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Cupcakes Alternate Ending

by JazzyWolf15

Chapter 9

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I do not own MLP! If i did i wouldnt be writing this and instead be somewhere else doing important stuff! :3

"Sorry for staring, but you are the pony who survived."

After an akward visit, and an explanation, the rest of the mane 6 (or 5) set out to find the last pony, so they could fix this mess.

"Its okay. I just have to get used to it." Rainbow says, thinking of random things, trying to entertain herself on the long journey. Twilight had the map, they were going to Manehattan, where they thought the last pony was, Razee.

"Just up ahead is the city, Apple Jack, pull the balloon down." Nodding, AJ slowed the balloon lower to the ground, while Rainbow rested in it and ThunderIce and LightWing pulled the balloon. Seeing the city up ahead, ThunderIce and LightWing slowed down and landed on the far side of the city.

"We are in Manehattan, the second most luxurous city in Equestria, next to Canterlot of course." Rarity explains, going back to her usual self.

Everypony walks out of the balloon, and look around. "So where could ya friend be, ThunderIce?"

"Well, she could still be where we used to hide out. Unlike me, who went exploring after the danger faded away, Razee and LightWing hid. She might still be in the first place we were last."

"Ah, okay."

Getting out of the balloon, AppleJack looked up to the city she visited when she was a filly. Shuddering, she shook the memory out and walked with the rest, ThunderIce and Lightwing leading.

"Okay, we should take a left here...turn...careful of the ladders...and here we go!" ThunderIce direted, coming apon a broken house, two story with all the curtains pulled tightly together and the number '36' next to the doorbell.

Ringing it, LightWing stood next to ThunderIce to greet whoever answered the door. Several clicks were heard, signaling many locks being unlocked.

"Y-yes? Hello, who's there?" A white unicorn answered the door, her strait blue mane covered one eye, her cutie mark was a + with a heart next to it.

"Hello, Jeneley. Its me, ThunderIce, LightWing and some of my friends. Is Razee here?"

As realization struck the old mare's eyes, she glanced side to side. "No, shes not here. She went to the forest to fetch water. I dont trust the water here...it could be poisoned."

Smiling, LightWing answered,"Thank you Janeley, nice seeing you again." With that the group said their goodbyes and left to the forest, which was less scarier than the Everfree forest (is it Evergreen?).

Looking about, Rainbow spots something. "Hey, look!"

Up in the trees was the blood red alicorn, with darker wings and black eyes, her cutie mark was a single thunder cloud.

As scary as she looked, nopony thought to retreat.

"Hey Razee! Its us, LightWing and ThunderIce!" Hearing her name being said, Razee examines them closely, then smiles and hugs them both.

"Oh my gosh i havent seen you in forever! What are you doing here?"

Smiling uncertainly, Twilight steps forward. "We need your help, with a mystery. We were told to find 3 ponies, and im pretty sure you ponies are it. Im just not sure how you guys will help..."

"Yes, Razee, will you travel with us back to Ponyville?" Rainbow asked, looking at her strait in the eyes, with a serious face. Razee kept her gaze.

The other ponies looked at each other with uncertainty on their faces. Finally, they both cracked a smile and laughed.

"Yes, of course i will help my friend's friend! Um...not to be rude but who are you guys?"

Gasping, Rarity looked at Razee. "Oh, how rude of us! Im Rarity, the rainbow one is Rainbow Dash, thats Twilight right there, Fluttershy is the other pegasi, and that there is AppleJack, AJ for short." Rarity, being the most "civilized" (IDK) had to answer, of ourse.

"Okay, nice to meet you. I guess we have to go to-"

"ZECORA!"

"Huh?"

Everypony faced Rainbow, who wasnt paying attention and was still thinking hard. "Zecora is the one who told me to gather these things-err, ponies too. But she necer told me what to do. So now we have to go talk to her. LETS GO EVERY-pony?"

Everypony was looking at her as if she was the craziest one here. "he he...sorry..."

Twilight snapped out of it first. "Yes. Rainbow's right. We have to go visit Zecora, with a short visit to my house, i left Pinkie's journal and the party cannon there."

"Then stop talkin yall and start moving! We have a train ta catch!" AJ said, galloping towards the train station. Shrugging, everypony else followed, their determination fueling them faster.

Sorry for the late update! There was a wifi problem at my house and they fixed it today! Hope you liked the chapter, if you did plz review :3 More soon to come! :D

-Jazz-xox-

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