Canterlot Wedding MLP colted version
Chapter 3: Shinning armor Positive pessimist?
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Does anyone really have any idea how hard this is replacing Shinning armor and Cadance's places?! Really hard. I have to improvise scenes that are meant for Cadance and not shinning armor. I've also changed the script in slight places for the bets most sense making story. So NO and I mean NO contristive crittisisum. NONE!
After visiting Cadance Twilight found applejack starting her food. Amazingly the cake, mini apple pies (or he" best darn apple fruites ya ever darned tasted" and shoved one into twilight's mouth making her do something aside from sulk by her agreeing.) Twilight quickly picked up her notes and marked three X's under catering. Spike was playing with the wedding dolls for the cake, and Twilight quickly took them from him. Spike laughed embarrassedly considering he'd been making them look like they were completing their wedding vows. Then Twilight turned around to see the other ponies in the kitchen saluting towards Shining armor. "Oh Hiya Shinnin armor." "Please call me captain." "Hiya Captain, here to check out what's on the menu for the big day?" "I have." And as Shining armor spoke Twilight couldn't help seem to think that her brother's voice was off, and that when finished talking he'd rolled his eyes. 'Okay, be reasonable Twilight. He's just not into food preparation that's all...' Applejack took the plate of Mini pies and Shining armor levitated one and took a bite. "Uh Delicious. I really really like them." But Twilight known her older brother's faking voice and knew he was lying to Applejack. She scowled then watched as Applejack -who didn't know he was lying- offered some more to him to go. "Aw shuck why don't ya take a few to go? I know how busy you lovey dovey couples can be. Getting so busy you forget to have something to eat." And then Applejack and everyone aside from Twilight turned around and went back to baking. And As her older brother left she saw hive through the bag of apple mini's in the trash and gasped at how rude he was being. Then from behind him, Shining armor slammed the doors with his magic. "Did you see what him-" Twilight began and didn't finish because apple jack appear to start baking something else.
As Rarity and Twilight worked on the dresses Twilight got into a rant. "I mean I'm not sure when but most definitely shinning armor's changed." "Did someone say my name?" The two turned to see Shining armor with the bridesmaids standing behind him. Rarity, having to have her drama, said and bowed, "Oh Captain you just must know what an honor it is designing your soon-to-be bride's dress and for her bridesmaids." "Ok, is her dress ready?" "Yes oh yes! I've put all my dedication into and think you be pleased for her." "I think it should have less beads and less of a trail." "Oh, of course certainly." Then Shining armor critiqued the bridesmaids' dresses. "They need a different color." "But we think their lovely." One of the bridesmaids said. Shining armor shot them a look and they shrunk back. "Make them a different color." And left, bridesmaids following. "Geez! Maybe he should be captain demandy pants." Twilight muttered.
Twilight went over to pinkie pie's station, where Pinkie pie had already hung balloons, spread confetti and party-fied the room in only a three or four hour time period, considering she spread it through the whole room. Eventually Shining armor decided to share his opinions on that too. "OK, OK we've been over the games," Pinkie dashed over to a section she'd designated for games, and made a wide grin. The she bounced over back and then away from Shining armor. "And the then the dances," where she grinned and did a chicken like dance and back to too large unicorn in a matter of moments. "I think this reception is going to be perfect! Would you?" "Perfect! If this were a six's year olds birthday party." "Oh thank you!" Pinkie didn't catch the criticism needless to say. Twilight sparkle heard the whole thing and made a growl of her best suppressed rage.
As night fell on Canterlot Princess Luna flew to her sister's place at the watch tower. "Rest sister. As always I will guard the night." And took her place at her sister's telescope scouting for any danger. As Twilight walked over to have a drink with her friends. "I bet I all know what your thinking- That Shining armor is the worst groom-to-be-ever." Everyone's heads turned and looked at her incredulously. Spike held up a shining armor doll from the cake. "Who me?" "SPIKE! That goes on the cake!" Applejack snapped. Spike dejectedly put it down. "Twilight whatever are you talking about? Shining armor is an absolute gem!" "Rarity he was so demanding!" "But of course he was. Why shouldn't he expect the best for his wedding?" "Applejack did you know after he told you how much he really really liked your mini's he threw them in the trash?" "He was probably just trying to spare my feelings." "No he was just being fake and totally insincere." there was silence and then Fluttershy said "He did raise his voice at one of my birds druing rehearsal." "See? Rude." "But he was really of pitch." She held up the bird who sang with several off key and off pitch and Twilight admitted it did sound very out loud."Pinkie you had to have noticed how Shinni-" "Moi, Moi." Pinkie was playing with Cadance's doll from the cake with spike with a kissing scene. "Rainbow dash your with me right?" "Sorry, I've been to busy preping to notice the groom's bad attitude." Twilight put her drink down and growled. Rarity caame over "He's getting married. It's probably all simple stress N' nerves." "And I'm sure it the result of him being an awful pony who dosen't deserve to know Cadence. Let alone marry her!" "Do you think your being a tiny possesive of Cadence?" "I'm not being possesive! And I'm not taking it out on Shining armor! All of you are too caught up on your wedding plans to notice there shouldn't even be a wedding!"