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Cuddling the Caretaker

by MightyShockwave

Chapter 3: Good End

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Twilight could rewrite Fluttershy, reprogram her into a mindless slave...

Of course, Twilight thought to herself, that's what she would do if she was evil to the core. Fluttershy was her friend; she got dragged into this experiment, Twilight would be sure to drag her out again. Twilight made one final note on the parchment. She'd gotten all the data from this particular subject. Now, all that was left was to bring her out of trance without leaving her braindead.

Twilight moved close to Fluttershy's face again, still happily blank from the spells that assaulted her mind.

"Fluttershy," Twilight said turning on her hypnosis again, "Soon you'll wake up, and you'll remember everything. You'll remember it feeling good and blissful, and happy to have experienced it. I'll go back to being normal Twilight, your old friend. No master, no pet, all that gets thrown out in the stable."

Twilight closed her eyes and thought of the best way to ease Fluttershy back into consciousness again. She doubted it would safe to just splash some water on Fluttershy and call it a day. Twilight willed her coils to go limp, and slid all off except for the one around Fluttershy's neck. The yellow mare's mind slowly transitioned into a normal sleep, Twilight’s spell fading away with each breath. Her free will was back, and she would be back to her old self in due time.

...Which is why her slumber seemed odd.

Fluttershy had a happy smile, seemingly in an absolutely peaceful sleep. But she seemed to be mumbling to herself a bit while Twilight thought of a solution.

"Twilight...."

The way she spoke her name was almost lovingly, yet she was no longer in a trance. She was her old self, just as she was when she came here. So why was she still mumbling her name like that? Twilight noticed Fluttershy beginning to stir and slipped off the one coil around her neck. The purple pony nudged Fluttershy with her hoof.

"Fluttershy? You awake? Or...uh...more awake?"

Twilight teleported a dish full of sugar cookies next to the snoozing pony.

"I even have sugar cookies! It's scientific tradition!"

Fluttershy moaned almost reluctantly, as she sat up and rubbed her head. "Pinkie, you know I don't really like sugar cookies... Hmm?"

She finally opened her eyes and started to recover from her grogginess, looking up at Twilight and blinking several times. "Oh, hi Twilight," she said, groggily rubbing her eyes. "...Did you, um, get your data that you needed?"

"Oh yes, Fluttershy, you were perfect. I've learned so much now!" Twilight reared up and kicked the air with excitement.

"I hope the experience was pleasant for you. It definitely seemed like it. I might have gotten a little carried away, but what I do, I do for science. A couple of more test subjects and I'll have enough to make a good publication."

As her weariness passed, Fluttershy remembered everything that occurred between the two after she looked up into Twilight's eyes. She didn't hear a word that Twilight said after answering her question, and instead grew red in the face again as her wings popped out. She held her hooves to her mouth and squeaked in embarrassment. "Oh my... Science is certainly ..um... intense..." she said quietly.

"Yeah," Twilight chuckled, "Really intense. Can't expand the pool of pony knowledge otherwise."

Twilight looked at the rapidly reddening mare.

"Uh, are you okay? I didn't leave anything I shouldn't have in there, did I?"

Twilight was genuinely concerned; did she forget to erase a command saying that she loved her? Fluttershy was cute and all, but if they were to have a "thing," Twilight wanted it to be a natural thing, not coerced in the slightest. This power was especially tricky; it could have changed who Fluttershy was with just a single word.

"N-no, you left it all there, it's just... Oh my... W-we were tongue kissing...? A-and I massaged and kissed your scales, a-and... Ohgoshohgoshohgosh..." The mare seemed embarrassed and confused, especially considering she had yet to be in a relationship that got even close to that kind of intimacy.

Twilight began to realize the gravity of her action. "Yeah, I'm sorry, I did get a little carried away. This potion, it...does things to my head.” She laid back on a pile of her coils. "I mean, Fluttershy, I think you're a really wonderful pony. In that moment, I was overcome with greed and selfishness. I'm sorry."

Fluttershy shakily took a breath. "It's ..um... fine, Twilight. In fact..." she said looking down at the floor and tried to hide behind her mane. "I...I think I actually enjoyed some of it."

Twilight's eyes perked. "You did? Like, really? That's not the hypnosis speaking?" Twilight said as an electrifying shiver ran through her coils.

Fluttershy nodded. "I... I was so bold! I was doing things I'd never be able to do with so much confidence! And, well, it was nice to feel....um... cared for...I guess that’s it? You know, just being happy with somepony." She sighed in confusion. "I don't know how to say it..."

Twilight shoved a hoof into Fluttershy's snout. "It's okay Fluttershy, I know what you're trying to say, truth be told, I think you're swell too. I wouldn't mind it if we tried dating for a while. I did promise you to take you out while you were under, not sure if you remember that, though."

I just think you needed a little more..." Twilight removed her hoof from Fluttershy's snout and gentle scratched her chin, "...coercion."

"...pet," Twilight said as she tapped her bed of coils with the other hoof.

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