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My Favourite Pony by Pipsqueak

by cornholio4

Chapter 1: My Favourite Pony by Pipsqueak


In the fanfic by cartuneslover17 Pipsqueak had a little crush on Twilight! Since not many fics have something like that I decided to try something like that myself!

In his home the young colt Pipsqueak (managing to use a quill with his hooves) was doing his homework for school. They had to write an essay about their favourite pony. Scootaloo was going to write about Rainbow Dash, Dinky was going to write about her mum Derpy and both Applebloom and Sweetie Belle were going to write about their sisters. Pipsqueak knew who he would be writing about, most of his friends predicted he would write about Princess Luna but that wasn't true. Luna maybe his favourite Princess (and he has managed to say that without getting sent to the moon like his best friend said he would) she wasn't his favourite pony.

There was a certain unicorn mare that he adored greatly, had a little crush on her and he was going to write about her. He then started writing:

My Favourite Pony

By Pipsqueak

My favourite pony is somepony who moved from Canterlot to Ponyville and helped me get to know my favourite Princess on my very first Nightmare Night ever! Her name's Twilight!

I heard about how she managed to defeat Nightmare Moon (glad she is not evil anymore and is now Princess Luna), Discord and an Ursa Minor! That must have been so awesome!

When I go to visit her at the library she is always nice to me and is willing to help me with my homework (but I didn't ask her for help on this as I was too embarrassed). She also shows me some really cool magic tricks which were better than any Sonic Rainboom (please don't tell Scootaloo)!

Not only is she smart and great with magic but she's also really pretty! I like her mane, fur and eyes! No offence to Sweetie Belle's sister but she's the prettiest unicorn in Ponyville, maybe even in Equestria!

And that's my favourite pony ever!

Pipsqueak put down the quill a little tired, hopefully his teacher Cheerilee will like it and won't share with anypony (he didn't want his classmates find out about his crush).

The next day after school was over Cheerilee who had forgotten that morning asked the students to turn in their essays. Pipsqueak was the last to turn his in before going home and Cheerilee said she would have them marked by the next day.

Soon Cheerilee took the papers to Twilight's library. "Hello Cheerilee!" greeted Twilight at the door "Come on in!"

Cheerilee put the papers and said "Twilight I appreciate you agreeing to mark the students homework for me since I got a big appointment soon!"

"No problem!" responded Twilight "I would love to hear what the little ponies have written about!"

"The assignment was to write about their favourite pony" Cheerilee said "and thanks again!"

After Cheerilee left Twilight put the papers on a desk and sat down on a chair. Looking down at the papers she thought "Well Pipsqueak's is on the top is will start with him, he probably wrote about Princess Luna..."

What do you think?

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