Rainbow Dash visits Brennenburg

It was just a normal day in ponyville for Rainbow Dash, for about 5 seconds after she wakes up, she heard knocking on the door, she opened up the door to her surprise she saw Discord, "Discord?" she said, Discord snapped his fingers and Rainbow Dash was in a place she has never seen before, "Discord when I find out where I am I will get to you and hurt you for what you did!" she said to herself. Rainbow Dash started walking in what looks like a castle, she heard strange noises from the castle almost like groaning noises, "you are the toughest pony in ponyville Rainbow, you got this" she said to herself.

Rainbow Dash continued walking for a few minutes then found a lantern with oil to go with it she also found a bottle called 'laudanum', while confused she saw a page on a desk nearby "Dear Daniel, I hope after drinking that mind forgetting potion you still have that pent up aggression for Alexander as before. What you need to do is find Alexander and kill him" Rainbow Dash finished reading the note, "whose Daniel?" she thought out loud, Rainbow Dash thought she heard something, "hmm? What was that?" Rainbow Dash heard a loud growl, while panicking she decided to hide in a closest.

Rainbow Dash ran into the closest, after closing the closest doors she heard the growl again, getting louder, and louder, and louder, Rainbow held her breathe so that the monster, or whatever it was didn't hear her. Slowly the growl faded into nothing, Rainbow slowly opened the closet door to check if the monster was still there, the monster was only a few yards away and saw Rainbow Dash open the door, the monster started running at her, so she closed the door and held her breathe again, she heard footsteps and the growl getting softer and softer, she opened the closet door again and saw the monster leave, Rainbow Dash came out of the closet and headed the opposite way of the monster.

Rainbow Dash headed out the door the opposite way of the monster not noticing that the monster was in the doorway on the other side of the room, the monster started rushing towards Rainbow Dash but she didn't notice until it was too late and she got scratched by the monster. Rainbow Dash had enough strength to fly, and fly fast enough to evade the monster. Rainbow wasn't thinking right and accidentally hit her wing on a wall she was passing and broke it. Rainbow Dash continued walking and walked through some water, she continued walking through the water when she heard a splashing sound coming from behind her.

Rainbow Dash saw a monster in the water and went to go fly, she jumped then she realized her wing was broken, she fell into the water and the monster, well, let's say that not a part of Rainbow Dash will be seen again.

This isn't my best work, let's just say I won't be writing at 4:30 in the morning anymore. So ya sorry about this not being up to my expectations but it's a story so I don't mind if you don't like it, say ways to make it better, not to make me feel worse