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My Little Pony: the seventh element of harmony

by I Am Alex Mercer Also a Brony

Chapter 19: the after math and torcher begins

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My dark side

(Jet POV)

-Wake up, wake up jet.
I hear a mystery voice that sounds like if a pony is whispering in my ear

I open my eyes and i see that i am in a sub terrain cave whit pipes of iron and water conducts

-This must be an abandoned part of the castle- I say

-Actually they aren't abandoned- i hear a mystery voice

-Hello? Is anypony here?

-Nop, just you and me, now if you want to go out of this place alive do everything i say,ok?

-Ok

The voice guide me trough the cave and force me to go to the deepest of the cave.

-All right, now where i should go?

-Fly to that hole

After fly to the hole i decide to make some questions to this mystery identity.

-So, what are you?

-I am your biggest dreams your most wanted wishes i am you.

-You are like i dunno my dark side?

-Yes and no

-I am what you really want and i going to help you to reach that dreams in one way o another.

-Yes?

-Yes

-How i can trust you?

"I'm helping you to escape from this caves, no?" Said Dark Jet

"Well, yes" I said

-Then shut up and keep walking where almost there.

-Where? I ask

-In the forest

After say that i see that i was now in the Ever free forest and i just walk out from a little cave.

"Good now, where i must go?" i ask

"To the castle but we must take a different strategy that the one you take the last time." says Evil Jet

"That is obvious." I said

After some time of talking and walking i reach the castle and then i start to climb the wall of the castle again, but when i was just about to reach the top, a guard see me and try to kill me, and him could kill if wasn't for the fact that a pegasus kick him out of the castle and help me to reach the top of the wall.

"Pure luck"says my evil side

"Now you owe me two- the pegasus say's

"White out?" I ask

"Perfect now we going to have to travel whit this idiot"says my evil side

Yes, the same white out that save you from the manticore, you should be more careful don't you think?

"Yeah and you should shut up" says my evil side

"Yes i must be more careful" i said noticing that only i can hear the dark Jet

"We must leave this castle Jet" says white out

"I told you he is an idiot" says Dark Jet

"Why?" I ask

"Because we can't fight all that guards plus the 9 evil clones." Said White out

"We can, you in the other way..."says Dark Jet

"But if we keep loosing time our friends could die" I say

"Yes but its a suicide go there without an army" white says

"No, its suicide go there whit you" says Dark Jet

"All right you go to Canterlot and tell to Celestia what happen and i save the day without losing time" I say

"Good put him on his place" says Dark Jet

"But, we need an army if we want save our friends" says white out

"No. you need an army because you can't fight without it" i said

"If you want dead fine i going to take the safe plan while you take the suicide one"says white

"FINE" I say

"FINE" White out says

After that white fly to Canterlot while i enter in the castle. When i enter the castle i decide to go to the cells but my evil side have another plans...

"You do it well putting white out, out of the situation, but he has a point you can't just enter in the cells just like that, if you want save them you first must destroy the clones" says Dark Jet

(Fluttershy POV)

(after Jets appearance)

I looked around trying to keep clam when I did thought I was that the evil Jethro was standing guard with Evil me so trying to escape is going to not be an opposition.

I looked to my friends Jeffery was not in this cell he was in the next cell over because they didn't want anypony with Jeffery for some reason. That we weren't told but I thought it was because he could think of a good way to get out. Then thought wait Jet could try to save us but what if The evil us are going to kill him that would hinder our way saving and the lose of a good friend.

"Fluttershy you ok?" I heard this and jumped I then turned to see that it was twilight.

I then said "Ya I'm fine just hoping we don't die. I wounder why they didn't kill us already."

Twilight said "Me too but I have a hunch I think they are keeping us here to slowly torture us into doing what ever they want."

I gasped at that then I heard a pony going to Jeffery's cell. I then heard a whip hitting flesh sound.

Jeffery then said "Wait did you just whip me because I didn't feel a thing."

anther whip hitting flesh sound happened and Jeffery said very mockingly "What was that a mosquito bite um can you get the head torturer and tell them that there grand mother is trying to torture me."

then the torcher left his cell and went out of the prisoner.

I thought Jeffery you really know how to antagonize the hay out of ponies.

I yawned and went to sleep on the cold hard floor.

When I was awake I saw anther torturer with instead of a whip was a spiked whip and the torcher enter Jeffery cell and started to whip him again. after about 5 minuets of just the sound of whip hitting flesh.

Jeffery said "Um gramps was that supposed to hurt or are you getting me ready for the real torcher with a back massage. Wait I have an idea put me on the rack and try and pull my stiff back into alignment. no well get the head torturer to torcher me ok be gone with you."

Then I saw evil Jeffery walking Jeffery's cell and I heard evil Jeffery say "Ok Jeffery you wanted to be torchered by the head torturer ok well here i go."

after a few moments of silence was A screen of pure agony from Jeffery. Jeffery said laughing "Well that was delightful that is the first pain I have had all day you really need to work on your torcher tho that was pitiful why not tie me to a chair and make me listen to It's a small world for 24 hours strait?'

I thought Ok Jeffery I know your the element of madness but this Bucking ridiculous.

Evil Jeffery said "Well I know one thing that can give you pain that you can't brush off bring her in."

My friends were all but immobilized by what the two Jeffery were saying.

Then the two guard that were in front of our cell grabbed me and dragged me to Jeffery cell

then I saw that my Jeffery's chest had been branded with a icon that looked like a dragon(for the pic go to Google images just type in light and darkness dragon)

Evil Jeffery said "now Fluttershy I'm not going to lie this will hurt a lot. Guards restrain her"

I was then tied to the wall opposite of Jeffery. I had my face to the wall because that has how i was restrained.

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