"Can we just go?" I asked. She calmed down.

"I'm sorry..." She apologized. seeing I was a little upset by it all.

"It's fine. I would probably laugh if it was some pony else with the nickname. So go ahead and laugh. Just... Please don't tell any of the others. I wouldn't hear the end of it." I told her. If Spike or Rainbow Dash heard the name, they would never let me live it down.

"Alright. Well, follow me if you want Blitz. Were all meeting at the Ponyville Retirement Home." Fluttershy told me as she went off. I followed suit, leaving my tool belt on. I just kind of liked wearing it. That, and it had so many straps and buckles that it was annoying to take off when you had to take it off just a few minutes later.

When we got there, I saw that almost all the others were there already. "Hello every pony." Fluttershy greeted.

"Hi Fluttershy. Blitz, you came too?" Twilight asked.

"Yeah, my boss is really liberal." I told them.

"Well that's good." Twilight said.

"Hey Twilight? What does liberal mean?" Spike asked, not sure what that word was.

"It means he's a little more relaxed about everything that goes on." Twilight told him.

"Got it." Spike said.

"So where's Applejack and Pinkie Pie? I thought that all of you came." I pointed out.

"Applejack had to stay on the farm for Applebucking season, and Pinkie Pie had to watch Pound and Carrot Cake." Rainbow Dash said, not looking to happy.

"Oh come on Rainbow Dash, lighten up. You need to at least try to enjoy their company." Twilight said.

"How? The elderly are always so boring, and most of them do nothing but sit around and take it easy all day." Rainbow Dash said, not wanting to be here at all. The only reason she did come was because Fluttershy had counted on her to come.

"Not always. My grandpa was always really cool. He drove on a motorcycle, and he liked to build stuff too." I told them. When they all looked at me funny, I knew why. "Motorcycles are like scooters, but can go around eighty miles per hour and go by themselves." I told them the simple explanation. Especially because if I said something like engines, or horsepower, then it would just end up being more confusing.

"Well, okay so a few elderly are cool but the rest always like to take things slow." She obviously didn't like that about them, and since she thought that speed was important about everything, she didn't find elderly that cool at all except for a few exceptions.

"Oh come on Rainbow Dash, you might like coming here." Fluttershy said as she walked inside, followed by the rest of us.

Twilight then went up to the receptionist. "Hello, were here to-"

"To meet the elderly. I know. You all always come around the beginning of the month." She stopped Twilight. She sounded nice and polite, but she looked like one of those stereotypical rude secretaries. She was chewing gum, filing her hoof, which confused me a little, and put down a magazine just before she interrupted us. I didn't know what to think of her at this point because she acted friendly, but seemed like one of those cranky receptionists that didn't want to do their job.

"Well, go on ahead. The usual ponies all of you like to see are waiting for you." She told us, gesturing towards an archway to the left of her.

We all walked through and saw them all. The elderly. There was a decent amount of them doing different things.

"Fluttershy dear, over here." We all turned and saw an elderly mare with a light yellow coat, and a dark blue mane and tail. She had a Cutie Mark that resembled a drama mask. One side happy, and the other side sad.

"Oh, Ms. Complisult." Fluttershy said with a smile as she went over to her. Why was she called Miss Complisult?

"It's so nice to see you Fluttershy. I thought you would just be hiding in your house like a groundhog seeing his shadow." She said. Okay, guess that's why.

"It's nice to see you too." Fluttershy said, ignoring the insult. "So what do you want to do today? I brought some games for us to play." She said.

"Oh how sweet, thank you." Complisult said with a weak smile. "What do you want to lose at first?" She said, keeping the weak smile.

As those two talked, the rest of us were wondering just how Fluttershy stood that.

"Twilight, Spike. Glad you could make it." We all turned to see a group of elderly ponies, each with the same book. "Did you bring your copy for book club?"

"Right here Mrs. Booklearn." Twilight said as she got out two books that looked just like the ones they all had. "Come on Spike." Twilight said as she went over.

"Coming Twilight." Spike said, following after her.

That just left me, Rainbow Dash, and Rarity to find some elderly to hang out with. And since I don't really have a group of ponies here to hang out with...

"I think I;m just going to go introduce myself to a few of the ponies in here. Bye guys." I said, starting to leave myself.

Rainbow Dash's POV

With most of them already looking around and saying hi, that just left me and Rarity to find some pony to talk to. "Hey Rarity, who do you..." When I turned around to see her, she wasn't there anymore. "Rarity?"

I looked around and saw here standing next to two ponies that looked like twins. "That is such an exquisite pattern! You must tell me how you designed such a thing!" Rarity insisted. She was looking at the design that those two made from knitting.

"Oh, were so glad that some pony from your generation actually respects our design. You see, how we made it was..." And yawn. That seemed way to boring. Actually, everything about this place was boring! Why can't some elderly ponies be exciting and fun?

I sighed. I couldn't just run off and leave my friends here. That was wrong no matter how you looked at it. I looked around and saw an old, lonely very light blue pegasus rocking back and forth on a wheelchair. Well, he's pretty much the only one left. I walked over, seeing how there were signs everywhere saying: No flying, loud noises, and no strong magic besides levitation!

That was annoying in itself, but it made sense. When I finally did get there, I cleared my throat and he looked at me. "Hi. I'm Rainbow Dash." I said. I tried to sound friendly.

"I'm Jettison Jay" He said. Somehow, that name sounded familiar, but I shook it off. "And you don't have to sound happy to be here. Heck, I'm not even that happy to be here." He said, trying to cheer me up.

"What pegasus would like to stay here? Were not even allowed to fly. What's up with that?" I asked.

"Well, my brother doesn't mind." He said, gesturing to a brown pegasus, with an even browner leg. That was the same pegasus that Blitz was talking to. "He doesn't like flying anymore because he says it isn't that good on his leg anymore." He told me.

"Hs leg? What's wrong with his leg?" When I looked back at the brown pegasus, I saw that his leg was a little lighter than the rest of him.

"It's made of wood. I think he just says that so he can be lazy." Jettison Jay said.

I laughed a little at that. It was kind of ironic. Jettison then looked at me. "What's so funny?" He asked, confused.

"That's my friend Blitz over there with him. His legs made of metal." After Jettison looked at Blitz, he laughed too.

"Well, guess my brother isn't alone on that topic anymore." He then sat back. "So, who are you?"

"Uh... I already told you. I'm Rainbow Dash." I told him. Did he forget already?

But he just chuckled at me. "No. I mean what do you like to do? Other than whatever all girls your age like to do." He clarified.

"Hey, I don't do any 'girl stuff'." I said a little mad, thinking he mean makeovers or something like that. He just chuckled even more at that "Anyway, I like to race. I'm so good at it, I'm the best flier in Equestria!" I told him boastfully, flying up a little and doing a backflip in mid-air.

"EHEM!" I turned around and saw the receptionist looking at me with a frown. I chuckled nervously a little and stopped flying.

As soon as the receptionist left, I heard Jettison Jay laughing at me. "What's so funny?" I asked, a little mad.

"You!" He laughed a little more and calmed himself down. "Now how can you be the best flier in Equestria, when that titles already been given out?" He asked me.

"W-what do you mean the titles already been given out?" I asked him, caught off guard by what he said. "The only other pegasus that ever had that title disappeared a long time ago. Like, twenty years ago!" I pointed out.

"Yes, but he isn't gone yet. I hear that he's still around somewhere." He told me with a smile. "But I forget... Who was that pony again?" He asked me, scratching his chin.

"Who was he? How could any pony forget who he was?! His name was Jet Jay, or JJ to his friends! He knew how to fly as fast as possible! Whether it was a racing track, or a dense forest, he never slowed down! He was able to fly anywhere, anytime, at any speed, against any pony, and win!" Rainbow Dash told the story. "Not only that, but he was the captain of the Wonderbolts!" I told him.

"Ah, yeah... I remember when that happened... I hear he made the Wonderbolts what they were today." Jettison told me, keeping a smile on his face, that only got bigger.

"Yep! And one day, I'm going to be in Elite Wonderbolts! Right up there with Jet Jay, Soarin, and Spitfire!" I said, getting hyped just talking about it.

he chuckled at me, happy to see my enthusiasm. "Glad to know you'll be joining us as one of the greats Rainbow Dash." He told me.

"I know! I can't wait until I..." I stopped and looked at him, who had a pleased smirk on his face as he let me figure it out. "Wait! Your... Jet Jay?" I asked him.

"Hehe... You better believe it little flyer." He told me. "Now, not so loud, no pony in here but my brother knows-"

"I didn't hear him as I yelled at the top of my lungs in shock. "Your Jet J-Mmhm!" He put his hoof in front of my mouth stopping me from finished my sentence.

"Shh! Don't give me away kid." He scolded me. "Come on. If you want to talk that loud let's go outside." He told me. I nodded as much as I could, his hoof still on my mouth. Slowly, he got up from his rocking chair. This was going to be so awesome!

And that's the first part of the second Episode all written up! I hope you all enjoy it like you all enjoy the other chapters! Next chapter is tomorrow! Also as you all know, I'm trying something new with this chapter, so tell me what you think so far! I would really appreciate it! Even if it's criticism!

QotC: Do you think the elderly are actually pretty cool people? If so, why?

22. The Trainer Jet Jay (episode 2)

Sup guys and girls! So far, I hope you all are enjoying the second episode! So as you all have seen from the last chapter, I plan on doing something different. You see, I think I'm getting to greedy with making stories that just follow Blitz's story. So, I've come up with an idea! How about I have a few episodes follow one of the other ponies? With Blitz still around of course. Well, let's see what all of you think of the idea, as this chapter, if you haven't guessed yet, will mainly follow Rainbow Dash. So let's begin!

Disclaimer: I don't own MLP at all. Only the ideas, and Blitz

Rainbow Dash's POV

As I looked around, I sighed. I couldn't just run off and leave my friends here. That was wrong no matter how you looked at it. I looked around and saw a old lone very light blue pegasus rocking back and forth on a wheelchair. Well, he's pretty much the only one left. I walked over, seeing how there were signs everywhere saying: No flying, loud noises, and no strong magic besides levitation!