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My Little Pony - Next Generation: The Elements of Harmony

by Miss Asia

Chapter 1: 1. Prologue

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Miss Asia's Corner:

Hello, bronies, pegasisters, and other terms used to define those so mixed in with the MLP:FiM (My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic) fandom! I'm Miss Asia (yes, like the continent), and this is my ever-first type writing a MLP:FiM relevant fan fiction.

Just a few things to say, I'm excited to be writing a story like this! I'll admit, it's hard, but I'm so glad I managed to complete the prologue (this page), and the first chapter (to be uploaded 11/24/2012, somewhere around 5:30 PM.)

Just to say, this story is on the same plane of existence as the show MLP:FiM. It is, however, time skipped ahead into the future, where the first Mane 6 no longer wield the power of the Elements of Harmony. Now, six new ponies (will) hold the power, and fend of an even greater Evil than Discord himself!

The cover to the left (your left, not mine, maybe), was made by yours truly. I got the idea from a certain Pony comic on DeviantArt. As you can see, cutie marks are assembled like previous Elements of Harmony, but this time, they're a bit different! You'll find out more about them as the story progresses.

Please, R&R, and leave me comments and such. If there is anything out of the loop, please feel free to point it out. Now, please excuse me while I use the Royal Canterlot Voice to point something out (caps warning. minimal):

CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM ONLY, FOALS.

Now, onto the disclaimer!

MAJESTIC DISCLAIMER OF JUSTICE: Please note that any names, areas, and original ideas belong to Lauren Faust, the creator of the magical show, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic (abbreviated MLP:FiM). Please also note that this rule does not extend as far as Original Characters (OCs) that the fanfiction author has created. If there is a 'pony' character with a name that is not familiar with the show, MLP:FiM, then the author has complete ownership of said 'pony' character.

Thank you!

Enjoy!


The barrier was supposed to keep anything with malicious intent out. It was supposed to spread love and unity throughout the land of Equestria, thanks to Princess Mi Amore Cadenza, the ruler of the Crystal Empire, and her husband, Prince Shining Armor, former captain of the Royal Guard, and now, co-ruler of the Empire itself.

However, sometimes, things don't go the right way.

The princess and prince had two foals – a filly and a colt. The eldest, the colt, was named after his father. His name was Shining Ring. The youngest, the filly, who came a few years after the colt, had no naming relevance to either of the parents, but to the library in the Crystal Empire – they named her, Crystal Bibliotheque.

Now, Crystal Bibliotheque didn't last long as Crystal Bibliotheque though. On the first day of the second week after she was born, in her crib, she was abducted by midnight thieves, seeking to gain money and fame from the Princess' power. They sought her out immediately, managing to get through the barrier by tricking it – they saw the easiest way to do this was to shape the feelings into creating even more love and unity for all of Equestria.

They escaped with her through the forests, on the train, through all vehicles of transportation, in the outskirts of Manehatten, Equestria. They hid in a forest there for a few days, and, after the foal knowing of her misplacement, conjured a powerful magic that blasted away the two thieves, and sent them packing.

A young couple of Earth Ponies found the little foal whining and crying in a bush in the forest, wrapped in a fluorescent blue blanket.

"A baby?" The female Earth Pony said. "Where do you reckon she came from, Scapegoat?"

"Not sure, Sugar Plum." The male Earth Pony answered. "Pro'lly one of them city folks lost her. Come on, let's go to the authorities,"

The two Earth Ponies, along with the little foal, traveled to the Manehatten authorities to seek the foal out. Unfortunately, no one recognized the mysterious foal as their own. Because of this, it lead to an event when, in the end, the two Earth Ponies known as Scapegoat and Sugar Plum adopted the little foal as their own. They named her Creativity, for her creative mind.

Young Creativity spent her whole life, traversing from farm life and city life. She attended school in the city, which was not too far off from her adoptive parents' farm, and worked on the form whenever she could. Because she was a Unicorn pony, she was extremely useful. Her parents never squandered her magical abilities, and allowed her to use them only when truly necessary. The rest of the work was pure hoof and mouth work.

Creativity was nurtured by her 'ma' and 'pa' through most of her life. But now, as a young mare, and finally achieving her cutie mark, she decided she wanted to go to a more rural area – an area where everyone is interconnected.

"Ma, Pa, I know this is a tough question to ask," Creativity said one night at the dinner table, sincerity and pleading in her eyes.

"What is it, darling?" Sugar Plum replied.

"I want to go to Ponyville, Equestria. I've read so much about it – how everyone's so connected and such. Can I please go there to further my studies?" She explained

Her mother and father exchanged a look. Were they really able to risk their only 'daughter', so achieve her dreams? They had to think about it, but ultimately, they agreed to her travels.

Therefore, Creativity traveled on rails toward Ponyville. She was excited, yet mixed with nervousness and negative feelings because she would miss her parents very much.

And to this day, she never knew she was adopted.

Next Chapter: 2. Chapter 1 - Arriving in Ponyville Estimated time remaining: 32 Minutes
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