Applejack's Cousin
Chapter 10: 10. Back to Ponyville
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Just so you know, I'd maybe make an apart fanfic to this with the... M content so I don't have to make this and M story an keep it as family friendly as I can...
Tell me whaddaya think
When everypony was up they were already feeling the cold of the ice and the snow. they walked for a while, but almost ten minutes after begining only Jay, Blizzard and Frizzy could keep on their feet (they studied at the artic part of Ko-Ba-Ka). Jay and the other two built an improvised tumbrill, so they could keep on moving. Jay took some jackets out of his back pack and gave them to the ponies in the tumbril.
"you feelin' better?" he asked putting a little blanket so they could keep warmth
"I think so" Fluttershy said
A while later they finaly made it, they were in Canterlot, not that the weather changed, but from there they could get to the castle so the princesses could give them a place to warm up. A while of walking and a lot of indications from twilight they got to the castle, it was more majestic surrounded by the silver coloured snow.
"Let's go" Jay said taking Fluttershy on his back just like the day they met
They all entered the castle where the princesses were playing a little card game waiting for them to arrive. when they managed to get to the room the princesses were Jay, Blizz and Frizzy rested in the ground tired and freezing because they hadn't much cover and the tumbril was pretty heavy. The days there passed slowly, they hadn't much to do. the princess told them they had to wait untill all the students of the Uma academy, because there was a little surprise for them. the days were getting longer and there was a lot of time to do stuff. After three days another group of ponies arrived, they were some earth ponies and a unicorn. the unicorn walked to them and went to say hi
"Hi, mister Dashing Fire" he said lowering his head a bit
"I told ya to tell me Jay" Jay said lowirng his head too
"who is this?" Fluttershy said
"He's Fire Tornado" Frizzy said
"they were my tutors in when we were in school" the kid said
After presenting themselves, the kid began following them, they got to the castle and the little "surprise" started, a little graduation party, the princesses made that "little" party to celebrate their graduation from the school and a little ceremony for the new students of the the academy. after a big (just no to say huge [for not saying enormous]) party they all were prepairing to go back to their home. they managed to convince Jay to go in a carriage back to ponyvile (not exactly convice him... they knocked him out and tied him to a seat)
"I can't believe that you actually used a frying pan to knock Jay out" Fluttershy said looking at him
After a while of flying Jay woke up screaming
"YOU DON'T KNOW TEENAGE COLTS ON THE MAIL SISTEM VERY WELL!"
It took a while to calm him down, because he was very freaked out about flying, but the rest of the journey was calm except for any scream Jay had the chance to scream about any little move the carriage had to do to get to Ponyville. They were in the town at last and right after Jay got untied he jumped of the carriage and began kissing the ground and thanking Celestia he finally was safe and sound touching the ground (i didn't want that to rhyme). after a long walk they felt they were being followed. they turned around, they were being followed by two ponies, Fire Tornado and Trixie, who hid in the carriage minutes before the journey began joined the group just to have some company. nopony cared about anything, days were calm. a week after their arrival to ponyville, Fluttershy began acting a bit different, She was less active and also she couldn't walk or fly fastly without getting a horrible headache.
"I think you should go to Twilight's home" Jay told her after some days "I bet she knows what's wrong with you"
With no doubt she went to the library to check how was Twilight doing and if she knew something about her problem. it was a cold afternoon but Fluttershy had no problem, she went right inside the library to see Twilight (No way!) reading an old book about "heating" magic to keep the library warm.
"uhh... Twilight?" Fluttershy called from behind
"Fluttershy?" Twilight said putting the book down "What do ya need?"
Fluttershy proceeded to tell her all about what was happening to her. Twilight seemed to know what was happening, so after getting a huge book with the words "A-to-Z: an encyclopedia about you need to know". after flipping through the pages Twilight managed to find what she was looking for. she stopped her hoof over one of the descriptions of the words in the "P" section
"Is everything okay?" Fluttershy said noticing Twilight's jaw dropped
"A-are you sure you wanna know?" the purple pony asked
"Of course, I don't what Jay to be worried" Fluttershy said trying to peek in the book
"Okay" Twilight said "you're... P-pregnant"
Fluttershy's eyes widdened as she stared at the encyclopedia. after a while of procesing that, she bursted into laugh and glee, she ran to twilight and hugged her then she went through the town hugging anypony in her way, and telling them she was pregnant (no wonder some freaked out when she screamed that out loud and ran to Sweet Apple Acres (where Jay was). They were all working on something at the orchard, so see ing Fluttershy screaming like a crazy hunter realy took them out of focus.
"What's wrong?" Jay asked making his way through a pile of apples that were over him
"You remember my little problem?" Fluttershy said hugging the pile of apples
"Yeah" he said getting out of the pile
"well it was nothing to be worried!"
"it isn't?" Applejack said helping Applebloom with an apple that was stuck in her mouth
"Then what was up with ya?" Big Macintosh said trying to kide some branches he broke when he fell
"I'm pregnant" she said
The words echoed around the orchard and produced a very long and uncomfortable silence, followed by Jay fainting in front of them all with a calm smile. nopony could say anythig as they all stared at Fluttershy
Enough for this chap
Just so you know
I've been recieving reviews froma guy who say "get an editor"
well just so you know I can't, this is a shared computer, with a 98% full memory, I have forbidden any download.
beides, I like my mistakes, they help me not making any other in the future.
I'd also say that grammar can suck my balls and Capitalizing too
so dude, stop complaining on my writing or JUST DON'T READ!
With that said: STFU! Have a good day sir!