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Sweet Apple Mystery

by Adelilah

Chapter 4: Busted!

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ALAS! Chapter four is here :D! Sorry for the delay, I've had alot up my sleeve... But now I'm back again :D! Please R&R!

***\Chapter Four/***

The two, tall and slim unicorns stood on top of the hill and observed the farm beneath them. Sweet Apple Acres. A couple of weeks ago, during the apple cider season, they had tried to take over the old farm by ruining the family in a silly cider competition. And they would have succeded too, if it weren't for those other, meddling fillys.

"Wow, he really wants that old farm, dont he?" One of the unicorns, the younger one, asked the other. His older brother nodded. "But, why would anyone want that old hunk of junk, eh Flam?"

Flam shook his head. "Beats me, Flim. But I frankly don't care, as long as he pays us" He answered.

Flim looked down in the ground.

"But, how are we supposed to get them to give up the farm? By losing, we didn't just make the boss pissed, but we also humiliated ourselves in Ponyville" Flim sighed and slowly shook his head. "They wont even consider selling us their farm, unless they can't afford to keep it anymore. And for that to happen, I bet at least ten dozens of miracles will have to happen."

Flam stiffened. "A miracle... Or perhaps an accident?" He said and turned to his younger brother and put on a sly grin. Flim understood what his brother had in mind and smiled just as sly back.

"Flam, dear brother, are you thinking what I'm thinking?"

"Flim, brother of mine, only if you are thinking what I'm thinking!"

Both of them chuckled gleefully at the dark night sky. The world famous FlimFlam brothers were back!

The music boomed loudly through the speakers as the party continued. Magenta was the first one in the conga line that almost every pony on the party had joined in and circled through the house. Everypony seemed to have a good time. Bic Macintosh had also tasted the punch Pinkie had brought.
Huge mistake.
Despite his massive bodymass, the small amount of alcohol that were in the punch quickly went into his system. Applejack didn't know if she should laugh or cry when her big brother walked around, flirting with ponies of both genders and pulling unicorn jokes.
He also seemed to think it was fun to pretend he was deaf when ponies tried to talk to him.
Rarity eventually got fed up with the unicorn jokes and emptied the whole punch bowl on Big Macs head. It resulted in Big Mac staggering out in front of the conga line, without being able to see where he was going.

Magenta danced in front of the conga line with her eyes closed and constantly singing along with the music. Suddenly she heard Pinkie shout something to her from behind her. Magenta turned around to ask her to repeat what she just said, and instead walked straight into Big Macintosh. The conga line came to a sudden halt and ponies were tumbling over each other in total chaos. Somepony landed on Magentas new coat and Magenta were in turn pushed forward by another pony, causing her coat to rip.
She turned around in horror and noticed that her flank were exposed, in all its emptyness.
And it didn't took long until the other ponies noticed that too. Some gasped and others began to whisper and soon, everypony at the party were staring at her flank.
Magentas eyes filled with tears and she hid her face in her hooves in humiliation.
"Magenta..." Twilight Sparkle began, but Magenta didn't let her finish. Magenta rushed past the party ponies and ran all the way to the attic and locked the atticdoor behind her. She threw herself
on the bed and started to cry.
Great, now everypony in Ponyville were going to know that she was nothing but a blank flank. And they would laugh at her, point at her and call her "Blankflank". Thats what everypony did in back in Fillydelphia.
Suddenly she heard somepony knock on her door. She didn't answer.
"Mags, can we come in?" She heard Twilight Sparkle say. She just buried her face deeper in her soaked pillow.
Twilight used her magic to unlock the door and she walked in, followed by Applejack and Pinkie Pie.
"Whats tha matteh, dear?" Applejack asked.
"Well, whats stopping you?" Magenta asked back, her voice muffled by the pillow. "Go ahead and laugh at me, thats what you came to do, right?"
Twilight shook her head. "No! Absolutely not! Why would we laugh at you?" She asked and walked up to the bed. Magenta turned around and looked at her with swollen, red eyes.
"Why not? I am a blankflank, a loser! I never got my cutiemark and probably never will!" She said and turned to the pillow again.
"So what? I bet there's alot of ponies out there in Equestria who still haven't got their cutiemark" Pinkie Pie said cheerfully. Magenta turned around again and this time with a frown.
"Oh really? Name one!" She asked sceptically. Pinkie Pie wondered for a while.
"Oh, oh! Applebloom, and her two friends Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo haven't got theirs yet!" She said and smiled. Magenta sighed.
"But they're still foals. I'm grown up!" Magenta said and her eyes got filled with tears again.
Twilight Sparkle open her mouth to say something, but hesitated.
"Just, please, leave me alone... Please" Magenta said and burrowed her face into the pillow again and cried silently. Her three friends looked at each other, knowing that nothing they said would make Magenta feel better, and turned around to walk down to the rest of the ponies, who eagerly waited outside the attic door, held back by Rainbow Dash and Rarity. Fluttershy had tried to help, but chickened out. As usual.
The ponies were sent home and Rainbow helped Applejack to get Big Macintosh, who had fallen asleep in the apple-bobbing bucket, up to his room.
Magenta cried herself to sleep, fearing for her future in Ponyville.

*****

Aww, Magenta's having an emo moment :/
Lol, anyway, you know the drill: go an write an awesome REVIEW :D!
Hehe, to be honest, i wasn't sure if i wanted the part where Big Mac got drunk. Originally, i wanted the accident to just, well, an ordinary conga accident and Magenta tripped on her coat. But Adelie conviced me to write about the drunken Mac, she tought it would be funny to show people that even if Big Mac is the biggest stallion in Equestria, he might not always be able to handle everything ;)... Lol, i hope you liked it xD
Can't promise when the next chapter comes out, but i'll try to hurry up ;)... Kthxbai!

Delilah OUT!

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