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Sweet Apple Mystery

by Adelilah

Chapter 6: Hospitalized

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Woohoo! Here comes the next chapter :D! In return: I WANT SOME REVIEWS :D! It's okay with critique, i actually want to know what i could improve with this story, so make sure to tell me ;D! Also, if you find any grammatical error!
Sorry for the delay, but we just had easter break and i spent a whole week with Adelie and another one of our friends, Erica, camping out in the Swedish mountains :D! And we went fishing too! I didn't get anything while Erika got a shitload of "aborre" (don't know what they're called in english) and one small pike while Adelia caught the mother of all pikes! Its bloody huge! We measured it and its 133 cm from nose to fin! Lucky prick... and it took almost an hour to reel it in too!
Sorry if i've misspelled any words of made some other grammatical error in my fanfic... Lol its funny, my mother is from USA, and i've been speaking english just as much as swedish my entire life, still Adelie is better at grammar and spelling than me o.O... Weird xD?

*** Chapter Six ***

When Big Mac heard about his sister, he seemed to forget the killer headache he felt and followed the three Cutie Mark crusaders back to the orchard, where Magenta were digging the ground underneath Applejack. AJ were on her stomach and her hind legs were lodged under the big apple tree that fell on her a little while ago. She looked like she were in pain. Alot of pain.
Big Mac hurried over to the tree and started to lift the tree, using his legs and neck muscles. The tree were heavy and Big Mac tried the hardest he could. He finally managed to lift the tree enough for Magenta to pull Applejack out.

They hurried away with Applejack on the wagon to the hospital. Even though they told Applebloom to head back to Sweet Apple Acres with her two friends, she still consisted on following. She were crying and the tears had left streaks with brown dirt on her yellow cheeks.
Applejack got taken away by two nurses as soon as they arrived at the hospital. Magenta, Big Mac and Applebloom had to wait outside the room.
Magenta dried Appleblooms cheeks with her hoof.

"There, there Applebloom. Don't you worry, AJ will be fine! The doctors are taking care of her, and she'll be back in no time!" She said cheerfully to lift the young fillys mood. "And don't forget, its Applejack were talking about! She won't let ANYTHING stop her!"
Applebloom smiled carefully toward Magenta. Big Macintosh's mood also seemed to improve by Magentas words. They Apple ponies knew Magenta were right. Applejack were never going to give up easily. Besides, what was the worst that could happen?

"ARE THEY BROKEN?" All three ponies shouted out at the same time when the doctor came out and gave them the news. Doctor P. House nodded.
"She'll need at least four months for her legs to heal and another four to recover. Unfortunately, she'll have to go easy on the hoofwork for at least a year, wich means no applebucking or similar." House continued.
Applebloom, Big Mac and Magenta needed time to process what they just heard. Sure, AJ would have to be still as long as her legs were wrapped up like cocoons, but there were no bucking way she would keep away from work for a year! She would go insane!
Applebloom asked if they could go see her, but apparently she were sedated so if they wanted to meet her, they would have to wait until tomorrow.

The three solemn ponies turned back home to Sweet Apple Acres in silence. Neither of them wanted or could think of anything to say.

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Flim and Flam were sitting around a campfire. The sun had set a long time ago and the full moon lit everything up with its blue, mysterious light.
"Flam..." Flim mumbled carefully. First it had been fun trying to sabotage the farm. Moving rocks and boulders into the fields, scaring the livestock into stampeding, making equipment disappear and reappear on the most impossible places. But what they did today were just dangerous. With their unicorn magic, they got most of the apple trees to rot and fall over and soon as somepony kicked them. Neither of them actually thought anyone would get hurt.

"NOT a word!" Flam growled and stared at the contraption behind them. The Super Speedy Cider Squeezy 6000. What a joke. And all just to take over some old, shitty, godforsaken farm.
"But Flam! What happened today must never be repeated! We wanted to force them away! Not kill them!" Flim exclaimed. Flam didn't respond. "Besides! We don't want that stinkin' farm! Its He who wants it! Why not do it himself, i mean?"

"Don't forget, brother, that if we succeeds, He will pay us enough money to buy Canterlot! I don't know about you, but i wouldn't mind some extra cash. So i think we should just shut up and do our job!" Flam said and slammed the ground with one hoof.

Flim hunched together and looked down on the ground. Not saying a word. Since a few weeks back, some months after they got chased out of Ponyville thanks to that Cider-fiasko, and they met up with their boss; a mysterious pony who didn't even tell them his name (And also seemed to change everytime they meet up), Flam had... Changed, somehow. He had become more of a loner, darker somehow and his temper had worsened. Sure, he has always had a bit of a short temper as a colt, but he grew out of it later on as he matured. But now, he seemed to be back on that track again.

Flim sighed silently. He didn't like the change that his brother went through.
"As a matter of fact..." Flam said after being quiet for a while. Flim looked up at his brother again. "Maybe we need more accidents of that kind, to make sure they move their fat earthpony asses away from Sweet Apple Acres..."
Flim were horrified by Flams suggestion. Flam saw his brother troubled face and chuckled and stroke his moustache.

"Don't you see, little brother? Accidents make them lose money, if they lose more money than they make they won't afford to keep the farm anymore! Then we'll swoop in and buy it cheap! I'm a genious!" Flam smiled and yawned.

"We'd better sleep now, because tomorrow, Sweet Apple Acres will recieve more trouble than ever!"
Flim smiled and nodded, to make it look like he agreed. But what he really felt was worried... Worried and scared.

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Awright! Don't forget to "swoop in" and leave a review about what you think of the fic so far :D!
Who is this, changing, mysterious oddball the FlimFlam brothers call "boss"? And what will happen to Sweet Apple Acres? Especially now with Applejack out of the picture?
Find out in the next chapter, WHO WILL BE OUT SOON! :D

Delilah OUT!

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