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My Little Pony: the seventh element of harmony

by I Am Alex Mercer Also a Brony

Chapter 17: The Gala

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Ok everyone who saw the grand Galloping Gala episode don't jump down my throat about things not being correct to the episode I'm too lazy to rewatch it and also I'm putting my own spin on the gala for this story. also as always I don't own My little pony

The grand Galauping gala

(next day after Jeffery and fluttershy's date)

(Fluttershy's point of view)

I awoke to the sound of Jeffery softly snoring.

I decided to let Jeffery sleep so after feeding the animals I went to ponyville. when I got their I saw Twilight and she looked like she was looking for somepony. So I went to her and said "Hi Twilight

Twilight said "Hi Fluttershy here is something for you" Twilight gave me a letter and then she said Don't open it until you get back to your house and you have a month. What I said you will understand once you open the later."

I said "ok" and I went home and opened the letter and I saw a Ticket to the Grand Galloping Gala and a note that said "It is a costume party"

I then Understood what Twilight meant by in a month.

I thought then aw Jeffery can't come. I then remembered that Jeffery isn't a party pony.

(A month passes uneventfulness exspet for a week after when Jet got out of jail and Jeffery and him became best buds)

(the night of the gala)

(Still Fluttershy's PoV)

Me and my friends arrived at the gala our costumes were: me as a white Bunny, Twilight as well I didn't really know what she was, Pinkie was I think gum or maybe something else, Applejack went as The Phantom(from phantom of the opera), Rainbow dash went as Daring do, Rarity went with a fancy dress and mask on, and spike went as himself. When I looked I saw a Pony but I couldn't tell if he was a pegasus or earth pony. Because he was armor (it looked like the Armor of the Crusader from elder scrolls oblivion) and the pony's Cutie mark was a sword and shield. I went up to him a said really shyly "Hi"

The pony In the armor said with a thick italian ascent " Hello miss"

I gave a small epp out of terror then after regaining my composure I said "Well I was wondering and if I'm not being to strait forward who are you under that armor?"

The pony said "I can't tell you that because it would take away the magic from the mystery"(that was a corny line)

Then the music changed from the boring dull music to the fancy dancing music(don't ask just call it odd timeing)

The Mysterious pony said "Well miss may I have this dance if it is ok with you?"

I studered out "Y.y.y .yes you may have this dance" Then the two of use started to dance.

( 2 hours later)

At the end of the last song that was playing Me and the Mysterious Pony kissed!(Fluttershy is in trouble now)

right after me and the pony kissed I was being dragged by Twilight aside and she said "Fluttershy what are you thinking? Your dating Jeffery and their you go cheating on him with a pony that you don't even know"

I said "Well I was thinking it was a good Idea at the moment so I went with it."

Twilight then said Fluttershy Jeffery is really rubbing off on you and these actions are proof of it."

Then we all heard an announcement from Princess Celestia. and she said "Ok every pony it is time to reveal who we really are and we then vote on who was the biggest shocker gets a Ticket to go to the gala next year ok every Pony line up.

ok after several hundred costume revealing it was just the Pony I kissed me and my friends but the pony I kissed was last in line I revealed myself and so did my friends. we don't know who well we did but we all thought it wasn't good.

Then the pony That I kissed got on stage and he said "Well Believe it or not I'm" Then the armor diapered and we all gasped at who it was. It was Jeffery!?

Jeffery said In his normal unaccented voice "Me Jeffery"

Celestia Even gasped then said "Jeffery your the Crusader?"

Jeffery said "Yes I am The Crusader is it really all that hard to believe?"

Then every pony in the Gala said in unison "Yes"

"Ok" said Jeffery then Jeffery's Armor reappeared on him and he walked off stage and then waited for the results with us.

Princess Celestia Opened the letter that had the results in it and she said " the winner of who gets the ticket a ticket to the Gala next year is Jeffery your ticket will be sent to you next year before the Gala." after that everypony was leaving. I walked up to Jeffery and said "Jeffery why didn't you tell me you were coming?"

Jeffery said "I didn't because I wanted it to be a surprize"

I nodded and we left.

(next day)

(time noon)

(POV Jet)

I was flying around being board. Then I thought maybe Jeffery is in a mood for a race.

I flew to Fluttershy's cottage and I landed and knocked on the door. I then waited for the door to open when it opened I saw Jeffrey and he said "Hey Jet"

I said "Hey Jeffery you up for a race?"

Jeffery said "Ok from where to where?"

"From here to My house and back ok?" I said

Jeffery said "ok ready go" Then Jeffery bolted off then I flowed

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