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"You" profess your love for the most beautiful mare you've ever known, but in the game of love, not everything ends happily ever after. A commentary of sorts on second-person stories.
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"You" profess your love for the most beautiful mare you've ever known, but in the game of love, not everything ends happily ever after.


I suppose I should give some explanation for this story...

It's not meant to be taken too seriously. I would describe it as a parody of happy-go-lucky second person fics but with a serious tone. I never expected this story to end up as heavy as it is, and I think that will cause people to miss the purpose of this story.

In short, it's a response to second person fics rather than one in itself. When I say "response," I don't mean I'm mocking them. I'm commenting on the typical scenario most have.

Everyone
Complete
Romance
Sad

2,340 words: Estimated 10 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

1 Chapter:

  1. A Bouquet of Rainbow Flowers [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 31st, 2015
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Published Aug 2nd, 2015

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