The Hour of Twilight
Chapter 18: Intermission
Previous Chapter Next ChapterA/N: I fear my writer's block is still in effect, but out of the goodness of whatever pumps the blood through my body, I will answer your reviews, while also encouraging you to ask me (or any of the cast) something you have been thinking, but aren't sure if it's ok. No question will be rejected. All will be answered, no matter what the question is.
That being said, REVIEWS!
RD-loves-RA - Since you are the only person to leave reviews since my posting of the short chapter 17, this 'chapter' will be mostly aimed towards you. You aren't the first person to say that the basic idea behind this story is a good one, but I do believe you are the first person to compliment my grammar and diction, and I'm glad that it was enough to make you read past chapter 1. And no, stabby stabby does not make Twilight happy happy. To be completely honest, even I'm not sure if this is supposed to be a "hilarious romp through a failing Equestrian society" or a "serious wartime drama full of betrayal and distrust, sprinkled with a little too much humor", and I've been told several times that it's a good thing I brought Luna back, and I knew that if I didn't, I'd lose readers (On a side note, my dad just pointed this out to me: And on the third day, Luna rose and assumed her place as the Right Hoof of Twilight. Sound familiar? I didn't even intend that Biblical reference).
Now, I'm aware that I switched Iron Will and Horse Power's names, but for the sake of the story, and the Adam & Eve reference, I purposely changed their names. I guess my writing changed because I'm getting more confident with all of these positive feedback I'm getting, but it could also be that I just want y'all to be happy with my story. I have found a fanfiction that actually made Spike have a personality, I just can't remember the name (he was the main character of it, so of course he had a personality). And I am a 'he', the eldest son of Chrysalis in fact (But not the eldest child), even though I 'died' over 800 years ago.
It's not my fault you kept reading past chapter three. That was your own choice. I have nothing to be ashamed of. And I am aware of the dictionary definition of linear, when applied to writing a story. I just like that word. It's almost as amusing as Kumquat or Pickle Barrel (Or Chimicherry or Cherrychanga. Or even Chimicherrychanga!). Seriously, say linear a few times. No? Okay. No Linear for you then. And I know the feeling of not wanting to write an essay. I waited until the night before an assignment was due to type up a 1k word essay on Henry David Thoreau (that may not seem like much, but try doing it in half an hour with no research done whatsoever…).
END RESPONSE
Anyways, I might start a Forgotten Realms fanfiction, or I might start the Bearded Journal (See previous chapter? I forget.) All I know is, the Bearded Journal is the personal journal of Starswirl the Bearded and his view on what happened during the Reign of Discord and the Revolution that put Celestia and Luna in power, as well as what caused Luna's banishment (though that has already been described. See Maledictum Insania: The Creation by Nero Darkard for what caused Luna's banishment.). While we are mentioning other writers, go bug AppleDash-Crazy aka Rayna Q, to see if (s)he will finally get back to work on New Girl. Seriously. I've been waiting on it for almost 9 months. HURRY UP RAYNA!