Author's note
Okay, three more chapters to go and I will be done with this story. It has been a while but the fanmake will be soon be finished.

nobodiez, good suggestions and such. Now for the suggestions for Ben Mareladdin, maybe to the first one (I will need to ask Penstrokepony to use her for that once more) and second, of course.

To answer Agent C.H.A.O.S like I PM the reviewer before, there are non-antagonistic characters in there, but with so many in the mob, I just chose not to show them. After all, too much appearance is overkill.

Second, Boris is playing on the villagers' fears, making them think that Nyx (Nightmare Moon) is still a threat. He did say anything about disposing Nyx but didn't say how (the villagers presumed that Boris, being a "town hero", want to deal with Nyx's power but the villain is secretly planning on getting rid of Nyx). Also, I didn't say that the Doctor and any mare with a child (who are more scared of the Demon Pony than Nyx) would be in the mob for the castle invasion.

And finally, again, I don't mind as I don't do this word per word. Again, I am not in it to be a better writer.

Chapter 11: Castle Rumble

Once the mob is into the castle, they all look around the foyer. Weird, nothing but cabinet, chests and other typical objects; Of course, as they came forward, not one of them notice shadowy figures hiding behind random objects as if ready to strike.

As Dum-Dum and Boxco pass something, Soarin' suddenly flew out and roars, "Now!"

Suddenly the lights are turned on as the foal servants jump out and quickly attack the mob, much to their alarm as they fought back. The intruders weren't informed about this! Dexter quickly flew around and quickly trips up Dumb-Bell.

"Can't catch me, you meanie." Dexter said with a smirk.

The mob kept on fighting the servants with Bow-Tie and JJB88 hit Observan in the chin a few times. Blueblood yelps as Fluttershy quickly pulls the rug from under him, sending him right into a chest, causing Pipsqueak to lock him in with a smirk.

As the battle rages on, Boris, not deferred, pulls Nyx, forcing her up the stairs while snapping, "Now, little filly, since you know your way around this place, you will show me where your 'daddy' is even if I have to kick you so do so! Now take me to him!"

Boris kicks Nyx, causing her to cry out in pain as she was dragged upstairs to look for the Demon Pony. The little alicorn said sadly to herself, "Daddy, forgive me..."

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The CMC got to work to activating Dusk's invention, though has a few problems that causes him to argue with one another.

"You're pulling the lever the wrong way! It goes forward, not backward." Sweetie Belle protests to Scootaloo in annoyance.

"What are you? An engineer," Scootaloo ask Sweetie Belle with a frown.

"Girls, can ya save 'de arguing fer later." Apple Bloom said to her friends. Soon the engine of the invention begins to start, much to the CMC's happiness, "Yeah!" They all got into the engine as Sweetie pulls on the string, causing a whistle to go off.

"Here we go!"

"Better hope this works." Sweetie said in concern as the invention heads right to the cellar.

Twilight, Dusk and Spike heard the commotion from the inside, causing them to peek through the cracks. The father asks, "What in Equestria?" He gasps as the male unicorn saw his own invention heading right to them. "Twilight, Spike, look out!"

The cellar prisoners quickly duck for cover just as the invention chops through the cellar doors and quickly fell right into the place, exploding in the progress. Once all is clear, Twilight, Dusk and Spike peek out of their hiding places to see an unusual sight: the baby CMC hanging from some parts of the machine while groaning.

"Okay, a chopping cellar door cutie mark is definitely out." Scootaloo groans a bit.

"But yew y'all have gotta try 'dis." Apple Bloom said to Twilight's group with a giggle.

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The fight at the castle continues on. The Tales Ponies throw tomatoes right at Filthy Rich who growls as he grabs a shovel in an attempt to hit them. But then he heard Applejack, "Hey, yew vermint, up here!" The Earth Pony looks up to see her, her big brother Macintosh, a younger Granny Smith and the rest of the Apple family with bowls of some hot liquid. "How about some hot apple cider; Now!"

The Apple family then dumps the hot stuff right onto Filthy Rich, causing him to scream in pain from the liquid. Score prepares to attack but Minty and Toola-Roola quickly slams two shelves right onto him.

Diamond and Silver chases after a foal pony but then Pinkie jumps from a railing and lands on the two brats, knocking them both out.

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Boris kicks open a door upstairs and look into a room, but there's no trace of the Demon Pony. The worried Nyx said, "Maybe daddy has decided to leave the castle. I guess he isn't..."

"I'm losing my patience with you, Nightmare Moon!" Boris exclaims furiously as he slaps Nyx across the face, causing her to sob in sadness and pain. "Now take me to where this monster is or I will kill you right now for wasting my time!"

"All right, all right, I will do so for real...don't hurt me anymore, please..."

"You better this time or else!"

Boris then kicks Nyx along as the two continue the search for the Demon Pony.

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The fight in the foyer continues on as Bray and Zeb fights off Pinkie Pie who hits them with her hooves. She quickly sent them both right into another room as Rarity and the Spa Ponies quickly seize them.

"You poor ugly creatures, you both need makeovers." Rarity giggles as she and the Spa Ponies quickly went to work on giving them a make-over. Once they're done, the white unicorn use magic to show the two mob members a mirror. "There, isn't that better?"

Bray and Zeb looks into the mirror, then at themselves and each other before screaming in terror. They are wearing dresses and female make-up. The two villains rush out of the room, screaming like lunatics.

"You're welcome!" Rarity calls out to the fleeing Bray and Zeb with a devilish smirk on her face.

Soarin' meanwhile looks horrified as he is back into a wall by Dum-Dum who held a torch at him menacingly, ready to burn him up. Unknown to the villain, Caramel appears on top of the stairs, wearing a Napoleon like hat. The foal Earth Pony laughs like a maniac then spots his friend in trouble.

Caramel slid down the banister of the stairs, laughing madly as he is using a pair of scissors. The young Earth Pony then jumps and stabs Dum-Dum in the butt, causing him to jump into the air in pain from the impact.

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Twilight and Dusk quickly gallops through the forest, with Spike and the CMC on their backs quickly. They hope to get back to the castle before Boris finds the Demon Pony and kill both him and Nyx!

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Glida laughs evilly as she was holding Rainbow, pulling her by the tail and causing the young Pegasus pony to scream in pain. Rainbow snaps angrily, "You jerk! If I had ya as a best friend, I would be furious right now."

"Bite me, you loser!" Gilda sneers evilly at the Rainbow as she pulls on her tail some more.

Of course, Soarin', seeing what Gilda is doing, quickly grab the scissors from Caramel and stabs Gilda right in the rear. The griffin shrieks as she flew upward, letting go of Rainbow. Soarin' held his fore legs out as he grabs his love, making the female Pegasus pony smiles in delight.

Boxco and some of the mob members roar as they chase Winona right into the kitchen, cornering the little puppy there and laugh evilly. They got her now!

That is until the drawer was suddenly opened as sharp knives, torture stuff and other objects came out with Mr. and Mrs. Cake and their babies Pound Cake and Pumpkin Cake looks darkly at the mob members. Hoity quickly turns the stove on, flames burst out of the stove as Pinkie appear with her mane down, blood on parts of herself and she is wearing a quilt of various cutie marks and wings. Pinkie Pie hold a knife in her mouth while laughing maniacally.

The mob members scream in terror as they run out of the kitchen. Eventually, the mob members were forced to run out of the castle (with Pipsqueak tossing Blueblood right out). They were obviously no match for the foals attacking them! No Demon Pony (or even Nyx though they are unaware that Boris wants to kill her for real) is worth all this trouble!

As the intruders run out of the castle and through the woods to get back to the village, the foal servants cheers wildly while high-fiving one another. They did it! Everyone has saved the castle from the invaders!

"Gotta admit, Pinkie; that reference to that fic was terrifying yet interesting," Fluttershy said to Pinkie with a shudder.

"Yes, I know, JusSonic thought it would be scary to sneak that in." Pinkie said happily while cleaning the fake blood off of herself.

"And stay out!" Caramel shouts after the intruders. Soarin' eagerly kiss the Earth Pony on both cheeks, much to his disgust. Caramel shakes him off while snapping, "Ugh! Don't do that again!"

Of course, although the servants have won, they are unaware that a certain mob leader is still in the castle, looking for the Demon Pony right now...

Author's note
Hooray! The servants had chased off the mob members. But uh oh, Boris is still after the Demon Pony. In the next chapter, the villain finds the sad creature as the final battle begins. Will Nyx be able to help her 'daddy' in a scary yet determined way? And will Twilight arrives in time? Read, review and suggest.

Bow-Tie is from the first generation of the My Little Pony franchise.

Guess where the kitchen scene with Pinkie Pie is a reference to.