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Rarity's Problem

by Blazewhisper

Chapter 3: The Problem Reveals and The Mare is Seen

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A/N: I really enjoy writing these. :3

If you all could write a review for me or suggest a change, I'd much appriceate it! ^^

Onward to the story! Oh, and it might be OCxRainbowdash, OCxFluttershy, OCxRarity or just a big love triangle. x.x

Disclamer: I dom't own MLP:FiM, Lauren Faust does. ^^ Nor do I own what.. any of the ponies own. I only own Blazewhisper ^^

Fluttershy and Raindowdash leaned in, waiting for Rarity to finish her suspensful sentence. "I called you here to tell you about this new pony." Rainbowdash's ears went up in an instant. "Who's this new pony? Do they think they're faster than me?" Rarity glanced at Rainbow. "No dear. But she does have wings.." She shook her head. "This new pony's name is Blazewhisper. She's full-grown and about the size of.. well a normal adult mare."

Rainbowdash huffed. "I bet she can't fly faster than me! I'd like to-" Rainbowdash was about to finish her 'betting' sentence when Rarity interrupted. "Quiet down, dear! She's not a challenger." Rainbowdash frowned, dissapointment showing in her rosy eyes.

"T-Then...what...what is she..?" Fluttershy's shy voice spoke up, not much strong as usual.

Rarity glanced at Fluttershy. "Well... she's.. um.." Don't say it.. "She's a wonderful mare who helps everyone!" Rarity blurted out some lie to cover up what she really thought of the mare.

"O-Oh." Fluttershy looked at Rarity. Rainbowdash lifted an eyebrow, questioning her. "I'm not buying it. What is she really?" Rarity bit her lip. "I'll tell you tomorrow. Go on then, shoo!" She pushed them both out with her hooves. Soon, Fluttershy and Rainbowdash were the only ones outside. "Something's fishy about the way Rarity's acting, don'tcha think Flutter?" Fluttershy shook her head, her bubblegum hair swishing about. "No. I-I think she acted just f-fine." Fluttershy mumbled.

Just then, a yellow blur flew past the two, mixed with orange and red. Rainbow whipped her head around, her rainbow mane whirling around like a rainbow. Fluttershy blushed. "Who's there?" Rainbow demanded. The yellow, red and orange blur appeared again but tumbled into Rainbow on accident. The mare looked at Rainbow. "Oh I'm terribly sorry! I didn't see you there.."

The mare lifted herself up with her wings and set herself down infront of the two. "S..So you're B-Blazewhisper?" The mare nodded, her flame-mane bobbing up and down. "The one and only. Who might you be?" "I'm Rainbowdash. Just call me Rainbow for short." Rainbow was on her hooves again, staring at Blazewhisper like she was caught in a dream. "F-Fluttershy.." Fluttershy squeaked small-like. "Nice to meet you." Blazewhisper said calmly, oblivious to how each were acting around her.

Back in Rarity's Boutique

Rarity watched the three through the window, her blue eyes taking note of everything. She frowned at how Rainbowdash stared at Blazewhisper and how quiet Fluttershy's voice was. She couldn't help but wonder, why were they acting like this? Surely they weren't falling for that... yellow mare with that lovely fire mane and those orange mixed with yellow eyes.. Rarity shook her head, trying to snap out of it.

She sighed. How could a mare that beautiful love a mare like her? She frowned. Maybe it wasn't meant to be...

A/N: Poor Rarity! D:

Wanna find out what happens next chapter? :D

I hope you do cuz it's gonna come out soon!

And sorry for short chapter... AGAIN

~Blazewhisper

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