Celestia's Duel With Evil

A/N I took your advice from the previous chapter and fixed the mistakes you mentioned, go have a look at the updated chapter before coming back here. Oh and if anypony didn't know, you were supposed to read Nightmare's dialogue in Darth Vader's voice. A/N

"Sister? Are you alright? I heard some strange noises coming from your room" Luna asked, waiting outside the door.

"Sister, are you awake?" Luna asked again before receiving no response from inside the room.

"I'm coming in sister, I want to see what's wrong with you" Luna said as she opened the door.

Luna was shocked by what she was seeing. Her sister was having some awful shivering and she was sweating buckets all over the bed.

"TIA! WHAT'S WRONG?" Luna shouted, getting no response from her sister.

"Hold on sister, I'm going to get you some help!" Luna said as she galloped out of the room, looking for some doctors.

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Celestia was dodging the lightsaber that Nightmare was using, barely avoiding getting her head chopped off. She had to find a way to counter this weapon but since she was so busy dodging she didn't have time to think.

"You've learned well to dodge Celestia" Nightmare said.

"You will find that I am full of surprises!" Celestia said as she used her magic to make a lightsaber come out of her horn.

"Impressive...most impressive" Nightmare said as he began his fury of attacks again.

Celestia, using the lightsaber on her horn, was easily blocking the moves that Nightmare was using but she knew that if she didn't find a way to take her out soon enough then she will be too tired out to attempt blocking.

"Your mind belongs to me Celestia. Your sister was a good example to this" Nightmare taunted.

"Never!" Celestia said back, not seeing that the hole was opening up again.

Celestia fell back into the hole, which she realised was the frozen gas she saw before.

"All too simple" Nightmare said as he used force pull to pull the switch.

Celestia used her wings to fly out of the hole at high speed to avoid being frozen.

"Perhaps you're not as strong as Twilight Sparkle thought about you" Nightmare said, not realising that Celestia was out of the hole until he heard the humming of a lightsaber coming from behind him which prompted him to block Celestia's attack.

"Your parents have taught you well, you have control over your fear" Nightmare said as he unleashed more attacks on Celestia.

"Now...release your anger. Only your hatred can finally obliterate me!" Nightmare said again as he, yet again, unleashed another volley of attacks on Celestia.

Celestia was able to block all of these attacks and kicked Nightmare off the edge of the chamber with her back hooves. She wondered 'Where did he go?" as she teleported down to the bottom. She decided to trot down a tunnel that was open to her, perhaps used by Nightmare to escape.

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Luna was rushing around, trying to find some medics that will assist her sister. Unfortunately for her, all of the medics were off on a vacation because they didn't think they were needed at the moment.

Luna wandered back to her big sisters room, thinking what she should do now, seeing her sister shivering more and more violently. She then decided she would have to send a message to Twilight and her friends for this situation. Luna made a letter for Twilight that said:

Dear Twilight Sparkle

My sister, Celestia, is unwell and is in need of your assistance. Please come to the castle right away, there is no time for a chariot so just teleport here.

Princess Luna

She then used her magic to send off the letter and began to wonder if her sister was ever going to wake up.

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Celestia wandered through the tunnel, thinking to herself that maybe Nightmare is gone for good now. She continued to trot until she reached the end of the tunnel, revealing a large room with a glass window. She looked out the window to see that the whole place that she was in right now was above a big giant chasam.

She soon heard the breathing of Nightmare and activated the lightsaber on her horn again, ready to face the dark figure again.

"I see you are more powerful than I thought...but let's see if we can kick things up a notch" Nightmare said as he began to use the force to throw things at Celestia.

Celestia used her wings to block the incoming projectiles that were being thrown at her before using her lightsaber to block more of Nightmare's attacks.

Suddenly more objects hit her in the back of the head, causing her to focus more on the objects that were being thrown at her. Nightmare used the force to pull a big tube of the wall and threw it, not at Celestia, but the window instead.

Celestia tried to get a grip but then she got sucked out of the window by the sheer amount of pulling power. Nightmare had to hold on to the wall to prevent being pulled out himself. When the suction died down, Nightmare walked up to the edge to see that Celestia was floating in the air with her wings.

"You are a persistent princess, aren't you?" Nightmare asked when he saw Celestia flying in the air.

"I'm not a princess that will go down without a fight!" Celestia shouted back in defiance.

"...we shall see Celestia" Nightmare said as he walked away, causing a confused Celestia to land on the balcony outside the window.

'What did he mean by that?' Celestia thought as she walked to the overlook on the other side of the platform.

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"Oh Tia, I just hope you are alright! I don't want to lose you big sister, NOT NOW!" Luna shouted as she buried her head in her sister's chest, sobbing her eyes out.

"Luna...we came just as you said" Twilight said, startling Luna.

To Be Continued

Hope this chapter was a little better than the previous one.

Please review what I could have changed in this scene.

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