I had to change some of the lyrics in the song I used for this chapter.

warning: long chapter.

Chapter 16: Birth of the Bronies

It's been 3 days since Discord gained my trust and through those days most of the ponies in Ponyville have gotten use to him being around, some of them even say hello to him now and then.

So far, he's getting a good reputation in Ponyville. I just hope that the Princess can notice and finally forgive him for all he's done in the past.

Ponyville streets

Jeff was flying through the streets with a bored look on his face. "Man….today is just dull; hope something interesting shows up soon." Jeff thought.

He flew past a poster board where something caught his eye. He then flew back to the board to see what it was.

Once he returned to the board, his eyes widened in amazement at the poster for a talent show. "If that ain't a sign I don't know what is." He said to himself in excitement.

He then grabbed the poster with his beak and tore it off the poster and flew as fast as he could to the café where Me and the others where.

The Ponyville café

Me, Twilight, Spike, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy and Discord were sitting on a large table with each of us having a drink.

Discord looked at his drink and raised his eye brow. "So what do you call this again?" he asked before looking at Twilight

"…..a cup of coffee." Twilight answered awkwardly.

Discord looked back down at his coffee and took a sip, his eyes suddenly shot wide open and he did a spit-take on the ground before fanning his tongue. "WATER! WATER!" He cried.

I quickly gave him my cup of water and he jugged it all down his throat. Once he drunk all the water, he put the cup down and panted heavily. "Ok….that was hot."

"Sorry there Discord, we thought you knew." Applejack said with a sorry look.

Discord raised his talon hand. "It's ok, but what do I do with this coffee? Give it to Pinkie Pie?"

"NOOO." We all yelled with our eyes wide open.

A few minutes later, Rarity walked up to the table with a large cheerful smile on her face. We all looked at her to see she was wearing a sliver necklace and 2 silver hair clips with a gold flower on each of them.

"Wow Rarity, wear did you get that necklace and hair clips." Fluttershy asked with a small smile.

"Aren't they marvellous? My secret admirer sent them to me last night with another lovely poem, I simply adore them." She said as she sat down with us.

Me and Spike gave each other a sly smirk, trying not to let the others see us.

Spike then scooted his chair to get closer to Rarity. "So, it looks like you really like this guy. Huh?"

Rarity looked down at Spike. "I'm not sure. I mean, I haven't even met this colt yet."

"But what if he's not a colt. What if he's something like Errrr….a donkey? Or a Minotaur? Or something completely not pony." Spike asked nervously.

Rarity rubbed her chin with her hoof. "Well, I've never thought about that…..I would have to say it wouldn't matter what he is, because it's not what's on the outside that matters…it's what's on the inside that counts. And through what I've read in his poems, he has a sweet and passionate soul and that's what I'm attracted too."

Spike then had a large smile on his face before scooting his chair back to me. Once he got back to me, I gave him a playful pat on the back before leaning my head down to him. "This is good, now we know that it won't bother her that it's you." I whispered to him

He then raised his head up to mine. "Yeah, just of few more anonymous gifts and I'll try to tell her that it's me." he whispered.

Rainbow Dash noticed us whispering to each other. "And what are you two talking about?" she asked with an eye brow raised.

Me and Spike shot our heads away from each other. "Nothin'." We both said at the same time.

Rainbow Dash gave us a suspicious look before taking a sip of her drink.

A few minutes later, we all heard the sound of flapping getting louder and louder.

We looked in the direction it was coming from and saw Jeff flying towards us with a poster in his beak.

When he was close to us, he was so exhausted that he lost control of his flight pattern and started falling towards the table.

Discord noticed this and snapped his fingers. Suddenly, a pillow appeared in a flash of light on the table and Jeff crashed on the soft pillow.

"Jeff, what's up bird?" I said looking down at the panting parrot on the table.

Jeff got up off the pillow in a daze before shaking the daze off and took the poster out his beak. "Guys, guess what I found!" he said in an excited tone.

I looked at the poster he was holding in his wing and raised an eye brow. "An old wrinkly piece of paper?" I said in an unsatisfied tone.

Jeff looked at the poster to see he was holding it the wrong way; he then spun it around to show us it was an advertisement for an upcoming talent show.

"The Ponyville talent show?" I said with a raised eye brow.

"Yeah dude, we should totally enter." Jeff said in an excited tone.

Rainbow Dash let out a small laugh. "And what would be your talent? Flying through hoops? Or seeing how many times you can make a mess on a statue?" she said before she let out another small laugh.

Jeff gave her a sharp look. "No. it's going to be something cool, something we can all do, but what?" Jeff started rubbing under his beak as he paced back and forth.

"How about we perform a magic act." Spike suggested.

Jeff shook his head. "Nah, to obvious." He then continued to pace.

"A flying show?" I suggested.

"Sorry, I did that last year. It wouldn't be as interesting now." Rainbow Dash stated.

Jeff quickened his pacing until he came to a quick stop. "I GOT IT, we can sing…or better yet, we can form a band." He said in an excited tone.

We all looked at him with confused looks. "A band?" Twilight asked.

Jeff turned his head to face her. "Yeah Think about it!...we could make an awesome band."

"Well that does sound like a good idea….but, it's just not my type of thing, ya know!" Applejack confessed.

Rarity nodded in agreement. "I'm afraid I must agree with Applejack. A band is simply not lady like."

"Erh, I just don't want to do it." Rainbow Dash added in an uninterested tone.

Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy and Twilight nodded in agreement.

Jeff crossed his wings. "Fine, you girls do what you want. It'll just have to be a boy band instead, with Me, Matt, Spike, Discord and even Peewee."

"Yeah, we're not interested ether." I admitted. Discord and Spike nodded in agreement.

Jeff was about to say something until he came up with an idea. "Ok….looks like there's no convincing you, I just feel bad that Spike won't get to eat all those diamonds." Jeff then had a mischievous grin on his face

Spike suddenly went wide-eyed and leaded closer to Jeff. "What diamonds?"

Jeff then turned his attention to Spike. "Oh yeah, you know the expression they'll shower you with diamonds? Well for a band they do it for real. All those fresh….mouth-watering….delicious….diamonds."

Spike was lost in fantasy as his drool made a small puddle on the table, he then snapped back to reality and wiped the drool off his mouth with his arm. "I'm in." he said quickly.

Jeff's gin grew bigger. "And not to mention all the adoring fans who will love us."

Discord suddenly got curious to what Jeff was saying and raised an eye brow. "I'm listening." He said in a curious voice.

Jeff turned his head to face Discord. "Yeah, if you were in a band you would be loved by hundreds…even thousands. And with all those fans, maybe it will attract the Princess' attention and you can show her that you can be trusted."

Discord rubbed his chin with his talon hand while he thought about what Jeff said until he made his decision. "Very well, I'll join your little band."

Jeff had a smirk on his face as he turned to face me.

"Oh no Jeff, I know what you're doing and I'm not going to be pulled into this by your smooth talk like you did with them." I said as I crossed my arms.

"Hey, I was just thinking about creativity. I mean, you're so creative and we could use that in the band. Plus, it would be a shame to put that talented mind of yours to waste, right?" Jeff said in a sly tone.

I then uncrossed my arms and looked at him curiously. "You really think I'm creative?"

Jeff grinned. "Dude, your cutie mark shouldn't even be a game controller. It should be a…whatever a creative cutie mark is."

I then tapped my chin with my hoof before letting out a small sigh. "Alright, I guess I've got nothing to lose anyway."

"Except your dignity and the show itself." A female voice said behind me.

We all looked in the direction the voice came from and our eyes shot wide open in shock to who we saw. "TRIXIE." We all yelled out.

Jeff had a confused look on his face. "Wait! How's Trixie?"

Trixie then walked towards us. "I'm Trixie, The great and powerful Trixie." She said while raising a hoof in the air.

"Also known as, The not so great and powerful fraud." I added.

Trixie huffed at my comment. "Make all the comments you want, I'm still going to show you want a true show is."

"What are you doing here anyway Trixie?" Rainbow Dash asked while glaring at the blue unicorn.

Trixie gave her devious grin. "Oh noting much, I'm just here to win the talent show. And when I do, all of Ponyville will once again see that I am truly great and powerful."

I rolled my eyes. "That will never work."

Trixie came up to me with a glare. "Bet it will and who are you anyway? I didn't see you last time I was here."

"Name's Matthew, I arrived here last month." I said while glaring back.

Trixie raised an eye brow. "Wired name."

"Why does everypony keep saying that?" I thought in an irritated way.

Trixie then turned her attention to Twilight. "Oh, I remember you. The unicorn who bested that Ursa Minor and ran me out of town, Twilight...Is it?" she said with an eye brow raised.

"Yes, Twilight Sparkle. And I didn't run you out of town, I was just trying to protect Ponyville and it would have never happened if you didn't fill everypony's heads with lies." Twilight argued.

Trixie just grunted. "Whatever, you're still going to lose at the show."

Jeff flew up to her face. "Oh no we're not, because you're the one who's gonna lose after we win with our band."

Trixie let out a small laugh. "A band? That's your big performance? Please, that's nothing compared to my act. And I promise it will be something magnificent." She said in a snobby tone.

"Hope it's a disappearing act." I said under my breath.

Trixie glared at me. "I heard that." She snapped.

"You were supposed to." I snapped back.

As Me and Trixie glared sharply at each other, Jeff flew in between us. "Ok let's all just calm it down and settle this at the show. Come on Matt, we're going home!"

Trixie then gave me a smirk. "You should listen to your pet, Matt."

Jeff suddenly went wide-eye and he looked as though he was about to burst in anger. He then looked towards Trixie. "Did you just call me a PET?...I AM NOT A PET." He yelled before shooting towards Trixie.

I quickly grabbed his tail feathers with my mouth to try and hold him back. "Whow Jeff. Calm down bird, she's not worth it." I said through my teeth while Jeff was hopelessly flapping to try and reach Trixie.

After a few seconds, Jeff finally calmed down and I let him go. He then flew onto my back and I turned my head to Twilight. "Come on Twi, we better get back to the library." With that, Twilight got up off her seat and we walked away from the table.

As we walked away, Trixie smirked again. "What? No threat? No confident speech? Fine, just go along home with your pet and your geek of a girlfriend!"

I then stopped in my tracks and gritted my teeth before turning back to face Trixie. "What did you say? Because I couldn't hear you from all the way over there."

Trixie grinned. "I said; go home with your pet and geek of a girlfriend."

At that moment, anger boiled inside me and I pushed my face up to Trixie's. "Listen here ya big fake. You can insult me, you can insult my friend, but when you insult Twilight…that's when I get mad….We are gonna crush you at the show and send you crying home." I yelled.

Trixie raised an eye brow. "Care to make a little wager?"

I gave her a sharp look. "You're on. If we win, you have to admit that you're not as powerful as you say you are and you have to apologise to Twilight."

Trixie nodded in agreement. "And WHEN I win, you have to call me the most powerful and talented unicorn in Ponyville." Trixie then held her hoof out.

I hesitated for a second before I grabbed her hoof and shook it. "Deal." I said while we glared at each other.

I then let go of Trixie's hoof and walked back to Twilight and Jeff before we walked back to the library with Spike and Discord following us.

Later: The library

Me, Discord, Peewee and Spike were sitting at the large table in the main room watching Jeff walk back and forth while he was running through the plan.

"Now….the talent show's coming in 2 days, which gives us enough time to at least learn a song for the show. But we need to know who's good at what and where they belong in a band. So….who's good at playing the drums?" Jeff asked as he looked at us.

We all looked at each other; wondering who was going to answer him. Until Discord raised his lion hand. "Emmm, I've had some experience with that kind of activity."

Jeff smiled slightly. "Good, then you can be our drummer. Get on the drum set and show us what you got!"

"Errr Jeff, we don't have and drum set, we don't have any kind of instruments and we're broke so we can't buy any." I said.

Jeff face-wing in frustration. "AH MAN, we forgot to buy instruments, how can we form a band without instruments? You tell me!"

Discord had a grin on his face as he rubbed his chin. "Perhaps, I can be of assistance." With that, he snapped his fingers and with a flash of light, a red drum set with cymbals, a white electric guitar with blue lightning bolts on it, some speakers and some microphones appeared in the middle of the room.

"Alright Discord! Now let's see what you got." Jeff said in delight.

With that, Discord walked up to the drum set and picked up the drum sticks. He then swallowed hard before playing some beats on the drums and so far he was really good. After playing on the drums for a few minutes, he stopped and looked at us to see the surprised look on our faces.

"Dude….that was awesome, you are definitely our drummer." Jeff said in delight.

Discord just smiled and spun the drum sticks around in his fingers.

Jeff then turned around to face the rest of us. "Alright, I think Spike should be our guitarist because he's pretty good with a normal guitar. Plus besides from Discord, he's the only one with fingers and can actually hold that thing. So Spike let's see how you do."

With that, Spike walked up to the electric guitar and picked it up. After a small hesitation, he started playing some notes on the guitar and we were surprised to find out he was better on this guitar then he was on the other one.

After he was done, we all applause for him before Jeff stepped forward. "Now that's what I'm talkin' about. Now, we need somepony to wright the songs and I think that job should belong to Matt because of his creativity, what do ya say Matt?"

I thought about it for a moment before agreeing to it. "I think I can come up with something."

Jeff's smile grew larger. "Great, you get started and I'll think of something for Peewee to do." With that, I nodded and grabbed some paper and a pen and started wrighting. It was hard because I hand to hold the pen in my mouth.

Jeff examined Peewee for a moment "You're a smart phoenix….you can be our tech guy. You job is simple, you just check the equipment to see if they're all workin' and you can even adjust the lights for the show."

Peewee gave him a confused look. "How do I do that?"

Jeff smirked. "Don't worry, I'll show you the basics." Peewee then smiled and nodded "Ok, I'll do it."

I tuned my head to Jeff with an eye brow raised. "So Jeff, what will you be doing?"

Jeff turned his head to me with a smirk on his face. "Me? I'm gonna be the main singer."

"Why do you get to be the main singer?" I asked.

Jeff crossed his wings and raised his eye brow. "Do you wanna sing?"

"…Yeah, you can sing." I said before going back to wrighting the song.

Jeff then flew back on the table and turned to face all of us. "Ok, we are almost ready to start practising to beat that no good Trixie, all we need now….is a band name."

We all opened our mouths to suggest but we lost our thoughts. "Huuuuuh." We all said as we thought.

Suddenly, an idea came into my head. "Hey Jeff, how about the Bronies?"

Everypony gave me a confused look. "Who or what are Bronies?" Spike asked.

"Bronies are another word for male ponies. In fact, where I came from that was the name given to boys who liked…" I then remembered not to tell them about where I truly came from. "Never mind." I quickly said.

Jeff rubbed the bottom of his beak. "Hmmm, another name for mail ponies huh? Well we are a boy band…and it does sound kinda catchy. Yeah, I like it….from this day forward we shall be known as….the Bronies."

"YEAH." We all yelled out.

"Now let's get to work and crush Trixie!" Jeff yelled before they all got to practising while I wrote.

2 days later: Talent show

Today was the day of the talent show and we were all nervous about going up on stage. Discord and Spike had been practising well and have gotten very good. Peewee had learned how to work the lights and was ready to go. It didn't take me long to wright a song; to tell the truth, I just wrote one that I already knew from England and told them that I made it up. Jeff has been practising his singing and we all agreed that he was perfect for the job.

Some acts had already been up. The first was a young male Pegasus trying to spin plates which didn't end well. The second was two female earth ponies playing oboes which were super boring and the last act that was up there was Snips and Snails doing a magic act which ended with Snails eating the carrots again.

Me, Twilight, the guys and the rest of the girls were back stage waiting to go on. "Where the hell is Jeff? We'll be going on any minute and he's still not here." I said as I paced back and forth.

Twilight walked up to me and I stopped pacing. "Matt, calm down! I'm sure he'll be here. After all he started the band, why wouldn't he show up?"

"Because he knows you're gonna lose." A familiar female voice said across the room. We all turned our heads to see Trixie walking up to us.

"I think your pet was right not to show up, this would be embarrassing for him." Trixie said in a snobby tone.

"The only one who's gonna be embarrassed tonight is you." I said while glaring at Trixie.

We then heard Miss Cheerilee's voice on stage. "And now everypony, please give a round of applause too…The great and powerful Trixie." The crowd then cheered before Trixie walked out onto stage with her head up high.

After an hour of watching Trixie's magic act, we all had our mouths hanging at the show we saw. There was fireworks and everything, even a large blue dancing fire hawk.

Trixie then bowed and walked off stage. "Oh you are toast." Rainbow Dash mumbled.

"What was that Rainbow?" Discord asked with a raised eye brow. "Oh…nothing." Rainbow Dash said with a sheepish smile.

At the moment, Jeff shot through the curtains and crashed right in front of us. "Jeff…where have you been? We're on next." I said while looking down at him.

He got up and made some sort of wheezing noise. "What's wrong with ya? Are you out of breath or something?" I asked.

Jeff shook his head and pointed in his mouth. We all looked at him with confused faces until Twilight spoke up. "Oh no, I think he's trying to tell us he's lost his voice." Jeff nodded fast.

My eyes widened. "What? But he's the main singer, how are we gonna go up there without a singer?"

Jeff then pointed at me. I didn't know what he was doing at first but then I understood. "ME? You want me to sing, but…I can't sing." I yelled with a frightened look.

"Matt I don't think we have a choice here." Spike said.

I turned my head to Spike. "No I mean, I really can't sing. I'm a terrible singer." I admitted. I then felt something tapping on my hoof and looked down to see Jeff tapping his beak on my hoof. He then looked up at me with big begging eyes

I then let out a small sigh. "Fine, I'll do it. But don't say I didn't warn ya….that is, when you get your voice back of cause."

Jeff then glared at me before we heard Cheerilee's voice again. "And now, please welcome the new band in Ponyville….The Bronies."

With that, we all walked up on stage. Once we all got into positions, Discord snapped his fingers and the drum set appeared in front of him, the electric guitar appeared in Spike's hands and a microphone on a stand appeared in front of me.

I looked up at the spot lights to see Peewee was ready to begin. I gulped hard before leaning into the mic. "Errr...hello, we are the Bronies and we hope you enjoy our song tonight." I said nervously.

I then nodded to Spike and he started playing some notes on his guitar before Discord tapped his drum sticks together. The then leaned back into the mic and started to sing.

Me: "You're insecure….don't know what for

You're turning heads when you walk through the do-o-or

Don't need make up….to cover up

Being the way that you are is eno-o-ugh."

Me and Spike: "Everypony else in the room can see it

Everypony else but youuuu."

Me, Spike and Discord: "Baby you light up my world like nopony else

The way that you flip your hair gets me overwhelmed

But when you smile at the ground it ain't hard to tell

You don't know (oh oh)

You don't know you're beautiful!

If only you saw what I can see

You'll understand why I want you so desperately

Right now I'm looking at you and I can't believe

You don't know (oh oh)

You don't know you're beautiful (oh oh)

That's what makes you beautiful."

Spike then played more notes on the guitar.

Me: "So c-come on

You got it wrong

To prove I'm right I put you in a so-o-ong."

Spike: "I don't know why

You're being shy

And turn away when I look into your eye eye eyes."

Me and Spike: "Everypony else in the room can see it

Everypony else but youuuu."

Me, Spike and Discord: "Baby you light up my world like nopony else

The way that you flip your hair gets me overwhelmed

But when you smile at the ground it ain't hard to tell

You don't know (oh oh)

You don't know you're beautiful!

If only you saw what I can see

You'll understand why I want you so desperately

Right now I'm looking at you and I can't believe

You don't know (oh oh)

You don't know you're beautiful (oh oh)

That's what makes you beautiful

Na-na-na-naa-na-na-naaa-na-na

Naa-na-na-na-naa-na-na

Na-na-na-naa-na-na-naaa-na-na

Naa-na-na-na-naa-na-na."

Me: "Baby you light up my world like nopony else

The way that you flip your hair gets me overwhelmed

But when you smile at the ground it ain't hard to tell."

Spike and Discord: "You don't know (oh oh)"

Me, Spike and Discord: "You don't know you're beautiful

Baby you light up my world like nopony else

The way that you flip your hair gets me overwhelmed

But when you smile at the ground it ain't hard to tell

You don't know (oh oh)

You don't know you're beautiful!

If only you saw what I can see

You'll understand why I want you so desperately

Right now I'm looking at you and I can't believe

You don't know (oh oh)

You don't know you're beautiful (oh oh)

You don't know you're beautiful (oh oh)

That's what makes you beautiful!"

The crowd burst into cheers, the sound of hooves stomping the ground filled the air. I looked over to Twilight to see she was stomping her hooves on the floor with a large smile on her face.

Me, Spike and Discord waved to the crowd before walking back stage. Once we were back stage, Twilight wrapped her hooves around the back of my neck and pulled me into a warm hug. "That was incredible; I thought you said you couldn't sing." Twilight said while she hugged me.

"Did you really think I was that good?" I asked. We then broke the hug and Twilight looked me deep in the eyes. "Of cause you were, just listen to that crowd!" Twilight said as she pointed to the stage.

I listened to the crowd and they were cheering like crazy. I couldn't believe that they actually liked my singing that much. I then turned my attention back to Twilight. "Thanks Twi, but they're not just cheering for me. They're cheering for all three of us." I then turned my head to face Spike and Discord to see their smiling faces.

We the heard Cheerilee's voice on stage again. "Ok now the votes are in and the winner is….The Bronies."

"YES." I, Discord and Spike yelled before walking back on stage to the cheering crowd.

Cheerilee then pulled a big gold trophy across the stage and placed it in front of us. Discord then grabbed the trophy by the handles and held it up high while Me and Spike just waved; the cheers from the crowd then grew louder.

An hour after the show, all the crowd had left and Me and the others were standing next to the stage with Twilight and the girls complimenting us on our song.

"That was totally awesome guys." Rainbow Dash said in an excited tone.

"I know right, we rocked the house." Spike said with a big smile on his face.

"Awww, my little Spiky-wiky is a little rock star." Rarity said while rubbing Spike's head.

We all kept talking until we noticed Trixie walk up to us. "Well, I believe you have something to say." I said with a smirk.

Trixie had a frustrated look on her face before letting out a loud sigh. "Fine, I'm not as powerful as I said I was. Happy?"

I raised my eye brow and crossed my hooves. Trixie let out another loud sigh before turning her head to Twilight. "I'm sorry I called you a geek Twilight."

Now that I was satisfied, I smiled and uncrossed my hooves. Trixie then came closer to me. "You may have won now, but you haven't heard the last of the great and powerful Trixie." Trixie then raised her front hooves up and slammed them on the ground; creating a poof of smoke. When the smoke cleared, we saw Trixie running away from us before she disappeared in the distance.

"The girl's a broke record." I said as I watched Trixie run away.

Twilight then giggled at my comment before everypony started laughing. Applejack then let out a large yawn. "I think it's time we hit the hay."

I turned my head to face her. "I hear that AJ. Come on Twi, let's get back to the library." With that, she nodded and we all said our goodnights to everypony.

Me, Twilight, Spike, Jeff, Peewee and Discord then headed back to the library to get some sleep and end the day.

Hope you enjoyed the chapter.

I hope you're looking forward to the next chapter because I'm going to reveal one of the silhouetted alicorns. Name first, appearance later.

the song used in the chapter is call What makes you beautiful played by One direction. I do not own any thing.

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