Here's chapter 2 please give me any ideas, suggestions, or tell me any mistakes. HERE WE GO

"What are you talking about?" I asked Twilight.

"Well earlier today I was trying a new spell that would take me through other dimensions."

*Flashback*

Twilight POV

"Spike!" I called out

"What is it?" He asked.

"Can you get me the new book I got yesterday?"

"Which one?"

"The one about other worldly things."

"Ok." He replied. He went to the bookcase and pulled it out. He struggled to hold it because that book is huge.

"Thanks Spike." I told him.

"No problem." He said walking away. I started going through the book and I found a spell that could take me to other dimensions. I started concentrating and then casted it. Nothing seemed to happen so I did it again and nothing happened. I'm sure I'm doing it right. Later after I kept trying I got it but it didn't take me anywhere. Instead it disappeared leaving me right here so I just put it away.

*Out of flashback*

Nathan POV

"Well I saw a little portal shoot me then I was here." I told her.

"Ok well I'll try to find the book again. I think I might have displaced it somewhere." She said. I wanted to go out and see lots of stuff here. But Twilight told me I should stay here while she gets the mayor. Twilight explained everything to the mayor and said she should introduce me to everypony.

"Are you ok with that?" She asked me.

"Sure I'd like to." I told her.

"Well we'll do that tomorrow." She said as she left.

"By the way is everypony from where you come from look like you?" Twilight asked.

"With the arms and legs yea sort of but face no and we say everyone not everypony."

"Ok then just curious."

I realized I had my backpack with me for some reason so I took out my football and started just flipping it in the air.

"Uggg this is bori-what's that?" She asked excitedly.

"A football."

"What's a football?"

"It's a ball used to play an awesome game."

"Oooo I wanna play!"

"Maybe some time." I told her laughing. I looked at my watch and saw it was 9:38pm.

"Well I'll be going." Said Rainbow as she left.

"Yea I'll be going to sleep soon." Said Twilight.

"I'm tired I guess I'll go now." I said.

"Goodnight."

"Goodnight."

My bed was in the basement so I went down there. I liked the feel of it. I went to sleep and I felt like I slept long but I woke up at 5:45. I went upstairs and saw Twilight making some sort of food.

"What are you making." I asked.

"Oh you're awake well I'm making pancakes. Have you heard of them before?

"Yes!"

"Sounds like you like them."

"Yes!"

She giggled as she got done and then we ate.

"Thanks" I said.

"No problem. Hey today the mayor is going to introduce you are you ready?" She asked.

"Yea I think so." I said.

Later

"I'm here to introduce a new...human here who will be staying with us for a while." Said the mayor. There were all kinds of words that sounded like "what kind of thing is that" it made me uneasy.

"Hello my name is Nathan and I'm a human." I said.

"Treat him like the rest of us." She said. I'm glad that's over with. I thought I might as well get a job here since I'll be staying here. I could be a night assistant for Twilight and maybe work during the day at another job. I think I can work at the farm for Applejack maybe. I am pretty strong so I'll go there.

When I got there I looked at all the apple trees in amazement. I never knew there were that many. I found Applejack and I asked her if I could have a job here. She gave me a job of getting apples from trees. I kicked the tree and to my surprise lots fell. I got done with all the trees she told me to do in about an hour and a half. She was surprised and I asked if there was more. There wasn't so she gave me the bits and I left. She told me to come 8:30 every Monday and Friday.

I went back to Twilight's house hoping to get a job here too. For some reason I didn't see any ponies up and about. It was 12:56 I figured someone would be outside but I guess not. Finally I got to Twilight's house. I was about to open the door but I felt weird about. Kinda like there was a disturbance in the force. I decided to open it slowly .

Well there's chapter 2 please tell me mistakes or ideas and suggestions

chapter 3 should come soon PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE REVIEW AND/OR FAV